Prometheus

by spike the lone wanderer

1.IT'S ALIVE.1

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''Igor! Increases the electric charge, I want him to live!'' The scientist ordered to his faithful hunchbacked servant. He was wearing an open white blouse, revealing a three-piece suit. His hair was pepper-and-salt-coloured, just like his five o'clock shadow beard.

''Yes master!'' Igor lowered a lever, and two electric turbines began to turn, and the electricity produced moved into cables that were attached to a copper tank.

''Yes, Yes!'' The scientist turned electrical coils to create electricity, and the liquid inside the tank began to boil.

''Master! There is too much power! The machines and the creature can not stand it!'' Igor said to his master who did not want to hear anything.

''Silence! I create everything in this lab, I am their master, and they will obey me! Just like you, my dear Igor. So increased the power one last time!'' Igor was frightened by his master, so he executed his orders without even looking at him.

''As you wish, master!'' Igor lowered a lewer, but once down, the electric charge was so strong that it electrocuted Igor.

''ARGGGGGGGGGG!'' Igor began to catch fire, just like the machine.

''IGOR!'' The scientific yelled.

''M-master!'' The machine exploded, taking Igor with it.

''NOOOOOO!'' The explosion caused the shutdown of the coils, turbines, and other instruments of the mad scientist.

''NO! NOOO! IT'S RUINING EVERYTHING!'' The scientist watched the work of a lifetime go up in smoke in front of his eyes then a hand grabbed his ankle. He looked down and saw a disfigured Igor.

''Igor?'' The scientist was shocked by the appearance of his old friend.

''May G-God have mercy on you, Victor Frankenstein!'' Igor died on the laboratory floor, and Victor had a disturbed smile on his face.

''Oh Igor, you poor fool! I am god!'' Victor opened the roof of his laboratory and pulled on a chain that made the tank rise in the air.

''Go ahead, God! Pour out your anger on me, and on those who do not believe in me! I proved that you are not the only one who can give life! I created life with the power of my brain and science! All humanity is nothing compared to my son! My son will come to life thanks to science and not to you! MY SON WILL LIVE!'' After saying those words, A powerful light hit the tank, the shock was so violent that it destroyed the chains that supported it, but it also allowed his host to open his eyes, the tank fell to the ground, opening it.

''No!'' His creation was lying on the floor, inert. Victor watched him waiting for a gesture from him, but nothing happened. He sighed and took off his blouse.

''Another failure!'' Victor threw his blouse on the floor, took a bottle of wine and drank a long sip.

''ARGH!'' This sound penetrated Victor's soul like a knife penetrating into a beating heart. He turned and saw his creature, lying on the floor, trying to raise his hand to him. Victor was shocked then a sinister smile began to appears on his face.

''It's alive! IT'S ALIVE! IT'S ALIVEEEEEEEEE!'' Victor yelled from the button of his dark, cold, heart


Back screen with the voice of the creature as narrator, followed by flashbacks

Victor Frankenstein was a Swiss scientist born in 1755 and died in 1800 at the age of 45. Since his childhood, he was obsessed with life, death and god. He wanted to be like him, creating life with nothing. When the doctor Ratchet Cord, who was also his mentor and the director of the Academy of science hear about it, tried to stop him. In answer to that, Victor stabbed him to death. He took his directorial seat of the Academy and started pillaging the cemeteries at night for..you know. After my "birth," he brought me back to his castle and introduced me to his wife, Elizabeth Frankenstein. When she saw me for the first time, her heart stopped for an instant before screaming at death itself. She hated me for what I was, So one night, during a love exchange between victor and her, she tried to convince Victor to destroy me! My father, who was like bewitched by her beauty, agreed by pronouncing a sentence that still haunts my worst nightmares!"

''The monster will die tomorrow!'' Victor said while kissing Elizabeth's breast, and behind their door, there was the ''monster'' listening to them, in tears.

The next day, Victor took me with him to the forest which skirted the castle. We walked to the river, then, once there, he stabbed me in the heart and left me for dead in the woods. He thought he had killed me, but I survived, and his act had awakened in me a new feeling, anger. I found my way back to him and made him pay the price of his betrayal by taking the life of his beloved Elizabeth.Having lost everything, he pursued me to the far north in the hope of ending it once and for all with me!

Antarctic, 1800

A man was walking alone in the snow with a bayonet rifle in his hands. He was exhausted from all this, all he wanted was to put an end to his misery by doing the thing he should have done from the beginning. He continued to walk then stopped because his creation was standing in front of him. They looked into each other's eyes for several seconds then Victor pointed his rifle at him. The creature, seeing his father do this, looked at him with the same look he had when he killed Elizabeth, a look filled with hatred. Victor had his finger on the trigger, ready to put an end to the life of creation. But, at the last second, Victor dropped the rifle before falling on the snow. The creature looked at his father's body with hatred, then with sadness. He moved closer to his father and knelt before him before shouting all the anger of his body.

''FRANKENSTEIIIIIIIINNN!!!'' The beast cried all the tears of his body while squeezing his father's body against him.

On that day, I promised myself that I would never kill again and that I would do anything to help my neighbour, him, his country, anywhere, anytime!

Opening crédit

(1803) The creature was on horseback with a wounded soldier behind him under the enemy fire of the English soldiers. He galloped as fast as he could, but the soldier took a bullet in the back and fell to the ground, dead. (1861) The creature was kneeling in the middle of the battlefield. He was trying to stop the bleeding of an ally, but a Confederate soldier stabbed the soldier with his bayonet. The creature took his rifle and knocked him down with it. He ran to the Confederates to stop them, but a soldier lit a cannon's wick and took the cannonball into his stomach. (1916) An allied plane crashed into a German trench. The creature having seen this, ran toward the Germans and went into their tranch. He managed to take down all the Germans without killing them, then went to the plane. He found the plane, but it was too late, the pilot was already dead.
(1945) The creature was in a boat near the beach. He looked at the soldier behind him and saw a kid squeezing his rifle in his hand. He was scared. The door opened and stood in front of the kid to protect him from Germa fire. They ran on the beach toward the Bunker to stop machine gun fire. They managed to climb on the rocks near the opening and knockout the shooters. But then the boy took the machine gun and began shooting the Germans with a disturbed smile, under the shocked stare of the beast. (1975) An American soldier fired on Vietnamese villagers who were in the fields. The creature put his hand on his shoulder to tell him to stop.

''That enough!'' The soldier continued shooting at the villagers, ignoring the creature's order.

''Enough!'' The creature entered the pilot's cockpit and took control of the helicopter to land near a village occupied by the Allied soldier. While landing, he saw a group of soldiers pulling a Vietnamese by the hair before locking themselves in a house. He ran to them and kicked the door with his foot, propelling it on a soldier. He grabbed a soldier by the throat and threw him through the wall. A soldier pointed his rifle at him, but the creature bent the end of the barrel and struck him with it. The last soldier ran to the exit, but the beast was right behind him. The thing tried to catch him, but the soldier grabbed his knife and stabbed him repeatedly in his stomach. The devil grabbed the soldier's arm and broke it so hard that his bone came out of his skin.

''AAARGGGGGGG!''The soldier screamed.

''STAND DOWN!'' A soldier yelled.

All the soldiers of the village surrounded the demon and threatened him with their weapons. Everybody was looking at his scars covered face. The beast looked at them with rage but calmed down when he saw the Vietnamese came out of the house, safe and sound. She looked at him with a smile then fled into the forest. He smiled at her, then he put his hands on his head and knelt on the floor.

April 30, 1975, end of the war.

The ogre had his hands tied to a wooden post with the sun dazzling his face. In front of him were soldiers, half of the soldiers were standing up, the other half were on their knees. They all pointed their rifles at him.

"Ready, aim...'' The soldier said.

''It's going to sting!'' The wretch said to himself.

''FIRE!'' the soldiers pulled the trigger at the same time, and the beast saw the bullets coming at him in slow-motion.

At that precise moment, I saw my life unfold before my eyes, and trust me...It was long.


Berlin-Tegel, Germany, 2018

Close-up of a man walking from behind, this man was not very thick, but he made up for it by his size. All his clothes were black and worn, except for his dark brown trench coat.He walked as if he was carrying the weight of the world over his shoulders. All eyes were on him, he stopped and looked at the billboards of the planes. Not seeing the flight number of his plan, he went to see a hostess.

''Auf Wiedersehen und bis bald!'' The hostess said with a smile.
(Goodbye and see you soon!)

''Hallo, was brauchst...du?'' The hostess stopped talking when she saw him.
(Hello, what do you want?)

''Guten tag Fraülein, ich würde gerne Wissen, wo ist die Plattform von Embargemen Richtung Canterlot, bitte!'' He asked.
(Hello m'lady, I would like to know where the boarding platform for Canterlot is, please!)

''N-natürlich!'' She looked into her computer while avoiding looking at our hero.
(Of course!)

''Wharf Nummer 10!'' The hostess said.
(platform number 10)

''Wunderbar! Danke für all diese Informationen, Fraülein!''
(Wonderfull! Thank you for all these information, m'lady!)

''B-bitte!'' The hostess stammered.
(You're welcome!)

''Auf Wiedersehen!'' He went to platform number 10 and got on the plane. Once installed, he took out a picture from his coat and looked at it.
(Goodbye!)

''Ich komme für dich, Donovan Cord!'' It was a picture of a young man in military uniform with a quote in the left corner.
(I'm coming for you, Donovan Cord!)


Crystal Airport, Canterlot

The creature's plane landed safely at the Canterlot Crystal Airport. Once outside, he took a deep breath and began to smile. He walked to the taxi area and called one.

''Taxi!'' A taxi parked in front of him, then the devil looked at the driver through the window.

''AAAHHHHH!'' The driver pressed the accelerator of his car and left, leaving the beast alone on the lower side of the road. The thing was used to this kind of reaction, he looked at the signs and saw that the city of Canterlot was 10 kilometers away, he put on his headphones and walked to the city.

The creature walked along the road while looking at the green landscape that reminded him the forest near his Father's castle. He arrived at the city gate after more than 2 hours of walking, thirsty after his long walk, he entered a local diner, at Joe's. Once the door opened, all the customers stopped their conversation and looked at it. The demon advanced to the counter, sat down and took a menu.

''Good morning mister! What do you want to eat today?'' The ogre looked up at him and smiled.

''Guten tag, I would like ein glass of water, bitte!'' Joe looked at him with a warm smile, but the palms of his hands were moist.

''Of course, little guy,'' Joe took an empty glass and filled it with water, ''Here we go! A glass of water, call me if you need anything else!'' Joe proposed.

''Wunderbar,'' The beast drank a sip of the precious liquid, ''Ah, It feels gut to drink ein gutes glass of Wasser.!''

''So..You come from far away?'' Joe asked.

''Ya, Ich komme from Germany to see ein old Freund, Donovan Cord!'' The devil replied.

''Who?'' Joe asked.

''Him!'' The demon showed him the picture of his friend.

''Whoa, your picture is not recent!'' Joe added.

''Isn't it!'' The thing said while drinking his drink.

''Wait a second, I know him, It's Discord!'' Joe said.

''Discord?'' The wretch was surprised by this name.

''Yeah, we call him like that because of his eccentric side, he's a good guy for sure, but he has a problem with chaos and chocolate milk,'' Joe replied.

''Wirklich? Fwere can I finden him?'' The beast asked.

''He teaches at the academy, it's the purple building with the white horse statue at the entrance, you can not miss it!'' Joe explained.

''Really? Danke my friend!'' The creature paid for his glass with a gold coin and left for the academy.

''Wait! It' a military academy, it's forbidden to the public!'' Joe tried to explain, but it was too late, the beast was already on the road. The thing crossed the whole city to finish in front of a metallic gate, and behind it, there was a 500-meter driveway. The beast looked at it and saw an intercom on the side. He pressed the button and spoke.

''Guten tag! Ich Komme to see Donovan Cord!'' The demon waited for an answer, but nothing happened, so he pressed it again.

''Hallo? Hallo? Anybody Home? Ich come to see meinen friend!'' The devil repeated, but still no answers.

What would movie stars do if they were in my shoes?

The thing looked at the gate and kicked it. The doors were on the ground, and the beast continued his way quietly, whistling in the summer of Mungo Jerry. He finally entered the building which was silent, he looked around him and Spoke.

''Hallo? Ich came to see Donovan Cord!'' Nobody answered him, so he began to look for his friend. He looked everywhere, in the classrooms, in the closets, and even in the tree, there was no one in the building.

''Scheisse! Fhere are you, Donovan?'' After saying this, someone pulled a flush and got out of the toilet.

''And that's what I think of your control, Miss Rainbow Dash!'' The man said while tightening his belt. He was wearing a brown suit without a vest. His hair was black with white stripes, just like his Balbo.

''Donovan?'' The man turned around and saw his interlocutor.

''Holy mother of bubble gum! It's you?!'' The man asked.

''Ya, It's me!'' The creature said.

''In my arms you son of a bitch!'' The thing went into his friend's arms and jumped with joy after so many years.

''But tell me, what are you doing here?'' Donovan asked.

''Ick Kam to see you, Donovan! Ich have something wirklich important for you!'' The devil replied.

''Okay but first we have to get away! Apparently, there is a madman who has entered here illegally! Donovan explained.

''Wir can go at Joe's diner. Seine glasses of wasser are pretty gut!'' The beast proposed.

''Discord! Who is this man!?'' The two men turned around, and Donovan began to pray for his life.

''What's Frong?'' The demon asked.

''It's me who asks the questions here!'' She was about to hit the creature, but he dodged her fist and hit her in the nose, putting her down.

They both looked at her and Discord yelled at his friend.

''What the hell is wrong with you!'' The beast looked at his mate as surprised as him.

''Ich do not know? This fraülein was going to hit me, so I dodged, and my old boxing memories with Heer Cuz d'Amato took on top! Who is this fraülein by the way?'' Discord checked her heart lobe to see if she was still alive.

''This is the little sister of the headmaster of this establishment and one of the most trained soldiers of the school! '' Discord explained.

''Oh...Bier?'' The creature proposed.

''Bier!'' They left Luna on the ground and went to Joe's diner to drink beers.

At Joe's diner

''Cheers'' Discord raised his beer for his friend.

''Gesundheit!'' the devil drank his beer under the amused gaze of his friend.
(Cheers!)

''Was? Ich have somezhing on the face?'' Discord laughed.

''Haha, Sorry to ask you this, but why do you speak German?'' He asked.

''Sorry about that, I think my tongue stayed a bit too long in Germany,'' He explained.

''Maybe? By the way, why were you in Germany?'' Discord asked while taking a sip of his beer.

The creature looked at him with a big smile on his face and gave him a leather notebook with the initials VF on it.

''No ways! Do not tell me that it's the notebook of your...'' The beast shook his head as an answer.

''How did you manage to find it?'' Discord asked.

''After many months of research around the world, it is a friend of mine who lives in Romania who told me about a guy in Germany who bought an old book at an auction. I went there, and the guy in question was the descendant of a certain Johann Conrad Dippel, an alchemist who wanted to create an artificial being!'' The thing explained.

''He reminds me of someone,'' Discord said while reading the notebook.

''Yeah, but hey, I did not tell you the best! As soon as he saw me, he screamed so loudly that his glass of wine burst into pieces. I took my father's book and he, well I think he probably stopped science,'' Discord did not listen to him because he was captivated by the notes of the book.

''Donovan? Are you okay?'' The thing asked.

''Uh? Oh yeah sorry, it's just that your father was a genius! He created life with only pieces of corpse, and electricity! He showed that God is just a name written in a book!'' Discord declared.

''He wanted to be like God, so he created me. worst mistake of his life!'' The devil finished his beer and Discord looked at him with compassion.

''You're not a mistake, Franky! You are your father's son, and I'm sure he's proud of you!'' The demon looked at his friend with a smile and spoke.

''Joe! Give me her little sister, please!'' Discord smiles.

''And the mother hahahaha!'' The two friends laugh together.

''Safe and sound for once! '' A robot passed through the roof and landed on one knee, it was blue with painted flames on the wings. The robot got up and looked at the boys.

''A robot? Man, I love the future!'' The creature said.

''It's an air combat armour mark 2 with rockets launcher, jet-pack, machine guns and some others kinds of stuff that are a bit dangerous for the human life! Plus, this armour belongs to Spitfire, she teaches at the academy,'' Discord explained.

''Is she a friend of yours?'' The beast asked.

''Nope!'' Discord said while looking at Spitfire who cracked her neck.

''Stay here! I'm going to talk to her, and do not touch my beer!'' Discord rose from his seat and moved forward Spitfire.

''Alright,'' The beast looked at his friend, then at his beer.

''Poor roof,'' He said, looking at the bird through the hole, ''You could have warned us, we would have ordered you a be-'' Spitfire grabbed him by the neck and throw him against the window of the diner with all her strength.

''DONOVAN!'' The beast said while holding Donovan's beer.

''I prefer vodka with good borsch!'' Spitfire said with a russian accent.

''What?!'' The thing did not have the time to react that Spitfire tore a table and threw it on him. The table projected him against a jukebox that started playing a song after the crash.

Talking away,
A machine gun came out of Spitfire's forearm, and the beast looked at it with wide-open eyes.

I don't know what I'm to say,
Spitfire started shooting at him.

I'll say it anyway,
The demon ran behind the bar, still under enemy fire.

Today's another day to find you,
Spitfire shot at the bar and several shards of glass falling on the devil who was lying on the floor.

Shying away,
She stopped firing at him and took a metallic sphere that was on her belt.

I'll be coming for you love, okay?
She stopped firing at him and took a metallic sphere that was on her belt.

Take on me (take on me),
She threw it behind the bar, and it stopped right in front in front of the thing's face.

Take me on (take on me),
The sphere exploded in a flash, blinding the beast.

I'll be gone,
The devil stood up with his hands covering his eyes.

In a day or two,
Spitfire fired at him with a grapnel that wrapped around his neck and pulled it to bring him back to her.

''I love this song!'' Spitfire said while punching him in the face.

So needless to say,
She put him on the ground and then crushed him like a vulgar cockroach under her boot.

''ARGGGGG!'' The beast roared in pain.

I'm odd and ends,
she stopped then she took him by the head and started smashing his head against the floor.

But I'll be stumbling away,
The face of the beast was bleeding, and she threw him against the bar.

Slowly learning that life is okay,
He leaned against the bar and saw Spitfire running towards him with her fist closed.

Say after me: ''It's no better to be safe than sorry.''
She hit him with such force that he passed through the bar like a knife through butter.

''TAKE ON ME!'' Spitfire started singing while kicking him in the ribs, causing him to spit blood.

''TAKE ME ON!'' Then she took him by the hair and rubbed his face against the shards of glass.

''I'LL BE GONE!'' The beast tried to hit her, but she stopped his blow and broke his hand.

''IN A DAY OR TWOOOOOO!'' She threw him once again against the jukebox, stopping the music.

Spitfire approached him while drawing a blade from her arm, ''I must admit, you're pretty tough!''

The Devil put his hand on her chest and Spitfire pressed it with a laugh.

''You're pretty cute too! A shame that I have to put you down!'' The demon smile.

''Thanks but I must warn you, women can get easily shocked when they are with me!'' The beast plunged his hand into the electric cables of the jukebox, electrocuting them. After several seconds, the thing removed his hand from the jukebox, and they both fell to the ground, unconscious.


Black screens, with voices in the background.

''You're a monster!''

''Freak!''

''Burn him!''

''I have no son!''

''AGH!'' The thing woke up with a start. He looked around to see that he was in an interrogation room with his hands tied to the chair.

''What the?'' A woman entered the room, she was wearing a white and gold suit, and her hair was multicoloured. She sat down in front of him and looked at him with a smile.

''Hello, my name is Celestia Sunrise! I am the headmaster of the academy and the leader of Equestrian, one of the best military organisation who is responsible for protecting the nation from danger coming from the enemy, you included!'' She put a briefcase on the table and took out a picture of her team posing in front of the academy.

''Look at it!'' The beast looked at the photo, and his heart stopped when he saw the woman from earlier.

''Beautiful, isn't it? Well, this woman, just like the one you faced at the restaurant, these women are considered as elites soldiers through the whole world! And you, coming out of nowhere, you come into my academy, and you put them on the ground as if they were nothing but rookies! So please tell me, who the hell are you?!''

I'm old, I could not tell you my exact age because between us, I stopped counting the years after a while. But my body is worth 100 men, and in my skull, I have the brains of one of the most intelligent men of his time. Unfortunately, I also have his memories, and all night, I live his death by the hands of my father who looked at him as Celestia to me at this very moment, with hatred.

''So?'' The beast was going to talk, but someone knocked on the door.

''When I come back, you will tell me everything I want to know, understand?!'' Celestia Celestia stepped out of the room , leaving the thing alone with his tortured mind.

10 minutes later

The beast was still sitting on his chair then Celestia went back into the room, but without a smile.

''You're lucking, you know that?'' Celestia said.

''What do you mean?'' the devil asked.

''Your friend Donovan convinced me to give you a chance, he sees in you a man who can lift mountains with his heart. Personally, I do not believe it, but am curious to know what will happen next,'' Celestia explained.

''A chance? What kind of Chance?'' Celestia smile.

''Welcome to the Canterlot Military Academy, where the heroes of tomorrow are forged to defend their nation!'' She held out her hand to him, but he did not shake it.

''Thanks for your offer, but, I'm done being a soldier, you have to find someone else!'' The demon explained.

Celestia smile to his answer then she got closer to him. ''You don't have a damn choice! Either you accept my offer, or I put you in a hole for the rest of your life!'' Celestia threatened.

The thing looked at her then he thought about Donovan's picture when he was younger and more particularly to the quote.

It's my turn now!''

''You can count on me!'' The beast said.

''Wonderful! And what is your name?'' Celestia asked.

The demon looked at her with a smile and said.

''Call me Adam!''


Author's Note

Hi, after several hours of work! Here is my new fimfic about Frankenstein's monster. I hope you'll like it! but if you ain't don't blame me! You can blame my friends on the other side

Black=the voice of the creature in voice-over, and through.
Design inspired by I Frankenstein

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