Author's Note

This alternate ending makes the snake vore more erotic, adding more interactions and some moments that I like. There’s a lot of artistic liberty near the end, which is unusual but welcome. I proofed and edited it to make sure each sentence was comprehensible.

Alternate Ending by Gundamdragon

Midnight addressed everyone. “As I was about to say, there’s just one challenge left, it’s the finale. The fifth challenge is where I transform in to a giant serpent and devour you alive, digest you, and then you die. In this one you combine everything you’ve learned into one. First, you will avoid getting eaten because getting eaten means pain. Second, you will digest in acid which is a stimulus you cannot remove. Third, you will finger yourself for the raw sensation of pleasure. Fourth, you will brace for the end of your life just like you did earlier. You will die with the honor of an uncompromised will since you were true only to your basic instincts, as prey to nourish a true superior predator.”

Sugarcoat nodded. “Oh, now it all comes together. There actually was a reason behind everything she did. Unfortunately for us, that is the nail in our coffin.”

Midnight nodded. “It’s true. I always follow through in making sure my experiments are meaningful and carried out to the end.” She slid from her place on the wall landing with a puff of black smoke. It slowly cleared to reveal her new form coiled where she landed thick powerful dark purple coils with black starburst pattern running down the backs, bigger around the girls bodies, then raising up from them was the massive snake head easily big as a compact car. The stilted purple eye's looked down the whites glowing with an unearthly light.

The forked tongue slipped past her scaly lips flicking the air plating them with loves droplets of salvia. "Oh yesss... I can taste your fears. It's making me hungrier~ " her now massive snake stomach let out a deep growl echoing her words. "I will say no more,” asserted Midnight. “You five are to react to your deaths in whatever way you see fit, I will take note of your action, taste and how fast you each digest." The five started to back away from her, legs shaking, eyes dilated and fixed on the giant snake as she let her maw slowly open as she as she raised back to strike, thick stands of salvia reflecting in the light of the arena and gaping dark pit that seem to draw their eyes. Each one knowing that they will soon vanish into it forever.

The girls scattered as Midnight lounged forward snapping her dripping maw at the girls. She raised her head up eyes darting around before locking on Sour Sweet who had tried to run past her tail with Lemon Zest. With a quick flip of her tail she lashed both of them in the ass prompting a mixed cry of pleasure and pain at the spanking, knocking them from their feet. Sour Sweet looked up from how she landed to stare into Midnights open salivating maw. "You must be great at giving head, you fucking bitch." Said Sour just before Midnight’s maw snapped shut around her upper body.

Midnight tilted her head back up as Lemon Zest sat on her ass watching the scene unfold. Meanwhile Sunny Flair and Sugarcoat had reached alone of the statues at the arena wall. "This is how we die eaten by back stabbing snake we had started to call a friend." Dead panned Sugarcoat.

"Fuck it, I'm getting one more orgasms before I die." Said Sunny Flair as she mounted the gargoyle from before, it's stone dick still slick from one of the girls vaginal fluids. Who's it was she didn't care it.

"Really?" Asked Sugarcoat as she slightly blushed watching her friend chose to try and get her self off.

Mean while midnight now was looking up at the sky and she snapped her jaws again drawing the kicking and profusely swearing Sour Sweet up to her knees, as Midnight's snake like tongue slid over her body coating it salvia to help her food go down. Outside, Lemon only stared in horror, her mind seeming to have completely frozen up or maybe it had given up. Regardless she watched as the last of Sour Sweet slipped in to Midnight's jaws. But in Midnight's left eye she saw her own reflection sitting and starring back at her. She knew she was next. A loud wet gulp snapped her attention to Midnight's snake neck as the squirming and, although muffled, still cursing Sour Sweet slowly started her long and inescapable journey to Midnight's hungry snake belly.

"Damn it! Zesty move!" Shouted Indigo Zap as she tackled Lemon Zest away from Midnight's jaws. The two rolling across the ground coming to a stop with Indigo's naked body straddling Lemon's.

"Um thanks but you forgot something?" Said Lemon Zest.

"Oh what was that?" Asked Indigo Zap only to be answered a moment later as both girls feel Midnight's maw snap shut on their legs.

"No way. Tell me she'll choke if she tries to eat us both at once?" Asked Indigo as the lips started crawling higher over both of them.

"Based on my pet snake I have to feed hamsters to and the size of her head and body. Twilight could probably eat a car whole and not choke." Said Lemon Zest who now was holding tightly Indigo's body there breast pressing in to each other.

"Lemon why are your nipples so hard?" Asked Indigo as Midnight's mouth reached their hips.

"I actually could never take my eyes off my snake when it was eating and well now that I'm the mouse for the snake, I think it's making me horny?...." said Lemon as the lips close around their backs pressing the two even tighter together.

"Seriously?" asked Indigo.

Midnight lifted her head back up preparing to finish her mouth full. "Yeah um.... want to try and fuck till we die?" Asked a embarrassed Lemon Zest. In response indigo sighed, grabbed any part of Lemon her hands could in Midnight' mouth and kissed her, right before their heads vanished in the snake maw. A thick gulp and the larger wriggling bulge of two girls having sex was visible sliding down Midnight's throat.

"Sunny are you almost done?" Asked Sugarcoat.

"Ah ah ah, No. Get- ah getting there, ah~ why?" Panted Sunny in response.

"Cause she just ate Indigo and Lemon in one gulp at the same time." Said Sugarcoat her voice now having a noticeable hint of fear.

"Okaaaaaaa~ I have a plan. Ah ah, protect me till I cume! Ah ah ah." Says Sunny in a laboured voice.

"Really? Fine I'm going to strangle you in the afterlife for this though." As Sugarcoat takes off running waving her arms.

Midnight of course heard and understood the whole exchange and rolled her eyes at it. Before starting to advance on Sunny only to stop when she felt her tail tug and heard Sugarcoat shout "Hay Twilight! Over hear bitch!" Midnight then somehow gave the 'deadpan really?' look with her snake face. "I just fucked up didn't I?" To answer that question, Midnight flicked her tail hard tossing Sugarcoat into the air. At the height of her ark she crossed her arms and deadpanned to herself "That's definitely a YES." She then dropped ass first in to Midnights waiting maw it closing around her forcing her legs along side her chest, making her both curse and thank her ballet lesson for making her flexible enough to take this pose without braking her spine, and realizing that if she had she would possibly been spared the pain awaiting below. Then Midnight swallowed the uncomfortably posed former prima ballerina.

"Yes, yes, almost there." Panted Sunny till she felt something sticky drip in to her hair and on her face prompting her to open her eye. "No... I haven't cumed yet!" She screamed as Midnight engulfed both her and the statue in her maw. She slowly drew her lips up the statute coming off the top with a wet pop, leaving the statue soaked in drool and Sunny trapped in her mouth now furiously trying to get herself off. Midnight swallowed her all the same another morsal of food for her stomach.

Midnight curled up in the center of the arena laying her head next to the wriggling sections of her stomach to lessen to the final part of the experiment. In her stomach the shadow five found themselves wishing for the pain of getting shocked as the tight churning mussels squeeze their bodies trying to crush their bones while at the same time rubbing burning acid curbing their soft tender flesh. This lasted hours they screamed till their throats where horse finally mercifully the pain started to stop their air burned their lungs still but there body's where now going cold having lost all nerve endings in their skin. Sugarcoat had passed out from the pain, Lemon Zest and Indigo now free from the pain and trapped in darkness tried in vain to please each other, just as badly as Sunny Flair and Sour Sweet where attempting to do themselves. But in a cruel twist of irony the same process that freed them from the pain had also stolen their pleasure from them leaving them to slowly die attempting to do something they could no longer do.

Hours later the walls vanish to reveal Twilight strutting back towards the woods, load gurgling coming from a slightly distended belly peaking out of her shirt.

"You’re glowing and smell like you spent the last two hours fucking." Came Sunset's voice drawing the attention of human twilight to her spot leaning on a tree. Sunset’s height was noticeably taller and breast and hips as well having grown fuller giving her a more hour glass figure.

"Is that what the end results will look like for me too? If so this experiment might warrant further studies." Said Human Twilight.

"You'll have plenty of research time later Midnight Sparkle." Said Sunset as she walked up and kissed her. Sunset blinked and looked at the girl in her arms in the eyes seeing in the blackness of the iris five familiar girls seeming to be shouting for help as Midnight sees a different set of five girls in Sunset's. They both blink making the images of their victories vanish. "Looks like princess Twilight's spell worked perfectly. Now our good friends are safe for what's coming. Thanks for going along with this so willingly Midnight."

"Yeah still not going to get used to that being my name. Beside it was my fault your world is dying and forcing this coming invasion for their very survival. The least I can do is protect my friends and help those I wronged." She leaned in and kissed Sunset deeply.

"I guess you’re a little fired up? Well let's go back to my house and work that out while the dazzlings tie up the loose ends of eliminating those who are fully aware of magic." Said Sunset holding Midnight's face against her now double D cup breasts.

"Who is assigned the old bitch?" Asked Midnight as she snuggled up tight to sunset her head resting on Sunset's right breast as they started to walk.

"Sonata after she hits mall, she will give Juniper a onetime chance to join us then clean the place out and after a stop at a taco shop on the way give Principle Snitch a good riddance on your behalf. Adagio is handling Gloryiosa for the camp clean up, and Aria is getting payback on vinyl and the rest of the students at the party as we speak. So we can enjoy the night and welcome our Princess and her advanced forces in the morning." Said Sunset.

"Just in time to show her the results of our experiments." Said Midnight with a smile as she adjusted her glasses.