Mare Do Well

by OmalleyCaboose5

First published February 20th, 2018 22:50

All Pinkie did was touch I giant space rock that fell from the sky. Suddenly she awakes into a world where she tortured, killed and ate 100 ponies. She is hated by everyone and believed to be dead. Society starts spiraling into Chao as result of seeing one of it's greatest hero's fall so far. Copycat killers begin to surface and the fear of "disappearing" is constant. Many ponies turn to exotic chemicals to avoid the stress. This only creates a system of organized crime. Pinkie must end what she inadvertently began, alone. For you see she has developed special powers that may give her an edge the feds do not posses.

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A Hard Awakening

A Hard Awakening
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Mare Do Well

A Hard Awakening

Author's Note

Their were many contributions to my plot that I took from various places.
If I add a new element from A new source I will thank them when I Get to them.
Currently I have to thank
My Little Pony(obviously)
The Cupcake Chronicles by MilesPrower06
Both for introducing me to this Fandom and inspiring this story.
The Last Cutie Mark Crusader, By Jatheus, I Gave an OC of his A cameo, their will be more.
And Stargate. But that won't come to play for a looooooooooonnnngggg time
I hope my stealing oc's for my AU world doesn't upset anybody

I WROTE THIS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT IN FEBRUARY 2018
I IMMEDIATELY POSTED IT AFTER WORDS. I AM GOING TO START THIS STORY AGAIN, ONLY BETTER,(BY THIS I MEAN PROPERLY USE THE ENGLISH LAUNGUAGE) IT WILL BE A LONG TIME FROM NOW, AS I PLAN TO WRITE A LARGE DRAFT OF AT LEAST THE FIRST MAJOR ARC BEFORE POSTING ANY MORE, IF YOU OUR READING THIS CHAPTER ON THIS FIC YOU HAVE BEEN SPOILED ON THE MAJOR PLOT TWIST OF MY NEW VERSION. I LEAVE THIS STORY HERE UNALTERED TO REMIND MYSELF TO ALWAYS PROOFREAD BEFORE POSTING AND TO HAVE A PLAN FOR MY STORY.

A Hard Awakening

What would you do if a giant rock, a meteorite, came falling from the sky. You follow it into the woods and it's glowing?

Surely you would not pick it up. It could be irradiated. One Pinkemina Diane Pie would not have shared in your logical hesitation.

I bring this up because (big surprise) this event presented itself to miss Pie many years ago and set into motion a chain of events that will lead to the saving of the entire multiverse. My name is Ambrose Green and I am the Historian charged with recording the rather convoluted history of reality #000000001.( If you feel us calling ourselves world 1 is arrogant you may be right but when we started classifying them we had no idea how involved we would become so we just called ourselves the first world to make things easier OK.)
Anyway where was I oh right, the rock.

Pinkie Pie was excited. Maud's birthday was coming up and the perfect gift had just fallen from the sky. Pinkie was still going to I've Maud the original gift she had planned but the glowing blue rock would also be cool.

So Pinkie reached for the rock that she had chased across then sky into the Everfree Forrest but as soon as her hoof made contact with it everything went dark. Not just sight but all 5 senses provided no input.

Just as suddenly as the sensation, or lack there off, began it ended.

She still could not see but she could smell, hear,feel and taste.

The lack of sight was not do to damage of her eyes, it was caused by simple lack of light.

Pinkie could feel feel herself in a small cramped wooden box.
She smelt wood, dirt and her own stench. She had not been cleaned for a long time.

All she heard was her own breathing and the rattle of the wood as she moved around.

"Rainbow I thought you learned you lesson about pranking." She yelled, amused."

"Seriously Dashie let me out"

Nobody came.

Pinkie decided to try to kick the box open. She manages to create a small hole above her hind legs. A pile of dirt came falling in.

Scared now of being buried alive pinkie frantically started banging the box to bits, she had never been that strong before.

She slowly dug her way back to the surface. She was underground.

She rose out of the grave much like a zombie. Yes the grave, for their was a stone gravestone just behind where Pinkie Arose.

It had engraved on it,
Here lies the Cupcake Killer
Killer of 100 Smiles.

That was not what Pinkie saw first. She saw a rock farm her rock farm in ruins. It had bean raised to the ground. Their was graffiti everywhere. All pertaining to a certain mare Pinkie had never heard of.

"Who is Cupcake Killer" pinkie thought aloud wonder if that was the name of the deranged lunatic who would attack her family's home.

Then she turned around and read the stone. Her heart stopped. It made no sense. She had been in a grave. Had she died. The puzzle pieces in her head had yet to put then pieces together.

Fortunately for her the ponies who had ravaged her on had left her something. You she nailed onto the graves on were newspapers. Their contents killed Pinkie Pie. The words you are about to see created a new pony inside that Pink body (no not pregnancy I am referring to her soul.)

Ponyville Disappearances Solved
99 confirmed dead, the Element of laughter is confirmed to be the culprit.

The once national hero and member of the princess of friendships personal Cabinet Pinkimena Diana Pie has Killed 99 ponies, All of whom were reported missing over he past few months. The crimes took place underneath the Sugarcube Corner, a local pastry shop that Pie was employed under. The details are still unknown but local law enforcement has informed us that they believe the victims were used as ingredients for dishes that Pie secretly sold out of the shop.

Pinkie almost threw up but was unable to stop reading.

As of today we only have a few confirmed identified names
Lyra Heartstrings, A filly named Twist, a colt named Duster, Caramel Apple and Lily Valley.

Pinkie saw the names and was in shock, aside from Duster she had known those ponies. She had through Lyra's birthday party just last week. Then she noticed then date of the article. It had Ben written in December. The last she remembered was January, of the same year.

She stated to grow suspicion that she had been replaced by a changeling. But do to her blackout she found it hard to clam when had been innocent. What if she had done it.

Despite her instinct he kept reading, horrified.

The Crimes were discovered by her friend, he Element of Honesty, Applejack. The famer had Been looking for her friend Rainbow Dash or a while, as we known from several witnesses claiming she questioned them as to her location.
We also know that she smashed through Sugarcube Corner's front door at 7:35 and came out with a badly injured Rainbow Dash on her back at 7:44. Police inform us that Applejack killed Miss Pie in self defense. We also know that Rainbow Dash is in receiving emergency treatment In the Ponyville Hospital. It is not clear whether she will survive.

Pinkie was numb, she felt nothing, then shock of it all still had yet to catch up to her. The second paper underneath was dated the day following the first one. This one she could not finish.

Element of Loyalty Dies in Hospital
Death Toll of the Monster now known as, "The Cupcake Killer" now reaches 100.

Pinkie Pie was crushed. She felt dead inside, she was a monster. She did not care how she had come back to life, as the article claimed she had been killed. All she knew is that she didn't deserve to live. She determined to end her own life.

Do to all this emotional turmoil, she took no notice toward one significant detail. The cuts and bruises she had sustained while digging out of her own grave had healed. Not a single scratch remained, not a single cell out of place.