Reviewing Perfection

by Macro Zecora

Rating: mature
Tags: Applejack, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Fetish, Trenderhoof, Sex, Anthro
Length: 4354

A nine-foot tall Applejack seduces Trenderhoof, shrinks him, and ends up assimilating him in a way she's never tried before.

Applejack has been absorbing the strength of stallions into her body for years. It's why she's such a big and strong mare. So when a nine-foot tall Applejack seduces Trenderhoof while he's over to review her family's cider, she's more than happy to lure him up to her bedroom, shrink him, and make plans to absorb him as well. But thanks to her tiny captive's persistence, she ends up developing a bit of empathy for him, and he allows her to assimilate him in a way she's never tried before.

Kinks: Amazonian, shrinking, anal vore, absorption.

Published 2017-12-26 15:20:07 UTC
Last updated 2017-12-26 15:20:07 UTC

Reviewing Perfection

Trenderhoof stared at the young, orange pony on the other side of the cider bar. He knew he was supposed to be writing a story on the best ciders in all of Equestria, but he just couldn’t focus. This pony. This Applejack mare, he was completely entranced by her. He couldn’t help it. He had already had a thing for larger mares… but Applejack was like no other mare he had ever seen. Nine feet of pure, well-toned muscle, wrapped in that sexy orange fur. And to top it all off, she had a nice ass too. It wasn’t fat per se, but it was very full, very round. Just the right mix of firm and bouncy. The pony it was attached to was quite the prize as well, Trenderhoof wondered if she would be any good in the bedroom. He would’ve asked her to marry him right then and there if it weren’t for the three things she shared the bar with, her family…

Pure, unfiltered, country trash, the lot of them. A creature as pure and beautiful as Applejack had no business hanging out with some old green zombie, a near-mute blood-red behemoth and a the little snot-nosed brat.

He sat back down, cider in hand, and proceeded to pretend to flip through his newspaper, making sure to glance up every so often to get another view of that blonde-haired pony’s ass. Her jeans hugged her skin very tightly, hefting the buttocks up into two perfect hemispheres. Trenderhoof couldn’t tell if her ass was naturally that firm, or if it was the tight jeans that made it so pronounced.

Mmmm. It didn’t matter. The way her buttocks stuck out in a gravity-defiant curve and slid smoothly against each-other while she walked was amazing. He imagined himself slowly caressing her, one cheek in each hand. Massaging those perfect, red apples on each flank. Oh Yes, Trenderhoof found that a pleasing image, he could only imagine what they tasted like. Maybe even opening them up and doing his best to pleasure the massive mare, despite her being a good four feet taller than him.

Trenderhoof was so lost in his fantasy, that he didn’t notice the old green mare eyeing him suspiciously. The third time the unicorn glanced lustfully at Applejack, the old pony decided he had glanced twice too often. “It would appear the city boy has taken an interest in you.” She whispered to Applejack.

“Really?” Applejack smirked, noticing the stallion’s gaze. “Heh. So he has, Granny. That’s cute. What do ya wanna do with him?” She whispered.

“Probably the same as what we do with all the others.” Granny suggested “Gotta keep those hips of yours nice and plump.”

“Oh, Granny. You’re so funny.” Applejack giggled. “But yeah. He does seem rather interested. Lemme go talk to him.”

Trenderhoof quickly turned back to his work, trying to pretend he wasn’t ogling her. Besides, he needed to focus on the cider he was supposed to be writing about. He kept his eyes down for the time being, but in his mind, he found himself lost in thought about all the naughty things he could do with her beautiful ass.

Applejack got up from her bar and sauntered sultrily towards Trenderhoof. “You like what you see, big boy?” She purred, putting her large hand on the table in front of him.

“W-what?” Trenderhoof gasped in disbelief. Disbelief that this angel was talking to him in person. “M-me?”

“I don’t see anypony else around.” She slowly ran her finger across his chest. “And I couldn’t help but notice that you’d taken quite the interest in me. And my ass.”

“Oh yeah.” Trenderhoof gulped. “That… Well I…” Normally he wouldn’t have been nearly so cowed by some rubbish country girl. But Applejack’s curves… even her breasts had a nice little jiggle to them, not quite as much as her apple-bucking hips, but still more than enough to get a rise from the stallion.

“Shhh… It’s okay. I understand.” Applejack leaned forward, letting him see a bit up her cleavage, each one of her boobs almost the size of his head. “Well, regardless. I’ve taken a bit of an interest in you.” Applejack rubbed her nose against his. “Why don’t you meet me in my room in say, five or so minutes? I guarantee it’ll be a life changing experience for you.”

“I-I’ll consider it…” He stammered, his face almost turning red.

“I’ll be waiting…” Applejack turned to leave, her tail brushing under his nose. “Third door upstairs if you’re interested.” Her ass heaved and jostled tantalizingly for Trenderhoof as she walked up the stairs, each step creaking under her weight.

Trenderhoof gave a sigh as his erection bulged in his pants. He subtly slid his hand into his pants to alleviate it the pressure when he noticed the large red pony waiting patiently next to him. “Oh…” He blushed in surprise, and quickly slid his hand back out. “Um… Hey there, big guy.” Trenderhoof had to admit, he was quite the big guy. A foot taller than his bombshell of a sister. If his door swung the other way… “Erm… did you need anything?

"Eyup.” The large pony placed a container of blue cider on the table.

"Uh, what's this for?" he asked, settling back in his chair. “The cider review? Is this the best brew you have to offer?”

Big Macintosh nodded.

“Yeah, yeah. Thanks.” Trenderhoof took the cider and swigged it down in one gulp. “That’s great, ten out of ten stuff.” He made an okay sign with his hand. “But if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got places to be.” He stood up and rushed upstairs to Applejack’s bedroom.

Applejack was standing in front of a mirror, admiring her thick, denim-covered ass. “Ya think I’m really attractive, doncha?” She knelt down to look Trenderhoof in the eye.

“Oh yes, most definitely.” Trenderhoof chuckled and timidly closed the door behind him, making sure he hadn’t been followed. He wanted Applejack very much, but didn’t want her hick family getting involved in the matter.

“Well, then let’s get right to it.” Applejack corralled him into a wooden armchair in the corner, which was more then easy, as she could have probably tossed him around like a rag doll if she wanted to.

“Oh wow…” Trenderhoof’s eyes widened as the orange pony pushed him into the chair and leaned over him, her massive boobs dangling right in his face, making his erection spasm wildly. “Y-you’re really aggressive…”

“You ain’t seen nothing yet.” Applejack slowly licked his horn, coating it with a layer of her saliva.

Trenderhoof sighed and slumped down in the chair and closed his eyes. “Oh yeah… That’s nice.” He imagined Applejack licking another one of his extremities.

Applejack sat down on his lap, which made Trenderhoof grunt under the weight. Damn she was heavy. He’d have to make sure he was on top when they finally got down to business. Like this she could probably end up literally shattering his hips. She brought her lips close to his and whispered to him, fogging up his glasses with her warm, sultry breath. “So how long are you planning to be in town?” She asked as she slowly removed his white-rimmed glasses.

“A couple of days.” Trenderhoof nodded. “I…I wish I could stay longer but with my job and all…” He gulped. Celestia… She was so hot. “I mean, I’d love you stay, but…”

He was interrupted by Applejack pressing her lips against his, causing his eyes to go wide with surprise. Applejack purred and looked into his eyes “Don’t talk like that, little pony.” She smirked. “I think you and I are gonna be in a relationship for a loooong time.” She poked his chest.

Trenderhoof gasped as the chair seemed to explode around him. His vision went blurry as he spilled out of his clothes, completely lost in a flurry of custom-made cotton. When he gained his bearings back, the chair had grown out to become a platform many yards across, and Applejack towered over him like a giant, well more than she already did. Trenderhoof looked up at the grinning Applejack with a look of shock as she reached towards the tiny, naked unicorn.

“Gah! No!” Trenderhoof yelled a high-pitched shriek as her fingers grasped him and carried him high into the air, leaving his clothes on the chair. “What’s going on!? How'd I get so small?” he cried.

“Me and my family shrunk ya.” Applejack said proudly. “We didn’t like the way you were ogling over my ass.”

Trenderhoof didn’t know if he should be scared or aroused. He tried acting assertive, hoping that might intimidate her into letting him go. "Heheh… Alright, that was a good laugh. But seriously, put me down this instant!”

"Uh, no?” Applejack looked down at him and giggled. “You’re way too small to be giving orders to a mare my size.” She gently squeezed his buttocks. “Not that you weren’t beforehand.”

“Eep!” Trenderhoof gasped at the touch. Although he had to admit to himself, she was still very arousing. “O-okay. I’m sorry… P-please don’t hurt me…”

"Awww... I’d never consider hurting ya, Trendy." She brought him up to her face before giving him a kiss. Her massive lips were easily wider across than his shoulders. “You’re far too cute for that.”

Trenderhoof gasped and sputtered as he was freed from the powerful suction of her lips. “Well then, what are you going to do with me?” He wiped the saliva from his mane. “You must have some reason for shrinking me like this.”

“You like my ass, right?” Applejack laughed “Well now you’re gonna get more o' that ass than you can handle!" She set Trenderhoof down on her bed.

“Oh, Celestia! You’re not going to sit on me are you!?” Trenderhoof gasped and backed up.

“I dunno. Maybe.” Applejack said with a smile. “Do ya want me to, cutie?” She knelt down to look him right in the face.

“I don’t know…” Trenderhoof sighed. “It’s just that… I…”

“Spill it out, small fry.” Applejack chuckled. “I ain’t got all day.”

“Well… You’re really cute and all... maybe there some way I could convince you to come with me back to Manehatten?” He looked up nervously. “We could get you cleaned up, get you cultured, and all that.”

“Heh.” Applejack gave a bemused smirk. “Well, it’s cute that you’d like me to go up with you to the city. But I’m afraid I can’t. I need to be with muh family and all. Besides, them big cities are awful claustrophobic. You think they’d be able to handle a big country mare like me?"

“I suppose not…” Trenderhoof sighed. “I just wish there was a way for us to be together…”

“There is.” Applejack gave a mischievous grin. She began to fumble around with her tight, denim pants, working her fingers around the buttons. “And I’ll show it to you…”

Trenderhoof blushed deeply, and he could feel himself heating up. Was she seriously going to strip in front of him? He could only imagine what she looked like uncovered at this size. "I… Wow, you don't play, do you?"

“It's alright, cutie, you can just go ahead and say it," she said sweetly. "Lots of stallions have noticed my rear before. It's one my most treasured assets. I get stares, compliments, and then..." She closed her eyes thoughtfully. “Mmmm… I take them up here…”

“I understand, but why did you shrink me down to only a few inches tall?” He stared in awe as Applejack removed her pants, revealing her bright red, tight panties. “You could have done whatever you wanted with me anyway.”

“Oh, that. That has nothing to do with me having control over you.” Applejack casually pinned Trenderhoof to the ground with one finger. “Like ya said, I could do that to most stallions without shrinking them. No, no… This is in case they decide they want to stay with me, you know?”

"Stay with you?" Trenderhoof asked, surprised that he was having a casual conversation with a pony hundreds of times larger than him as he was pinned down by her gigantic finger. But he didn’t see any other stallions around, though it was possible they were all shrunken like he was. "What do you mean? Where are these ponies? And how many stallions are we talking?”

“I dunno.” Applejack shrugged and removed her shirt, revealing that she wasn’t wearing a bra underneath it, letting her head-sized boobs hang freely. “Like fifty or so.” Her bountiful breasts bounced seductively. “I sorta lost count of em’ all. But whenever some out-of-town stallion gets a little too interested in me, we just shrink 'em down and slurp 'em up! It’s good for muh body, and Apple Bloom just became a grown mare, so she’s gonna start doing it soon, so she can be big an’ strong as well."

“Slurp them up?” Trenderhoof gave a nervous look. “W-what do you mean by that?”

“I mean that I eat em’, of course.” Appleajck said casually.

“What!?” Trenderhoof gasped in disbelief. “Y-you’re eating ponies!?”

“Well, by eat I mean more like I absorb them.” Applejack explained “They’re still sorta alive, they’re just a part of me now. They squirm around for a bit, then my body melts them down and they become part of the figure they fell in love with. I get a little bit stronger with each pony I consume, and they get to live inside of me, sorta like with them deep-sea angler fishes, how the males literally attach themselves to the dominant females ta breed. It’s a win-win.”

“Doesn’t seem like a win-win to me.” Trenderhoof gave a skeptical look. “I mean… you’re eating them.”

“Oh, but it is.” Applejack flexed her muscles. “I get their muscles and flesh added to my figure, and they get to live a carefree life inside of me. Who needs stress, or a job or any of that, when you can just have good ol’ AJ take care of everything? I do everything for them. I eat for them, my heart beats for them, and they feel what I feel. It’s a life of ease.”

“That’s why you’re such a big and strong pony!” Trenderhoof realized. “You’ve got the strength of fifty stallions inside of you!”

“Eyup!” Applejack said proudly. “I’m so strong, I can crush horseshoes with just one hand. Plus all that extra mass has done wonders for my feminine figure, which in turn helps me attract more stallions.”

“You do have quite the nice figure…” Trenderhood blushed "Heheh. Quite an efficient little system you've got here."

“Thank you. I’m glad you appreciate it.” Applejack smirked. “It has shaped me into the lovely mare I am today.”

"So, um, what are you going to do with me?" Trenderhoof gave a nervous chuckle. “Are you going to eat me, like all the others? I mean… I imagine I don’t have much choice in the matter.”

"I'm not sure. Usually I eat ponies before talking to em’ that much, that or they beg me to eat them. A lot of em are so turned on by me that tha prospect of gettin’ to play a part in my beauty is too good an offer to pass up.” Applejack pondered. “But of late, I’ve been having trouble squeezin’ into my jeans, so I’ll let you decide what I do with ya. Though keep in mind, if ya do become a part of the ass ya like so much, it’ll be real tight until Rarity can do the adjustments I need on my pants.”

Trenderhoof's mind began to race with the possibilities. He could ask to be set free, and go back to his job, but that was such a boring option, certainly he could do better. Besides, he was a critic, it technically was his job to experience new things, right? And how nice as her ass was, he wanted to see it fill the sky over him, nothing around him but her smooth, orange flank. “Can I…” He gulped softly. “Touch your ass, please…?”

Applejack giggled and slowly turned around, and Trederhoof found himself face-to-face with her massive rear. Her titanic buttocks bounced hypnotically in front of him, allowing him to glimpse her most sensitive areas wrapped tightly in the thin red panties. "What do you think?" She giggled.

Trenderhoof was stunned. "My goodness…” He muttered “I love it! It’s as if I’ve died and gone to heaven! Not even Celestia herself has an ass as nice as yours!"

“I’m glad ya think so.” Applejack smiled. “And all the stallions who helped make it thank you as well.” She winked.

Trenderhoof thought he was going crazy. He expected she’d be furious that he had been ogling her, but that was her plan. And now here she was, giving him a private display of her flawless flank! He tried to pretend he was bashful, despite the raging penis that dangled between his legs, but her flank was just too much for him. “Such a beautiful ass…” He ran his hand across it, savoring the smooth texture of her fur, feeling the outline of one of the six apples that beautified her flank.

Applejack chuckled at his tiny caress. “Well? Whatdaya think? You wanna be a part of this?" she looked back, swaying her gigantic ass back and forth, tantalizing her miniature captive.

The tiny brown pony nearly fainted out of his lust for her, he had so much blood rushing to his cock that he could barely think straight. "Ungh… M-maybe… Would you mind if I could please see it, in all its naked glory? Please…”

Applejack gave a chuckle and stuck her thumbs in the elastic band of her panties and slowly lowered the huge sheet of red satin. The new view helped him make an analysis of how much of her ass was fat, how much was muscle, and how much of it was firm, young flesh. But it didn’t matter. It was like reviewing perfection itself, it was almost impossible to put into words, so he described it the most basic terms he could think of. “Oh Celestia… Applejack… I want to become a part of your ass.”

“Ya sure about that, lil fella?” she smirked down at him. “Once you’re in there, I don’t think I’m gonna be able to get ya out.”

“Yes!” He rushed forward and started affectionately grinding his cock against her buttock, “I want it more than anything. Please don’t take this from me.”

“Well, all right.” Applejack lifted her planetary rear from the bed. “You asked for it!” She gently parted her perfect buttocks, revealing her treasures within, her glistening pussy, and her smooth, tight anus.

Trenderhoof half-wished he were his normal size, so he could ravage her with his stallionhood. But this was just as good, if not better. He rushed forward between her buttocks. He loved her ass so much, he slowly and tenderly started kissing her most sensitive areas, his muzzle partly sinking into her slowly loosening anus.

Applejack seemed very pleased with his enthusiasm. "Oh. I can feel ya kissin’ mah ass back there." She giggled. “I’m thinkin’ it’s only fair that it returns the favor.” With that, she forcefully sat down on the bed, trapping him between her bare ass cheeks.

Trenderhoof took a deep breath as the gigantic valley of buttocks rushed at him, engulfing him between two huge walls of warm, soft, orange flesh. He struggled and gasped for air, but he knew what was about to happen, and the very thought of it made him shiver in anticipation. “Yes…Please take me, goddess… Make me yours…”

Applejack slowly dragged her ass up and down against him until her anus found him. Once it did, she shoved his face into the tender sphincter, which quivered against his ecstatic expression.

“Oh yes…” Applejack panted. “You’re really squirmin’ around back there. Ugh…that’s such a turn-on fer me.”

Trenderhoof heard her talking, but was too embedded in her flesh to make out the words. But he didn’t care, he was too busy worshiping her anus. He purred, humping her flesh with his tiny cock, when suddenly, he felt her tremendous cheeks began to rumble, then clench, and then start to suck him like a vacuum.

Applejack stood up and admired herself in the mirror. She was especially amused by the tiny Trenderhoof, whose legs dangled from between her cheeks. She bent over, extended a finger and gently pushed the rest on him inside. He was completely trapped in her ass! Her buttocks churned and bucked around him, rocking him all around and squeezing his naked body tight against her anal walls.

Trenderhoof found his arms were relatively free and began crawling further and further in, pulling his legs free from her puckering anus. After he was free from her tight entrance, he experimented with crawling along the narrow passage of his new home. He could feel Applejack walking around the room, her huge buttocks rolling and clapping with each step she took.

Applejack slowly started rubbing her marehood, which was begging for attention. It turned out shoving a living pony inside her ass would do that to a mare.

“So, what now?” Trenderhoof thought as he crawled further and further in. He was starting to feel oddly pleasant, wondering it this was the start of the absorption process. Scene started to flash through Trenderhoof's mind, scenes from Applejack’s life. He could see clearly her in the shower, admiring herself in the mirror. He stared at her gorgeous, perfectly rounded, perfectly smoothed ass, water glistening off of each of those lovely apples... But he wasn’t seeing himself as an outsider looking in, he saw himself as Applejack herself! “Oh fuck yes…” He grunted, his cock oozing with precum.

He could feel himself empathizing with that plump ass. As if it were calling out to him for some reason. That anus… that pussy… those buttocks. He now saw himself in all of them. "Applejack…" he panted as her ass squeezed on him from all size, massaging his cock with just the pressure alone. “Please take me… Make me a part of you…”

His cries were muffled, but Applejack could tell what he wanted. She gave her ass a gentle smack before walking over to the bed and laying down. Her ass slammed onto the mattress, and she began to masturbate, egged on by the stallion’s squirms. “Ohh… I can feel ya mergin’ with me alright. Looks like yer just as horny as I am.” She bit her lip and moaned, sweat dripping down her body. “Oh… I can feel you’re emotions a lil’. You want this as much as I do…”

Trenderhoof could feel her firm, strong ass pushing inward around him, squeezing his body as if a he were in a tube of toothpaste, slowly melting his body down to become a part of the country girl’s glorious ass.

Applejack squirmed at the moist sensation of Trenderhoof melting inside her anal cavity, further pushing her towards the edge of an orgasm. “Ungh… That’s…it…Trender…squirm for me… squirm for both of us…” She gasped and began to buck her hips wildly, the sensation of the tiny pony squirming inside her ass was driving her completely sexual. “Oh, Celestia… and to think I’ve never absorbed anypony with muh ass before…” She bit her lip.

Trender moaned, feeling himself edging towards an orgasm as her bowels clenched down on him, crushing him into her walls. This was it. He was finally becoming part of her ass! He was about to enter the glorious paradise that was Applejack’s body. At this point, nothing else mattered. His job. His prestige. His money. His few suck-up friends. All of them paled to those glorious cheeks. And now he was going to be those cheeks! He couldn’t contain his excitement any longer, and right before he was absorbed fully, his tiny little cock erupted into the most satisfying orgasm of his life, spraying cum all over Applejack’s bowels.

Applejack came as well, sending almost a full pint of marecum splattering against the wall and trickling down her legs. She gasped and fell back against the bed, her chest heaving up and down as she sucked massive amounts of air into her lungs. “Oh…Thank you so much, Trender…” She slowly stood up and gave her ass a little pat. “You have no idea how much I needed that…”

Trenderhoof was happy to have helped. In fact, he was as happy as Applejack was. He was part of Applejack now, and could feel how much pleasure her, no their pussy was bringing him. He mentally purred, and slipped into the background of her consciousness, opting to let Applejack take care of him. For now, he just needed some rest, the buzzing pleasure of his recent orgasm had made him absolutely exhausted. As he drifted off to her subconscious, he could feel her panties slide up over her legs, followed by the tight press of her jeans.

“Ungh…” Applejack grunted and hiked her pants up. “Darn it… I was afraid he’d make muh ass too big for muh britches.” She felt the denim ripping slightly as she forced the tight pants over her buttocks.

Applejack wiped the marecum off her legs and walked back out to the cider shop and leaned on the counter, taking a swig of her family’s product to help calm herself down. She was still shaking from her experience.

“Didja gettim’?” Asked Apple Bloom. “Put that lil’ city boy in his place?”

"Heheh. Yeah, I got him." Applejack nodded. “He’s part of me now.”

“Wow…” She smiled and looked at Applejack’s ass. “What happened Did he beg? Squirm? Break down into tears? Start worshiping ya? C’mon sis, how was he?”

“He was…” She paused. “He was absolutely perfect. I’ve never had a better experience with a tiny.” She chuckled and gave her ass a gentle smack. “He was a real ten out of ten.” She winked and happily wagged her tail.