A Strange Worldby redsmurfChaptersnew day new jobsow my headwhat are theytesting and questionsnew day new jobsThe next morning Thom and Luci awoke from their slumber. Applejack told them that she needed some help on the farm and Fluttershy needed some help with the animals. "Ill, go help the Pegasus", Luci told them and she quickly took off running to meet Fluttershy. "Well alrigh then, OK Thom the south fields need to be cleared. Think ya up for it." "Why not" was all Thom could reply. It was a lot bigger than Thom thought it would be, the south fields span approximately 10 acres. Sighing he set to work picking apples. He was just getting done with the 10th yard when lunch was called. Setting the last apple he had picked into its basket he ran towards the food. Luci arrived at Fluttershy's cottage and the Pegasus was already waiting for her. "Hello, Luci ready to help me with the animals"? She asked her. "Uh yeah let's do it", Luci replied. "OK so Mr. Bear needs some help getting food for the winter, and Mrs. Groundhog is expecting children, so they must have a warm, cozy place for the winter after they're born". "Guess I'm going fishing then", Luci chuckled. It was mid-evening when Luci decided to go back to the farm. She told Fluttershy thanks for the day and set off towards the farm. Thom by that point was now getting done with the 10000th yard of apple trees. He decided to call it a night, setting what he gathered thus far in the food storage, he went in for dinner. He was greeted by Luci who had dried mud on the bottom of her boots'. She saw him looking, "I went fishing", she told him. Thom chuckled to himself, Luci had been the more nature loving between the two of them. He was the city type of person. Eating their supper which was apple-themed, oddly enough. Then, Applejack told them that Twilight wanted to see them tomorrow, then the twins turned in for the night. ow my head"Ow, my head", Thom groaned as he got up off the ground. He had woken up in a forest, which was weird considering he was last at school. Luci his twin had also been transported to the location. "Hey look, tracks" Luci pointed to the ground. There were some hoof prints in the dirt, with nothing else to do they followed them. Because "an animal must have water so follow the tracks to the source", Luci told her brother. They reached the edge of the forest by nightfall, what they saw was unbelievable. A small town with ponies of different colors, most were not normal horse colors. Then, they blacked out. Fluttershy was busy tending to the animals when she saw the two large bipedal creatures. She quickly hid behind a tree silently whimpering while watching them. Then, they just fell with a thud. Ignoring the urge to scream and rush inside she very carefully, and cautiously carried them to her house. Then, she tied a note on Angel, "OK, Angel go get Twilight and the others". The little bunny quickly scampered away towards Twilight's castle. Author's Note so there is the first chapter of this story tell me anything i need to fix. and if you have any suggestions i wouldn't mind hearing them . what are theyTwilight was just sitting down to enjoy a good book The Three Ponykateers she had read it a dozen times, then 'thump, thump, thump'. Some pony was at the door, sighing she got up to see who it was. Opening the door to a hopping mad Angel. "Oh, Angel why are you here"? She asks then she noticed the note attached to the bunny. "What is this a message from Fluttershy". Reading the note she called for Spike, "Spike, I need you to send a message to the others telling to meet a Fluttershy's". "Why me Twilight and not Owlocious"? The little dragon asked. "Because it needs to be quick and dragon mail is the fastest". Giving, Spike the letters, he set to work sending them to their friends, before settling in for a nap. It took them about 10 minutes to all get there when they all saw them the creatures Fluttershy was attending to. "Uh, sugercube wha' are those there things"? Applejack asked the timid Pegasus. "I don't know a just saw them fell so I. I, I" "So you went to help them because they might be hurt". Rainbow Dash finished for her. They all approached the two bodies then their eyes shot open. Luci sitting up noticed the group of ponies. Giving a come here gesture, the ponies slowly got closer, by that time Thom had also sat up looking at his sister. Then, one of the ponies spoke "Greetings, I am Princess Twilight Sparkle and these are my friends. Who and what are you"? She asked them. Looking at one another Thom gave a quick subtle lateral swipe across his chest. Signaling Luci to stay calm. "We are Humans, my name is Thom and that's my sister Luci". Thom finally spoke. A human huh, they look a lot like the creatures from the mirror world, but yet different. Twilight thought. Then, Luci's stomach growled, it had been a while since either of them ate anything. Pinkie Pie quickly whipped up a couple of eggs for them. (their near Fluttershy's house no pinkie magic). After, they finished eating it was very late indeed. Yawning Rarity, Pinkie, and Rainbow all went home. "Y'all can stay with me for the night". Applejack offered. "Luci gave a silent nod in agreement. "Well with that all settled let's all go home". Twilight said. The three of them arrived at the farm not long after. "Sorry, you two bu' Y'all goin to have to sleep in my here barn". The two just said thanks and went inside finding some hay they laid down for some sleep. "Don't tell them about the show or our knowledge of them". Thom told his twin. testing and questionsThe next morning the twins headed off to see Twilight at her castle. Luci humming a song to herself while Thom was massaging his hands after working all day yesterday. After, arriving at the castle they were greeted by a lightish purple unicorn. "Oh you must be the two humans, I'm Starlight. Twilight they're here", she called as the two walked inside. "Ah Thom, Luci, I was wondering when you two would show up," the alicorn said. "Ready for some itsy bitsy tests"? "Itsy bitsy"? Starlight asked. "I can do short tests". "Twilight a "short test" isn't a fifty-seven question test about why someone's eyes are a certain color". The twins spent several hours talking to Twilight about several things like the basic history of their world, such as the plagues, wars, the history of the united states, advancements in technology, etc. "Well Twilight its been fun answering all of your questions but I need to get back to the apple farm", Thom told her. He had already missed the morning picking, now he would have to work even faster to catch up by suppertime. "OK by then, so Luci what can you tell me about your world"? Twilight asked her. "Huh, oh um," Luci had always been the quieter of the two so Thom had spoken most of the time they were here. "Well me and Thom are from Lake Stevens, Washington, USA. We were born on September 7th, 1999, and arrived here on our world's date of September 9th, 2017", she told her. "Bye Luci we'll see you two at the party tomorrow". "Party, what party?" She asked the alicorn. "Why yours and Thom's welcome to Equestria party, Pinkie has been busy planning the whole thing". Twilight told her. "Oh, OK then", and she went off to tell her brother. She had a feeling tomorrow was going to be a long day. Author's Note so chapters will be weekly-ish now.
new day new jobsThe next morning Thom and Luci awoke from their slumber. Applejack told them that she needed some help on the farm and Fluttershy needed some help with the animals. "Ill, go help the Pegasus", Luci told them and she quickly took off running to meet Fluttershy. "Well alrigh then, OK Thom the south fields need to be cleared. Think ya up for it." "Why not" was all Thom could reply. It was a lot bigger than Thom thought it would be, the south fields span approximately 10 acres. Sighing he set to work picking apples. He was just getting done with the 10th yard when lunch was called. Setting the last apple he had picked into its basket he ran towards the food. Luci arrived at Fluttershy's cottage and the Pegasus was already waiting for her. "Hello, Luci ready to help me with the animals"? She asked her. "Uh yeah let's do it", Luci replied. "OK so Mr. Bear needs some help getting food for the winter, and Mrs. Groundhog is expecting children, so they must have a warm, cozy place for the winter after they're born". "Guess I'm going fishing then", Luci chuckled. It was mid-evening when Luci decided to go back to the farm. She told Fluttershy thanks for the day and set off towards the farm. Thom by that point was now getting done with the 10000th yard of apple trees. He decided to call it a night, setting what he gathered thus far in the food storage, he went in for dinner. He was greeted by Luci who had dried mud on the bottom of her boots'. She saw him looking, "I went fishing", she told him. Thom chuckled to himself, Luci had been the more nature loving between the two of them. He was the city type of person. Eating their supper which was apple-themed, oddly enough. Then, Applejack told them that Twilight wanted to see them tomorrow, then the twins turned in for the night.
ow my head"Ow, my head", Thom groaned as he got up off the ground. He had woken up in a forest, which was weird considering he was last at school. Luci his twin had also been transported to the location. "Hey look, tracks" Luci pointed to the ground. There were some hoof prints in the dirt, with nothing else to do they followed them. Because "an animal must have water so follow the tracks to the source", Luci told her brother. They reached the edge of the forest by nightfall, what they saw was unbelievable. A small town with ponies of different colors, most were not normal horse colors. Then, they blacked out. Fluttershy was busy tending to the animals when she saw the two large bipedal creatures. She quickly hid behind a tree silently whimpering while watching them. Then, they just fell with a thud. Ignoring the urge to scream and rush inside she very carefully, and cautiously carried them to her house. Then, she tied a note on Angel, "OK, Angel go get Twilight and the others". The little bunny quickly scampered away towards Twilight's castle. Author's Note so there is the first chapter of this story tell me anything i need to fix. and if you have any suggestions i wouldn't mind hearing them .
what are theyTwilight was just sitting down to enjoy a good book The Three Ponykateers she had read it a dozen times, then 'thump, thump, thump'. Some pony was at the door, sighing she got up to see who it was. Opening the door to a hopping mad Angel. "Oh, Angel why are you here"? She asks then she noticed the note attached to the bunny. "What is this a message from Fluttershy". Reading the note she called for Spike, "Spike, I need you to send a message to the others telling to meet a Fluttershy's". "Why me Twilight and not Owlocious"? The little dragon asked. "Because it needs to be quick and dragon mail is the fastest". Giving, Spike the letters, he set to work sending them to their friends, before settling in for a nap. It took them about 10 minutes to all get there when they all saw them the creatures Fluttershy was attending to. "Uh, sugercube wha' are those there things"? Applejack asked the timid Pegasus. "I don't know a just saw them fell so I. I, I" "So you went to help them because they might be hurt". Rainbow Dash finished for her. They all approached the two bodies then their eyes shot open. Luci sitting up noticed the group of ponies. Giving a come here gesture, the ponies slowly got closer, by that time Thom had also sat up looking at his sister. Then, one of the ponies spoke "Greetings, I am Princess Twilight Sparkle and these are my friends. Who and what are you"? She asked them. Looking at one another Thom gave a quick subtle lateral swipe across his chest. Signaling Luci to stay calm. "We are Humans, my name is Thom and that's my sister Luci". Thom finally spoke. A human huh, they look a lot like the creatures from the mirror world, but yet different. Twilight thought. Then, Luci's stomach growled, it had been a while since either of them ate anything. Pinkie Pie quickly whipped up a couple of eggs for them. (their near Fluttershy's house no pinkie magic). After, they finished eating it was very late indeed. Yawning Rarity, Pinkie, and Rainbow all went home. "Y'all can stay with me for the night". Applejack offered. "Luci gave a silent nod in agreement. "Well with that all settled let's all go home". Twilight said. The three of them arrived at the farm not long after. "Sorry, you two bu' Y'all goin to have to sleep in my here barn". The two just said thanks and went inside finding some hay they laid down for some sleep. "Don't tell them about the show or our knowledge of them". Thom told his twin.
testing and questionsThe next morning the twins headed off to see Twilight at her castle. Luci humming a song to herself while Thom was massaging his hands after working all day yesterday. After, arriving at the castle they were greeted by a lightish purple unicorn. "Oh you must be the two humans, I'm Starlight. Twilight they're here", she called as the two walked inside. "Ah Thom, Luci, I was wondering when you two would show up," the alicorn said. "Ready for some itsy bitsy tests"? "Itsy bitsy"? Starlight asked. "I can do short tests". "Twilight a "short test" isn't a fifty-seven question test about why someone's eyes are a certain color". The twins spent several hours talking to Twilight about several things like the basic history of their world, such as the plagues, wars, the history of the united states, advancements in technology, etc. "Well Twilight its been fun answering all of your questions but I need to get back to the apple farm", Thom told her. He had already missed the morning picking, now he would have to work even faster to catch up by suppertime. "OK by then, so Luci what can you tell me about your world"? Twilight asked her. "Huh, oh um," Luci had always been the quieter of the two so Thom had spoken most of the time they were here. "Well me and Thom are from Lake Stevens, Washington, USA. We were born on September 7th, 1999, and arrived here on our world's date of September 9th, 2017", she told her. "Bye Luci we'll see you two at the party tomorrow". "Party, what party?" She asked the alicorn. "Why yours and Thom's welcome to Equestria party, Pinkie has been busy planning the whole thing". Twilight told her. "Oh, OK then", and she went off to tell her brother. She had a feeling tomorrow was going to be a long day. Author's Note so chapters will be weekly-ish now.
