Steel Vs Equestria's baddies (started in 2018)(imported chapters from google docs)
ACT 9: Chapter 4 - The Burden of Fate [Act 9 of 9]
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The Final Steps to Ponyville
The journey home took days.
Through forests. Across rivers. Over rugged terrain that forced the group to move carefully, ensuring that the reinforced transport carrying Steel’s petrified wife and daughter remained undamaged.
Steel never left their side.
Not once.
Even when the others rested, he remained standing. Watching. Protecting.
Because if he failed them again—
Then he had failed completely.
And failure was unacceptable.
The Arrival in Ponyville
When the group finally entered Ponyville, the town fell silent.
Ponies gathered, watching as the Guardian of Equestria walked through their streets, carrying the remains of his past.
None spoke.
Because even they could feel the weight of this moment.
Twilight led the way, guiding them toward the Castle of Friendship, where they would begin working on reversing the petrification.
But as they approached—
Something felt wrong.
Steel’s golden core pulsed, detecting an anomaly.
Twilight frowned. “What’s wrong?”
Steel turned his head slightly.
“… We are being watched.”
The others stiffened.
But when they looked around—
There was no one there.
Only shadows shifting unnaturally.
And deep in the farthest corners of the town—
Something smiled.
Waiting.
Inside the Castle - The Investigation Begins
Twilight and Starlight immediately began analyzing the petrification spell.
They scanned every inch of the stone, searching for any trace of Aldos’s magic.
What they found—
Was worse.
“This isn’t just Aldos’s magic,” Twilight said, voice tight.
Starlight’s eyes widened. “There’s something else here. Something deeper.”
Steel stared.
“… Explain.”
Twilight took a breath. “Aldos’s magic started this spell… but something else is maintaining it.”
Her horn glowed brighter, trying to trace the energy to its source.
And for the first time ever—
Twilight Sparkle felt something looking back at her.
She gasped, staggering backward.
Starlight caught her. “Twilight!”
Twilight’s pupils were dilated.
Her voice shaken.
“There’s… something else there.”
Steel’s golden eyes dimmed.
“… Then I will find it.”
The Unseen Hand
Far beyond Ponyville—
In the depths of the forgotten lands—
A figure stood in the ruins of a long-dead kingdom.
Watching.
Waiting.
And as Steel’s investigation began—
The figure spoke softly.
“… You should not have found them, Guardian.”
The wind howled.
And the presence vanished.
Because the past—
Was not yet finished with him.
And soon—
Steel would learn the true cost of defying fate.
