Jax and Luna have sex

by REDACTED99999

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Sex
Length: 2034

Jax and Luna decide to have their first time together. It could have gone better. It could have gone worse. A more realistic approach to virgin sex.

Not much more to say. Just virgin sex between my characters, written by a guy who has no business writing smut-fics. This is my first and last one, I swear :rainbowlaugh:
Anyway, this is a bit more realistic depiction of sex, but nothing amazing. I don't think you need to know the characters, but I dunno why else you would be here XD

So... I don't think this is good fapping material. If that's what you're after, there are plenty of good smut-fics around. If you come to see Luna and Jax finally fuck... welcome! At least they finally get around to it XD

Published 2018-01-27 21:10:06 UTC
Last updated 2018-01-27 21:10:06 UTC

Tango under the sheets

“You can do this.” Jax told himself. “You’ve got this. Just go in there and be your usual sexy self.”
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…
Maybe a minute more wouldn’t hurt. Jax went back to pacing back and forth. A couple of minutes ago he had been in bed with Luna, ready to take the next step in their relationship. Then doubt had hit him like a god damn truck, and now he was pacing back and forth in the bathroom.

“C’mon… I know I can do this. What was the point of asking Twilight all those questions about human-pony compatibility if I’m just gonna chicken out now?” He thought back to the most awkward conversation he had ever had with another being and shivered. “Gotta make that count.”

“Besides,” he continued with another good point. “Luna is a virgin as well. She doesn’t have any grand expectations. We’ll lose our virginity together. As a team.” That actually did make him relax a bit. She didn’t have any point of reference, there was nothing he had to live up to. He was successful if he made her cum, right?

“Are you alright in there?” Luna asked from the other side of the door.

“Yep! Fine and dandy like… sweet-sour candy?” He wasn’t sure what he was saying.

“Good, cause the bed is getting cold. We need to warm it...?” She answered with a purr.

She was trying to be sexy he guessed, but the way she said it almost made him laugh. It was like the words and tone together were alien to her, so it almost sounded like a question.

He shook his head with a smile. It was now or never, and suddenly he was feeling pretty upbeat. He took off his shirt and threw it rather aggressively into the shower, shortly followed by his pants, leaving him only in his underpants.

He used the same aggression to open the door. It was lucky it swung inwards, or Luna would have gotten a door to her face. As it was she just looked surprised.

Then she smiled, and Jax barely had time to brace himself before her mouth was on his. He had to take a step back, but it didn’t take him long to return it.

A few seconds later, Jax decided that it was time to take this to the bed, so with a deft motion he lifted Luna onto his arm, princess style - fittingly enough - and started moving. Luna smiled seductively, and went to nibble his neck, which in turn made Jax close his eyes at the unexpectedly nice feeling. This helped him learn a very important lesson: Stay focused while carrying your princess.

He wasn’t sure how he lost his footing, but it resulted in a surprised yelp from them both, Luna kneeing him in the face as she tried to right herself mid-air, before clipping her wing on the bed.

They both laid on the floor hissing, holding their injuries until the pain faded. When Jax tried to get over to his lover to see if she was alright, he realized that his ankle was hurt too, and the unexpected pain made him fall right into Luna, shoving her face into the floor in the process.

Was this how Derpy felt when she tried to help? This terrible sinking feeling in his gut? He should do something nice for the mail mare at some point.

He carefully got off his princess. Any excitement he had had was completely gone. “Maybe… we should postpone having sex, Luna. You know, let it happen naturally or something?”

Luna removed her head from the floor to give him a look of pure determination. Jax yelped as he was levitated onto the bed, being pinned roughly by Luna a moment later. “We are going to mate tonight, if the damn bed disappears underneath us, the sky is filled with fire, and earthquakes tear the ground asunder!” She hissed before biting into his shoulder, hard.

Honestly, her rough treatment made him shiver with delight. He couldn’t remember the last time he had gotten hard that fast. “If that is your command, my princess.” He let his nails run from the top of her neck, down to the base of her wings. Her moan made him smile proudly, happy that he had discovered her weakness so long ago: scratching. So easy. So effective.

She let go of his shoulder, and rubbed herself against his lower half. “Someone’s gotten excited.” She said with a sultry look as she felt his package. “Better help you out.” She added as she went lower, making him shiver once again.

His underpants were gone between blinks, out of sight out of mind. Luna eyed his member curiously. Before he could get self-conscious about his average size, she licked it from bottom to top.

He couldn’t help but laugh. This was really happening. He made himself comfortable as he felt her mouth wrap around the tip, and made its way down. It felt warm and soft and oh so amazing.

When she made it all the way down, he couldn’t help but feel happy and proud that they had advanced their relationship far enough for her to be willing to give him a blowjob. She took a few deep breaths through her nose and then started bopping her head up and down, slowly at first, but then with more vigour.

It was amazing. It was euphoric. He couldn’t believe it.

Alas, once he was pushed to the edge of an orgasm, he couldn’t seem to step over it. Luna made a valiant attempt, but in the end she stopped to massage her jaw. “Sorry. I didn’t know it would be so exhausting.”

“It’s fine.” He answered nervously. He felt kind of bad for her, after she tried so hard. “How about I return the favour?”

“I don’t think I need much in the foreplay department.” She said as she turned around, her tail sweeping to the side to allow him an unhindered view. It still took him a moment to realize what she meant. She was wet.

Too be fair, it wasn’t crazily obvious. She wasn’t dripping or anything, and her fur-

Whatever. The important thing was that she was wet.

He idly let his hand stroke her slit, the fluid making him smile proudly. “Lay down on your back.” He told her. She had said she was ready, but there was no way he was having his first sexual experience without licking her off first.

That was easier said than done though, as she rolled over onto her back and spread her legs. He felt a raw, instinctual urge to mount her then and there. He was surprised at how strong it was, and how much effort it took to not comply.

Instead, he leaned down and licked her slit from her hole to her clit, enjoying Luna’s appreciative moan. He gave her a few more experimental licks before focusing on her clit. He made sure to nibble, suck, and lick it, until Luna’s back legs were sporadically spasming. He put a finger inside of her, loving the wet, soft, and tight feeling. He mostly focused on rubbing on the upper side, trying and failing to find her find her g-spot. Did ponies even have g-spots? He would have to do some research later. Twilight hadn't mentioned it, and he wasn't too keen on asking her anything anytime soon. There had to be books somewhere he could use.

As she panted, moaned, and twitched, he found himself almost painfully hard. But every time he thought she was going to come… she didn’t. And as he continued on and on he felt his own need increase. Conscious thought was leaving him, until he couldn’t take it anymore.

He used her fluids to lubricate himself, before aligning himself to her hole. Luna was panting hard, and only managed to give him a curious look before he slammed into her.

Her eyes widened, and a hiss escaped her. He could feel her tense, his dick being hugged almost painfully.

“Jax.” Her voice made it clear he had fucked up.

“I’m sorry.” He gave her a sheepish smile. “Ponies don’t have hymens, so I thought….” He kind of trailed off. He hadn’t thought anything, he had just acted.

“What even is a hymen?” She hissed.

Jax grimaced. Not exactly how he wanted his first time to go.

He leaned down to give her a gentle kiss on the lips. He could feel her relax a little bit, so he went on to shower her with kisses. Slowly and sensually, he kissed her wherever he could reach, ending up at her neck. “It’s a human thing. Don’t worry about it.” He ensured her as she sighed out some more tension.

“Alright… try moving.”

He pulled back until only his tip was inside of her, then went back in painfully slow.

“Does it still hurt?” He asked after a few thrusts.

“No, I think its fine now.” She answered. Which was good, ‘cause he wasn’t sure how much longer he could keep the slow pace. He wanted - no, needed - to go faster. He could barely keep himself back. There was an animalistic need in the back of his mind telling him to just slam into her as hard and fast as he could.

And yet he somehow managed to keep himself somewhat in check. He increased the speed a little bit. When he heard no complaints, he went faster still, slowly losing himself in the feeling. The only sound that could be heard was flesh against flesh, the only smell that his nose could register was of sweat and sex. The only thing he could see was the beautiful mare underneath him, with her half-closed eyes, framed by her starlit mane. But even all that palled at the feeling of his dick being hugged by her tight hole. He could feel the pressure building and tried to slow down, or stop completely, but he couldn’t make himself do it. Then Luna moaned and he lost control completely.

With a growl he repositioned himself to have better access, and then just let himself loose. All that mattered was the slick feeling of his dick going in and out of her.

She was so wet and it felt so overwhelmingly good and he moaned in pleasure and he couldn’t stop and oh God he was going to-

The whole world stopped for Jax as he had the most intense orgasm of his life. There were no thoughts, no words…

only pleasure.

He collapsed on top of Luna, suddenly exhausted beyond belief. He had a crude notion that he needed to finish her off, but everything seemed hazy and he couldn’t form proper thoughts. It didn’t take him long to drift away to sleep.

***

Luna, on her part, felt unsatisfied. She looked at her slumbering partner and sighed. She gently lifted him off her with her magic and laid him next to her, making sure that he had an arm over her.

She struggled with her disappointment for a few more moments before sighing again. It was their first time together. It would get better.

As it was, she decided to finish herself off. Her hoof wasn’t much compared to his tongue and fingers, but he had done a good job of making her excited, so it didn’t take her long to reach her orgasm.

Afterwards, she cleaned up, and made herself comfortable next to her lover. He may not have finished her, but they had plenty of time to get the hang of it. She nuzzled him gently. “I love you, my dear Jax.” She whispered as she let herself drift off as well.

Author's Note

This took me incredibly long to finish XD Not the first part, the second part where they actually do it. I realized something as I was writing - It is not my calling in life to write this type of stories XD
Ah well. I would recommend you check out anything by Pusspuss, he's much better at it than I am XD