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Twilight's Dawn: Future Imperfect

by Baryski
With a strong lesson some perspective is needed

A disconcerting day could be the least of Twilight's problems as her life takes turns we never thought possible. An adventure transcending the world Twilight thought she knew is about to take hold. Can the mare survive the lessons she must learn and, if she does, what kind of life will she return to?

This story is a moderate sequel to Wish Upon a Card. However, you don't need to read that one to get into this one. Think of it more as 'Bonus Material'. You can expect a lot of chapters and a huge story from this one, I hope you enjoy it.

As a side note, this story is desperately seeking an editor. I'm looking to make this as successful as possible. So, if you would be interested in helping me out and doing some editing please get a hold of me.

P.S. Cover art would also be greatly appreciated along with any criticism you might have.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Tragedy
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
OSRTA

8342 words: Estimated 42 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Recollection and Looking Glasses 2012-11-10 16:14:41 UTC
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  2. Chapter 2: The Day Before 2012-11-08 23:29:53 UTC
    2194
  3. Beyond the Mirror 2012-11-12 23:43:00 UTC
    3327