World of Disharmony: Darknesses Embrace

by Polaris Solarmoon

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Profanity, Discord, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Main 6
Length: 2955

A rewrite of the original World of Disharmony

Fluttershy is normally a kind and gentle mare with a big heart and is really shy, however even she has a dark side and it was sick and tired of being all nice and quiet all the time. And it has had enough...

Equestra will fall and nopony can stop it.

(The heart is such a fragile little thing, one wrong move and it'll break like an egg... - Empress Flutterscare.)

Published 2018-01-09 16:50:06 UTC
Last updated 2018-01-17 02:07:11 UTC

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

Darkness...,it lies within the hearts and souls of everything and everyone, even the most innocent of hearts have darkness within them, I should know because I was once one myself.

An innocent and naive pony who once cared for others, but then, I had found that there was darkness within me and I had decided to share this gift with my friends and now, we rule over everything with an iron grip, I watched with glee as cities fell before our might, countries cower before us and even castles crumble beneath our hooves, some may say we were monsters, others say we were devils, wanna know what I say... We are the Elements of Destruction and we are unstoppable! - Empress Flutterscare, Queen of All Equestra.

I remember it like it was yesterday, yet it was only a few years ago, I was such a kind and naive pony back then.

I was so shy back then that it sickens me to think about it right now! Never the less, let me at least say that I don't fucking care about that part of me anymore, I am much better than that now, I'm the ruler of all Equestra for crying out loud,but I'm getting off topic, it's time I told you all how I became the Dark Empress of all Equestra.

It was another beautiful day in Ponyville, I was currently at home watering some flowers that I had planted the other day when my friend Rainbow Dash came up to me.

"Hey Fluttershy, the girls and I are having another pet playdate today, you wanna come?" she says in her usual tone.

"I don't know, I have tea with Discord today, and I think Angel is sick, so I can't go." I said.

"Aww man, I guess I'll have to tell the girls that your not coming." I hear Rainbow Dash say before she flew away.

Discord..., I remember the day we had first met, he had temporarily corrupted myself and my friends in an attempt to rule over Equestra but he eventually was defeated by the Elements of Harmony, he was the one that inspired me to corrupt my friends when I had gotten rid of my weaker self, I had imprisoned the weaker me within the very Element of Destruction that I wear now, all she does now is cry like the weakling she is, but I'm getting off topic again, back to my story.

After Rainbow left, I went inside my cottage and prepared for Discord's arrival.

It didn't take long for him to appear, only a few minutes which was enough time for me to set the table.

"Hello my dear Fluttershy, how are you today." Discord says in his usual cheerful tone.

"Oh Hello Discord, I'm so glad you came!" I said.

"Of course Fluttershy, I enjoy our little get togethers from time to time." Discord says as he spawns a cup from out of nowhere.

I then get my own cup and then I poured out our tea.

"So,Fluttershy is there anything new going on with you and your friends that I don't know?" Discord asks me before taking a sip of tea from his cup.

"Nothing much really." I had said.

" Oh...,very well then." Discord said.

"Discord." I said.

"Yes" he says after taking another sip of tea.

"I'm tired..." I say as I put down my tea cup.

"Tired of what exactly?" Discord said.

His curiosity was his downfall, because right then I had told him," Of doing the same thing over and over again."

"What do you mean?" He asked.

"Remember when you made me cruel, I felt like I was in a bad dream when it happened..., then I felt like I could do anything,and nopony could push me around anymore, for some reason i... felt... good..." I had trailed off for a little and then I had finished what I was saying," I felt good."

Next thing Discord knew, I was surrounded by darkness, the very darnkness that lied within my heart, it wasn't enough to make me look like how I do now, but it did make Discord cower in fear.

"I want to feel that way again, and your going to help me." I had said as I slow crept towards him.

"And what if I don't?" Discord asks.

"Then I'll make you!" were the last words he heard before I had pounced on him.

I then forced Discord to use his power on me once more, making once again the cruel being that he made me before.

Now no longer the weakling that I was , I knocked out Discord and stole his power. I then used it to turn him to stone.

It was then that I realized that I could now use this power to corrupt my friends and take over all Equestria without any rivals to stop me.

So I did, I first went to Twilight's home, she will be the first pony I'll corrupt as she poses the biggest threat to my plans.

I found that her dumb dragon was sleeping in front of the castle door and simply flew through the window leading up to her room.

Luckily she was nose deep in a book so she never noticed my new form so I made sure to make myself look normal so she wouldn't suspect a thing. I even made sure to act like my old self as well or she'd find my sudden assertiveness suspicious.

"Hi Fluttershy, where were you?" she says completely unaware of my intentions.

"Oh, um I was at home having tea with Discord." I told her.

"Was it another tea day today?" Twilight asked.

"Yes, um T-twilight c-can I ask you a question?" I said. It was now time to put my plan into motion.

"Sure go ahead." Twilight says cheerfully.

"Aren't you tired of doing the same thing over and over again?" I asked Twilight while slowly trotting closer to her.

"What do you mean?" Twilight said.

"Think about it, we've saved the day so many times now,don't you think that it's time for a change?" I say as I put my hoof on her back.

"Why are you telling me this?" Twilight said.

"Because I'm sick and tired of being nice and quiet all the time Twilight!" I said.

"What?! But that's what makes you... well you, why would you want to change that?" Twilight asked as I then put my hoof on her horn.

"Oh my naive little friend, why indeed, how about you ask yourself?" I told her as I channeled my power into her horn.

"Wait Fluttershy, what are you doing? I..i...no feel.. good." Twilight said,I noticed that her speech was slipping ever towards the speech that my right hoof minion Sparkle Duskmoon has now.

I watched as Twilight changed before my eyes, her mane became messy and her cutie mark changed into a black star, her wings stayed the same however, but her eyes now looked in two different directions, Sparkle Duskmoon was born.

"Who...,Who you?" the now memory less Twilight said.

I turned into my real form and said, " I am Flutterscare, your new mistress, you must do what I say when I say it , got it!?"

"Kk, who me?" Twilight asked.

"You can be my minion, as for your name it shall be Sparkle Duskmoon." I told her.

"Sparkle.... Dusk... Moon?" the newly named Sparkle Duskmoon said.

"Yes, that is your name now." I said happy with how she came out.

"Yay, Sparkle Duskmoon happy!" Sparkle Duskmoon says cheerfully.

"Perfect.." I say before laughing maniacally.

[chapter one end.]

Author's Note

Uh-oh...😨

What will happen next? You'll have to find out next time.

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

Sparkle Duskmoon was only the beginning, the next pony on my list would be Rotten Apple, she is the second pony I corrupted and is a very useful member of the Elements of Destruction.

Corrupting her was rather difficult to do but she eventually gave in, but I'm just rambling on at this point so let me tell you how I corrupted both Applejack and Rainbow Dash,as she was corrupted by me as well.

Sparkle Duskmoon and I were on our way to Sweet Apple Acres to execute the next phase of my plan to corrupt the Elements of Harmony and take over all Equestra,however the trip there wasn't short because Sparkle kept getting distracted by almost little everything imaginable, it really annoying at first but I eventually got used to it.

"Flutterscare? Who you tallking too?" Sparkle Duskmoon says with an innocent and confused look in her eye.

My response to her random question was,"Nopony but myself Sparkle, come we're almost at Applejack's home."

I then continued on my way,making sure to ignore Sparkle's questions, Most of which by the way were either about her surroundings or about Applejack.

We eventually got to Applejack's home and Sparkle Duskmoon was just about to rush forward and say hello, but I stopped her.

"Let me handle this Sparkle, I can still act like my old self, you cannot." I had told her before changing myself to my old shy self and shly trotting towards Applejack who happened to be busy with work and didn't notice Sparkle's appearance.

She did see me however and came over to say hello.

"Howdy there Fluttershy,how's Angel doin'? Ah 'eard he was sick." she says.

"yes, he was, but he's starting to get better. " I said.

" Ah'm glad ta here that, so Fluttershy care ta explain why Twilight's actin' like she got a few screws loose?" Applejack says as now notices Sparkle Duskmoon who was currently playing with one of the apple trees nearby.

("Ugh, Sparkle you imbecile,your blowing our cover!") I said within my mind upon seeing Sparkle Duskmoon.

I quickly thought of a lie to keep Applejack off our hooves.

"Um, Twilight failed a spell and now it makes her act like this." I said.

Applejack looked at me with a stern but cautious eye before shrugging.

"Huh, makes sense ta me. You have any idea how ta turn her back to normal?" Applejack said.

Suddenly I had an idea.

"Yes actually, I need your help though." I said.

"Alrighty then,what do ah have ta do?" Applejack said.

"Give me your hoof please." I had said as I held out my own hoof.

"Okay, then what?" Applejack says in confusion as she holds out her own hoof which I then hold with my wing.

"Now think about how intelligent Twilight Sparkle is, then close your eyes." I said.

"Okay..." Applejack says as she closes her eyes, she sounded a little unsure.

"How do you feel?" I asked her.

"Ah feel... Good,fer some reason." Applejack said.

"Perfect, now think of the best lie you can come up with, any lie is fine." I said as I let loose the darkness that was within me.

Applejack was surrounded by that darkness and then like Twilight before her,she changed, her body became a darker orange and her cutie mark changed into three rotten apples. her hat was then discarded. Other than those changes, she stayed largely the same.

" I don't even know how to lie!" Applejack suddenly blurts out, it was an obvious lie.

I then revealed my true self and then fully corrupted her.

" Can Sparkle come out now?" I hear my loyal minion say.

" In a second Sparkle, I must make sure that Applejack is fully under my control." I said.

"Kk" Sparkle said.

" Now then, tell me your name." I said.

" Applej... Rotten Apple, it's Rotten Apple." Rotten Apple says.

"Good, now who are you loyal to?" I asked her.

"Nopony but you my mistress, anywhere you go I'll follow." Rotten Apple said.

"Perfect now we need..." Right as I was about to finish speaking I had heard Rainbow Dash land nearby, she was completely unaware of what was currently going on.

"Hey Flutters, what's up?" Rainbow Dash said, she didn't seem to notice that Twilight or Applejack were acting any different than normal..

I decided to play innocent just in case and said," Rainbow, it's horrible Twilight messed up a spell and I think its affecting everypony she meets!"

"What!? How did this happen!?" Rainbow Dash asked me.

"I don't know, but I think we should try to support her in this rough time, what do you think Twilight? " I said.

Sparkle Duskmoon stared at me for a little while before saying, " I think I kneed elp, will you elp Rainbow?"

"Uh sure, but how can I help you Twilight?" Rainbow Dash said.

" I dunno, maybe you be good 'nd accept my friend's gift." Sparkle Duskmoon said.

"Gift,what for?" Rainbow Dash asked.

" Four being awesome datz what." Sparkle Duskmoon said.

"Cool where is it?" Rainbow Dash asked.

Suddenly Sparkle's whole demeanor changed from dizty to malicious within a moment.

"Here." was all that she says before surrounding Rainbow Dash in darkness.

The only thing that changed on Rainbow Dash was her cutie mark and the way she presented herself, she seemed much more timid then I was.

"Oh.. oh my." Was all she said before She joined our group.

We then went someplace hidden so I can execute the next phase of my plan, corrupting Rarity and Pinkie Pie.

Darkbow Cash was definitely the easiest of all the five ponies to corrupt , I was definitely proud of my minion for corrupting her.

As for Rarity or Ragity however she was really suspicious of my behavior at first, but I eventually corrupted her as well.

Enkip Pie or Pinkie Pie was there too by the way. She cracked when I told her my plan, she is now my second most useful minion.

Darkbow and Ragity aren't as useful to me as Sparkle Duskmoon or Enkip Pie but they still get the job done, for the most part that is, but I don't really fucking care, I'll finish this tale of mine and get it over with.

Getting to Rarity's home wasn't very difficult for me. Unfortunately I had to go alone,I am the only one that can turn into my old self so I made sure to hide my minions so nopony would get suspicious.

I knocked on the door to her home and waited for her to let me in.

The wait wasn't long as Rarity eventually came to the door and said, " Oh, Fluttershy darling, what brings you here?"

"hello rarity, can I come in?" I asked her.

"Sure you can dearie, are you looking for anything?" she said.

"yes actually, I need your help with something important, you see Twilight messed up this spell and now all of our friends are acting weird." I said.

" That's odd, I don't remember Twilight ever casting a spell during our pet play date." Rarity said.

Before I could speak Pinkie Pie popped up out of nowhere and said, " Hi Girls, what's going on, is it opposite day today because I felt a really big doozie earlier today and I think it means it's opposite day, right!?"

" Not now Pinkie, can't you see that I'm talking with Fluttershy!" Rarity says clearly upset by Pinkie's sudden appearance.

"Sorry." Pinkie Pie said.

" Now then where were we, Ah yes the pet play date. As I was saying before, I do not remember Twilight ever casting a spell, what is really going on Fluttershy?" Rarity said.

" Fine, I'll tell you! I got tired of being a weak and pathetic pony so I let my darkness take over, and then I stole Discord's power taking it for myself, you know why!? Because I can use that power to corrupt the Elements of Harmony. Once I do that, nopony will be able to stop me from taking over all Equestria and rule as it's queen! " I say before cackling madly.

"What!? Surely your joking right?" Rarity says in shock.

"Oh no, I'm not joking, the only ponies left for me to corrupt are you and Pinkie Pie." I said.

Next thing that I knew Pinkie Pie started giggling, I asked her what was so funny and she said, " You are silly, Twilight would stop you in no time!"

I then started to laugh at Pinkie's response and said, "you think I didn't know that she would? I made sure to corrupt her first for that very reason."

"Then that means..., oh no we're next!" Pinkie said.

Before either of them could run away I had surrounded them both with my darkness, after they we're corrupted the darkness then surrounded myself, I then realized that I was missing one more Element which was of course Kindness, so I used the power I took from discord and fully embraced the dark magic it held then I let it surround my whole body, my wings,my tail and my mane, and when it was done, it went back into my body to used at my leisure. As for the pathetic Element of Kindness, it was changed into the Element of Cruelty and I was happy.

Oh and my weaker self was trapped inside it for all time, never to be released.

Soon all of Equestra will be mine...

Author's Note

So what story should I do next? Comment down below any story ideas that you have okay?

I'll see you next time- Polaris Solarmoon.

(After a few long months I've decided to come back to this story and fix it up hopefully it's better now then it was before...)