Flutter's End

by foaloutboy

Rating: teen
Tags: Angel, Fluttershy, Doctor Whooves, Twilight Sparkle, Sad, Applejack, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 1043

Many terrible times in Fluttershy's life have resulted in her one way out, suicide

Fluttershy is weak. All of her friends take advantage of her. After catching her Coltfriend in bed with her best friend Twilight, she knows her life is meaningless and should be ended.

Published 2012-07-23 04:44:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-23 04:44:01 UTC

Doctor's betrayal

Doctor's betrayal

A/N: This is not a hate fic! I would appreciate it if you judged it on story structure, ability to stay IC, etc. Not just hate on it because of the ending...

Doctor Whooves nuzzled Twilight's neck as the two of them lay in a tangle of sheets on Doctor's bed.
"Oh Doctor..." moaned Twilight as the brown colt kissed her neck.
"Oh Twilight... you're so much better Flutttershy.." he mumbled as he ran his hooves over her body.

He had been dating Fluttershy ever since they met at the royal wedding in Canterlot. He had shown up in an attempt to meet Twilight Sparkle, having admired her ever since he'd first seen her in Ponyville in the library.

But instead he had run into Fluttershy and danced with her a bit and before he knew it, they were in bed together, an event cut short by Fluttershy's crying.
"I'm so..sorry" Fluttershy squeaked. "I've..never done this before." Doctor had to coax her through it, which ended unsatisfactory.

Even after seeing Fluttershy for a week, he didn't have the heart to break it off with her, he still lusted after a certain lavender unicorn, so when he saw her drinking at The Lucky Horseshoe, the local bar, he knew he had his chance.

At first she greeted him warmly and he bought them a few rounds of drinks. After a while he noticed she was leaning on him, giggling at looking into his eyes.

"Doctor.. wait" Twilight's words snapped Doctor back to the present. "Fluttershy's my best friend...I can't do this.."
"But Twilight" said Doctor "It's you I love, not Fluttershy. Sure, she's nice but she's much too..weak." He looked into her eyes. "You know you want this.." He leaned in and kissed her again.

Twilight's mind was fuzzy from the alcohol. She had never intended to go home with him, but he'd complemented her and made her feel special, and when he said he'd always had a crush on her, she'd given into her emotions.

Suddenly, someone bucked the door open, and two ponies rushed in.
"Fluttershy!" Doctor sprang away from Twilight, to the opposite end of the bed,
"Applejack! What are you doing here!?" Twilight asked.

"I knew it!" said Applejack "I knew I saw you two leave together." said Applejack.
Fluttershy let out a whimper from where she stood beside Applejack.

"Applejack, h-how did you know I know was here!?" asked Twilight,
"I was at the bar when I saw you two getting overfriendly, then leave together." said the earth pony

"So you ratted me out!?" asked Twilight, growing angry that she had let this all spiral out of control.
"They don't call me the element of honestly for nuthin'!" said Applejack, scowling at Twilight.

"Fluttershy!" said Doctor, "this isn't what it looks like!"
"Oh, so you aren't in bed with my best friend!?" asked Fluttershy.
"um.." said Doctor.
"I hate you! I hate you both! You all betrayed me! I never want to see you again!" Fluttershy spread her wings and flew out the window.

"Applejack.." Twilight started, but Applejack just scowled and shook her head before walking out the door.

"Forget about them, Twilight... I still-" Doctor was cut off as Twilight leaped from the bed and dashed out the door after Applejack. She stopped and looked over her shoulder at Doctor, who was still sitting up in the bed.
"Don't ever talk to me or my friends ever again!" she shouted, before running outside into the night.

The Dark Side

The Dark Side

Fluttershy lay on the floor of her cottage home, crying. Her eyes were red from crying so hard, yet she couldn't stop.
Her bunny, Angel handed her a third tissue from the box he was holding.

"I just c-can't believe this.." said Fluttershy. "I really thought Doctor Whooves and I had something special.. I should have known he was a liar. I mean- he's not even a real Doctor!" She knocked down a picture from a nearby shelf and watched it smash into a thousand pieces.

"And Twilight Sparkle.." she said, pacing the room. "What a..whore! How dare she end up in my coltfriend's bed! I hate her!"
The more she thought about it, the more sense it made that Twilight would do this. "She's always taking advantage of me, everypony is! I'm nothing but a doormat!" Fluttershy remembered when she'd gone to Iron Will's sessions, and how with a little bit of assertiveness, she'd been strong.

"Rarity and Pikie Pie.." Fluttershy thought bitterly, "they made me change back, I was happy when nopony could control me, sure I was a little rough but look how much respect it got me! And now..now that I'm week Fluttershy again..look where it got me! Walked on and betrayed! I hate myself I'll never be anything but a weak crybaby who lets everypony take advantage of her!" Fluttershy reached down and picked up a sharp piece of glass from the broken picture and held it in her mouth over one hoof.

Slowly, she lowered it down to her wrist and slashed it quickly across. Blood weld up and dripped onto the carpet.
Fluttershy gasped and let the bloody glass fall to the floor. She looked down at the long cut on her wrist and smiled.
"That felt....good!" She growled.

She picked the glass up from the floor and cut her wrist again, just below the first cut, imagining in whwere Twilight's face as she slashed it.

"Never again.." she said grimly, before going for the other wrist. "Never again will anypony treat me like...shit.."
Soon she felt dizzy and dropped the glass before laying down on the floor. Angel hopped over and attempted to stop the bleeding with a tissue, but stopped at Fluttshy reached over and grabbed the glass and held it to her throat.

"Goodbye... Applejack..I guess who were my only friend." She slit her throat and gasped as pain shit through her.
blood filled her throat and pooled onto the floor.

Angel let out a scream and tried to press a tissue to the deep cut in Fluttershy's throat.
It was too late.

Fluttershy lay on the floor, blood leaking from her wrist and throat, her eyes wide open, never to see again.