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Too Many Everything

by Daemon McRae
Eighteen girls. A two-week trip to and from Miami Beach. Five cars. This story is about one of them.

It's finally here: summer vacation. The girls celebrate by gathering all their friends (-ish) and piling into a bunch of cars to drive down to Miami Beach for what is hopefully an amazing weekend. Unfortunately, they have to get there. Which involves five cars, eighteen teenage girls, and thirteen hundred miles.

One car, in fact, the very last car, is a hodgepodge of stragglers: Adagio Dazzle, not wanting to spend eight hours a day in a car with her sisters; Sugarcoat, by virtue of being late to the party; Trixie Lulamoon, the tagalong; Maud Pie, who just wanted to spend time with her friend Trixie; and Sunset Shimmer, the unfortunately generous soul who decided to drive them all.

Here's hoping her generosity lasts longer than that cliff edge does.

Teen
Incomplete
Comedy
Adventure
Equestria Girls
Sex
Profanity
Random
 
AMSST

20011 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

14 Chapters:

  1. Five Girls, Four Days, Thirteen Hundred Miles 2018-03-07 21:23:06 UTC
    2685
  2. Car Talk 1 2018-03-12 19:49:49 UTC
    2171
  3. Food Talk 1 2018-03-20 19:50:29 UTC
    2170
  4. Food Talk 2 2018-04-12 20:14:19 UTC
    1086
  5. Post-Food Talk 2018-04-19 19:30:55 UTC
    1249
  6. Car Talk 2 (Truth or Dare 1) 2018-04-23 19:24:02 UTC
    1251
  7. Car Talk 3 (Truth or Dare) 2018-04-24 19:15:16 UTC
    958
  8. Hotel Talk 1 2018-05-07 19:21:31 UTC
    1534
  9. Sleep Talk 1 2018-05-21 19:23:06 UTC
    876
  10. Hotel Talk 2 2018-06-13 19:27:50 UTC
    1285
  11. Breakfast Talk 1 2018-06-20 15:59:07 UTC
    927
  12. Car Talk 4 2022-11-13 14:22:56 UTC
    1311
  13. Other Car Talk 1 2022-11-19 11:25:26 UTC
    1154
  14. Other Car Talk 2 2023-07-06 09:33:34 UTC
    1354