Oh If He Only Knew...

by The Pony of Lost Legend

Rating: teen
Tags: Sex, Fleetfoot, Profanity, Alternate Universe, Thunderlane, Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Mystery, Soarin, Rainbow Dash
Length: 4938

Rainbow Dash finds herself contained at last...that is until a certain colt gets much to close and plunges her back into a fight against her instincts

Bitten, drained, and a Monster, it can't get much worst for me..
Though I think I've finally got a grip...Soarin is always so close....

The Soardash ship sails strong here~
Rainbow tell her side of the story in first-pers--uh, pony
About halfway through the point of view is swapped to Soarin. (Just sayin')

Sex tag is only marked to be safe. Yeah sure they had sex, but I i'm not good at writing that stuff so I skipped to the next morning. Sorry XD

Cover by: KikiRDCZ - DeviantArt

Published 2018-03-03 03:00:06 UTC
Last updated 2018-03-17 19:23:40 UTC

~Before the Show~

~Rainbow~

Zipping up in my uniform and stepping into the take off booth I hear a whistle from behind me. Spinning around, I find myself once again muzzle to muzzle with Soarin and his grin. I huff and try to hide my blush.

"Sweet Celestia Rainbow, I think you need a looser suit~!" he chuckles. Fucking perverted asshole...starring at my damn flank again I bet.

"All the suits fit me the same you dumbass," I snap. I was grateful for it honestly, it helped me get my mind off the sent of the crowd and my team mates. Mainly because I was to busy trying not to get a cramp in my wing while flying. But the tight uniforms helped too.

"Ah I know~ Calm down Dashie, your ass looks great~" He teases. I blush hard and huff again, standing my ground I trip him and he lands with a thump on the floor.

"I know it does. My ass looks great in everything" I sneer and flick his muzzle with my tail. He grins as his emerald green eyes sparkle with amusement.

"I won't argue with that~," he says and I huff and stick my muzzle in the air as if I was Rarity. Mainly to be overly dramatic.

"Fuck off," I snort and trot away.

~An Aftershow to Remember~

Yeah!..Hurray...Whoa!!! I loved it when the way the fans shouted their cheers as the Wonderbolts preformed. Though it only built my ego, it also made me feel more confident that I was doing a great job. That was until I almost screwed up on the one turn... The pangs in my gut had returned and they hit me stronger than ever. This always caused my heart to stress and speed up and also caused me to lose control of my wings at times. Luckily, Soarin had been there to help me or I would have crashed and would have never been able to live that down.. Landing back at the Wonderbolts HQ after the show, I walk inside and stretch my wings as I make it down the hall. I had been out feeding for awhile, it was past midnight at least yet, he was still up.

Soarin stood and leaned against the doorway, looking to me with a soft grin. Damn....why did he have to look so fucking sexy in the moonlight?

"What are you still doing up aye?" I ask curiously. He chuckles.

"I could ask you the same question," he replies. Fuck him and his loopholes!

"Uh...right...," I say with a nervous laugh. I wasn't about to confess to him that I had been out draining the blood from the veins of ponies.

"I just wanted to make sure you made it back safely Dash," he says in a hushed tone as he closes the space between us. I could start to feel the blush on my cheeks burn hotter. Hopefully he couldn't see it...

"You always stay out so late, it makes me wonder about things I that are none of my business," he says. I tilt my head.

"What 'things'?" I ask out of pure curiosity. He looks to me, his eyes burning with an emotion I wasn't use to seeing from him..lust.

"It makes me wonder if your out having fun with a colt," he says, pinning me to the wall again. I blink, blushing harder than ever.

"N-No!" I say. He sighs and I feel him nuzzling my mane. His height allowed him to tower over me, and damn...it was hot the way he looked at me like he was now...with desire and lust. It was a sexy look on him.

"Good..." he mutters. "I was hoping you didn't have anypony..." I blink and look at him.

"Why so?" I ask. He looks to me.

"I was going to ask you to be mine," he says in his soothing tone as he nibbles at my left ear. I lower my voice to match his whisper.

"Sign me up~"

~Who are you really?~

Soarin stops and turns to me.

"What the fuck went on back there Dash?!" He asks in a harsh whisper.

"Thunderlane told you exactly what happened, now we have to get moving if we need to get to p--" I begin, he shakes his head and raises an hoof to cover my mouth.

"I lied about practice to get you away from him.." He says, keeping his hoof there so I couldn't speak. "I was there the whole time Dash...I saw you both fighting." I gulp, did he really see what me and Thunderlane really are? "I woke up dis-morning thinking I was bitten by a bug yet here it was one of my closest friends, Rainbow Dash," he says. Shit.... I could feel myself start to panic but I freeze when I hear him...chuckling...? "Your fought somepony much bigger and tougher than you just because they hurt me.....," he chuckles. "How sexy that is..." he takes his hoof away.

"B-But Soarin i'm a mo--" I try to speak again but he cuts me off.

"I use to question the way you looked at me..," Soarin says softly as he sighs. "But now I see what that look in your eyes was about...the way you would move quickly away when I got to close to you." I look to him, was he...okay with all of this? No anger? No fear? Just fine?? He moved closer and closer and I could feel myself tense. "How about you let me satisfy you Dashie" he whispers, making me blush heavily at the use of my pet name.

"W-What!? I could never do that to you!" I say stubbornly. He chuckles and continues to tease.

"You know you want to," he purrs. I begin to breathe heavily as pins me to the door of me and Fleetfoot's room. He seemed to pin me when he was trying to prove a point....noted. "Bite me Dashie~" he purrs playfully. "Do it~" I feel my face burn in a deep blush.

"I don't know S-Soarin..." I say. He chuckles and moves his flying goggles, leaving his throat bare and desirable.

"Do it Dashie~ I want you to~" he continues to purr in a flirty tone. I give into him....not daring to tell him I was slightly turned on by this...

"F-Fine.." I say and move my muzzle to the side of his throat and scrape my fangs along side it. Damn I had waited for this forever....and now he was doing it willingly... He doesn't flinch or even grunt as I sink my fangs into his warm flesh. Thunderlane was right...

He tasted amazing....

~The Dream~

I didn't think I drank that much...I didn't think I turned him to a beast...but now I see, I was wrong...

"S-Soar you need to calm down," I plead as Soarin closes in on me with a fanged grin.

"Oh Dashie, look what you've done. Look what you did~!" he laughs and licks his lips. "And now I see how you struggle to contain yourself with such a fucking great smelling pony in your reach!" I back away from him slowly.

"S-Soar this isn't you! You have to calm down!" I plead louder. He laughs like a lunatic and lunges at me. Closing his jaws around my throat and cutting off my scream.

And then I wake up in a cold sweat and my heart racing in my chest. Soarin was beside the bed, looking at me with worry in his eyes.

"Dash? Are you alright??" He asks. I calm my breathing and look to him.

"Y-Yeah, just a nightmare..." I reply. He nuzzles me and kisses my forehead before pulling me close to him in a hug.

"Shh, I'm here for you now if you want to talk about it," he says calmly. I sigh deeply and lay my head on his chest.

"No, i'm good. Thanks anyway," I say. He nuzzles me again before continuing to talk in a soft tone.

"Spitfire wants us out on the runway soon Dash...that's what I was here to tell you about. Did you want breakfast before going?" he asks and rubs the fang marks on his throat. I chuckle softly and nod.

"If you don't mind...," I admit. He smiles softly and shakes his head.

"No, I don't mind," He replies as I nuzzle his neck.

"Good," I say before biting down for the second time.

~Why So Different?~

It's been a few days and like in my nightmares...Soarin has been acting a bit...off. Even a smack across the face just makes him chuckle and smirk. It wasn't okay. Not even close to okay.... And speaking of the fucking devil...He's walking to me now...

"Hey Dashie~," he purrs and nuzzles behind my ear. I blush lightly.

"S-Soar are you...okay? You've been acting a bit..off lately...," I ask. He grins alittle and chuckles.

"Never better," He whispers as he nibbles at my ear. Okay...now he was flirting with me?? I huff.

"Soarin i'm serious. What's up with you??," I say and try to push him away, only to find he was alot tougher than I thought. I push with my extra strength. He still didn't budge....something...had made him stronger than normal. He grins more and nibbles at my throat.

"Up with me~? Oh Dashie there's nothing wrong with me~," he purrs. "In fact, I've never been better~!" I look to him, half horrified. Soarin had never acted this way before....and I think I knew why...

"W-What do you mean?," I dare to ask. He chuckles darkly and cups my face with a hoof.

"Oh Dashie, my Dashie, I'm just like you now~" he replies and kisses my nose. I feel my blush and fear grow to a max. Now I understood...now I got why his personality had shifted so severely... I made him a...monster....

~A Well Needed Apology~

Sighing, I stand in front of Rainbow's room with my hoof heavily hovering over the door knob. I wanted to tell her I was sorry for the way I acted, but my pride and ego stopped me. I perk up as the door opens to see Rainbow Dash standing there. She looked depressed...but I didn't have time to process much before she yanks me into the room and shuts the door.

"Rainbow I wanted to say how sorry I a--" I wasn't even able to finish my sentence as she shoves her lips to mine and kisses me deeply. I blink in surprise before kissing her back. After a few moments she pulls away, leaving us both panting heavily.

"Don't apologize you dickhead..," she pants. "This is normal, I just didn't take it right." I nod, trying to catch enough of a breath to speak. Just as I open my mouth to reply, she pulls me into another kiss. Holy hell...I wasn't expecting her to be like this...not that i'm complaining or anything...

"D-Damn Dash, you gonna let me--mmpf~!" She cuts me off again as she nips at my neck.

"Shutup," she growls and continues to nibble at my throat. I shiver deeply and nod.

"Fine." I say with a soft chuckle.

"Don't you ever leave me alone for that long," she huffs and pushes me onto her bed with a playful smirk. "I actually missed you~!" I chuckle and look up to her as she begins to tower over me. I didn't know where it had come from, but damn I liked this side of Rainbow.

~Stretching Your Wings Hu?~

Sitting up, I hear Rainbow still sleeping. From the soreness in my hips...something went the hell on. I rub my throat to find I'd been bitten several times. Holy Hell!! I didn't just fuck her....I pounded her to be this bitten up and sore! Fleetfoot snickers.

"You two have fun?" she asks. I chuckle.

"I'm having a hard time remembering if I fucked her or not so I have no idea," I reply. She laughs.

"Oh you fucked her alright!! Till she was screaming!," Fleetfoot says, laughing. I grin and look to Rainbow then back to her.

"A good stretch of the wings I'd say!," I say, stretching out. She bites her lip and blushes as she looks over me. "Are you doing what I think your doing~?" I ask with a raised eyebrow. She quickly averts her eyes away.

"I-I don't know what your talking about," she fumbles abit with her words. I grin more.

"You were checking me out!" I chuckle. She blushes hard.

"Was not!" she huffs. I chuckle and grin even more.

"You watched me fuck her didn't you~?!" I ask. She bows her head, blushing heavily.

"Maybe....," she mumbles. I nod.

"Thought so, do me a favor dear. Tell Rainbow what happened when she wakes up." I say. "I've got to go stretch out." She nods.

"A-Alright."

"Thanks," I wink at her and then leave. She'll make a great meal~

~What happened?~

~Rainbow's Point of View~

Is it dark already? I ask myself as I start to wake up. My back legs were sore... what happened? Practice never made me this damn sore. I didn't have to much to think about it before picking up on the sound of Soarin's voice. Turning in the way of the noise I noticed it was coming from me and Fleetfoot's bathroom. What the hell was he doing in there?! I move to the door and place my head against it to hear.

"Come now deary just let me do it," I could hear Soarin say. Do what? What the hell could he be doing in there?! Who was with him!?

"I-I'm scared Soarin..," a mare responses, Fleetfoot...

"Everypony is scared on their first time, it's normal," he replies softly. I huff and open the door harshly, they were lucky I didn't just break the fucker down... What I see, wasn't what I expected though... Soarin was at her throat while she starred at me in fear.

"Ah Rainbow, nice of you to join us," he chuckles. I huff.

"What the hell Soarin!?" I ask pointing to her. "Let her go!" I demand. He chuckles again and shakes his head.

"I will," he says. "I just want to get a meal in before that," he says and opens his jaws. OH HELL TO THE NO. I slam into him, knocking him into the tub and pinning him down.

"GO FLEETFOOT GO!" I yell at her, she races out. Soarin grows and narrows his blood red eyes at me.

"The fuck Rainbow!?" he asks in anger. I growl in his face.

"When I say let her go, I meant it," I say. He tries to free himself but unlike him, I wasn't the noob at this. It was easy to keep him in place.

"Stop moving or i'll make sure you don't get out of here without a few bruises boy!" I growl darkly. He stops.

"How are you so much stronger than I am!" he asks, frustrated.

"Because i'm the one who made you what you are, I control you," I growl darkly. "Now I hate to do this Soarin, but I can't have you feeding from innocent mares," I add. "Go to Thunderlane, feed off of him." He gags.

"He tastes funny...like rust," Soarin complains.

"That wasn't an option pretty boy, that was an order!" I shout and let him go. "Now go before you piss me off anymore!" He grumbles and trots away. I take a deep breath. I had a feeling this wouldn't be the last time I had to deal with this...

~Blood Lust~

~Rainbow~

"Bite your lip and push on," I repeated over and over under my breath as I made my way through the crowd of ponies attending the Wonderbolts biggest event. The task of keeping a low profile and staying hidden became hard as I made my way to the Wonderbolts locker room. Biting down hard on my lower lip I hold my breath. There were so many ponies here...their sweet sent was hard to ignore when your a blood lusting freak show.

"There she is!!" A fan mare shouts and points to me. Cursing harshly under my breath I ducked and ran for it, I knew they could never catch me, even without my new abilities I could out fly them. Quickly dashing into the locker room, I slam the door behind me with a deep sigh in relief. A chuckle comes from across the room. I look up to find the source of it to find Soarin had made his way over to me so quickly I would have thought he was the blood sucker here. But I knew that wasn’t true, for he had the sweetest, most pure of scents. I could feel the sense of hunger growing in my stomach, this always happened when he got close to me.

“Damn Crash, you got famous fast,” he teases. I look to him with a grin.

“I was famous before I even became a Wonderbolt,” I reply. He steps closer and I feel myself tense up and take a step back.

“You know what Crash,” he begins as he closes in on me, pushing my back against the door and finding myself cornered I hold my breath again to block out his sent. He grins and whispers in my ear. “I’m your biggest fan,” he whispers as I feel his hot breath on my ear. I push him away and suck in a much needed breath.

“Oh I doubt that,” I say to play off the sudden action. He chuckles.

“I don’t, I bet you I am,” he says slyly. Typical Soarin. Always making things into a competition.

“No pony is a bigger fan than my parents, Clipper” I say, making sure to use his embarrassing nickname. He laughs and nods his head in agreement.

“Ah, I guess you're right about that,” he says. I laugh as well and sigh.

“I’m going to go hit the showers, I’ll see you before the show,” I say as an excuse to get as far as I could away from him. He smiles.

“Alright Crash, see you then,” he says before walking in the opposite direction from me. I sigh once more in relief, I’d better go get a snack before the show...

~Why So Sleepy?~

Soarin hadn't been at morning practice...Spitfire had been pissed...and I was worried. Soarin had never missed a single practice, so where was he? After taking a shower to get myself to calm down I make my way into the locker room to find him standing in front of a pissed off Spitfire. Once she was done screaming, he sighs heavily and spots me.

"Morning Dash..," he mutters with a yawn before pulling me to his chest and nuzzling my mane. I blushed heavily and bit my lip. Damn it! More of these damn hunger pains. My ears perk as I hear Soarin's breathing slow, shit, he'd fallen asleep!

"S-Soar...?," I ask and look up. Yep, he'd fallen asleep. His head resting on my own as he snored softly. I heard laughter behind me, how embarrassing.. "Soarin!!" I yell and push at his chest to wake him up. He grumbles and pulls away, his hoof still wrapped around my shoulders.

"Sorry...I'm so fucking tired it's unreal," he says. I look up to him.

"Did you sleep at all last night? You never miss practice..," I ask. He shakes his head.

"No, I don't even remember last night...." he replies. I blink and go to nuzzle him of the neck to comfort him before noticing something there....fang marks. They were much to wide to have been mine...They belonged to a colt no doubt. I frown and felt anger rise in my chest.

"Can I speak with you....Alone?" I whisper. He blinks in confusion but then he nods and steps into the hallway with me.

"What's up?" he asks.

"Who do you share a room with Soarin?" I ask calmly. He tilts his head.

"Thunderlane, why?" he asks. I shake my head.

"No reason. Go get some flight practice in to wake yourself up okay?" I say looking to him. He nods and nuzzles me before leaving. I growl and punch my hoof into the wall. Thunderlane. How dare he pierce MY colt. That son of a bitch was going to pay once I found him....That wasn't just a threat...but a promise.

~A Regret Not To Be Ignored~

"Thunderlane! Get your ass out here or i'm coming in there you bastard!" I growl and pound on his and Soarin's door. I knew he was in there, I could smell his musky sent. He opens the door and raises an eyebrow. He was as tall as Soarin, and his golden eyes pierced right through me.

"Can I help you?" he asks. I growl and flash my fangs at him.

"Your going to pay for what you did to Soarin!" I growl harshly. He grins, flashing his own fangs.

"Ah yes, sorry about that Crash," He chuckles. I slam a hoof to the ground, cracking it with the impact.

"So it was you!? You drained him!" I hiss. His grin grows.

"Of course it was me, who else? You should really have some yourself," He says licking over his fangs. "His blood tastes amazing~" That was it, I lost it right there. I rear my back hooves up and kick him in the chest, sending him backward. He hisses in pain before gaining back his balance.

"Your tough for a fledgling Dash~" He chuckles and gets back to his hooves. "No wait, your no fledgling are you? Your just as much of a monster as I!" He grins as he pulls me in the room and shuts the door. I gulp. He was huge...and I had no idea what i'd gotten myself into until I found him towering over me. "Don't worry Crash, I didn't take to much. He'll live like it never happened," Thunderlane says. "But you..." he chuckles darkly. "If you keep this up, I can't promise I'll let you live~"

I remember when Thunderlane wasn't like this...he was a goof with a huge ego. Now...he was a monster with a dark sense of humor.

"But...I guess your only looking out for your coltfriend..I shouldn't be so cruel on you," he says. Grabbing me by my chest fur he lifts me from the floor and growls in my face, his golden eyes flashing. "Yet again, if I'm not cruel...you'll never learn your lesson," he growls. Just then, the door swings open and Soarin stands in the doorway.

"What the hell is going on in here!?" he asks. Thunderlane hisses under hiss breath and sets me down.

"Crash and I were just playing a game of who's tougher," Thunderlane says as a cover up. Soarin laughs.

"Well then, sorry for intruding on you but Spitfire wants all of us outside in five minutes for practice," Soarin says. Thunder nods.

"Alright, see you later then Crash" Thunderlane says looking back to me with a sly grin. I hiss at him and leave the room with Soarin. Thunderlane might have gotten lucky this time...but I wasn't going to be stupid and let him throw me around next time..

~Why So Afraid?~

~Soarin~

Why was she looking at me like that? This was suppose to be a good thing! I was just like her now...I don't get why she looks at me now with fear instead of happiness....had I really changed that much? I low my tone and whisper gently.

"Why so afraid love? Did I say something to upset you?," I ask. She shakes against me. I always knew Rainbow to be fearless and have a big ass ego...I'd never seen this side of her....it was starting to scare me..

"I-I....," she whispers softly. I had to lean in closer and perk my ears to hear her. "I didn't think I drank this much...to have made you change..." I nuzzle her.

"But what's wrong with this?" I ask softly.

"You've changed so much Soar...," she replies. "A-And....I don't know if I like how you've changed..." I blink, those words pierced through my heart like a knife.

"R-Rainbow..." I say, the rest of my words getting lost in my throat. She ducks from under me and runs away in half tears. Leaving me standing there dumb founded, looking after her. Then I feel something else rise in me...anger....

"Fine...But I'm not letting you get away from this so easily my Rainbow," the beast in me growls darkly. "You just wait."

Author's Note

If you didn't catch it, this chapter is told in the view of Soarin instead of Rainbow. Just to mix it up alittle bit. :moustache:

~Dashing After Rainbow~

~Soarin~

It's not simple to catch a mare who can break the sound barrier at full speed... In fact. I haven't even seen her around much anymore, but when I do, she looks away. It was truly pissing me off. Who did she think she was to ignore me!? I huff and storm to my room, swinging the door a bit hard to wear it almost breaks off it's hinges...Right, I can't underestimate my new strength....That could end terribly...

Thunderlane looks up from the book he was reading along with eating what seemed like a bowl of oats.

"You alright bro? You seem a bit tense," he says with a chuckle. I huff again

"Well I am! Pissed, tensed, upset, and even starving...," I grumble and rub my head. "I just don't know who I am anymore!" He blinks before getting up and setting a hoof on my shoulder.

"You gotta chill man, this isn't healthy...In fact, don't lose what you've got of yourself....that could end us all in hell, just sayin'," He mutters the last part. I feel my ear twitch.

"What do you mean, lose what I've got left of myself? I'm all here!," I growl, harsher than I meant to... He chuckles.

"Wrong buddy. Your temper is bad, your attitude is bad, Oh and....You've gotten cocky," Thunderlane says. "I was the same way during transformation," He adds. I sigh and let my anger fade.

"So that's why she's so afraid of me...?" I ask, mainly to myself. He shakes his head.

"Not fear man. Worried. She's nothing but worried about you..," he replies gently. I look to him.

"How would you know? You fought against her!," I ask stubbornly. He sighs.

"She only fought me because the fact that I hurt you....I made a mistake, and she was right to put me in my place," he admits. "I deserved it....And I would have taken it if it weren't for this stubborn side of me I have trouble controlling." I study his face for a moment.

"Right..."

~Why did he do it?~

~Rainbow's Point of View~

Without Twilight's magic, there was no way I could just take the memory away from Fleetfoot. So that meant she had to explain this to me.

"So what happened Fleetfoot?" I ask. She fumbles her hooves alittle.

"Well I do admit I was a bit..hm hm... cocky last night... Soarin had woken up after a..uh..long night with you and asked me what happened," She says. "H-He laughed alittle and told me to tell you what happened..." she continues. I raise an eyebrow.

"Then?" I ask.

"Soarin left, then he came back," Fleetfoot says, she the looks down in shame. "It was my fault...," she mutters. "I pulled him into the bathroom and asked him to...to..." I nod, telling her I knew what she meant. "Then, before I knew it, he had me pinned down and was telling me I had made a mistake.

"He was at my throat and I started to panic, I tried to free myself only to find he was much stronger than I thought...H-He had fangs, that reminded me of daggers...and as he leaned in...you stormed in and...saved me," Fleetfoot finishes. I sigh, of course I was mad for her trying to fuck my coltfriend but...I think she'd learned her lesson.

"Don't worry about it, I've made sure that it won't happen again," I say, putting a hoof to her shoulder.

"Y-You're not....mad at me?" she asks in surprise. I chuckle and shake my head.

"Nah," I say. "But don't try it again, because if you do...I don't promise i'll stop him." She gulps and nods.

"H-How did you stop him?" she asks. "H-He w-was so strong!" I grin slightly to myself.

"That's for me to know and you to never find out," I say. She giggles softly.

"O-Okay...if you say so," she says.

"Now...how about you rest alittle, and if he comes in here," I say. "Just scream at the top of you're lungs like he's a rapist okay?" Fleetfoot laughs.

"Yes ma'am!" she say, saluting playfully. I get up and head for the door.

"Now, you be a good girl, I'll just tell Spitfire you weren't feeling well," I chuckle. She crawls into bed with a yawn.

"Thanks Rainbow," she says softly before laying down. I smile softly and shut the door.

"No problem..," I mutter and start walking, I didn't plan to see Spitfire right away. Instead, I had to see Soarin first.

Author's Note

Some of you really don't like how short these chapters are but, when I write a new one every single day I must make them short. I have many other stories i'm working on along with this so just go with it for me :twilightsmile: