Brotherly Rivalry 2: Societies Acceptance

by Vocal Range

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Changelings, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Fetish, Romance, Sex, Thorax, Profanity, Pharynx
Length: 3391

The love of two changeling brothers, brings their hive to a new high as their love production has risen...however it's outside their hives society that has one of them worried.

It'd only been a few weeks since Thorax and Pharynx spent their first time together as lovers, but their hive already can feel the love radiating off of them when they're together but it's not brotherly love they feel it's got heavy notes of lust running through it.
As their hive accepts the two, Thorax begins to worry how his friends in Ponyville & all of Equestria will feel about this.
Cover Art By: pridark
Contains: Petplay, Sub/Dom Play, Slight Rimming, Snowballing, Shapeshifting (duh), Oral, Anal, Slight Cumflation, Threesome, and much more.

Published 2018-01-04 20:20:07 UTC
Last updated 2018-01-19 14:17:02 UTC

Prologue: The Hives Discovery

Prologue: The Hives Discovery

As the two lovers stirred for the first time in what felt like days, the whispers and chatter of a few drones could be heard outside the door causing a fear to set in for Thorax. His heart races as he cuddles Pharynx closer to him, pulling his brother out of the last of his sleepy haze. A tinge of anger and annoyance spread across Pharynx's muzzle, as he made his way to the source of the chatter. As the door swings open the eavesdroppers attempt to scurry away, before being stopped by an authoritative shout.

"Don't Move!" The drones stopped in their tracks, timidly turning around to face Pharynx just noticing his brother Thorax coming up behind him.

"Pharynx, don't be to hard on them...they were probably just worried we were in here for so long."

"Fine! So why don't you tell us why you were eavesdropping on us?"

No changeling dared speak a hushed silence falling over the area, the nature around them added the only signs of life. After several seconds of silence a single changeling stepped forward.

"W-Well Pharynx we could feel the love & lust you and Thorax were giving off, I-it was to tempting to pass up." The small female changeling cowered, as Pharynx stepped in closer before his brother pulled him away and stepped in front of him.

"It's okay, we're not mad in fact we're actually relived that the hive is reacting so well to mine & Pharynx's arrangement." A heavy blush painted across their leader's face, as they tried their best to hold in their combined laughter.

"Of course it's okay, it's actually kind of hot if I'm completely honest...wouldn't mind joining in with you guys myself. If you're taking in other broodmates."

The confidence in the female changeling spurred ideas in the head of Pharynx, while Thorax tried in vain to keep his embarrassment in check. Another surge of lust wafted around the group of changelings, as they took in the musky scent of Pharynx's arousal his cock slipping completely free of his sheath. Pharynx look of hunger towards the dominant female changeling spurred him on to walk closer to her feminine odor invading his senses causing his mind to go hazy. A still nervous Thorax watched as his brother & now lover trotted around the female drone his cock throbbing with need, as he circled his prey. Thorax could feel his own lust taking advantage of him, his own member spilling from his sheath, his pulsating member dripping intoxicating pre onto the ground below adding to the lusty cocktail that was in the air. Biting his lip Thorax could feel his lust reaching it's apex rather quickly, with a yank of his magic Thorax pulled Pharynx back into his chambers. Before a single word of protest could be said from Pharynx, he was thrown to the bed his member pointing skyward as he watched his brother standing over him. Watching his brother Pharynx's cock throbbed with need, as his brother's tail was hiked up over his back giving Pharynx an unobscured view of his plothole & heavy balls. Using his hooves Thorax spread his cheeks, his virgin hole almost winking in need as he hovered over his brother's dick. Pharynx couldn't move his eyes stayed fixated on Thorax's winking hole, until he heard a moan and almost whimper from above him.

"Ph-Pharynx, I-I ne-need you." His breath heavy as he panted with lust, as Pharynx placed a hoof on his brother's flank rubbing in circles before giving a single rough smack to his right cheek. Another moan erupted out, as a red mark stood out against Thorax's green coat.

"Come on Thorax, I'm not a mind reader...you're gonna have to tell me what you want." An evil smirk cracks across his face, as he holds his brother's flanks just above his cock smearing pre into the wrinkled hole. A whine and moan is all Pharynx hears, as he feels Thorax pushing down trying to impale himself on his member. "I'm not gonna let you do it until you say it."

"Ph-Pharynx...y-you are so un-unf-unfair." Realizing quickly it was going to be a losing battle, especially when Pharynx got in this kind of mood Thorax had no choice but to give in. "Fi-Fine Pharynx...I I want you to fu-fuck me until I can't move, I want you to fi-fill me up with your cum until I look like your broodmare. Pl-Please just fu-fuck me."

Pharynx could feel his heart race as he continued to hold Thorax's flank tight not letting even an inch of his cock penetrate his needy bitch, using his magic he pushed Thorax front down leaving his ass swaying in the air his tailhole now quivering with anticipation as his balls visibly tucked up closer to his body ready to release his load wherever he could. Seeing this Pharynx gave a sly smile before pushing Thorax's hind legs further apart, just enough to get his head between them from behind. Giving a single sniff his cock surged with the musky cocktail brewing in the room, giving Thorax's lurching balls a few good licks caused his brother's member to smack against his belly as he bit a pillow trying to suppress his moans. With one final sweep Pharynx went even further, giving a few good licks and even sucking slightly on the base of Thorax's shaft. With the foreplay out of the way Pharynx knew he was ready but had a different position in mind for Thorax's first time, using his magic he placed his brother on his back with his flank high in the air. His member hung directly in his face, spurting small shots of pre onto his muzzle and chest, giving a final fiery green flash Pharynx now stood much taller over Thorax. His cock now level with Thorax's flank, making sure to apply a generous amount of lube to his cock as well as his brother's tight hole Pharynx was finally ready. Giving a few experimental prods the hole finally gave way slightly, pulling Pharynx's head into Thorax's tight depths. Both stallions give off a heavy moan, at the initial penetration, pre flowed freely from Thorax's member onto his chest and muzzle.

"Wh-Why don't you open that cute little muzzle of yours? I-I'm sure you'd love to take yo-your own load." Pharynx pushed another few inches into Thorax, it was still rather difficult considering Thorax's vice like grip on his shaft.

Doing as he's told Thorax opens his muzzle wide, just in time for his member to shot another heavy dose of pre onto his tongue. Seeing his brother take swallow his own pre got Pharynx a little more adventurous, as he pushed in a few more inches to his medial ring. With his muzzle still opened and eyes glazed over he didn't even feel Pharynx's hoof on his throbbing cock pushing it ever closer to his open mouth. The first sign he got as a thick rod being pushed past his lips, causing him to tense up slightly squeezing even tighter around Pharynx.

"G-Geez Thorax, I-I didn't think you'd be th-this tight." Opening his hazy eyes he noticed it was his own member stuck square in his muzzle, the act was so taboo to him his eyes rolled back in his head. He could feel himself getting closer to his release, as his brother pulled out so just the tip remained inside.

Giving a slight whimper through his filled muzzle, he felt Pharynx push back into him up to his medial ring in one hard push. "Why don't you blow yourself a little bit for me?" Just as he saw Thorax give a few experimental sucks to the first few inches of his member, Pharynx pushed forward his medial ring pasting through with ease as Thorax took him to the base. His medial ring rubbing over his prostate as both reached the point of no return, giving a few finally shallow thrusts before burying himself to the hilt in his brother, he pushed Thorax's rump a little higher causing his brother's cock to slip into the back of his throat as he painted his throat and tongue white with his seed. Seeing his brother swallowing his own load was all he needed, to pump his brother's constricting hole full of his cum. Panting heavily Thorax collapsed with a sharp whine, as Pharynx deflating cock was pulled from his abused hole a little to swiftly, a large deluge of cum poured out before a magic plug was put in the place of Pharynx's dick. Laying down beside Thorax both felt a mix of lust, love and slight shame...for the first time ever Thorax was surprised to see Pharynx blush crimson as he cuddled closer to Thorax.

"Yo-You feeling okay Pha-Pharynx?" Thorax finally coming down fully from the intense pleasure, before slipping into his afterglow wrapped tight in his brother & lover's hooves.

"Yeah I-I'm fine Thorax I-I know this sounds stupid after everything we've done together recently..." Pharynx felt the lump in his throat grow, as Thorax turned and gave his brother a small lick to his snout. "I-I love you Thorax." Thorax was taking of guard slightly, while his brother had said something similar before he never said it with this much genuine love and conviction. Before he could speak he felt his brother pull him into a deep kiss, instead of the heated kiss they'd shared during sex this one was more romantic and loving. Pulling away the two looked deep into each others eyes, a blush now heavy on both stallion's faces.

"Love you too Pharynx."

Author's Note

Well guys here's the beginning I'm so glad so many of you have enjoyed this story, it blows my mind how much support I've gotten since writing it. This really means alot to the guy who gave up on his dream of writing because he couldn't stand to read his own stuff. anyways enough of me rambling. This is just the beginning however, we will continue to follow Thorax & Pharynx through their relationship as Equestria discovers the extent of their bond. How will Equestria react? Especially when the first stop is to see Princess Twilight and her friends and introduce his brother as well as his partner.

Thorax & Pharynx Do The Crystal Empire Part 1

The train whistle bellows through the crisp mountain air, a smile adorns the muzzle of Thorax as he lays his head on his brother Pharynx's lap. A look of annoyance & anger spread across his face as he looked his younger brother in the eyes. The changelings were mere minutes from their destination, The Crystal Empire where Thorax got his do-over in life and changed the lives of his entire hive and more importantly...his brother Pharynx.

"Tell me again...why am I being dragged here anyways?" Looking out the window he could see the Crystal Empire draw near, remembering back to an older time for himself and his brothers and sisters.

"Well Prince Shining Armor & Princess Cadence invited me to stay for a few days, something about studying the new ways changelings absorb love instead of taking it. I figured it'd be more Princess Twilight's department, but Cadence was overjoyed to run the experiment with me."

"That still doesn't explain why I had to come." A scowl pushed over his face, as Thorax gave a small chuckle.

"I'd figured it'd be pretty obvious, what better way to show off the way we can create love willing with others then to have my brother & lover right by my side." Turning sideways he gave Pharynx a heartfelt grin, causing his older brother to blush. Unbeknownst to Pharynx his member slowly pushed from his sheath, the head smearing a clear liquid on his brother's cheek & lips. "I guess you do deserve a little reward...since you're being such a good little changeling and helping me with this trip." Rolling off his brother's lap he now laid beside the stallion, his member laid limp against his stomach taking his brother's stallionhood in his hooves he slowly brought it to rest on his muzzle giving light licks to the slit collecting each small shot of delicious pre. Snaking his forked tongue into his brother's tip collecting large globs of pre, before pulling away give his brother a wink and smile.

"We shou-shouldn't be do-doing this, we-we're in public plus we-we'll be at the Empire soon." Pharynx moaned as Thorax continued to nuzzle and lick the length of his stallionhood.

"Oh don't you worry about that, we've still got plenty of time, besides we're in the last car on the train for a reason." A lust poured from Thorax's voice as he swirled his tongue around the tip of his brother's member.

Before Pharynx could protest again he moaned through clenched fangs, Thorax engulfed his tip and the first few inches into his warm maw. Giving shallow sucks giving small swirls of his tongue around the portion of the cock he held in his muzzle, Thorax slowly pulled off his brother's dick causing him to whine softly giving an almost whimper wanting the pleasure to return. As Pharynx looked down pleading with his partner he saw the devious look in his eyes, before he could even speak he saw his brother release his previously retracted fangs back to there normal sitting position before leaning back towards his brother's cock before Pharynx pulled his head away with his magic staring daggers at Thorax never breaking eye contact. Until he noticed the look on his lover's face, which melted Pharynx's heart, he released his magic as Thorax lowered his head back down to his member. Without a word shared between the two Pharynx understood his brother, before giving a nod to the nervous Thorax. Finally being given permission Thorax slowly took the head back into his mouth, except this time he slowly pushed the broad tip between his extended fangs added a much welcomed pressure to his lovers member as he slide down till he reached the medial ring before retreating back up till just the head sat between his fangs. The whistle gave a final mighty blow signaling their arrival at the Crystal Empire, knowing he didn't have long he decided it was time to stop teasing Pharynx and finish him off. A wide grin pulling over his muzzle as he forced his head fully down, taking he brother's cock to the hilt the base still being squeezed between his fangs as the remainder of his member quivered in Thorax's convulsing throat. To quickly finish his brother off Thorax swallowed, making his throat close tightly around his member. With one final slow bob up to the ring before forcing him back to the hilt pushed Pharynx over the edge, his balls pulling upward as he fired shot after shot of creamy jizz down his throat. After swallow his brother's full load he pulled off, his member deflated back into his sheath before the door to the cabin swung open.

"We've arrived at the Crystal Empire sirs, Princess Cadence & Prince Shining Armor are expecting you." A feverous blush adorned Pharynx's face, as he was pulled out of the cabin by Thorax's magic.

"See told you we'd have enough time, and I've got to say Pharynx, I think my little changeling likes being exposed like that...I've never seen you produce so much."

"Just shut up Thorax, let's get this stupid trip of yours over with so we can go home." The Crystal Castle lay before the two changelings, a pair of guards adorned with gold armor holding spears stood patrol.

"Excuse me gentlecolts, we've got an appointment to see Princess Cadence & Prince Shining Armor."

"Aw Prince Thorax, they've been expecting you for quite a while." The guards lower their spears, as Thorax walks past only to put back up as the unknown changeling approached after him. "The royal family is only expecting Prince Thorax, so who might you be?"

"I'm Phar-." Before he could get them both in trouble Thorax was quick to jump in.

"Don't worry guys he's with me, this is my brother Pharynx." After several tense seconds of staring the changeling down, both guards lowered there weapons allowing both entry.

"Why did you jump in like that? I could have taken those idiots all on my own."

"I know you could have, but I'd rather not have you thrown in the dungeon for your own brash actions."

As the stallions neared the castle the Princess was already waiting for their arrival, with a small alicorn baby held in her magic. Giving Thorax a welcoming hug she looked over the other changeling accompanying him. Giving a sideways glance as Flurry batted at Thorax's large antlers.

"So Thorax, you didn't tell me you'd bringing company...and one so cute too." Thorax almost broke out in a fit of laughter as he saw the mix of a scowl and blush on his brother's face.

"Act-Actually Cadence he is kind of pertaining to the study you wanted to do on changeling's new 'willing love' thing, I figured bringing him would be a good place to start considering me and him are pretty close." Pulling his brother/lover into a tight embrace, Pharynx's blush turned to a deep crimson hue.

"Oh I could tell from the moment you two walked up, it's so cute to see such open displays of love...especially between two stallions. Come on in you two, Shiny has been waiting all week to see you Thorax." Walking in Pharynx and Thorax both took in the sights of the beautiful castle, everything in pristine condition as the hard crystal floor clipped and clopped with each step the three took. "Now don't worry if Shiny is a little weird around you...uh...I actually didn't get your name."

"The names Pharynx, and I'm sure your husband will be fine."

"Thorax, how've been? Heard you've been changing a lot in the changeling hive, that's great and...whose the new guy?"

"Shining...this is my coltfriend Pharynx...Pharynx this is Prince Shining Armor." Extending a hoof Pharynx tried to shake the new wood be friend's hoof, only to be pulled into a hug by the oversized stallion.

"Well any friend of Thorax is a friend of mine, especially if it's his new stallion."

Cadence could sense a new thought growing from Thorax & Pharynx both, one involving their relationship and one she knew she had to rectify immediately. Sneaking past the two embraced stallion's Cadence made her way over to a confused Thorax.

"Shiny, why don't you get to know Pharynx a little better? I've got to talk to Thorax about something privately real quick, if you guys don't mind that is."

"Not at all." The three stallions said in unison, as Shining lead Pharynx to a nearby room filled with all sorts of activities and games. Giving Cadence her much needed alone time with Thorax, so she an get to the bottom of the weird aura the two had been giving off.

"Thorax...I need you to be honest with me...what's really going on between you and Pharynx? I know you said he was your coltfriend...but I keep sensing this weird aura surrounding you two."

"H-How did you know something was up?"

"My abilities extend past simply sensing and helping with love problems, it also allows me to sense other aura's based around love. It seems you have a bit of shame as well, that's not because of my powers though...I can just read your face like an open book. Why are you ashamed of dating Pharynx?"

"I-I'm not ashamed of dating Pharynx it's just...I'm afraid of how everypony will react if they knew the truth." Turning away dejected the stallion felt a wing wrap over his back, running her soft feathers over his tense muscles.

"You don't have to be afraid of your true feelings Thorax, trust me I promise nothing bad will happen to you."

"O-Okay Pharynx is my coltfriend & I'm not ashamed of dating him I'm just scared because..." Taking a depth breath through clenched fangs, Thorax looked over Cadence's face for signs of trouble. He only saw her soft expression, giving him closure that he really didn't have anything to fear. "He's my lover & my...brother."