Aftersound

by Oneimare
After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.

A broken echo that no longer belongs
To a city dying in the grasp of icy throngs,
Heart and veins of plastic and steel,
Blind reflexes, no emotions to feel,
Only cold zeros and ones fill her head
In a rusted world of never-ending dread

A mare wakes up in a place she doesn’t recognise, her mind and body feeling wrong, memories and senses all distorted. Outside a half-ruined building she had found herself in, a city straight out of a nightmare leers at her, demanding a question—who is she?

Set on finding the answer, she plunges herself into the unwelcoming streets of the mysterious city, bound to discover the horrible reality of how far ponykind has fallen and what sad truths stand behind it.

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Disclaimer

The story has undergone a substantial rework as of 2021. For the details see here.
English is not my native language and this is my first story—even after the rewrite it still possesses certain flaws. Proceed with no high expectations but caution. 


This story is written in close collaboration with my friend Geka, without whom it wouldn't be possible.

Special thanks to Jay Tarrant.

Prereaders and editors: Jay Tarrant, IAmApe, DuvetofReason, Typoglyphic, Mike Meiers, Steel Resolve, Damajics, QU4DZILLA, FairySlayer.

Complete
Profanity
Gore
Violence
Dark
Death
Alternate Universe
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Science Fiction
Adventure
 
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119426 words: Estimated about 10 hours to read

23 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2018-03-17 17:01:17 UTC
    3247
  2. Chapter 1 – Enchanting voice 2018-03-17 18:48:08 UTC
  3. Chapter 2 – On the verge 2018-05-18 17:33:58 UTC
    3944
  4. Chapter 3 – From the frypan 2018-06-22 16:11:36 UTC
    4366
  5. Chapter 4 – On their own 2018-08-29 14:58:31 UTC
    7332
  6. Chapter 5 – Beauty and the beast 2018-10-19 16:29:23 UTC
    8798
  7. Chapter 6 – A horse with no name 2018-12-22 09:48:08 UTC
    4880
  8. Chapter 7 – Tombstone 2019-02-16 09:10:37 UTC
    4790
  9. Chapter 8 – Twilight Sparkle 2019-03-09 08:52:21 UTC
    5876
  10. Chapter 9 – Profane light, hallowed twilight 2019-03-30 08:05:46 UTC
    5473
  11. Chapter 10 – canterlot:\tr.exe 2019-04-20 08:51:48 UTC
    4654
  12. Chapter 11 – Where it all began 2019-05-11 09:18:09 UTC
    3571
  13. Chapter 12 – Do equinoids dream of electric sheep? 2019-06-01 07:25:14 UTC
    4736
  14. Chapter 13 – Good intentions 2019-06-22 08:04:59 UTC
    5301
  15. Chapter 14 – To dodge the Junction 2019-07-13 11:14:11 UTC
    5000
  16. Chapter 15 – Lunacy 2019-08-03 08:11:05 UTC
    4996
  17. Chapter 16 – Trial 2019-08-24 09:18:48 UTC
    4620
  18. Chapter 17 – Mother 2019-09-14 07:54:44 UTC
    6902
  19. Chapter 18 – Responsible 2019-10-05 08:19:03 UTC
    5115
  20. Chapter 19 – Betrayal 2019-10-26 07:41:57 UTC
    6959
  21. Chapter 20 – Assumption 2019-11-30 07:52:26 UTC
    9266
  22. Chapter 21 – Machine Goddess 2019-12-21 07:17:24 UTC
    9600
  23. Epilogue 2019-12-21 07:17:31 UTC