Burn them all

by Connorcooper

from the ashes

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*dip*

My blood...

so much gone...

It...she...he...whatever was right...

I'm just a blood bag now...

The insane pryo was no more than a living blood bag waiting to die...

alone...

cold...

hungry...

thirsty...

tired...

It didn't really matter any more...

I would think and I would wander why was I alone?

I don't know or care...


The door opened letting three guards enter.

They cut me down and letting me land on my own blood covered floor.

Picking me up my feet were dragged across the floor as we left my holding area, I looked forward to see more cells with screams and moans coming from them. My eyes began to tear up, I failed them, I missed my chance to do so much and I lost...damn this pain makes it hard to think you know?

"Look hes crying,"

They began to laugh at me.

"Wants wrong are you scared of a little fire you weren't before?"

But I wasn't crying for me the tears were for them...

Celesita...

Luna...

Cadance...

Rainbow...

pinkie...

AJ...

Rares...

flutters...

Tempest...

Winter...

The pillars...

...

...

...

Esdeath...

and everyone who I failed...

As I was being dragged up the stairs I could hear a roar of cheers coming from the top getting louder and louder as we climbed to the top. When we did I was met with a voice that belonged to the chaos god of pleasure.

'This is you final moments of being a mortal my love~, you should be happy not this nasty sadness,'

'please leave me be...'

I wasn't mad anymore at Slaanesh, I was mad at the caribou...

They were using it...

It made scene if you think about it...

no daemons...

no marked warriors...

no symbol besides the one on dainn's throne...

Or I could be losing it thanks to blood loss...

man I would love some med-x right about now...

I was then met with a blinding light as the roaring became loud and unblocked.

"-AND NOW WE HAVE HIM MAX HELLFIRE THE ONE WHO COWERED BEHIND THE FIRE!"

The voice wasn't one I recognized.

"OUR GOD KING HAD BROUGHT HIM DOWN AND LOOK AT HIM NOW BROKEN AND UNLESS!"

The crowed began to shout 'boo's and thrown stuff at me.

"THE ONE WHO KILLED OUR BELOVED PRINCES IN COLD BLOOD! WAS REALLY A CHILD BEHIND A MASK!"

Being thrown onto something that was wood I felt myself being pulled back up as my vision was met with two caribou with executioner hoods on that covered their faces.

"HERE HE WILL FACE JUSTICE FOR HIS CRIMES ON OUR GREAT EMPIRE!"

I felt them chain me to something as one of them noticed my state and light slapped my face causing me to focus on what was happening around me.

"HE WILL FACE A DEATH THAT THE ONES HE HAS KILLED FACED!"

I was in a court yard on some kind of wooden stand with a crowd in from of me alone with two executors on my left and right.

"NOW OUR KING WILL PUNISH HIM!"

The executors walked behind me as another two foot steps walked from my left to me, It was dainn and twilight.

"Hello max~"

I looked at her, she was reason I was here.

"T-t-t-t-wilght...w-w-why...y-you...d-do...i-t" These many be my final words but I wanted to know why.

She didn't answered but smiled at me, dainn just smiled and didn't say a word before shouting.

"MAX HELLFIRE FOR THE DEAD OF COUNTLESS SON AND MY OWN SON, DESCRIPTION OF THIS KINGDOM, AND CANNIBALISM I SENTENCE YOU TO BE BURNED AT THE STAKE!"

With that they walked away as the crowd grew silent as I was splashed with some liquid but with one good whiffed of it I knew what it was...naphtha. I could only watch as the hooded caribou place two torches onto the wooden pile I was on as the rest soon caught fire. It didn't take long for the naphtha catch fire on my skin as the platform roared in fire as the heat began to rip away at the infected flesh and bones. But I didn't feel pain or cold just nothing...that was when I saw a familiar face.

"Et tu fire?" I asked.

He shook his head as he walked on the covering flames to me and over to me as he grabbed my shoulder and place a finger to his mouth.

"Rest brother,"

With that I felt like I was being pulled form my skin it was weird but all the pain soon was washed away as I no longer felt my body anymore but I was still was...alive I don't know I'm not scare or afraid I had a friend to kindle back my hope as everything went black.


A began to stir when I felt like I was behind held as I came to to look up to see fire holding...me? Wait were my body!

"WHAT THE FUCK WHERES MY LEGS WHERES MY ARMS!" I shouted.

"Hey easy if you clam down for a sec I can explain everything!" Fire told me.

"YOU BETTER START TALKING AND TELL ME WHY THE FUCK YOU LEFT ME TO FUCKING DIE AND THE ONE I LOVE TO AS WELL! ALONG WITH YOU GUYS JUST DISAPPEARING OUT NO WERE DAMN IT!" I yelled.

"Hey look it was all part of the plan,"

"WHAT PLAN?!"

"Look I hated the to see you in pain but all of what you had to go through was all part of the plan you were suppost to die!" fire told me.

"die? but how can I be dead I'm right here?" I told him.

"Well not fully dead you body is but you soul and mind,"

...

"Bro?"

"Still mad but I understand the plan make it seem I was dead and bring me here,"

"At least he isn't stupid," A new distorted voice entered the scene.

"What who?"

I looked forward to see...the chaos god of change.

"TZEENTCH!? NOW YOU DECIDED TO SHOW YOURSELF!?"

He then changed.

"It was all apart of my plan I had brewing up for 10 of your years but yes I knew this twilight would cross you and the rest would fall from their," He told me.

I sighed.

"you could at least warned me,"

"If I did you would have lost the war and you would have this fat ass make you a more powerful body for you,"

"Heyyyyyyyy," A voice sounded deep and long entered.

Nurgle?

"Tzeentch don't be so rude to him hes your brother after all," A female voice that almost sounded normal.

"Isha is here too?" I was shocked nurgle had her with him.

"Well she isn't the only one," A blood filled voice entered.

My favorite of the chaos gods appeard before me...khorne.

"So can we start this is getting boring," A icy voice said from behind.

"Ice is that you?"

"Yes it is young max but I come alone for my champion winter has fallen," the icy queen told me.

"No...who did it,"

"The one that betrayed you and she died right after you were captured and she was given a slow painful death I told her not to do so but she wanted to free you and got reckless and died," I felt my fiery rage return.

"Mmmmmmh someones made and its delicious~" I knew that voice.

Slaanesh...

I was about to yell at it but ice stepped in front of it.

"Claim yourself save your anger against the caribou she with us,"

"She?" OK I'm confused now.

"Yes for you see I'm half of myself as before you I'm my female half that was tried in that ghastly crystal dick that I was force to stay their trapped but when I saw my brothers power coming from you I knew I could use you as my ticket to freedom and champion," She told me.

"Shut you slut he's all of our champion," Khrone roared at his...sister?

"Wait if your half of yourself where your other male half?" I asked.

"Well if you must know beloved my male half is within dainn powering him making him strong with my power but not all of it after all...my more sexy side has most of my power but he is still dangerous with the powers of these princess of this world,"

"I don't know what to say to that to be honest... So you weren't with the caribou...but trapped?" I asked.

"Well yes of course but enough about let us fix this little...problem," She gestured to my current state.

Nurgle grunted as he began to stir the mixture in his caldron.

"The mixture is also right all we need now is our marks and his spirit," Nurgle said.

"What marks? What do-"

"SORRY NO TIME!" Tzeencth grabbed me and threw me into the mixture.

I felt my self being mixed in as I heard some chanting coming form out side then after a me being spinning in the mystery mix I was poured out onto the 'floor' with a wet 'bloop'. Getting up I shouted.

"What the fuck! Did y-you...do...that...for," Looking down I saw my body I looked at my hands.

(both arms)

On my arms they had the marks of the chaos gods with khorne on my the back of my hands glowing blood red.

The front of my arms had tzeencth's mark on them glowing bright blue.

On my upper arm had nurgle's glow sickly green.

On my shoulders were the mark of slaanesh with a deep purple.

After see these I saw my legs were almost alike to my arms with the blue glow to them, I reached to my head felling silk like hair along with pointy ears and along with fangs along sharp teeth but normal teeth. With a strange flapping sound I turned to see I had wings like a dragons along with a large tail with the same kind of design of that of my arms with the glow.

"Woah," I was shocked.

"Woah indeed I have to admit nurgle I love the muscle growth you add to the mixture it looks like it could break me in two," Slaanesh said.

Looking down I covered my self as I blushed.

"Fire...someone please," I asked

"Oh shit sorry man," with that fire covered my body leaving me in a sleeveless black shirt and plan black short pants.

"Thanks dude now can anyone explain why I'm not dead/insane from have more than one mark?"

"That's easy your new body was made to handle all of them," Nurgle told me.

I looked at my hands as I looked at the chaos gods.

"So what am I now?" I asked.

"Well to make that body I put in dragon, daemon, hellspawn,-"

Khrone placed his had over his brother's mouth.

"A TOTAL KILLING MACHINE!"

"Or is he," The architect of fate said with a smile.

"Knock it off you two and give him his armor," The elder goddess shouted.

"Alright fine here you go...boop," As tzeenecth touched my head I began to glow.

(3 POV)

(the dead tree of harmony)

As the dead tree that was now drained of life was withering black and dead had no sighs of life coming from it.

But that what you would think.

The ground began and tree began to move.

As the ground and tree open up a figure in large armor appeared from the dead tree the figure donned in a suit of chaos marine armor, but unlike the other armors it had the aspect of all the chaos gods.

His helmet was knight style with red eyes of a space marine and a normal space marine armor style but with a chaos twist along with large metal covered wings and a long armored tail with spiked on four sides that looked like it could do damage.

Sharp spiked golden trim of khrone with claw and spiked boots along with a helmet with sharp teeth and skulls on my knee covers similar to a berserk marine along.

A changing blue glow with magic symbols that ran along the gantlets with two long sharp claws on the tops that gave off a threating glow and a cloak with blue and gold strips that covered his left shoulder that respected tzeencth.

His pack had sharp teeth coming out of the back with human skulls on the sides of the pack, he had spikes coming from his left arm going though his tzeenth cloak, his armor was black tyramd and power armor alloys that mixed tougher to make the armors outer shell giving it a melted look with rotting caribou skulls on his backpack with deadly hornets and a fleshy cloak to represent nurgel.

Tubes filled with a poison purple connected the gaps in the armor alone with brackets and neck-lessees with caribou pieces horns, teeth, bone, and finger on them, with purple speakers on top of his pack that repent slaanesh.

(Pov Max)

"Woah,"


Author's Note

Yep max was saved! (kinda) but now as a chaos daemon of ALL the chaos gods (and a eldar goddess), Now Max has to pay the caribou a little visit now.

Also


A current avatar will be assisting him

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