War and heartbreak story 1 the beginning

Chapters

Part 3: morning
Part 5: cages
The important ponys and such
Part 6 the talk
Part 7 the first battle and the first loss
Cut parts and what part they were going to be.
Part 1: the new guy
Part 2: snap
Part 4 welcome party

Part 3: morning

I got out of bed as soon as I woke up and went to the nearest royal guard and ask “were is lime bit at?”

“Shes in the dining hall.” the guard said

“Can you take me there?” I asked

“Follow me.” He stated

A few minutes later we arrived. “There you are, limmy was telling us all about you.” A dark blue pony unicorn Pegasus pony with floating night sky mane said.

“Moooom, I told you not to call me that In front of anypony.” Limebit wined.

“Oh great, that’s just great.” I mumbled.

“Well let’s eat.” A white unicorn Pegasus pony with floating light blue,purple,pink.and green mane said.

“But, first what are you two?” I asked

“Oh were alicorns.” The blue one said

“Let’s eat.” The white one said

I sat down and saw salad and sandwiches but no meat

“Were is the meat at.” I said only to git slapped by Limebit. “Ow, what was that for.”

‘We don’t eat meat you monster.” said limebit

“Sorry In a omnivore.” I said only to get slapped again. “That’s it I’m going to find some deer, cows, or pigs. Goodbye, if you want me I’ll be in the everfree forest.” I said while I tried flying out a open window only to get thrown out of it.

“Well that monster is gone lets eat finally.” The white one said

“You idiot, throwing him out a window was the worst thing you can do at the moment!” Limebit yelled then disappeared.

“I’m going to die!” I yelled only to get caught, “oh thank goodness for that, I’m not going to die today.”

“We still need to get you home somehow.” Limebit said with a bit of caution in her voice.

“Don’t weary I can control the Timberwolfs remember.” I said as serious as possible.

“Okay, lets go.” Limebit said with complete confidence.

“There we go, lets go to the Ponyville library, twilight will know where to go.” I said smiling for the first time in 10 years.

Part 5: cages

I followed my cutimark for about 3 hours. When the cutimark disappeared through a door inside a cave. ‘What’s a door doing here’ I thought to only get poked by something sharp in the back, then remembered I had wings.

“What are you doing?” A familiar raspy voice asked. I immediately turned around to find 3 friends 1 pony I wanted to shoot, the love of my life, and a pony I’ve never seen before.

“I have no clue, and who’s the white unicorn?” I asked pointing at the white unicorn.

“This is rarity the best fashionista in Equestria.” Twilight stated.

“Okay, i’m going through the door see ya la-Ow!” I said before getting stabbed by a spike.

You ok there” rainbow asked

Yeah I’m fine

Okay but-wow the door opened rarity said

The smell made me want to throw up but when I looked around all I could see was a line of cages with each cage ether having a starving being or a rotting corpse but in one cage there was a note. I told the girls to get Everypony that’s alive to the hospital and come back, and they did. I grabbed the note and whated forthem to come back to read the note.

who ever is reading this it is problebly to late for me. There are chests that grant imortality but beware of Celestia. She is foalnapping anypony she can and makes them work as SLAVES. My name is Shooting Star. kill Celestia finds the chests before its to late. The chests are underneath my cell because I found them before she did. please tell my family I love them and destroy the cave. Please tel fluttersh that I .

“That’s all I can get for now. All I know about Shooting Staris that he only had his parents. His parents died in a fire 2 days ago.” I said obviously sad

“I bet you that Fluttershy knows more about him” Rainbow said only to cause Fluttershy to blush a deep crimson red.

“I figured out what the rest says.”I said ”Please tell Fluttershy that I love her. Anyway we need to get the chests and fast before Celesita comes and kills us.”

“But ya have ya guns, right?” Applejack asked obviously scared

“I do, but there are on the weaker side on the spectrum.”I said and went to were the note was. “Okay lets get digging.” The rest of the time was quiet until we found the chests.

“”There we go finally. It will take FOREVER to take this out of my coat!” Rarity said with disgust.

“Shut up, she could be near.”I said just loud enough for them to hear.

The chests were adorned golden trims and a star with dots all over. As we were transporting the chests to my castle. There was a voice I recognized as Limebit.

“Limebit!” I yelled. But when the door opened all I could focus on was Limebit all bloodied and beat up. “Get the chests out of here I’ll deal with Celestia and Limebit.”

“Are you sure that you can do this by yourself? ” Rainbow asked.

“Yes I’m sure, now get and get out!” I yelled as loud as I could scarring them they left with all 12 chests.

“You want Limebit that badly then I’ll give her to you if you’re able to hit me before I kill you.” An all to familiar voice said

“Deal!” I yelled as I felt a new power flow through me.

“Great let’s begin.” Celestia said with a smirk on her face. That through me over the edge. And within seconds Celestia was on the ground. I wished that I finished her of there but I let her live. I grabbed an went to the hospital. She was rushed to the emergency room. I whated for 3 days for to be able to see her and when I did see her I felt like I could do everything I spent the rest of the day with her, and when I had to leave I was reluctant at first but I did leave. I promised her that I’d come first thing in the morning. Well I did but it was definitely not the way I intended.

When I got home the girls had all the chests except 1 stored away in my castle basement. They were studying it before I accidentally nocked it over.in an instant engulfed in a black fog slowly “dieing”. Then I herd hoofsteps coming closer.

“D-don’t h-help me” I said then everything went black.

Author's Note

Next chapters are couple development with the hole gang. We have cuples but I need matches for rainbow dash, and Rarity but they have to be male

The stallion that are out are discord, spike, flash century, and grilled cheese.
The chests are used on all of them. So all of them are immortal now and alicorns for the ponys but nothing happens to the other though.

The important ponys and such

Not part of the main story just a list.

—————--list of important people and what side there on and tracker————

Twilight Celestia’s side
Rainbow dash Nightwing’s side
Applejack Nightwing’s side
Fluttershy Nightwing’s side
Rarity Celestia’s side
Pinkie pie Celestia’s side
Nightwing Nightwing’s side
Luna Neutral
Celestia Celestia’s side biggest enemy
Limebit Neutral wife
Flash sentry Celestia’s side
Discord Nightwing’s side
Echo Nightwing’s side
Spike Nightwing’s side
C.M.C. Celestia’s side
Grilled cheese Celestia’s side

Nightblite Nightwing’s side sister
Orion Nightwing’s side son
Apolo Nightwing’s side son
Nightmare Nightwing’s side daughter
Amy Nightwing’s side niece
Gemi Nightwing’s side nephew
Knite Nightwing’s side niece
Dr. Hoofstep Nightwing’s side brother-in-law
Soarin Celestia’s side
Spitfire Celestia’s side
General Alex Nightwing’s side Died Chapter 1
The cockatrice Nightwing’s side
Daymon Nightwing’s side Nightwing’s evil side.

Part 6 the talk

——————————Nightwing’s threat————————————————-

Celestia you ether release the slaves or I release my army on you. Your choice war or peace. The elements are useless against me. If you chose war then 100s of 1000s will die and most of the land will have no life and you will suffer.

Send me a response you pathetic excuse of a pony.

From your worst Nightmare

Nightwing

———————————Celestia’s response——————————————

I will not release them ever and the hole threat was amusing to read. I have 6 elements of harmony the humans and all surrounding countries. Your pathetic little army wont stand a chance. Before the war one last conversation between you me and my niece at 3:00 pm how about it.

From aunt-in-law Celestia

———————————-Canterlot gardens————————————————

“Hello you bastard”

“Everypony is on my side and your army will crumble when they try to fight”

“You really think that there on your side all the humans are on my side most of the elements as well the neighboring countries are weak. And the army I have is three times bigger than Manehattan.”

“Lair liar there is no way that’s true your a Nopony. Nopony likes you. Everypony hates you, and your not even a alicorn.”

I pulled my cloak o to reveal what I am. “Now good day and remember you have 1 week to prepare for the war

Part 7 the first battle and the first loss

The first battle was to take Ponyville. It took 3 days to get in the castle, but first let me tell you about the battle first

The first day not much happened. The second day the rogue ones joined in the battle the third day Well bodies filled the streets and the last to fall were torn apart by Athena herself.

“Applebloom, Sweetiebell, Scootaloo come and join me. That way more lives will be spared.” Nightwing said

“No we will never join you ever.” Sweaty bell said.

“Yea, all you want to do is kill us.” Scootaloo said.

“We will kill you before you can hurt any more.” Applebloom said.

“Well well well. What do we have here.” Athena said wile grinning mischievously.

“Athena get out of here-“ Nightwing started only to be cutoff by the timberwolf.

“No, not until I have food for my pack. Grab nightwing make sure he can’t do anything. Wile he has his hands full time to feast!” Athena yelled

“No!” The C.M.C yelled

“Time to die!”

“Ahhhhhhhhhh!”

They were torn limb from limb. there was only there coats, and bones left when Athena was done with them. As for my injury’s my left wing was beraly on, my back left leg was eviserated and my claws were out and were covered in my own blood. The castle part twilight will write that.(Daymon is the demon that lives inside me.)

—————————-crystal castle twilight perspective—————————————————

I was reading until I was rudely interrupted by Applejack.“Twilight, I’m sorry to say this. Join me or I’ll be forced to fight.”

“I guess you’ll be forced to fight, because I don’t want to get involved with politics.”

“Fine, but remember I don’t want to hurt ya.”

Applejack tried to buck me but that only lead to her to be thrown into a wall. I knocked her unconscious immediately. Nightwing came in but he called himself Daymon. He explained that Daymon was a demon, and that him and Nightwing have an agreement that Nightwing gives Daymon food, energy, and shelter in return for protection.

“Now you have a choice. Ether join us and save pony kind or die. Remember a choice is always there even if there seems to be none. A restraint only has power over the ones that let it. There is always another path even if the outcome is the same. Nowon has powers over you. You must choose because that is the way life goes on. choice after choice, consequence after consequence. But in the end it leads to the same thing death. But what you do can and will affect the future one way or another. So choose what you will do and be who you want to be. Even if your not remembered, you will still affect the future.” Daymon said, obviously repeating something he heard.

“Your a demon, but I now see that I need to kill instead of just fighting. Fine! I’ll join you.”

“Good now time to move south to appleloosa, and dodge junction.”

“What about applejack”

“ she’s going to the infirmary. She’s out cold. Now come on lets go get you ready to take applejacks position.”

“Fine lets go.”

Cut parts and what part they were going to be.

Part 6 Nightwing and Limebit

I woke up on what felt like my old bed which was basically a rock. I could hear yelling but I could only make out a few words. The conversation was as far as I could tel was between Limebit and Twilight.

“...three days...nothing...love him…”

“...know that… not dead...a alicorn”

“...do something!”

“I can't...about it…”

I finally was able to open my eyes to find Limebit laying on me crying.

“...awake.”

“What,....I..you!”

I tried to speak, but I couldn’t. For most of my body didn’t work. Every day reporters wanted to take a picture of the new alicorn. At that time I thought it was Limebit.(Limebit doesn’t go out much expechly now sense she moved in with me.) but when I was able to talk (it took 2 more days.) I learned that it was me that they wanted. It took months to get out

Part 7 Fluttershy and Discord

Fluttershy woke to somepony knocking.

“I’m coming.” Fluttershy opened the door. “Oh, hi discord.”

“Um…hi Fluttershy. Um...how are you doing today”

“Good how are you doing.”

“Would you like to go on a…….”

“On a what?”

“On a date?”

Fluttershy blushed a deep crimson red. “Um...shure.”

“Great i’ll pick you up at 7:00.”

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Part 8 Twilight and Flash

Part 9 Applejack and Spike

Part 10 Pinkie Pie and grilled cheese

Part 11 Rainbow and the assassin

————————————-assassin’s letter——————————————————

Hello, this is Echo. I’m only writing this so that you can understand and not try to kill me because I tried to kill one of your friends. (Rainbow is making me write this.)

The day was a gloomy one. All there were were clouds all above Canterlot. Princess Celestia took me out of the dungeons and promised me freedom if I killed the elements of harmony. As you already know I went after the element of loyalty, Rainbow dash.

It took me 3 hours to get to Ponyville. When I got there I started asking were Rainbow dash is. All I got from the first 2 ponies were nothing. But the threed pony I asked said that I was talking to her already. I said the stupidest thing ever.

“ so I’ve been watching you and I was wondering if you’d like to go out on a date?”

“Sorry but no”

“Please just give me a chance. I promise you won't regret it.”

“Okay fine but only one chance got it.”

“I promise you won't regret this.”

“How about we meet at 6:00 pm t the egch of the everfree forest”

“Okay”

That was the conversation we had. Let's skip tell the date scene I spent the rest of the day learning all I could about Rainbow dash. I did try to kill her. I failed we made up and everything is as normal as it was before I started dating her for real.

Signed

Echo

————————————————-2 days later————————————————

“So um lov-”

“Athena get back hear I told you that that area is of limits for tonight”

“Awooooooo”

“That’s it time to u-ahhhhhh “bang” great you won this time but when I get my claws on you I’m gonna kill you! Rainbow a little help here. I’m just a few trees west of where you guys are.”

————————————-rainbow’s view——————————————————

“That’s Nightwing he sounds like he needs help”

“Okay I do owe him a lot for this.”

“Got it follow me. Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh. We need to get him to a hospital now!”

“Nightwing was carried to the hospital. But was dropped almost immediately after being picked up”

“H-h-he’s a alicorn.”

“He wants it to be a secret. So don’t tell anypony.”

2 hours later

“So what wrong with him?”

“I’m not sher at the moment. All I know is that he’s not going to live past 30”

“WHAT there has to be something we can do.”p

“There’s a foreign magic in him and it's the only thing keeping him alive at the moment. It’s also tied to the castle in the everfree forest.”

“I guess we need to start this sooner than expected.”

“Start what?”

“You’ll see very soon. All I’m going to say is that it will rip everything apart.”

Part 12 Rarity and Brian

Author's Note

This section isn’t complete.

Part 1: the new guy

Hello my name is max and this is my story about becoming the most feared pony ever. It was like 5:00 am and the alarm went off. the day was a Monday, and I had to go to the lab to get my soul transferred to a body that I could get into Equestria with. The body was a Pegasus with a crimson mane, and a black coat. My undercover name was Nightwing and I was a blank flank.

“Time to lay down to get you in your new body.” the lead scientist said.

“Finally I can get out of hear.” said max as he laid down.

A few seconds later and I was in a weird gel like substance and was a pony.

“There you are I was looking everywhere for... “ the general began to say, then looked at the scientists “the process is complete good. Get him out of there I wish to speak with him.”

I was let out and ran to the general’s tent to talk to my lifelong friend. When I got there I got papers and a phone and was thrown to the outskirts of the town called Ponyville were I meet a pink earth pony that was jumping around me saying something I couldn’t understand.

“What?” I said. then out of nowhere a purple glow surrounded it and then began to float in the air.

“Sorry about her”, a purple unicorn Pegasus said, “she loves making new friends.”

“What are you, and what’s your name?” I said

“Oh, I’m a alacorn, and my name is Twilight Sparkle, and what’s yours?” Twilight said

I hesitated before answering. “My name is Nightwing, and do you know were I can.” That was all I was able to say before being thrown in the everfree forest, and meet a pack of wood wolves. “Oh fucking hell are those Timberwolfs, well get out of here.” to my surprise they left, I looked at my flank and found a microphone, and timberwolfs with red necklaces on them and I yelled so loud I bet that everyone in Equestria could hear. “That’s my talent fucking giving orders. Anyways I need to find a place to stay for the night.”

After walking around for what felt like hours I found a nearly abandoned castle. The only thing living there were timberwolfs. “Ah fuck it they seem like they don’t want to hurt me so why not.” I said as I was making my way to a empty space on the ground before falling asleep.

Author's Note

Any suggestions please comment down below

Part 2: snap

I awoke the next morning only to get shot in the shoulder, and a group of ponys and timberwolfs around me and fighting.

“Stop fighting and realize what is happening in town.” I said only to get thrown at a wall. “Ow, that fucking hurts.”

“Well duh you did get thrown into a wall.” The pink pony said

“Wow Pinke the element of laughter being rude to somepony new.” The orange one said

“Hay when did you get your cutimark Nightwing?” Twilight asked?

“I got it last night when I told some Timberwolfs to go away, though I thought they were horrible creatures only to find out there a lot like me. Now were are my pistols?” I said trying to get up only to fall back down and go unconscious almost as soon as I fell. Only to wake up to find human remains scattered everywhere and Timberwolfs eating what was left, and in the middle was the body of my best friend dead untouched except for a bullet hole in the middle of his forehead dripping blood all around his head. I looked around to see I was in a castle. I started crying saying over and over “what have I done”

then a voice said “everything is going to be fine.”

I looked to my right to find a light blue unicorn mare with a light green mane “wh-who are you?” I ask trying to speak.

“My name is Limebit, and everything is going to be okay.” she said.

“W-what happened here?” I asked trying to keep myself from breaking into tears again.

“Well... I”ll tell you tomorrow after breakfast with my mom and my aunt Celestia.” She said, then levitated me to a spare bedroom were she tucked me in and left.

I really couldn’t sleep that night and I got angry throwing the phone against a wall and yelled “what have I done.” Before falling asleep.

Author's Note

Well romantic interest brought in yay

Part 4 welcome party

The first pony I met was trying to throw me a party which I was determined to stay away from her for as long as possible

“There you are...” pinkie started to say. bang “what was that.” The pink pony has now 2 bullet holes in her mane.

“How did you find me and how are you alive?” I asked.

“Well duh you missed and for your first question I’ll tell you at the party, but first what’s your favorite sweet?” Pinkie asked

“I don’t eat sweets.” I said plainly

“What, you don’t eat sweets? Then what’s your favorite food?” The crazy party pony asked

“My favorite food is pork. If you don’t know what that is ask any human and they’ll tell you.” I stated

“Okay dokay lokay.” Pinkie cheered

“Great I ne-“ i began to say

“What is pork?” Pinkie asked

“Pork is cooked pig.” I said ready to shot again, but instead she fainted. “Great not only do I have Limebit coming over, but I need to get you out of here. What a minute how did she know I was a human? I wonder what else she knows about me?”

2 days past by and it was time for the party. “Okay time to try to not be myself, oh who am I kidding everyone is going to hate me anyways.”

As soon as I entered all eyes were on me “Ah, hello.” I said obviously nervous

A few hours in and I was in a heated discussion with a light blue Pegasus named rainbow Dash over what is wrong and what is right.

“Oh, you moron violence usually leads to more problems! I fought a lot of kids when I was younger and there out to kill me now!” I yelled and realized what I said and left then be brought back. By then I was just about to explode in anger, but then I noticed the music.

The music was ode to joy which is bland for my taste, so I waited to ask them to switch it to what humans call rock. They agreed to switch the music from classical to rock. I began singing come with me now by Kongos. A few hours, and drinks I noticed my what was it called again, oh yea cutimark was glowing and a see through version of it was trying to make me follow it. I went straight home to grab my silenced 42.mag revolver and put them in my bag then I followed my cutimark. What I found would change my life forever.

Author's Note

Songs: ode to joy, and come with me now