Steel Vs Equestria's baddies (started in 2018)(imported chapters from google docs)
ACT 8: Chapter 13 - The Rift Opens [Act 8 of 9]
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The First Tear in Reality
The Frozen North trembled.
Above the jagged peaks of ice, the sky ripped open.
A rift of pure void energy pulsed like a wound in existence itself.
The stars beyond it shifted unnaturally, their light bending around something that should not be.
Something that had waited.
And now—
It was here.
Steel's Immediate Response
In the heart of Canterlot, Steel’s golden core flared violently.
Every sensor in his body detected the rupture.
The energy was not magic.
Not chaos.
Not even darkness.
It was something else.
Something older than history itself.
Without hesitation, Steel turned to Twilight, who had been reviewing her findings on The Unmaker.
“It has begun,” he said simply.
Twilight’s breath hitched.
She didn't even need to ask what.
She could feel it, too.
She looked at the open book before her, at the fragmented text warning of something so dangerous, so absolute, that even knowledge of it had been erased.
“We have to move. Now.”
The World Responds
Word of the rift spread across Equestria within hours.
Princess Celestia and Luna issued an immediate state of emergency.
The Crystal Empire, still recovering from the battle with Sombra, sent out distress signals to every nation.
And at the Guardian Outposts, warriors of every species began mobilizing.
Dragons took to the skies.
Griffon scouts flew toward the rift, only to return shaken by what they saw.
Changelings reported distortions in the magical field.
Even Discord, for once, seemed genuinely disturbed.
“Now this is something I don’t recognize,” he muttered, watching the sky twist unnaturally. “And that worries me.”
But the worst sign—
Came from Veska.
The Archangel of Compassion appeared before Steel, her stitched hands trembling.
“I feel it,” she whispered.
She turned to her older brother, Kovag, the Archangel of War.
His flaming greatsword was already drawn.
“I have not felt something like this since the first wars beyond the stars,” he said grimly.
Mitch, the Archangel of Order, simply stared at the rift.
“… It is not breaking through,” he muttered.
“… We are already inside it.”
Steel Arrives at the Rift
With Twilight, Celestia, Luna, and a team of elite warriors, Steel marched into the Frozen North.
As they approached the rift—
The air grew wrong.
It was not cold.
Not hot.
It was empty.
Even the wind refused to move.
And then—
The first entity emerged.
A shifting mass of void energy, vaguely shaped like a towering figure.
It had no eyes.
No mouth.
And yet—
Steel could feel it looking at him.
And for the first time since his creation—
He heard a voice that did not come from the physical world.
It spoke directly into his core.
“… You were not meant to exist.”
Steel’s golden light flared.
He clenched his fists.
“… You are incorrect.”
The entity tilted its form.
And then—
It attacked.
The First Battle Against the Unknown
The Frozen North erupted.
The void-born creature lunged at Steel, its entire body shifting like liquid shadow.
Steel met its charge, his golden fist colliding with the entity’s formless body.
BOOOOOM!
The impact shattered the landscape, sending waves of ice and rock flying in all directions.
Twilight and the princesses immediately formed protective barriers, shielding their forces.
But then—
More creatures emerged.
One by one, they crawled out of the rift, each of them shifting, twisting, unstable.
They were not just beasts.
They were concepts made manifest.
And as they spread across the battlefield—
The first true war against the unknown began.
Steel stood firm.
His golden eyes locked onto the ever-growing rift.
And deep within it—
He could feel something else.
Something far worse.
Something watching.
Waiting.
Because this—
This was only the beginning.
