Steel Vs Equestria's baddies (started in 2018)(imported chapters from google docs)
Chapter 6: Breaking the Chains [Act 1 of 9]
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The Aftermath of the Eye
Steel stood motionless, his massive form eerily still, glowing eyes devoid of the life they had so recently shown.
Starlight’s heart pounded as she took another step back.
“Steel…?” she whispered.
The towering golem didn’t respond—his golden energy had dimmed, replaced with something… empty.
Then, he spoke.
“DIRECTIVE REINSTATED. AWAITING ORDERS.”
His voice was emotionless, lacking the warmth and newfound joy he had expressed just moments before.
Starlight’s breath hitched.
Something had hijacked him.
Before she could act, a sudden burst of purple light flashed beside her.
“Starlight!”
Twilight and the rest of the girls galloped onto the scene, eyes wide with alarm. Behind them, Sledge and a few of the Canterlot guards followed, weapons drawn but unsure whether they should be pointed at the golem.
“Girls!” Starlight whirled around, relief flooding her. “Steel—something happened! He was laughing, he was himself, but then this song played out of nowhere, and this eye-shaped rune flared up on his chest! It was like—like it was forcing him back into being some kind of mindless war machine!”
Twilight’s ears pinned back, her face dark with concern. “A delayed trigger rune… That must’ve been left on him centuries ago! Somepony—or someone—wanted to ensure he never fully regained himself!”
“Can you fix it?!” Starlight pleaded.
Twilight’s horn blazed with magic. “I—I can try! But if this was made by ancient human war mages, it’s going to take everything I have!”
Taking a deep breath, she lowered her horn and aimed at the glowing eye-shaped rune still etched into Steel’s chest.
“Steel, if you can hear me—hold on!”
She fired a pulse of magic directly at the rune. The moment it connected—
Steel screamed.
It was not a mechanical error. It was not static.
It was pain.
Real, raw, and deeply unnatural.
Twilight grit her teeth, pouring more magic into the spell. The rune pulsed, resisting, trying to force itself to stay active.
Steel clutched his head, metal fingers twitching violently.
“N-NO… SYSTEM ERROR… CONFLICT… CONFLICT…!”
Twilight’s magic surged brighter, sweat pouring down her face.
“Come on,” she grunted. “Come on, come on—BREAK!”
With a final burst of violet energy, the eye-shaped rune shattered into nothingness.
For a moment, everything was silent.
Then, Steel collapsed onto his knees.
His entire body shuddered, his eyes flickering wildly between dim and bright.
And then—
Tears.
Glowing, golden liquid tears slipped down Steel’s cold metal face, crackling like molten light.
Everypony froze.
“… W-Whoa,” Rainbow Dash muttered. “Can golems… cry?”
Steel’s massive form trembled, and before anypony could react, he suddenly reached out—
And scooped Starlight into a crushing hug.
“THANK YOU.”
His voice, though still deep and metallic, was no longer hollow. No longer empty.
It was filled with emotion.
Starlight let out a muffled squeak, her face smushed against his chest plate like a filly hugging a plush doll. “Mmf—okay! Okay, big guy! Y-You’re welcome! But—air!”
Steel loosened his grip, though he still held her close, his massive arms trembling.
“… I was trapped, was I not?” His voice was shaky, as if he was processing a nightmare he had barely escaped.
Twilight nodded, still breathing heavily from the spell. “Yeah. And I think… you’ve been trapped for thousands of years.”
Steel lowered his head, his tears still softly glowing.
“… I do not wish to be a weapon anymore.”
Twilight stepped closer. “You aren’t. Not anymore.”
Steel looked up at her, the energy behind his eyes flickering with something new.
Hope.
He gently placed Starlight back on the ground and slowly stood up once more.
“… Then I will forge a new path.”
He turned toward Ponyville, determination settling into his massive frame.
“I will meet the others. I will prove that I am more than a war machine.”
Twilight nodded. “Then let’s go together.”
Steel smiled—a small, yet powerful gesture.
And together, they walked toward Ponyville.
Ponyville - Panic (Again)
The moment Steel set foot in Ponyville, the reaction was immediate.
Ponies froze in terror.
Mares grabbed their foals and bolted into houses. Vendors abandoned their stalls. Birds scattered from the trees.
Even Big Mac, usually the calmest stallion in town, took one look at the towering metal titan and muttered a quiet, “Nope.” before galloping away.
Steel stopped moving, watching as everypony fled. His massive shoulders slumped.
“… They fear me.”
Twilight winced. “They just need time to adjust! I promise they’ll—”
Steel suddenly took a deep breath, then bellowed,
“NO! DON’T RUN! I JUST WANT TO HUG YOU!”
The townsponies screamed even louder.
Twilight face-hoofed. “Steel. That’s not helping.”
Pinkie Pie, however, was unfazed. She trotted right up to him, grinning. “Hey, buddy! If you wanna hug somepony, I volunteer!”
Steel blinked, then without hesitation, scooped Pinkie up into a hug.
The pink mare giggled. “SEE? NOTHING TO BE SCARED OF!”
As if on cue, Fluttershy peeked out from behind a barrel.
She hesitated for only a second before she stepped forward.
“Um… if you really want to hug somepony, I—I wouldn’t mind one, too.”
Steel gently kneeled down, extending a massive hand toward her. She stepped into his palm, and he lifted her up into a careful, warm embrace.
A few ponies stopped running.
Then a few more.
Slowly, curiosity began to replace fear.
“Wait,” said a stallion. “He just… wants to hug ponies?”
“Um… that’s kinda adorable?” a mare admitted.
A filly with wide eyes whispered, “He’s just a big softie!”
Within minutes, ponies began cautiously approaching, their fear giving way to wonder.
Steel, still holding Pinkie and Fluttershy, felt something deep within him stir.
It was… acceptance.
He was not feared. He was welcome.
And for the first time in his entire existence…
He felt like he belonged.
