A Blackened White Nightmare Night
Written by: SoftStroke
Warning: Rape, Zebradom, Gratuitous Oral and Sloppy Venus ensues. You have been warned!
Vanhoover was an unforgiving city, even to those who had mastered its landscape. The pollution in the air meant that walking around during the heat of the day or the last shred of dawn was as pleasant as being pelted by smoke from a campfire; the mess and tangle of streets made navigating a straight line to anywhere in the city a nightmare; and worst of all the streets were in horrible disarray. Even those who had lived in the city for their entire lives still found that the city would devise new ways to continually dissuade and interrupt the everyday lives and patterns to ruin their days.
The sun had begun to dip below the horizon, but the high rising buildings and cramped quarters of the city meant the citizens had been in darkness for much longer. The stars were unrecognizable above the glaring city lights of the downtown district, while the streets in the outskirts were dark as night. Those foolish enough to be walking around in the dimmed lights kept their heads down and their belongings close, fearful of the eyes that lingered in the shadows waiting for a single potential slip up.
But tonight wasn’t like the other nights. Carved pumpkins littered the street sides, warm smiles and giggles filled the doorways and sidewalk, and warm purple and orange decorations were scattered all over the city. It was Nightmare Night after all; it would be strange not to see little colts and fillies running around the city, picking up every piece of candy a house would give to them before sprinting their way off into the darkness to find another place to gain more sweets.
Saddlen Drive was a particularly interesting night, and one that was filled with lovely and adorable sights. On this night was a couple that were a tad older than the general crowd, but enjoying the festivities regardless. They weaved their way between large crowds of foals and went from door to door, most of the people in the neighborhood knowing exactly who they were and being more than comfortable with them.
The swishing and crunching of hay underneath cloth bands and a rather large sackcloth hat gave away a deep red stallion with darker scruffy hair, currently holding onto a bag already filled with candy. Mars grinned as he turned to look for his friend, “Vwneus! Vwenus! Come on, thwer’s more candy ahead!”
Slightly out of breath from having to keep up with his excited antics, Venus groaned as she slowly rubbed her back, “Just, give me… a minute… m-minute, Mars!” Venus rubbed her chest slightly, “You’re running so fast!”
On this particular Nightmare Night, Venus had been on a budget and spent so much time working on Mars’ costume with supplies and leftover hay from some friends, she’d gone out and bought a generic witch costume and stockings to match. She thankfully had gone with simple black tennis shoes, as anything else wouldn’t let her match Mars’ speed. Her own pointed purple and black hat with a glistening plastic buckle jostled around as she tried to catch her breath. Her costume was as generic as it could get, with a simple spider pattern for a purple dress and a black cloth belt tied around her waist with another plastic buckle. She had gotten a broomstick to go with it, but she’d decided to leave that at home.
“I know, I know!” Mars grinned, “Thwere’s so mwuch candy here!”
Venus sighed slightly, but smiled nonetheless. Mars was still a child at heart and she wasn’t one to deny him. It was a nice and safe night for the two of them to be out, and one that she was certain would turn out nice for the two of them. She just wished that Mars didn’t still have the energy and craving of a young foal; it was difficult as it was keeping up with him, let alone trying to actually keep track of where he was.
Mars, however, had left Venus behind once again, running his way up to a lit porch and knocking. Without even waiting for the door to open, he breathlessly called out, “Twick or Thrweat!”
Gripping onto the railing on the side of said porch, Venus took a breath as the door opened up. It was a mare the two had known for a while: Peppermint Rainbdrops. She looked over to Mars and Venus before smiling, reaching over for something out of sight.
“Hello Mars, Venus!” Rainbdrops waved to Venus with her other hand, “I like your costume, Mars! You’re a scarecrow, right?”
“Ywep!” Mars nodded his head rapidly, “Vwenus helped make it fworth me!”
“And that was very nice of her!” Raindrops quickly flashed a knowing smile to Venus before pulling her hand back into sight, holding a handful of candy, “Make sure you thank Venus later, Mars.”
“Mhmhm!” Mars continued to nod his head, to point it looked almost like something from a cartoon. Raindrops rolled her eyes and deposited the candy into Mars’ candy bag.
“Thwank chu!” Mars looked into his bag for a brief moment before he turned, dashing off the porch and past Venus. He was quickly looking for another place to gain more of his candy craving, and it wouldn’t be long before he found one.
Waving to Raindrops, Venus smiled before turning, calling out, “I gotta catch up with him! Happy Nightmare Night!”
“Happy Nightmare Night to you too, Venus!” Raindrops giggled slightly before closing her door, her light staying on as she presumably went to go and sit down somewhere.
With a smile on her face but energy still faltering, Venus groaned as she tried to make out where Mars had gone off to. She wanted to stay mostly in this swatch of apartments and houses; it’d look strange to someone they didn’t know to have Mars run up and ask for candy.
I wonder if Peppermint still works at the orphanage… The thought, however, was quickly cast out as Venus realized that she’d lost track of Mars completely.
“Mars?” Venus blinked, moving into the street, “Mars, Mars where’d you go?!” A small pang went through Venus’ chest as she realized she couldn’t see him anywhere on this street, “Mars!!!”
Holding down her hem of her costume’s dress, Venus quickly darted her way in the direction she thought she’d seen Mars going in. If she recalled correctly, he’d turned right after he got down the stairs. That meant he was heading towards the end of the street… had he forgotten that Venus told him not to leave the street without him?
While not panicking, Venus wanted to find him. It’d be a hassle to explain this to someone, and even on this holiday some of the dirtier streets of Vanhoover weren’t safe. She needed to be sure that Mars was okay at least, and getting to him before he made any significant progress was the key to that.
Scanning the crowd, Venus squinted as she tried to find him. In the dim lights cast by the decorations, Mars’ red coat would be hard to spot. She’d have to spot him by his costume, which thankfully was homemade and thus easier to find. She rubbed at her neck as she made her way quickly over towards the edge of the crowd, trying to get a better look…
There! Just at the edge of the street, she could swear she saw the tip of the hat she’d made turning the corner. With the sound of doors closing in the background, Venus made her way down towards the street, peering around the corner.
As she did so, she could see that this street was at the intersection with Buckleberry. While not a bad road, it did eventually intersect with Hoofen Drive… and that was a street Venus knew… too well.
But as she looked down towards the south, she could see the tip of the hat disappearing again. Groaning, Venus ran up towards it, calling out, “Mars! Mars come on, I-I can’t run… hagha, this much!”
In her haste, Venus didn’t stop to look at the street names, only pausing when she hit the intersection with the next road. The dark figure was still going, crossing the street (most were closed for the holiday) and not giving Venus any time to react. She let out a small huff as she quickly ran across, continuing further down.
The crowds of foals began to subside until she swore she hadn’t gotten anymore. She was already getting rather suspicious as to why Mars was doing this; then again, she had no idea why Mars did half of the things he did. As such, it wasn’t out of the question for him to run like this. It did, however, make Venus groan slightly as she finally saw the figure turn down a road up ahead.
“MARS!” Venus finally called out, “STOP IT R-RIGHT NOW!” Huffing, Venus quickly turned onto the street, rubbing her eyes as she tried to spot Mars again.
Venus looked up, squinting to try and see the street sign she’d just passed. Upon seeing it, a coldness swept over her form as she slowly paced forward, anger starting to mix with fear as she tried to spot the figure again.
“M-Mars?” Venus gulped, “Mars stop, stop right now! J-Just stop!”
Hoofen Drive was not a welcoming street. Several cars stood on cinder blocks, with windows broken and the steering system and chairs removed. A pile of trash stood to Venus’ left as she started to make her way up. Most of the buildings were apartments, and from the state of their bricks, they weren’t exactly top notch. Just standing in the middle of the street made Venus want to run her way through it all, and she quickly started to make her way quickly down the street.
Only two of the four street lamps were working, and both were on Venus’ left. As she made her way up the street, she continually cast nervous glances to the right, watching the shadows as she went. She’d lived in this city enough to know about muggers, and while she only had her phone on her, she preferred that she keep that for now.
As she continued to walk, she could swear someone was watching her. The feeling crept up her back, and soon Venus pulled her coat closer to her neck. She kept her eyes forward but her ears alert, not pausing in stride for even a second. Soon, the end of the street was in sight, and Venus could sense her fear slightly evaporating…
“M-Mars?” Venus stopped at the entryway to a small alley, “Mars, c-come back right now!”
A warm, strong hand gripped onto Venus’ shoulder, halting her progress. Venus stiffened as she froze, her eyes widening as she felt a warm breath on her ear.
“Hmm… what’s a beautiful mare like you doing walking down our street now..?”
Whipping around in fear, Venus gulped slightly as she turned to see who was holding onto her. To her shock, it wasn’t a pony, but a zebra. Three of them to be exact, and none of them in any sort of costume.
“You get lost following, little miss witchy?” The biggest Zebra grinned as he tightened his grip on Venus’ shoulder, “Nightmare Night doesn’t go down this street… you must be lost.”
“I-I’m, I-I,” Venus gulped slightly as she tried to get her composure, “I-I’m trying to find my friend, h-he’s a dark red earth pony, he was, u-uhm, he’s wearing a scarecrow costume?”
“Red stallion?” The big zebra shook his head, “Nah, don’t think we’ve seen ‘im. Not a lot of ponies live on Hoofen Street, after all…”
As he spoke, Venus swore she could see the other two zebras starting to close in on her. The smallest one was only slightly taller than Venus, and had on what looked to be skinny jeans and a dark forest green shirt. The other was wearing a sort of trench coat and had on baggy brown pants, but had a long scar over his forehead as though he’d fallen and hit his head on something. Both of them, however, didn’t look friendly, and the tallest one especially with his hand on her shoulder was offputting at best.
“A-Are you sure about that?” Venus raised her finger, “I-I swore I saw someone running down towards the street in a costume that looked j-just like his! I-I made it myself so, I-I don’t think that I’d mix that up!”
“Huh?” The smallest one had a deep and rich Zebrican accent, “Costume? I just saw a kid run inside just a second before you showed up. He was wearing a big hat I think.”
Venus’ spirts took a sharp dive as she heard that, “O-Oh, then erm, h-he must have been trick or treating on my street! I-I think I should get going then, he’s probably still on my street!”
As she tried to pull away, the hand on her shoulder didn’t budge. In fact, the grip of his fingers only got stronger. Venus’ blood ran cold as the three slowly started to circle around her, the smallest one blocking the view of the end of the street.
“Nah, you just got here,” the tall zebra grinned, “You came running down our street yellin’ for someone, and now you just wanna leave? Don’t you think you should stay for some… fun~?”
Several alarms were already going off. Fun? What sort of fun were they talking about? “E-Erm, I would, like to stay, but if there isn’t any candy on this street then Mars will probably want to go somewhere else!”
Again, Venus tugged on the grip on her shoulder, “You seem really tense. Come on, it’s Nightmare Night, he can visit a few houses on his own, don’t ya think?”
They weren’t letting go. Slowly, the mare took in a breath. She’d have to resolve to end this soon. Venus knew she had a can of mace on her, where’d she put it?! “I-I think I’m alright, I-I really need to get back! I-If Mars doesn’t find me soon he’ll probably start to freak out!”
This time, Venus put some effort into pulling away. By this point, however, she was now trapped within the three of them. As she tried to pull on him, she felt the taller zebra’s other strong and large hand gripping her other shoulder, holding her still as she tried to pull out.
“I really think you should stay~” The tall zebra leaned down to whisper in her ear, “Tell you what, you seem like a nice mare. Why don’t you let us help you with something else, and we’ll give you something nice for it, whadda ya say?”
This time, their intentions were being laid out blatantly and rather quickly at that. Apparently subtly wasn’t something that these zebras were that into. And now she could tell they were mere inches away form her, and she was trapped in the center of them.
Venus gave an experimental tug on her shoulder. By now, his fingers were firmly dug into the cold dress and weren’t there as a friendly gesture. The other two were now almost side by side, and the gap between them was too small for her to edge out of.
“Come on, just a little bit? It’ll help ya a lot if you say yes…” The zebra this time gave the tiniest growl at the end. She had to get out of her.
Venus set her resolve. Suddenly, her fingers caught hold of the can of mace. She’d stitched a quick pocket down the side and the dress had gotten flipped up when she ran after Mars. She had her fingers on the top of it; she could get out of this.
Without saying a word, Venus shut her eyes and brought her foot up and back, slamming into the lower leg of the tall zebra. A sharp cry of pain alerted her that she’d been successful in her attack, and a moment later she whipped out her can of mace.
Aiming notwithstanding, Venus shot the can out, successfully dousing the smaller zebra’s face in it. As he collapsed to the ground, Venus thrust her hips backwards, pushing the taller zebra off of her as she pushed off with her left foot, trying to use her forward momentum to shove aside the smaller writhing zebra and the trench coated one.
However, Venus hadn’t taken into consideration what the trench coat might have weighed, or rather what was underneath of it. The zebra must have weighed a ton, for as she tried to hit him, he barely even flinched. As such, she was bumped to the left, straight into the smaller zebra.
“FFAAAHGAHGA!! MY EYES! T-THAT BITCH FUCKIN MACED ME AAARGGHGH!!!” His accent still flaring, Venus collapsed right on top of the smaller zebra. She gasped as they hit the ground, but thankfully he’d hit the ground first. As such, she quickly gripped his shoulders and started to drag herself forward, getting ready to roll off of him the second that she got away.
Right as she got about halfway to that point, however, a strong hand gripped her heel. The sheer strength of it was enough to stop her dead in her tracks. Yelping, Venus turned, raising the can up over her head as she tried to aim backwards, hoping to hit something.
A hard smack to her hand, however, said differently. The force of the smack sent her arm jolting to the left, and smacked right into her face. The impact shocked her and her fingers opened, sending the can rolling across the street.
A millisecond later, the same hand that’s smacked her had taken hold of her dress. With a single yank, Venus felt her entire body being yanked back up to her feet.
The zebra in the trench coat had shed his garment, revealing to Venus just how buff he was. His chest and upper arm muscle stretched out a tattered gray sweater, and she could that he almost looked like a hoofball player. But the fact that he was holding her up in the air at the moment was dominating her attention far more than thoughts on his career.
A hard whack to the side of her head made her shout out, and her vision blurred for a moment as she bit her lip from the impact. The tall zebra withdrew his hand as her lip bled, dripping down her chin slightly.
“You fuckin’ bitch!” The zebra spat, “You know, we ‘ere gonna treat you with some respect but I guess you like doin’ this the hard way!”
Without needing acknowledgement, the zebra holding Venus up by her witch’s costume snorted in her face, giving her a dark look that told far more than words could. Venus went cold to the touch as the two walked towards the alleyway that they’d passed just before she met the trio.
The alleyway was just as cramped and dirty as Venus had recalled seeing it, and now that they were inside of it, the smell was enough to get her coughing too. The tall zebra thought for a moment about what to do, before turning to the one holding her.
“She’s lookin’ for her friend, right? Don’t got enough time for a lot…” Thinking, the stallion grinned, “But I think we can get something done…”
With that thought in mind and Venus gulping nervous, the stallion turned and spotted a metal trashcan. Yanking the lid off, the zebra threw it on the ground, “There, now her knees won’t look like shit when we’re done. I know just what we can do for a mare who ran her pretty little mouth running down the street…”
Again without needing orders, the buff zebra tossed Venus towards where the lid had fallen. Venus stumbled over until the tall zebra gripped her by the shoulder, kicking her lower legs. Venus gasped and her legs buckled, and with the support of the tall zebra’s hand, she fell to her knees, landing inside of the trashcan’s lid.
Tall -as Venus decided to call him- growled slightly, “If you’re going to run your mouth and mace the first nice zebras you see, then I guess we’re going to have to teach you what running that prissy mouth is gonna get ya!” Reaching down, Tall patted his pants, “Now open that pretty mouth for us!”
The realization had already hit home, but this sent a shiver down her spine, “N-No! Nonononononononono!!!” Venus quickly shut her mouth, figuring out exactly what they wanted out of her.
“ACK!” Rubbing his eyes hard, Small -the name she assigned for the Zebra she’d maced- stalked forward, “Fuckin’ hell, let me get at her first! Bitch maced me!”
Pausing for a moment, Tall nodded, “Muscles, get her mouth open for him. Oh, and bitch?” Gripping Venus by the hair, Tall tugged hard on it as he leaned forward by her ear again, “Bite, and we’ll make your life a living. Fuckin’. Hell.”
Venus shouted inside of her mouth, but she kept her lips sealed. Muscles blinked as he leaned forward, gripping Venus’ with large and strong fingers. The zebra suddenly pressed them together hard, hurting her nose but restricting her airway at the same time.
At first, Venus tried not to pay attention to it. She knew this was a common rape tactic. But at he same time, a hard and painful pressure started to press on the inside of her skull the longer that he pinched, and pain soon followed. She tried to ignore it by the zebra only huffed and pressed together tighter.
For a solid minute, Venus shut her eyes, trying not to let them in. But soon the pain was turning to slight dizziness, and then the pain flared up again. Her cheeks puffed up as she finally lost it, her lips bursting open as she expelled the buildup of carbon dioxide and took in hard gulps of air.
That, however, was the perfect opportunity for Small to thrust himself forward. Venus hadn’t even heard his pants unzip, and yet suddenly thick and sweaty semi-erect zebra dick was oinside of her lips. Even if he was the shortest, Venus knew instantly he wasn’t small, and her lips immediately curled around him by reflex as he began to throb inside of her mouth.
Letting out a hard gag, Venus coughed as she felt the cock hardening inside of her lips. It was large, larger htan most of the stallion she sucked off at work. His girth was second only to his length, and within seconds she knew this was going to hurt. She let out a shriek as she shook her head, gasping hard as she tried to pull away.
“Oh ya’ fuckin’…” Growling heavily, Small turned, “Fuck it, I don’t have the patience for this. Hand me her fuckin’ mace!”
Blinking slightly but complying nonetheless, Tall reached around, handing him the now half used can, “Don’t go and fuck up her eyes, we’re just teaching her a lesson… and one she needs to gotta get home from!”
“I fuckin’ know, I just wanna teach her part of that lesson!” Growling heavily, Small reached out and gripped Venus’s hat, throwing it to the ground before taking a fistful of her hair and yanking her backwards. The second he did so, he delivered hard quick second blast of mace into her face.
Venus let out a gagged shriek of pain as her eyes suddenly burned. Her pupils dilated and then shrunk before burning with an intensive pain, blurring the shapes around her and making it impossible to distinguish anything. At the same time her stomach flipped as nausea filled her gut, and her nose suddenly contracted. Her muscles locked up as she gagged, tears gushing out of her eyes and running her makeup across her face.
Another hard smack only added to Venus’ pain, “Hey! Bitch! I’m not done with you yet!!!” Growling, Small took another fistful of her hair, yanking it back, “Now, you’re going to suck, or I’m gonna empty this entire bottle in your face and still make you suck! Got it?!”
Venus could hardly understand him over the pain in her body, but his smack and cock wedged in her lips spoke volumes. Groaning, Small sighed as he pulled his cock back until only the tip remained in, hardening to his full girth.
While Venus was still barley able to distinguish the zebras from the alleyway wall, she could tell just how long he was. He was at least a good 12 inches long, and perhaps longer if he wasn’t fully hard. His shaft was girthy at the same time, coming to at least an inch and a half in diameter. Small didn’t give her much time before he growled again.
“And this time, fuckin’ SUCK!” As he said this, he thrusted his shaft into her mouth until the tip reached the back of her throat.
While saying it took all that Venus had not to throw up around his cock would be true, it felt like it took even more than that with the way her head was spinning. She could feel his cock as it entered her throat, swabbing the depths of it and pulsing inside of it. Her tongue tried to find purchase but was denied such, her mouth entirely stuffed with the enormous shaft. And all the while she was still crying and sniffling from the mace.
However, his order wasn’t to go unheeded. Coughing hard, Venus slowly forced her lips to curl around the massive shaft, all while focusing on not vomiting. Her world shook rapidly as she put all she could into sucking, all while saliva slowly began to pool inside of her lips.
Small groaned slightly but didn’t hit her. Instead, his hands came around to grip onto both sides of her face, digging his long fingers into her cheeks. Venus whimpered as she felt control over her neck conceding over to his own.
“Fuuuckkk….” Small growled slightly, thrusting his cock harder against her face. His hips pumped back and forth, trembling heavily, “Shit, she might actually, ffuuckkk, be fucking good at this!”
“Maybe ya shouldn’t have maced her…” Tall let out a little grumble, but he slowly reached into his own pants at the same time.
While Venus’ head was stationary, her cheeks puffed up slightly as she felt the pain of having the cock buried so heavily in her lips. She could taste his salty pre as he thrusted into her mouth, washing down the back of her throat and coughing heavily from the sensation.
“Hlukc, glhag, phlauga…” Venus was unable to stop herself from gagging out around his massive shaft. The mare sputtered out as the the saliva and pre inside of her mouth finally started to spill out, dribbling over her chin.
Venus sucked harder around his cock, gagging in disgust the harder that he went. Her eyes started to water as Small continued to thrust, just wanting him to finish… but she knew the other two still had to get off.
“Fucckkk this is taking so fucking long…” Huffing heavily, Small dug his fingers harder into the sides of Venus’ mouth, holding his hips steady as he growled heavily, thrusting Venus’ face against his crotch.
Sputtering and gasping in surprise, Venus’ eyes bulged, yet she wasn’t able to see much. She whimpered hard as suddenly his cock was thrusting harder into the back of her throat, the tip of his flared cock dragging against the inside of it. She suddenly was able to breathe, barely able to continue sucking on him.
As an effect of the mace, her nostrils had shut, leaving her unable to breathe through it. As such, suddenly having her face violently thrusted up and down Zebra dick meant that she wasn’t able to breath in the slightest.
Her lips smashing up against the tip of his groin, Venus realized that the entirety of his cock was slamming into her throat. It burned her throat as she felt every single sensation of the cock in her throat. She could feel every vein as it pulsed, could sense the pre as it dribbled down into her gut. She sputtered hard as tears ran down her face, mixing with her makeup and going down her face in rivets.
“Fuck, hahga, son of a… ghaghag fuck!!” Small growled slightly as she thrusted his cock harder, pounding his way in and out of her throat with no regard for what she was feeling, “Shit guys I might just, god!”
Venus let out a gutheral scream as she felt the intense sensation of the cock pounding into her, all while her body started to tingle from lack of air. She whimpered and snorted, trying to get any air into her lungs, but the cock preventing it all. And every attempt to get air through the tiny gap between cock and lip was met with another crashing into Small’s groin, filling her nose up with his scent and feeling his balls smacking hard against her chin.
Spittle dribbled out of her lips as she felt her vision, already blurry and indistinct, starting to fade. She whimpered as she reached forward, weakly hitting against his thighs as she tired to get him to stop, slow down, at least let her breathe. But no, everything about her was trapped. She could do nothing but taste his cock, feel it in her throat, and try desperately to suck around him.
In some sort of twisted miracle, Small finally started to cum. He growled as she slammed Venus’ face down against his groin, forcing her to take his entire cock as it bulged inside of her throat. The tip started to tremble and twitch as he humped her face, his balls smacking and lingering on her chin as he did so. Venus could only let him as her world started to go dark.
Finally, his cock erupted. Venus felt it, the warm sticky goop sliding down her throat. IT came out in hard and thick spurts, gushing down and spreading a humialting warmth throughout her neck. Small continued to groan and hump her face as she did so, his emptying balls smacking back and forth against her chin.
After a few moments, suddenly Small pulled back and out, thrusting Venus off his cock and leaving just the tip inside of her mouth. His cock spurted over her tongue as he gave her more of his virile seed, forcing her to cough and force herself not to throw up from the feeling of it.
“Haahhhhghg….” Groaning, Small reached down and gripped the tip of his dick, smacking it onto her face. His cock drooped over her face as he let it linger over her eye, smirking slightly, “Fuck… Fuck she’s good…”
Feeling his slimy cock as it dragged across her face, Venus let out a massive gag and tried to turn her head. She bent over and hacked, spitting out the seed that Small had given her. She gasped heavily as she got air into her lungs, the effects of the mace finally starting to wear off.
Her reprieve was only for a moment, however, as a hard kick to her side made her shriek in pain. This time, it was Tall, who bent over and snarled at her, “Did you just spit out his cum? You little bitch… lick it up and swallow it!”
Gagging hard, Venus looked up at him, her eyes finally starting to make out his shape again. She shook her head weakly, her throat far too sore to actually talk. Makeup filled tears dripped down her face, mingling with the cum that’d gotten stuck to her lips and chin.
“I SAID LICK IT UP!” Tall growled and delivered another hard kick to her side, banging the side of her ribs. Venus felt a shock of brutal pain going through her side as she fell onto her hands and knees, sniveling as she looked down to see the cum on the dirty sidewalk.
Sniffling hard, Venus coughed hard as she looked up again, seeing the expression that Tall gave her. Slowly, Venus leaned her head down, sputtering and crying as she slowly extended her tongue to the ground. Slowly, she dragged her tongue across the pavement, sucking up the cum as she slowly took it into her mouth.
Slowly closing her eyes hard, Venus forced herself to drag her tongue back and forth, getting everything in it. She could taste his cum along with the bits of pavement, the oily and dirty taste mingling with the salty and bland flavor of his cum. All the while, the zebras looked down at her, watching her without any expression in their eyes.
“Now… swallow…it…” Tall annunciated each word, getting down onto his knees so he was at eye level with her.
Sputtering still, Venus slowly looked up, realizing that she couldn’t get out of this. Slowly, she nodded her head, leaning her head back as she felt the acrid taste on her tongue. She took a moment to pray this would end before finally she swallowed, feeling it go down her throat.
Her eyes shut tightly as she did so, feeling the little bits of grainy cum going down her throat. She coughed heavily, feeling her descending along with the cum as it went down into her throat. She wanted to be somewhere else, anywhere else.
At the moment, Tall reached forward, gripping the bottom of her jaw and wrenching it open. Holding her mouth open, Tall peered into it, making sure that she’d actually swallowed it. Verifying that she had, he slowly nodded is head and leaned back, grinning slightly as he crossed his arms in front of him.
“Now…” With that said, Tall stayed down on his knees, slowly gripping the base of his dick. Venus realized he’d had it out the entire time as he grinned slightly, “I think you should put that pretty mouth to use again.”
Sniffling again, Venus looked down at the cock, seeing what it was. While it wasn’t anywhere near as long as Small, it was far thicker and was still longer than the average stallion. She looked up to him in fear as she tried to slowly pull away, coughing again as her lungs were still trying to get air into them.
“Look, I’ll tell you something~” Grinning slightly, Tall reached out, gripping Venus’ hair, “You gave my frined a really good nut. So why don’t we make a deal? You get me and the guy you tried to tackle-“ He pointed at Trench- “Two nuts each, and then we’ll let you run back home. No more, no less. How does that sound?”
Staring at him with a vacant expression, Venus looked at him in confusion, looking down at the floor as she tried to focus, “I-I… I…” Her throat was incredibly hoarse, “I don’t.. I don’t…”
“I’m being really generous right now,” Tall frowned hard, “And I’ll tell you this right now: you should take this really nice offer I’m giving you, or you can see your friend or foal or whoever tomorrow after a nice allnighter~”
Stiffening up in fear, Venus stared at Tall for a long moment, shaking hard as she thought about what exactly that that could entail. She was being given an option between a rock and a hard place, and both of them were closing in fast.
“I-I’ll… I-I’ll g-get you two off… t-twice…” Venus slowly sniveled, turning her head away for a moment to swallow both her pride and the remainder of Small’s cum.
“Good bitch! Now, let’s see what you can actually do with that tongue~” Patting his groin, Tall slowly scooted forward, his cock dangling under her face as he grinned at her, “Get me off nice and slow.”
Looking down at the already dribbling cock, Venus slowly looked up and nodded her head, forcing herself to slowly lean down. She slowly opened her lips, her mouth trembling as she curled the back of her lips against her teeth and down towards the cock tip.
Whimpering but forcing herself to do so, Venus slowly wrapped her lips around the massive tip. She gently brought her warm mouth around his cock, feeling as the pre spurted into her lips. Slowly, the mare descended down on his hard cock, looking up slightly to see the reaction of the Zebra up top.
“Fuck she actually did it…” Venus heard the faintest of murmurs from his mouth, followed by a small moan from his lips, “Damn…”
A small bit of relief going through her chest, Venus continued down his cock, feeling the tip of the cock starting to press against the back of her throat. As she did so, she felt the tip of the cock spurting his sticky pre against the back of her throat, sliding down the roof of her mouth as she began to finally let the cock slide down into her throat.
“Mother… Bucker…” Groaning, Tall reached up, putting his hands on the back of her head, “Shit she really knows her stuff… good... keep going…”
In a sense, the small compliments were far worse than having to lick up the cum from the pavement. The fact that the zebra was impressed with the ability to suck cock, especially given she was being forced to do so, hurt worse than being kicked in the side. Tears continued to drip down onto the ground as she slowly moved her head up and down his massive cock.
Now that she was able to move at her own pace, Venus could feel just how large he truly was. His cock filled her entire mouth, pressing up against her lips covering her teeth by virtue of just sitting in her mouth. The tip of his cock pressed hard against the back of her throat, stuffing her entire and slightly stretching it as it began to move forward into her throat.
Unlike Small, who thrusted hard and without abandon, Tall held himself back and instead let Venus work at her own pace. When Venus looked up to him, he was grinning like a madpony, his fingers digging into the back of her head.
“Alright, let’s go faster…” Chuckling, Tall grinned, “But not too fast yet…”
Blinking her eyes to acknowledge him, Venus slowly shut her eyes quickly after, hoping to at the very least shut out some of the noise. It was degrading, humiliating, and deponyizing for her to be doing this, but she also felt the pain throbbing in her side, and knew that if she didn’t do this, she was going to have to deal with a lot more than just pain in her side.
Venus took a moment to breathe through her slightly cleared nostrils as she began to gently pump her head back and forth, working his shaft in her mouth using her tongue ever so slightly. She knew that if she got him off quickly enough, he’d have to at the very least let her go quickly.
Four more. She slowly gulped down around the tip of his shaft as she told herself that again.
“Fucking… ahh fuck yes…” Venus gulped and coughed slightly around his cock, still moving at a relatively slow pace. His moans of encouragement didn’t help her mood in any way, but she wasn’t getting fucked hard. As such, she worked her tongue up and down the top of his shaft, trying to get him to finish by working him up so much.
Spittle slowly began to dribble out of her lips again, her mascara still mingling with it the longer she went. Her eyes were still crying, her nose was flared and her throat bulged slightly. Small glucks and gulps filled the alleyway the longer the two went, mingling with the noise of wind gushing through, and the occasional grunt of the trench coated Zebra.
Just as Venus had begun to pump her head at normal speed, a suddenly shift happened. As she pushed her head down to try and deepthroat him, Tall suddenly grabbed her head with both hands and slammed her down onto it. Venus let out a GLUCKH! as he did so, her nose mashing into her crotch at the same time. Venus choked around him as his fingers suddenly yanked her head upwards, pressing her head into the wall behind her as he got onto his feet again, keeping his dick wedged in her throat.
“I just wanted to see just how good you were~” Smirking, Tall put both hands against the wall, grinning down at her with his mad and lusty eyes, “Now, let’s see just how much you can really take you fucking slut!!!”
That said, Tall slammed his hips forward, knocking Venus’ head against the wall and thrusting his cock into her throat. Each thrust would bang the back of her head into the wall, and soon small stars joined the dancing pain in her mind. Holding her head back against it to try and stop it, Venus found the sheer force of his now hard and lusty thrusts were painful, each one spearing the back of her throat and sending her spit flying in every direction.
“Ffffuucckkk~!!!” Tall grinned, “Damn I’m so fucking glad we decided to grab you, you’re such a fucking slut! It’s like you suck cock for a damn living!” He smirked hard, forcing his dick back into her throat, “So let’s see if you’re any good at your job!”
“HLUCK! LUGAK! HAUGHA!” Venus’ response was a series of choking groans as the back of her head burned from being slammed back, and her throat stretched beyond its usual limits. She wanted this to end, wanted him to just cum. He just held on, and he wouldn’t stop. He couldn’t stop.
Her tears continued to hit the ground as his cock thrusted into her throat time and time again. It hurt beyond words at this point to feel it, and yet horribly as time went on, she stopped feeling it. These zebras were so determined to throat fuck her, she wasn’t sure if she could even take it anymore.
Her knees trembled as soon his thrusts turned into smaller humps, working his cock inside her throat and finding the spot he liked the best to thrust into. She could taste the hard sweat around it, she could feel the small veins as they pulsed inside of her. It was utterly humiliating to feel this, and she wanted nothing more than for this to just be over soon. She wanted Mars, she wanted to go back to helping him get candy, wanted to run back to Peppermint…
But she hadn’t even gotten through 1 of 4.
Finally, however, Venus felt the cock starting to throb. She whimpered hard as he thrusted back just like Small did, holding himself there as he grinned and groaned inside of her. Finally, his cock throbbed again, moving about in her throat as he let loose his load.
This time, however, he didn’t let her taste it. Instead, he yanked his cock out of her mouth, holding it in front of her as he jacked it off quickly with his hand. A combination of her own spit and his long sticky ropes of cum came flying out towards her face, coating it and drenching her in the vile stuff. It splattered over her eyebrow and nose, her cheeks and the top of her hair, and she sputtered hard as he did so.
His orgasm lasted at least a good twenty seconds before he stopped jerking, letting himself pant slightly as he looked down at her with a grin. He chuckled slightly and looked back to Trench, “Damn, think you want a go with her next?”
While Venus hung her head and continued to cry and whimper from shame, Trench looked down at her for a moment before he shrugged, walking over and pulling his own dick out. His cock was about as long as Small’s was but was also of a decent girth, just on par with that of Tall’s. He stared down at her for a moment, gauging her reaction.
Cum dripped down from her face onto her lips, and Venus slowly reached out with her tongue to lick it up. She hated to do it, but she didn’t want to get hurt again. If he would kick her over spitting up cum, what would he do about her letting it fall on the ground in front of him?
Walking over to her, Tall gripped the base of his cock, smirking as he swung it about. It smacked into the side of Venus’ cheek, smearing the pre and spit over it. Her nose wrinkled up as he took time to rub and smear the tip against her face, getting the spots she tried to lick up dirtied up all over again.
“Want her in any specific position?” Tall grinned, “Just don’t let her knees hit the ground, don’t want any evidence this shit happened. Though, nopony is gonna look down this street anyhow.”
Pausing for a moment, Trench nodded, walking forward to the still sputtering and sniveling Venus. He let her stay that way for a moment, not saying a word. This entire time he’d just been watching and waiting, almost as though he hadn’t approved. And yet now he simply stared at her, not giving her a moment’s notice before he acted.
Tall dragged his slimy dick around her entire face before stepping away, letting Trench do his thing. Venus sputtered slightly and shook her head, trying to get the quickly drying cum away from her eyes. But by that point she felt a sudden shift in her position, yelping as Trench’s strong hand had rotated her before she could do anything about it.
Turning Venus so that she now faced the wall, Trench likewise stood as such. Gripping Venus by her now pulled and sore hair, he yanked her back so she was now vertical, looking at the opposite wall backwards. At the same time, Trench wordlessly thrusted into her throat, slamming down as with her head back backwards and her body vertical, he fit perfectly into it.
Unlike Tall or Small, who spent their time speaking and working with her, Trench did no such thing. Rather, his long and hard fingers came up to grip Venus by the shoulders, holding her down as he made it clear she wasn’t getting any air or movement until he finished.
With the way that he held her down, now Venus’ sense of being upright was completely inverted and her blood was pooling in the top of her head. She coughed and gagged hard as before, but this time any noise of her getting fucked was drowned out by the long and hard grunts of Trench, who thrusted hard enough to make her body shudder. His cock was relentless as it pounded into her, this time not needed to force her throat open as he could simply thrust straight into it.
“Gl…GLUCK!” Venus couldn’t breathe. Her nostrils were barley getting any air to her lungs, and likewise his balls slapped her straight in the nose and eyes at every thrust. She could smell them as they smacked back and forth, could feel them as they almost tickled her nose. The sensation was even more humiliating than simply being fucked; the fact that a zebra was fucking her and rubbing her face into his ballsack made her sniffle out a few more pathetic tears.
Three more, she quickly told herself. Just three more and she’d finally be able to go and find Mars.
All the while, Trench didn’t say a word. Instead, the zebra wordlessly humped. His cock was far sweatier and had a bitter taste to it, and she could also feel that his cock had far more rippling and strong veins lining it. The tip of his small medial ring dragged back and froth across the roof of her mouth, making her gums start to hurt. That was only a tiny fracture of the sensation compared to her now sore and bruised throat, the flared head dragging back and forth inside of it and only serving to make her that much more uncomfortable.
More so than either time, however, Venus couldn’t breathe. Her world was already starting to go black after only a minute of feeling the zebra fucking her yet again, and everything was burning. Her teeth hurt with every thrust against them, her mouth burned, her throat felt as though someone was punching it with each thrust, and her sides still throbbed form being kicked. She wanted to just pass out, just let them have their way with her that way. She could just figure out what they did with her when she woke up…
Trench, however, had the stamina of a workhorse. While Venus struggled to stay awake, he was meanwhile thrusting and humping her without even breathing funny. His movements were hard and controlled, each one slightly smaller than the ones that Tall gave her. It was as though he wanted this for the long haul, and wanted it badly.
Trench growled slightly as he started to feel her sucking decline, as though he realized that he wasn’t getting the normal treatment. With that feeling registered, Trench suddenly pulled out of her throat, yanking her head up as he stared down into her eyes.
Venus let out a hard gasp, coughing hard as pre bubbled in the back of her throat. She took long hard gulps of air, trying to fill her burning lungs. As she did so, Trench didn’t move to get back into her throat again, simply letting her breath and get the precious air she needed to live back into her body.
However, just as she took in a third large gulp, Trench suddenly yanked her head back down and started up again. By surprise, Venus exhaled just as he thrusted inside, getting rid of the air that she’d taken back in. Soon his hard and relentless fucking began again, and she was back to barely staying awake.
Trench had the endurance to match his size, and Venus found that soon she was entering a cycle with him. Every two or so minute she would yank out and pull her head up, letting her breathe before diving back in. In some sick way he almost seemed to care about her, acting as though he was treating her as an actual pony rather than their oral fuck puppet. And that alone made Venus cry again, as the thought that she was getting raped so long a rapist had to care about her wellbeing slowly sank in.
Spittle dribbled and pooled under her in tiny dime sized puddles, all while her torment continued. Ten straight minutes of having the zebra thrusting into her mouth was a different type of hell for her, and one that she wasn’t sure she could say was any easier to take. The cycle of getting steadily and relentlessly humped, being made to breathe out loudly, and then put right back to the task felt as though it stretched on for an eternity, and one that Venus wanted to end sooner than later. But Trench hadn’t gotten to that point yet, and Venus was stuck with him until he was.
Finally, after ten minutes of his hard and rough poundings, his shaft started to throb. In a sudden twinge of fear it would go away, Venus doubled on her hard sucking of the shaft, trying her hardest to get the shaft to finally erupt. She wanted this eover, wanted him to just cum. And so she worked her lips, tongue and throat around him, trying to get him over that edge so she could be done with it.
Just like a workhorse, his stamina was not the only thing that was great. When his cock erupted, the sheer volume of seed was enough to fill her gut up far faster than the previous two combined. Venus gagged hard as his seed filled her throat up and began to sputter and dribble out of her lips from the sheer volume. She whimpered hard as she tried to swallow but was blocked his his cock, and soon his semen began to leak down and over her face. Just as it was starting to get into her eyes, Trench pulled away, letting her sit up and taste his load.
Groaning and sputtering again, Venus shook as tears of fear, humiliation and disgust dripped to the ground under her. She just wanted this torment to end, to finally be over and to let herself get away from this utter complete hell. But as she did so, she heard a small slow clapping from behind her.
“Damn… Damn… just Damn!” Tall grinned, “You have to suck dick for a living… I’ve never seen a mare not pass out when sucking him off before! And you swallow most of it too! I can’t goddamn believe it…”
Coughing and hacking hard, Venus shook her head. The urge of throw up came from her throat as the cum sloshed around inside of her gut, reminding her of what’d just happened. But instead she slowly curled up slightly as she tried to block out what he was saying.
“Still got one more orgasm from us each, little miss mouthy…” Thinking, the Zebra grinned, “Hey Trench, got another round in ya?”
Nodding his head gruffly, the Zebra turned to face Venus again. He said nothing, but his cock twitched at it.
“Wanna share this last one?” Tall grinned, “One last one, then we’ll go home and get cleaned up and leave this bitch out here. Sound like a plan?”
As Venus heard this, her heart sank, but she had no more energy to resist him. She just needed to go home and throw up all this cum, take a shower and scrub her face of all of this filth. These zebras had such an endurance on them it was horrifying, and she couldn’t stand the fact they were doing this for four more.
Two more, actually, but she was sick of trying to count.
Not taking even a moment to say anything, Trench slowly walked back over to Venus, this time pressing her back up against the alleyway just like when Tall went crazy. Standing on the right side of her, he gestured with his neck for Tall to come over.
Grinning hard at what they were about to do, Venus could see both zebras were already hard again. Sniffing hard, the mare slowly closed her eyes as she opened her lips, silently begging that the two simply got this over with quickly for her.
“Heh, she’s a smart one too… more mares are too dumb to listen…” Without further ado, the two Zebras thrusted forward, spearing Venus’ mouth around the two as they thrusted back and forth against her throat.
Venus couldn’t muster up the energy to wail or scream anymore, and even her whimpers were pathetic. They were more of strangled garbled moans and gags that came out along with her pure despair, filling the air with them the longer that this went on. She couldn’t stand this anymore, but she didn’t have a choice. She was being pushed past the point of her stamina and she still would have to go home after this…
This time, both Zebras felt as though they were on a bit shorter stamina than their previous rounds. While Trench was still hard and thrusting just as brutally, he was also groaning and starting to pant more often. Tall, meanwhile, was sweating all over, smearing his cock back and froth across her face if it popped out of her lips, only to return right back to fucking her like the whore that she was.
Venus simply took it, keeping her lips open and not doing anything to disturb them. She coughed and gagged the longer it went on, shivering profusely from the sensation as she took each cock in stride. Her throat still hurt and her body still burned, and at the same time she couldn’t take the feeling that it was giving her. The humiliation had turned into a simply pit of dread in her gut that this would never end, and with the hard fucks into her lips, she felt as though it wouldn’t.
The two cocks rubbed and pulsed together, and her lips felt like they were going to rip from the feeling. Her throat felt like she’d just taken several punches to the face, and with the flared heads almost fighting to see who would get into it first, she couldn’t say it wasn’t true. The veins on them both flared as their rings would thrust back and forth against her teeth, all while her tongue was permanently flattened against the bottom of her mouth.
“Fuck… Haghag….” Groaning, Tall smirked, “Don’t think I can… hold on that long… what about… you?”
Trench simply snorted and nodded his head. Where his workhorse stamina had gone was beyond Venus, but she guessed that he hadn’t been expecting to go so quickly after his last one. Tall’s offer had just been too convenient to pass up.
As such, both Zebras began to thrust faster, harder and more aggressively, each time forcing their way against her throat and making her whimper in pain. But thankfully she could feel the sensation starting to accelerate as they both approached their orgasms quickly.
Venus slowly shut her eyes as she tried to prepare herself for what exactly they would be doing to her. The mare braced herself against the back wall as their cocks thrusted back and forth in unison again and again, stuffing her face and making her look like some pig being wrangled with for a Thanksgiving feast. But it felt as though it was finally coming to an end.
Finally, Venus felt both cocks starting to twitch. This time, both stallions pulled their cocks out, leaving the tips inside of her mouth while they slowly jacked their slimy appendages off.
With two groans, the two Zebras finally came to their orgasms. Venus shut her eyes as their cum flooded her mouth. To her own personal miracle, their cum was of a volume significantly less than before. With her gut already full from Trench’s far more impressive first orgasm, she wasn’t able to swallow much, but she was thankfully able to hold it in her mouth as she looked up to the two with shaking and sniffing tears.
“Ahh… fucking hell… damn…” Groaning, Tall leaned back slightly, turning to Trench, “Well, we promised her four in total, right?”
Nodding his head, Trench slowly reached out, taking the tip of his cock and gripping Venus’ hair. He dragged his cock back and forth through it for a few moments, cleaning himself off before reaching over into the darkness. Finding her Witch’s Hat, he replaced that to hide it, before slowly zipping his pants up.
“Well… guess that settles that…” Chuckling, Tall looked around for a moment before he saw a towel hanging from a small clothesline between two windows. Reaching up, the zebra took hold of it, pulling it down and throwing it into Venus’ face, “Clean yourself up so your pretty little colt doesn’t have to see his mother like the stinking whore she is, heh.”
Sniffing hard, Venus quickly buried her face into the towel, refusing to look at either of them. Laughing, Tall likewise zipped his pants up, turning to the entrance of the alleyway. Trench did the same.
“One last thing…” Just as Venus thought her torment was over, Tall walked over and suddenly reached down, grabbing at her panties between her legs. Venus shouted in pain, a hoarse and gutheral noise, as he tore them off, the straps dangling broken as he grinned, “Have fun walking home tonight, you whore~!”
“Happy Nightmare Night, bitch.” With his chilling through echoing in her head, Venus was left alone in the dark alley, sniffing and crying. The second the two were away, she spat out all the cum still in her mouth, sobbing as she tried to focus on something other than her own despair.
****
“VWENUS!!!” Yelling out to her as the orange mare stumbled her way back to the front door of her apartment, Mars waved out to her with two full bags of candy in hand.
Walking her way back to her house was pain, but Venus had managed worse before. Getting there without being seen, however, had been the worst part. All the while, she stumbled awkwardly, keeping her legs together and head down to avoid anyone noticing she had on no underwear.
Standing at the door with Mars was Peppermint, a concerned expression on her face. As Venus got closer, however, her expression slowly shifted as she looked down along with Venus, sharing a knowing small glance between the two.
“I’m… I’m sorry Mars…” Venus rasped slightly, “Did you… have a nice… Nightmare Night?”
“Ywes!” Mars shook his head rapidly, “I got all sworths of candy! Gwood amazing cwandy!”
Slowly forcing a smile, Venus looked up, “That’s… great Mars. Why don’t you… go inside and put those in the pantry for me so you don’t loose them?”
Blinking slightly, Mars slowly nodded his head “Alwrith! As long asth you come and eat them withwth me later!”
Nodding her head again, Venus slowly looked down to her dress. The zebras had been careful not to leave any evidence on it… and they’d left her the keys to her apartment too. She slowly reached down and tossed the keys over to Mars, who quickly caught them and immediately unlocked the door, running inside with a smile on his face.
Taking a long pause with Peppermint, Venus let out a sigh slightly before slowly stumbling her way back in with Mars. As the door closed, Venus turned to face the wall, shivering hard as she slowly began to cry again.
“H-Happy… Nightmare… Night…”
Author's Note
Third in a series of fics written for MarsMiner! This one is a bit out of season but I wanted to post it anyways! Hope you enjoyed!
