A Better Fall Formal

by Flameboy

Rating: everyone
Tags: Garble, Slice of Life, Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Comedy, Starlight Glimmer, Romance, Equestria Girls, Sunburst
Length: 4810

Starlight Glimmer and Sunburst go to Canterlot High for the Fall Formal.

Starlight Glimmer and Twilight are invited to Canterlot High for... a new Fall Formal. Twilight is taking her werewolf boyfriend, along with Spike and Ember.

But, Spike and Ember also took Garble, Discord, the CMC, and the rest of their team for the fall formal prom.

Starlight even decided to take Sunburst with her. But, she needs help with finding a dress. Actually, all three of them Starlight, Twilight, and Ember need dresses.

(Well, Rarity already found them and had given them to her friends for free. So, in the first chapter, that will not be mentioned. After all, they're in the Carousal Boutique for crying out loud.)
But, back to the others, the dragons are going to make this the best night ever with funny stuff.

Published 2018-03-28 23:50:06 UTC
Last updated 2018-05-03 20:38:14 UTC

A Better Fall Formal

Twilight Sparkle, Spike, FlutterShy, Pinkie Pie, Rarity Belle, Rainbow Dash, AppleJack, Jonathan Claw(me), Michael Bakar or Skurge, Saivon or Razor Rey, and Luke Reese or Lukaryonyx, were going to the other world for something that only Twilight and Starlight only knows.

"So, why are we going to the human world, looking like this, Twilight?" Rainbow Dash asked while having her left hoof which was encompassed in a long red glove on her left side of her chest. She also had a red gown on, too.

In front of her was Twilight and I, with me combing her mane to her right side to look like it did from the end of Magical Mystery Cure. She worn an evening gown to as well as the others, but black. Even Starlight Glimmer was wearing the same gown and white evening gloves. Applejack was walking toward to Twilight's left. She worn evening gloves that were colored grey and her gown was colored brown, normal brown that is dark. She still had her hat on.

FlutterShy was engulfed in a light shade of a pink gown with two roses in her mane that was from "Green Isn't Your Favorite Color." She also has long dark pink evening gloves with light shaded pink pearls on her wrists.

Rarity was wearing black evening gloves with a thin golden bracelet with three blue sapphire gems embedded within them on the top of her wrist. Her gown, just like Twilight and Starlight's dresses, she too don a black evening gown. Around her neck, was a golden Egyptian-like necklace.

Pinkie Pie had long evening gloves that were colored yellow. She worn socks that pass through her knees and were colored white. Her evening gown was colored orange, like orange sherbet.

Spike was in a black tuxedo with black shorts since the pants wouldn't be able to fit. He also had his hat from "Canterlot Wedding Part 2."

"Ok, I'll tell you," Twilight said as Rex (Jonathan Claw), was still combing her hair. "I got a letter from Sunset that me and Starlight were invited and that we could bring some friends with us. She even said that we could bring you as well and she said "The more the merrier." So I decided to also bring Spike as well. In his dog form, that is," she said with her right eyebrow up. Then, I was done. But, I didn't use that blue brush, just the claws from my right hand. "You were using your claws weren't you, Rex?" she asked as she turned her eyebrows down from boast buffers when arguing with Spike about using her magic. And was looking at Rex, as well.

" come on, baby girl, you know you have my tru-" was all Rex could say until he was interrupted by his marefriend.

"Your trust, I know, Rexy-poo," she said as she closed her eyes. Then, she opened them when I placed my right hand on her shoulder.

"And?" I said as I spoke into her right ear.

"*Sighs* And your love as well, Johnny," she said as she smirked and looked at me. Then, moved her legs up, turned to her right and in front of me and placed her right hoof on my left chest peck and her left hoof curved towards her. Then, she looked into my eyes, then I, looked into hers. Then, I moved forward and she did too slowly. Then, finally, we kissed.

"*Sighs* Love, a most joyful moment," FlutterShy said as she had her left hoof on her cheek.

"Blecch! Love! Ewww!" Rainbow shouted while pulling her head back and then looking to her right with her eyes closed.

"Rainbow, are ya sayin' that you aren't in love with Michael now, are ya?" Applejack teased as she used her right elbow and hit her softly once.

"What?! Of course I do! It's just.... Shut up, AJ," she said as she looked to AJ and then back to her right. Also, classic Snotlout moment.

"Hey, Dashie, you know you can't say shut up to your friends or me and my friends," Skurge said as he walked to the rainbow maned pegasus, and pointed his left finger to her chest, and then put it on her chin.

"I know and you know how hard it is to not say it," she replied.
"That's ok, and I still love you, Dash."
"And so do I, Michael."

Then, they kissed.

Twilight had started gasping. "*Gasping* I totally forgot about something that is very important!" Twilight shouted as she looked to my right leg.

"What's wrong, Twily?!" I shouted while asking her.

"Sunset doesn't know, *gulp* that I'm now... *gasping* A WEREPONY!" Twilight yelled into my face as she had her hooves.

"Woah there, Twilight!" I said as I put my hands on her faces, making her pucker her lips. "If she gets onto you about that, then we will both tell her, together. You know I have your back, right?" I asked.

A tear came running down her left cheek as she smiled with her puckered lips. Then, she blinked. "I'm so happy to have you as my boyfriend."

Then, I used my right thumb retracted my claw back into my finger as I turned back into my human form. "Good to know that I have a beautiful girlfriend like you, Twilight," Jonathan Claw said. And then, they both kissed again.

Suddenly, a brown wolf head came into view. It was Razor Rey.

"Hey guys! You ready to-" he was about to finish until he was interrupted by a light blue werewolf head popping over him. He's light blue, not sky blue like Skurge.

"Ready to par-tay!" Lukaryonyx said cheerfully.

"Saivon and Luke, good to see you two back. And yes, we're ready to party," I said while I had my left arm on Twilight's shoulder and she looked at me when I mentioned me, her, and our friends.

"Okay, first of all, I was going to say that, Luke," Razor said while looking up to him. Then, turned to his right. "And second of all, what are you standing on?"

The camera view shows the light blue werewolf then rolls down onto his legs and to Razor's butt. They also had black tuxedos.

The Portal

April 1st, Sunday, 2018, in the afternoon...

In the room with the mirror, Twilight, Starlight, the rest of the Mane6, Sunburst, Trixie, Jonathan Claw, Michael Bakar, Savion Rey, and Luke Reece, were waiting for Spike and Ember.

"Where is that dragon? Doesn't he know that we have to go to the school for three months?" Rainbow asked as she held her left hoof up in the air.

"Don't worry. I think he is just getting his and Ember's stuff ready, right?" Pinkie pie questions while on RD's left side.

"I hope so. On my first trip to the other world, Spike came with me to protect me, even if he broke a promise to Celestia to do so. Second time, he asked me, well, I will ask him about that later. But, he came to me and my Canterlot High School friend's rescue when Adagio Dazzle manipulated Trixie along with her sisters to try and get rid of us," Twilight Sparkle said.

"Wait! Why would my human counterpart do that?! I might've been boastful during my first time in ponyville, and evil during my second time here, but I don't kill ponies. It is wrong to even think of doing something like that," Trixie said as she held her hat in her left hoof.

"Actually, she didn't try to kill us. She was just trapping us under the stage when she told one of her associates to pull the lever. I can't believe we were standing on a trap door of all places!" Twilight Sparkle said as she held her left hoof on her chest. The left side of course.

"We're coming!" Spike shouted as he pulled Ember in in with his left hand holding her right. Ember was wearing a purple gown with what seems like her armor from the "Gauntlet of Fire," was on her torso. It even had a long tie attached to it. Her armor also had shoulder guards. The brooch on her neck had three red oval shaped fire rubies. She even had a golden ring on her left horn. Finally, Ember was wearing beautiful purple evening gloves.

"Ok, now it's time to perform the spell," Twilight said. After she done that she performed it on her friends. Well, actually it was the necklaces of gold that they were wearing. "Ok, with these necklaces we will be able to turn into ponies or dragons if we put them on. Jonathan, you and your friends are Animaguses, so you can just turn into a human or a lycanthrope. I just hope that my were-animal instincts don't get the best of me," she said with worry.

"Don't worry, Twily, I will be there by your side," Jonathan said as he walked over to her left side and placed his right hand on her back.

First, Twilight went through the portal. After her, Starlight and then Sunburst along with Trixie. Next, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. After them, Applejack and Rainbow, and Rarity. Next was Luke, then Savion, and then Mike. I was going in, but first, I look at my left towards Spike and Ember. I nodded once to tell them to tell the other members of the Extreme Squad.

Also, Sunburst was also wearing a black tux, like a certain dragon was wearing. With a lavender rose on the left side of his chest.

Author's Note

I will continue later on tomorrow.

The Other Side Part 2 (Another Short One)

"Sooo Sunset, where's Princess Twilight and Starlight Glimmer?" Sci-Twi questions one of her best friends on her left. She was wearing the same dress from the Crystal Gala in the caves at Camp Everfree. But this time, she wondered if Rarity was coming with her gloves from her former heroine costume from Camp Everfree. Sunset worn the same fingerless gloves from Forgotten Friendship.

The ending was in Forgotten Friendship was better. -Flameboy

And she was wearing the same dress like Twilight's. But, her own version of her dress from the Crystal Gala. Pinkie Pie sat on Twilight's right, and she worn the same dress from the Crystal Gala, too. Ok, they all had their dresses from Camp Everfree.

Rainbow Dash sat on Sunset's left as well as AppleJack sat on RD's left. Just like before, they too worn the same dresses, but there has been changes. Rainbow was wearing her purple fingerless evening gloves from the first Fall Formal. AppleJack was wearing her white scarf from the first Fall Formal as well as wearing her hat with a yellow-green line and red rose on it.

"I don't know Twilight, but I wonder what's taking them so long, though?" Sunset asked herself with her left finger and thumb holding her chin.

"I hope they aren't in trouble," FlutterShy said with her right hand and left hand grasping together. She worn the same dress from the Fall Formal. She was sitting on Pinkie's right side. Then, all of them started looking at the right side and saw a white limousine coming in. It parked behind the statue aka the portal to Equestria, on the left side. From the left side, at the back of the limo, a door opened, and a left leg came out along with a right leg. Their feet were covered in golden shoes, and what looked like a pair of four fingers came out of the car. The reader's view on the back of the car, showing the left side. A blue covered right hand came out and landed on the top of the door. Then, a head came out. It was Rarity. "I'm so sorry for being late, my friends. I just had to get the gloves finished. See," Rarity said after she reached her friends, and showed them the box with both her hands. She ran right leg first and then her left leg BTW. While running, she was holding a black, rectangular box under her left armpit. She was wearing her costume from the fight with Wallflower Blush. "Oh! And I had to get my dress ready and put on as well, too. See!" Rarity said as she held her right arm out still while holding the box and gestured herself with her left hand straight to the left of her. "Here you go, Twilight, darling," she said while using her left hand to open the box.

"Thanks for all your hard work, Rarity," Twilight said as she grabbed her gloves with her right hand out of the box. And then, she saw one of her gloves have an "R" on the top of the wrist part.

"You're welcome, dear," Rarity said with her left waving once to her friend. "Oh! And those gloves have an "R" and an "L" to tell you which arm you need to put your gloves on," she said as she pointed with her same hand with her finger.

"Wow, thanks!" Twilight said with excitement after looking at her gloves.

She pulled her left glove on with her right. Then, when she pulled her right glove past the elbow she actually stopped. And she looked at the portal. Everyone started looking at her and then to the portal as a bright light of white was glowing. They heard a feminine voice coming from the portal. They saw Starlight Glimmer come out with the palm of her hands showing. They saw her land on the ground on her knees and then her hands. She puts her right hand on her forehead. "Wow, so that's how Twilight feels when coming through the portal," she said as she held her hand on her forehead still with her eyes closed.

"Hey, Starlight Glimmer!" Sunset Shimmer said while raising her right hand over her head to the left side of her head.

"Oh! Hello, Sunset Shimmer! Hi girls! It is so good to see you all again!" Starlight yelled out to Sunset and then the girls. And by girls, by looking at Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy. And by all, by looking at Rainbow, Applejack, and Rarity. Spike of course was being held on top of Fluttershy's left arm.

While Starlight was saying her third sentence, Sunset placed her magical book on the right side of her on the stair step she sat on. With her right hand holding the spine of the book at the bottom. Then she went up to her and bended a little with her left knee higher and closer to Starlight's right shoulder. Then, they heard multiple voices and Sunset looks behind Starlight and sees the portal glowing again. Starlight looks behind herself of course. Then, Sunburst, Fluttershy, pinkie pie, rarity, Applejack, Trixie, Twilight Sparkle, Jonathan Claw, Michael Bakar, Saivon Rey, and Luke Reese, had all came out of the portal. Landed on the ground on top of each other.

"Hello, my Canterlot high School friends!" Princess Twilight Sparkle said as she held her right hand into the air and waved it once to the right and then the left.

"Princess Twilight!" The Rainbooms who knew her shouted.

Everyone who knew Princess Twilight ran up to her like in Rainbow Rocks. Sunset hugging Twilight, Rainbow hugging Sunset, and Fluttershy hugging Rainbow. Applejack hugging Twilight, Pinkie Pie hugging Applejack, and Rarity hugging Pinkie Pie.

Before the Fall Formal Part 1

"Wow, Princess Twilight, you look amazing," Scitwi said.

"Thanks. And the same goes for you and your friends," Twilight Sparkle said as she acknowledges her and points to her counterpart and her counterpart's friends. Rarity, loving how her friend from Equestria is dressed with grace; however, sees something behind the princess of friendship.

" Princess Twilight, even though you are dressed with grace, but, if I may ask, who are these boys? Human Rarity questions with her left finger pointing at four boys. "They simply look handsome and divine," she said as she puts her right hand on her heart.

"Oh, those guys?" Twilight says with her left thumb pointing behind her as well as her head turning to the left. She was pointing at Jonathan Claw, who was on Michael Bakar's right and Rey's left side. Luke was on Rey's right side. Then, she turned to the right to her Canterlot high school friends. "That's Jonathan Claw," she said as she showed her the palm of her left hand. Jonathan Claw also pulled his right hand up to to say hi without waving it. "Michael Bakar," she continued and MB put his left hand on his forehead and took it off to salute the girls. "Saivon Rey," she said once again and the boy with the hairline stood up in the same position, and moved his head up once. He moved it up and back down with a smirk on the left side of his mouth. "And Luke Reese," she said finally.

"Hello. Oh! My last name is like Reese's Puffs," Luke said as he put his left hand on the right side of his face.

"Oh my, what lovely names you four have," Human Rarity said as she held her chin with her left hand. And was using her right hand to hold her left elbow.

"Thanks,-" JC said and then stood still, yet bent his back. "-Miss Rarity," he finished as he pulled his right arm to his left side and his left arm out. Like straight out into a bow. Next, he still bowed but lifted his head. "And I must say that dress really suits you," he said with his right eyebrow up.

"Ooh, such a gentleman you are, as well as being a charmer," Rarity said with her hand now off her chin and hovering over her lips. As well as a wave from her left hand, too after saying "charmer." Her right hand still holding her elbow, of course. "And judging by how you know my name, it seems that Twilight has told you a lot about us, I presume?" Rarity said as she pointed at the boy with her left finger.

"Well, I had to tell him of me and Spike's adventures in this world," Twilight said as she held her left hand out. Her right arm hanging down on her right side, of course.

Then, the princess looks from Rarity to her counterpart, to Starlight, and finally to Sunset Shimmer.

"Oh yeah, that's right. Where is Spike? I thought you were bringing him over, too?" She says as she put her left hand on her hip. Her right finger on her chin.

"Oh, I was, but I told him to wait until we got through the portal. Then, he and Ember will come through when I tell him to. But I don't have anything to write on to send to him," she said as she put her right hand on her left upper arm. And looks down to her left. Then, she shot her head back up with her mouth in the form of an o. "Sunset, do you still have that book that looks like mine back in Equestria?" Twilight started asking with her right finger.

"Yes, because I always carry it with me to anywhere I go," she said with her left finger pointing up in the air. Next, Sunset turned to her right and moved her left leg and then her right and went back to the stairs. She made it to the stairs, unzipped her bookbag from the right to the left with hand. Grabbed the book with her right hand, turned to the left side of her, and went back to the others. When she reached her friend/teacher, she opened it up. She held the book with her right hand under it and opened it with her left finger and skipped a few pages. After skimming through the pages, Sunset found a blank page and gave it to Twilight with right her hand.

Rarity, with her right hand, gave Twilight a dark blue pen, while her left hand was on her hip. Twilight, holding the book with her left hand, reached out and took Rarity's pen and started to write. Camera view on her right hand as she went from top to bottom. Right and up as she curved to the left and made a D.

Back in Equestria...

"Spike, how much longer are we going to wait until Twilight gives us the symbol?" Barry asked. He was wearing white pants with golden chain a golden five-pointed star danglin outside the left pocket. His white jacket had a red rose on the left side. Under his jacket was a dark blue vest and under that a green tuxedo shirt. "You know that Trixie would be upset with me if I didn't get to dance with her."

Before the Fall Formal Part 2

"Don't worry, Barry, she will give us the signal," Spike said to Barry while he was on Ember's right side. Barry was on her left side. "Well, actually, she probably forgot about you and actually said that she would send the signal to me, for me and Ember only. As well you, of course, Barry."

"So, let me get this straight: Twilight said that only you, Ember, and Barry, could go?To this "Fall Formal," without us knowing?" Garble questioned as he used his right hand and quoted the words "Fall" and "Formal" while his fingers twice.

"Well Garble, why do you think I told you to meet me and Ember at the portal while bringing the rest of our squad?" Spike, the leader of the Extreme Squad, questioned his brother.

"*Points to the ceiling*...*right index finger bending down*...*puts his finger on his chin* Huh, that would explain it, like why we're all here, of course," Garble said with his right finger on his chin still, and his left hand gesturing to the others on his left by starting at the word "why."

"Exactly. I also had Discord enchant these necklaces. So that way we can take them off and become our normal selves once again," he said as he held his with his right palm.

Ok, before we go on with the story, I have to tell you guys that I forgotten about putting Garble's attire after his lines. So, I will go over him as well as the others in an orderly fashion. I mean, 'cuz I can't pronounce some words correctly if an s sound comes after a th sound. Especially with g, b, c that sounds like an s, sh, or f or ph. Don't judge me, it is really hard to say some words. -FLAMEBOY.

We already know that Spike, Discord, and Storm, are already filed with their attire.
So, let's start off, with Garble.

Garble was wearing a black jacket like his brother. He worn black pants like his brother. Wearing a black hat like his brother. We know that Garble has a sail for a mane, but I realized that maybe its only for swimming or to keep cool. So, like Spike, he has his orange mane tied into a ponytail. He worn a white tux with a yellow vest.

No.2: Fume, or Spear.

Fume was wearing a bright red shirt, short black fingerless gloves, and orange pants along with a green fedora. He also worn a grey (Light grey) jacket.

3 is Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

Fizzlepop Berrytwist, just like Twilight Sparkle, Starlight Glimmer, Trixie and Ember, she also worn a black evening dress. But on her left backhoof, was a normal yet darker shade of gray colored thigh high, with a yellow Lightning Bolt. The bolt was going down to the right and then went down to the left a little, and stopped when it reached the front of her leg. Same goes with her right leg, but was covered inside the dress. She was wearing extra long black evening gloves that reached her armpits. She had a yellow belt with a red rose on the left side of the waist part. She worn black slippers. She worn a choker with a yellow Lightning Bolt that looks like Rainbow's. The choker was not tight. She also had a yellow Lightning Bolt earring on the bottom of her left ear.

She was also Storm's girlfriend, even after she got to know him better.

The Other Side Part 1 (Short)

Spike and Ember, the King and Queen of the dragons, were ready. Spike looks to the left side of him while Ember looks to the right side of her. "Okay, Discord! Coast is clear! You and the gang can come in now!" Spike shouted as he held his left hand to his face.

Discord came in by teleporting him and his twin brother Storm. Discord had his costume on from the series of The Mask. All orange, too.

Storm King,-

You know what, guys and gals? If you want, I can just call the storm king "Storm" rather than his full name. You know what? I'll do just that. -FLAMEBOY

Storm had the same thing that his brother was wearing, but it was colored yellow since he's part monkey, baboon, and proboscis monkey, too. Like they love bananas.

"Ohhh, this is gonna be good," Discord said as he held his lion paw in the air and snapped his middle finger and his thumb together. And poofed up a necklace that looks like the one that the Mane6 were wearing along with Starlight Glimmer, Trixie and Sunburst.

...........

See the next chapter after I get it done.

Fall Formal

Ok, back to the outfits for the Extreme Squad.

Iron Will was wearing black pants and a black jacket and a white tux.

The others worn the same things.

Belcher, however, was wearing the same dress like the other girls. It was colored a light shade of green (or yellow green), even her long evening gloves were green. Well, the gloves were really colored a darker shade of green, even her thigh highs were colored green, dark green of course. She was wearing a black belt with a yellow belt buckle. There were no arm straps for her dress. She worn a yellow choker.

She was also wearing a pink wristband with a red corsage on her left wrist while she worn another one on her right. The one on the right was just a pink wristband with no corsage.

Everydragon doesn't wear shoes of course.

5 is Smolder.

Like Fizzlepop Berrytwist and Belcher, Smolder wears a bright red evening dress that showed her left leg. She was also wearing bright red thigh high socks, and bright red evening gloves.

Since we know that Smolder's dress color is bright red, I will just type in red only. -FLAMEBOY

She had a red choker with three emeralds on the right, left, and front side. This dress also covers her panties and bra, which of course are part of her pajamas. Even with a red tailsock. The tailsock is also used for her pajamas. She also has one golden yellow wristband on each arm. They were on her wrists, of course.

Creature Number 6: Clump the dragon.

I know I said that the others were like Iron Will, but, what the heck, let's go with their attires.

Clump was wearing a full on purple jacket with a red vest and Light blue tux. He also had black pants. He also worn a black bowler hat.

Grubber worn what Spike worn when he was at Shining Armor's wedding. No top hat.

He wears pants with his suit.

Now Number 13, is Silverstream.

She was wearing what the others were wearing, of course. But this time, she was wearing a golden yellow-and-orange evening dress. More on the yellow side and less on the orange side. And her dress, only shows her right leg actually. Well, her right backhoof, mostly. Her claws were covered in yellow-orange evening gloves that, yes, are very long. Since Silverstream is part "pony", she has slippers that are fully colored orange. Dark Orange to be precise. Her choker was colored golden yellow, and was wearing a necklace that was tied around a piece of the Pearl of Transformation.

Yona's turn!

Yona didn't actually wear a dress like the others were wearing, but had a dress on, none the less. With her robes off, she was wearing a white evening dress, but with no gloves at all. She was wearing a light brown belt that had her robes and other essentials. That was all for Yona.

I will get to the rest later on in the next chapter.

Actually, this will be the last chapter for this story, until part 2 of this story.