Angel Unknown

by Oranexia

Prologue - The Fallen One (Remade and Not Proofread)

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Dark, stormy clouds loomed over Heaven, home of the angels. Most are submissive with their passive powers however, one remained disobedient with his cursed powers given to him before he died by the hands of the government. Before the whole curse invaded his body, the humans called him Luminous for his bright blue eyes. One day, a mysterious, black aura came in from seemingly nowhere and nearly consumed all of his humanity. In the nick of time, he managed to push the curse away but some remained inside his head, giving him time to control his newly found powers.

Over time, a government spy noticed his odd powers and reported him to officials. After days of spying, they caught him losing control of his light and darkness. They resent the spy out and... that was the end of his story. Years later of investigation, he learned that "spy" was actually an angel sent from the skies under the command of god. Almost immediately after, he began a scythe of the sturdiest materials money could buy. With months of crafting practice, he finally created the scythe of his dreams. It was almost as tall as him and had a black glow with white streak running through it. It could be used as a conduit for his powers.

When god gained awareness for his "activities", he sent the most elite guards after Luminous. Upon entering the temple, the elites caught up to him and surrounded him. Thanks to the scythe though, he defeated the guards in the blink of an eye and progressed through the temple. The interior was covered in a bright gold but with the intentions that brought him here, it gave off a very dark vibe. Pillars supported the room while doors were leading just about everywhere throughout the temple. After calmly walking through the eternally long hallways, Luminous stumbled across a door that was a vibrant, sparkling gold.

After admiring the door briefly, he put some extra power into his kick and busted down the door with ease. Inside was a giant, sitting on a throne with thunder cracking in the background. When the smoke cleared, a clearly irritated angel with a flaming red eye.

"Don't think I don't know what you've done. You've taken everything from me. Everything mattered most." Luminous stated through his destructive rage.

"No time for idle chit-chat? Shame. I was looking forward to getting to know you before you get obliterated." The giant calmly spoke.

"I will make you pay for everything you've done to me and my family." Luminous readied his scythe.

"Don't get so cocky boy, you never know what's gonna happen-"

"Shut the hell up! You were the one who got cocky, sending your pathetic guards after me! Did you think I wouldn't be able to handle them?" Luminous allowed a crimson red aura surround him.

"This magic... where did you get it?"

"Like I would tell you, old man!"

"Insolent child! You will know the wrath of all those who dare to provoke me!"

"Bring it on!"

The giant slammed his fists down, causing a minor earthquake. Thank to his wings, Luminous glided upwards avoiding the ground. Without a moments loss, the giant created dark, chained spears while Luminous was still hovering. With quick flicks of the wrist, Luminous blocked all the spears attempts to stab him. Shortly after, A large group of spears this surrounded him from all directions.

"Blinding Light!" A bright wall came from seemingly nowhere and destroyed all the spears surrounding him. Now it was his turn to attack. "Apocalypse!" A crack opened underneath the ground and created a dark funnel, dealing continuous hits to the victim caught in its wake. While the spell was busy, Luminous teleported around 5 location through the battlefield and left magical light spears surrounding the room. After the Apocalypse spell broke, the five locks activated and trapped the giant in a blue ball. A bright trail appeared above the spear a made a big circle around the bubble.

After studying the ball that trapped him, the giant stuck his hand through a weak point in the shield, causing it to crack around the area of impact.

"He can't be..." Luminous crouched on the ground and a dark ball formed around his hand. After the spell was complete he charged the giant. "You're coming with me you bastard!" He landed a heavy impact on the giant, causing him to lose his balance and stop the attempted breaking of the bubble. A blue light consumed both Luminous and the giant, causing them both to disintegrate from existence.


Days later...

"Spike! I need those books!" A feint voice came from the second floor of the library.

"Just a second, Twilight!" A tiny green lizard replied while trying his best to grab the book on the highest shelf.  Just as he had managed to grab the book, a huge boom came from the exterior of the library, causing both to flinch.

"Did you hear that spike?"

"It was probably just one of Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainbooms."

"Her rainbooms sound different than that! Gather the girls, Were gonna go investigate the source of the noise."

"Yes mam!" Spike grabbed a quill and began writing a short, but descriptive letter. After he was finished writing the same thing 5 times, he channel his flame breath in order to reach the Elements of Harmony instead of the princess.

"Elements, check. Books, check. Paper, check. Quill, check" Twilight continued mumbling on about her checklist while the other girls were making their way to the tree house in the center of town. Once the Elements of Harmony were gathered, Twilight put her items in the saddlebags she wore on her back. Applejack was first to arrive. Next was Rainbow Dash, then Fluttershy, next was Pinkie Pie, and who could forget the fashionably late Rarity.

"Oh good, you girls are here. We have no time to lose!" Without giving the rest of the group a chance to reply Twilight was already out the door. The gang trotted fast in order to catch up.

"I'm just gonna assume that the only reason you want to go there is because of science." Rainbow asked, irritated already

"Well duh! Think of all the possibilities!"

Rainbow Dash facehoofed. "Of course."

The 6 ponies stopped at the entrance to the everfree. "Well, here we go!" They all traveled into the dangerous Everfree Forest.

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