Stars Intertwined

by Quick Fix

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Original Character, Porn, Profanity, Slice of Life, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4778

After years of keeping their relationship secret, Deep Note and Little Hayseed decide to take it to the next level. Or the same level, just more openly.

Despite the unorthodox nature of their relationship, Deep Note and Little Hayseed have managed to remain happy together through nothing more than years of one night stands. As much as they both long for something more permanent, her admitting to being the partner of an Equestria touring rock star and the pressures that would bring make it seem like an impossibility.

Then again, them being together at all seems to have overcome the impossible once, right?

Just a small something I made as a birthday gift for my bestie/proofreader Deep Note. Reading the prequel isn't required to follow this one. Enjoy!

Both parts contain: M/F, minor size diff, impregnation play, that turns out to be for real.
Part 1 contains: Story with clop, pre and post-coitus cuddling, light cumflation.
Part 2 contains: Straight clop, oral, light femdom, 69ing, rimming, facials.

Published 2018-01-02 00:10:06 UTC
Last updated 2018-01-02 00:10:06 UTC

An Affectionate Night

A cold November dusk was falling over Manehatten, bathing the city in amber light as the sun's last rays reflected off the waters of the bay. This was the brief window of calm in the city while the core of Manehatten, the districts on Bronclyn Island, shifted from being a center of commerce during the day to the leading entertainment hotspot in the land. In stark contrast, the city's outer regions on the Equestrian mainland virtually shut down as the night rolled in, the smaller residential areas and farms having done their part for the day. Many ponies overlooked these smaller areas, which made them perfect for those that were comfortable to fulfil their duties while staying out of the limelight.

For a pony like Little Hayseed, that was a major plus as she typically stood out in a crowd. Not exactly in looks at least with her chestnut brown coat, blond ponytailed mane, perky blue eyes and sprouting seed cutie mark, but for the fact she was a big, stocky earth mare who stood at five foot six, a good five inches taller than the average stallion. At least ponies in the area had no issues with that, even seeing it as a plus to her work as a farmhoof out here. That was the distinguishing fact about her that she was okay with others knowing about. She was less to mention the part where she was kinda-sorta secretly dating one of Equestria's biggest rock stars.

She had just been a fan of the band at first, though she had always had more of an fancy for their bass guitarist, Deep Note. Maybe it had been the sheen of his green coat, the way he whipped his golden mane about while playing, the glint in those sky blue eyes, the perfect match of his bass clef cutie mark to his talent or even the way his wings deftly handled the strings. Whatever it was, she had been lucky enough to meet him personally after his first concert in Manehatten four years ago and one thing soon led to another. Then it had led there again the next time he was in the city. Although his constant touring across Equestria made a proper relationship impossible, they still made sure to meet up every time he was in Manehatten and reaffirm their bond with passionate nights of sex vigorous enough to make any married couple blush.

Hayseed sighed gently to herself as she thought back to their last such meeting seven months ago, stretching out fully on her sofa. She'd been aiming to just have a quiet night in by herself, relaxing with a good book. That plan slowly sidled out the window as her thoughts started to wander from the novel and back to her coltfriend in all but name. Even how her tail twitched on instinct as she thought about his breath on her neck, hooves against her shoulders, that smooth Marebourne accent whispering a promise to put a foal in her before the night was out. Sure it was all part of the fantasies they shared while in the throes of bliss that only a good hard rutting could provide, but a small part of her couldn't help but wonder...

With a small shake of the head she moved the book she'd been reading onto the coffee table and slid a bookmark into it. There was no chance of focusing now that her thoughts had fully moved to her beloved. She rolled onto her back and stretched out fully on the sofa, letting her head drop to the side as she absent mindedly took the room in. It wasn't anything special, since she hadn't redecorated after moving in and the style of the room, actually the whole building with its two story wood and thatch build, was a bit reminiscent of Ponyville fifteen years ago. It was still hers though and she enjoyed it as it was. Besides, between the curtains and Luna's night outside, nopony could see it.

Her eyes eventually drifted to the mantelpiece where the only evidence of her secret romance lay. A photograph of herself and Deep Note that they had taken the day after deciding on their relationship. To any other pony, it simply looked like a signed and framed piece by one of Equestria's stars. To her, it was a constant, wonderful reminder of the stallion her heart belonged to, one she could simply gaze upon for hours and only wish that he could be there with her. Like she did now, lying in blissful content with only a niggling sense of longing in her heart and a slightly larger one in her loins.

How long she lay there with only her thoughts and fantasies for company, there was no way of knowing. Eventually though, Little Hayseed's relaxation was disturbed by a sudden set of knocks on the front door, the sudden noise punching through the calm like a raging bull. The mare almost slid off the sofa in surprise and stumbled to her hooves, flicking her tail on reflex to try and waft away any scent of arousal she might have given off. Guests weren't exactly common at her house and the last impression she wanted to give off was that she had been...Tending to her needs. After a quick look round to make sure everything looked presentable she trotted over to the door and opened it up.

While she had gone through a number of possibilities over who it might be in her mind, she hadn't dared actually hope it would be this one. Yet there he was. For the first time that didn't involve being on stage playing his heart out or on with her in a hotel room, Deep Note was standing in front of her, smiling warmly at the sight before him.

"H-hey...Deep." Hayseed managed to say, blushing deeply, her heart daring to soar despite her brain still trying to assume this might actually be a dream.

"Hey, sweetie." Deep replied softly, stepping closer and lifting his head up. She instinctually lowered hers in turn and their lips met, that familiar rush of affection running through their bodies like tingling sparks that touched every nerve in the best way possible. Any lingering doubts they may have had on the situation vanished in that moment. This was real alright.

The two of them held the kiss for several seconds, so lost in the moment they didn't even mind who might see them. Hayseed slowly stroked a hoof up Deep's chest and round his neck, enjoying the happy little murmurs he made into her mouth before bringing it slowly down his back. The stallion's wings instantly unfurled and he pressed closer, breaking the kiss to nuzzle under her chin.

"Mmmmmm. Probably deserve that for doing a west coast only tour." He chuckled, even as he had to support himself against her chest, her touch on his spine like a lightning strike of bliss to his senses.

"Maybe a little," She replied in kind, bringing her hoof back down and making sure he could stand by himself. "Sorry, all this and I didn't even ask if it was why you'd come."

"Don't worry, it was related to this," He murred, smiling reassuringly. "Can I come in?"

Hayseed nodded and quickly stepped back to let Deep in, glancing around to make sure nopony had been watching. Satisfied the street was empty and dark aside from the odd streetlamp, she headed in after him. He had waited for her and was taking in the room with a look of slight bemusement.

"Sorry, I know it's not great." She said sheepishly as she pushed the door closed with a back hoof.

"Ah don't worry about it. It's how you like it," He commented as he turned back to her. "Besides, it's still tidier than my place. So, we should probably sit down for this, anywhere particular you want me?"

"That depends, is it the bad kind of talk?" She asked warily. As soon as Deep shook his head she relaxed and moved over to the sofa, clambering onto it and letting her weight sink in slightly. Once she was settled she shot him an inviting look. "I got a custom made spot for you."

"Dawww. You're really sweet, you know that?" He chuckled and fluttered over to her, hovering just above before laying himself down on her back, his hooves wrapping around her chest lovingly.

Little Hayseed blushed again as Deep Note cuddled up to her with his back hooves stretching out, simply enjoying the feeling of his smaller body settling in. Even like this, both of them fully stretched out and their back hooves in the same place, his muzzle only came up to the base of her neck. That was perfect though, since she could just relax and enjoy all the little things that only came with his presence. The gentle rub of his coat against hers, the weight of his body against her muscle, that ever so slight teasing as his sheath rubbed against her hindquarters...She blushed even more and gave a soft little sigh of content.

"Best seat in Manehatten." She whispered before glancing back, smiling at his love-struck grin from the attention and position.

"And it only gets better," He added, rubbing her shoulders gently. "I've been thinking a lot, about where I am with my life and all that boring stuff. Anyway I've been talking to the band all day. We've come to a decision and I wanted to tell you before we made it public...We're making the next tour our final one."

"You, what?!" Hayseed exclaimed in shock, coming very close to shooting up quickly enough to throw him off her back. As it was she managed to catch herself in time and lie back down. "Are you serious? Playing up there on stage is everything to you."

"I know," Deep said, nodding firmly. "But we've all come to the agreement. We're at the top of our game now, one of the biggest bands in Equestria. Better to step down while burning bright instead of burning out and ending our careers as has-beens. Besides, I've made enough bits from it to be set for life and I can still perform on stage anywhere I want, but only here can I be with the pony that means everything to me."

"Oh...Deep." She said softly, waiting as he shifted his head up to hers before nuzzling him happily. She could safely say she'd never felt this good in her life, to be with the stallion of her dreams in this way.

"So, it's been years in the making but...Little Hayseed, would you like to put all the secrecy behind us and be my full time marefriend?"

She only replied by leaning in and kissing him lovingly, one that he returned in kind as he stroked her cheek. The two of them held the moment, radiating enough love for each other to feed a changeling hive. As they remained pressed close Deep blushed slightly as he became aware that at some point in the last few minutes his arousal had manifested itself in a familar foot long, grey-pink mottled erection. Hayseed felt it poke against the inside of her hind leg and giggled as she adjusted herself under him.

"Seems like somepony wants to really make sure I'm his," She teased, rolling her hips slightly and rubbing his length against her fur. "What'd you say, make this a special one for the first official time?"

"The best," He answered, a sultry tone creeping into his voice as he kissed up her neck while lining himself up, the flare of his shaft grinding against her already wet pussy. "Make tonight the one we finally put that foal in you."

"Actually, about that..." She blushed more as she reached back and undid her ponytail, tossing the band aside and letting her mane out, feeling it rest between her back and Deep's chest. "I've been meaning to ask you for years, but now's probably the best time."

"Wait...You're not just being kinky about it this time?" Deep asked, pausing in his approach.

"Well, yeah. I'm not." Hayseed admitted, blushing deeper than ever. Even as much as they both loved pretending he had impregnated her every time, she had no idea how he might react to the real thing.

"Tell you what, let's put one in you for now and we'll talk the serious stuff later." He eventually suggested, waiting for her eager nod before slipping his flare into her waiting slit. He rolled his hips as he worked his way deeper in, drawing a long and satisfied moan out of the mare beneath him.

The two of them shared another kiss as they were joined once more, their hips meeting and coaxing another moan out of them both. Deep was in euphoria as he slowly pressed his body against hers, relishing being with the mare of his dreams again. For her part Hayseed panted and moaned longingly, not only turned on from his talk and the fact that they no longer had to be apart, but also from just what he'd been saving up for her this time. His balls smacked against her flanks on each thrust, the weight behind them enough to tell her that every drop of his seed that he'd made over the past seven months had been saved up for this exact moment. The feeling made her clench on instinct, coaxing a small yelp of pleasure out of Deep.

This was a different experience for both of them. Their relationship up to now had had all the markings of a long committed pairing, but had only been able to be expressed through a series of one night stands. Now though, they could afford to take their time and simply enjoy being in each other's presence. Even as Deep kept steadily thrusting, his hooves slowly traced over Hayseed, taking in every detail of that muscular earth pony body beneath him. She was nuzzling over his features as well, over his mane, against his throat and up his chin. A gentle whimper of content escaped the stallion's lips as he instinctivly raised his head to give her access, pure affection shining in his eyes when he brought it back down.

"I love you." He whispered gently, wings fluttering as she softly kissed his jaw.

"I love you too." She whispered back. She could only imagine how he was feeling during all this but it couldn't be far off from how she felt; Alive, like standing under a waterfall that was engulfing her very being and filling it with a pleasure unlike any she'd felt before.

That was probably why she hit her peak first. It wasn't an intense orgasm like their usual sessions, more of a steadily rising feeling of warmth in her core that eventually burst into a heated euphoria, coaxing a long moan from her lips and an instinctual grip from her loins. Her whole body tensed up and she clung to the sofa as she let Deep continue riding her, silently begging for his release.

"Y-you want this?" Deep grunted as he pressed closer, his thrusts becoming more erratic as his hooves returned to her shoulders. "You want me to unload every drop inside? Give you a-a nice foal swell?"

"You know me so well..." Hayseed moaned, his words alone managing to prolong her climax. "...Do it!"

Her permission was all he needed. His hips slammed against hers and held there as he hit his limit, flare swelling to the point that he could barely move inside her. His orgasm hit with the strength a yak, his whole body tensing up and jaw opening in a silent cry as a torrent of seed shot from his overstuffed balls to her waiting depths. The two of them held their position for a long moment, lost in the throes of passion as they enjoyed the closest bond it was possible for two ponies to experience. Deep's load just kept coming, pumping load after load of his thick, virile cum straight into her womb.

"Ooohhh I've missed this!" Hayseed panted, stretching her front hooves out and clutching the arm of the sofa hard enough to make it creak.

"How'd you think I've felt..." Deep murred as his body relaxed enough for his voice to come back to him, bucking his hips a few times. "But now we have so much more time. Just you and me."

She kissed him softly on the chin, moaning again as he brought his muzzle in line with hers. Even as their climaxes steadily began to wind down during their latest make out session they remained close. Sex like this was nothing new but there was more to tonight than that, it was a sense of freedom that came with it that added an extra buzz to their arousal and gave them the drive to make the moment last as long as they could.

Eventually Deep's load ran dry after so many shots he'd lost count, the strength in his body draining from such a sustained climax. Hayseed lifted her body up slightly for him to pull out and rest on her, panting gently herself. She knew from experience that he could save up some almighty loads for her but none had left her feeling as outright stuffed as he had now. One of her back legs brushed up inside his to try and get a feel of just how much his balls had managed to unload only to stop as it instead rubbed against something on her. With the load he had given her, she had a good idea of just what it was.

"Woah...You really were pent up." She murred, watching as Deep perked slightly and rested his hoof on her stomach. Instead of the usual toned, firm feeling it had, there was now a slight bulge to it that gave a little as he pressed on it slightly.

"Mmmmm," Deep murred as he rubbed over the swell gently. "That's..."

"Really hot?"

"Yeah it is." He grinned at the feeling, actually getting hard again already as his arousal built up from the sight and thought. She moaned happily as well and pulled him a little closer, enjoying it even more than he was. She'd never been this full in her life and she loved it.

"You're full of surprises aren't you?" Hayseed teased, kissing Deep's forehead and stroking his cheek. "Looking forward to seeing just how many more I can find out now that I have the time to really learn about you."

"I wouldn't have it any other way," He replied softly, wings fluttering as he kissed her in return. "So, what'd you think, sleep here or the bed?"

"Mmmm, either works for simply enjoying each other." She said as he lovingly cuddled up against her.

With some time, she knew he'd tire out after his efforts and then she could carry him up to bed with her, the fruits of their bond now settled within her. Even though she knew it most likely wasn't happening, she couldn't help but smile more at the tantalising thought that the night they had finally been able to become a proper couple was the night he had also put a foal in her for real. It may just have been her imagination, she mused as she stroked Deep's mane softly, but she could swear she almost still felt warmer than usual.

Morning After

Deep Note's mind was a gentle haze as he slowly woke up. He could remember some of the night before; Finally making his dream of truly being with Little Hayseed come true, the inevitable round of loving mating that had followed and eventually passing out snuggled up against her. Or had that been all a dream? It had gone so well that he wouldn't rule it out just yet. His eyes opened slightly and immediately shut again as he got a face full of sunlight. Dream or not, he wasn't in his own room, no windows faced the morning light there.

As his brain kept shaking off the allure of sleep he became aware of two more things. Firstly, he was definitely on a bed, though he couldn't feel the gentle weight of any covers on him. Second and more importantly, he was a lot more aroused than he usually was when he woke up. Even in the common event of dealing with morning wood. He brought a hoof up to shield his eyes before opening them again and glancing down his body to check if there was anything else different. It took all his restraint not to smack himself to see if he really was dreaming when he saw what was waiting for him down there.

"Sorry, didn't mean to wake you." Little Hayseed said in an alluring tone, her head between Deep's back legs and his full, thick erection resting on her left cheek.

"Mmmm, glad you did," He replied softly, lifting himself back up against the headrest slightly to get the sun out of his eyes, watching as she seamlessly followed his movements to stay close. "So, last night wasn't a dream then? Or this?"

"Not unless we had the same dream that means I'm going to need to clean my sofa," She teased before tracing her tongue around his medial ring, watching him shudder in pleasure as she brushed against his most sensitive nerves. "As for now, I woke up next to you and just...Wanted more."

"W-well, don't let me stop you." He moaned, stretching out and watching her pick up where she had left off. Normally he would have questioned why she was still so frisky rather than her usual affectionate self in the mornings they had together. But right now, she had him by the balls. Literally, as she dragged her tongue down the underside of his shaft and over his groin, murring at the feeling of how they felt. All hers once again.

Hayseed kept going like this for several minutes, savouring the feeling of having a cock practically made to fill her available like this. The way Deep kept squirming and moaning at her ministrations only drove her on further and she took his nutsack in her mouth, ever so gently sucking on it and watching his pleasure reach new heights. After several long seconds she let it go and returned to the focus of the moment, steadily working her way back up his cock until she slipped the flare into her mouth and gave it a quick suck.

"F-fuck!" Deep gasped, only kept from bucking his hips by the fact she was holding them down at this point. "How do you manage to keep getting better at this?"

"Practice," She replied once she'd pulled off again, eyeing him with a hungry look in her eyes. "But I'm wondering, are you as good with your tongue as I am?"

Before he could ask what she meant, Hayseed swung her body round onto the bed, resting it on top of Deep's and pinning him in place completely. While he couldn't help but feel a little disappointed that the wonderful little cum swell she had sported the night before was now gone, it was more than made up for by the view as her back end settled atop his chest and pushed his head back down onto the pillow. The only thing he could see now was her firmly toned rear, her pussy still sporting a sizeable creampie from all of his cum that had been leaking out overnight and practically radiating the heat of desire. The sight sent a throb of arousal through his aching cock as she went to work on it again, seemingly trying to coat every inch of it in her saliva.

"Come on, clean me up before the next round." She said between licks, stretching out slightly to press her behind closer to his muzzle. Her voice was slightly more demanding than usual and for reasons he couldn't explain, he felt an extra rush of arousal at her talking to him like that, like she was the one in charge. To be fair, she completely was right now. He found himself loving it all the same, to the point that he needed a few moments to remember what he had been told to do.

Deep brought his hooves to Hayseed's flanks, gripping onto her cutie marks as his tongue came out. Not wanting to waste any time he spread it to its full width and gave a long lick up her waiting folds before bringing it back down and curling it enough to slip inside. He was instantly rewarded with a cocktail of tastes, his own salty cum mingling with the sweet juices of her arousal to create a blend that he eagerly drank down and still longed for more. She seemed to be experiencing the same bliss as he was, considering she responded with a throaty moan through a mouthful of cock.

The two of them continued in their passionate duel for some time, tongues working overtime as they both silently tried to push the other to their brink first. Although Hayseed was dictating the pace right now, Deep was doing his best to challenge her, spreading her pussy lips with his tongue one moment and then shifting his muzzle down and giving her clit a quick suck the next. She responded every time though, sucking her cheeks in against his shaft or wrapping her tongue around his flare. He could feel her inner walls occasionally clenching around him and his cock twitching against her in return. At this point their loving contest could go either way. Then he felt her pull off and her tongue trace down over his balls. Then it kept going down.

His whole body shivered as she felt his tongue come into contact with his tailhole, sending fresh sparks up his body as she kept teasing at his ponut. He had half a mind to call her out for going after his secret kink but all he could manage was a low moan as she started stroking along his cock with a hoof at the same time, the combined bursts of pleasure making him see stars and a familiar pressure rapidly building in the core of his groin.

A rapid series of taps to her flank let her know that she'd won this round and he held on as she pulled back up with a last long lick up the underside of his twitching dick, timing the inevitable breaking point to perfection as her tongue left his flare the instant the first thick shot of his seed burst forth. Even in the midst of an orgasm that threatened to lay him out in bliss, he kept working away at her still inviting folds, his tongue tracing over each of her pussy lips and firmly across her clit. On his fourth spurt she gave a loud moan of her own, clenching at air as her body was wracked by a strong climax of her own. After several seconds of them both being effectivly paralyzed by the sheer pleasure flooding their bodies the moment faded, leaving two weary but satisfied ponies pressed up against each other.

"Wow...You weren't kidding about needing it." Deep murred as Hayseed's flank shifted out of view and was soon replaced by her head, now covered in cum and dripping from her mane, nose and chin.

"Still do, but I thought you'd like to see the results before we continued on." She replied, leaning in and kissing him softly. The two of them held it for a moment, swirling a little of his cum that she'd caught in her mouth between them before breaking it with a little caress of Deep's chin.

"Amazing. A shame we'll have to clean up soon, announcements to make and plans for my new life and all that."

"We've still got time for one more round though, right? Really make sure you give me the big foal belly we both want so much?" She purred, booping his nose gently. He gave a soft chuckle and lay back slightly further, taking in the wonderful sight of the mare he loved. That he could now be with, just the two of them. Even as she managed to line his shaft up between her pussy lips and grind against it, warming them both up for the breeding round, he knew he was going to make sure to appreciate both sides of this relationship.

"Absolutely."