spiral hidden clop

by burning-ruin-666

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Romance
Length: 1900

spiral, asome story got action, nice reverance, but a lack in clop, what happent???

trix and twi got interupted… FOR TEN TIMES!!!

what happent?
there nocking booths thats what happent….

related info:
story: spiral
rate: teen
me: screw that
rate: MATURE!!!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-25 06:44:02 UTC

after the taveren

When Trixie walked out of the tavern followed by twilight and a loud crowd whistling and cheering them out, twilight could not help herself by letting her eyes follow the steps of Trixie’s hooves, which were leafing soft hooves prints in the ground.

Realizing what power she had gotten over the years of hard training, the mussels she must have, to remain that long in an army who depends on her fine control of her magic.

Her eyes followed from the hooves, up to her ankle over to the well trained cannon and stopped at the smooth snapping potion of her hocks… *a soft blush started to appear*

‘’Twilight?’’ asked Trixie, what brought twilight out of her trance and saw the question face with a blush on her own…

‘’Ow no!’’ she had been asking me something?!

I can’t let her know that I was eyeing her like that could I?

Trixie cocking her head to the side a bit and was casted her eyes down like she offended her or something.

This went not on notices by twilight

‘’Quick say something’’

Uhm… yeah sure, I guess?

Trixie’s face formed a smile, and was now slowly skipping.

Ppffeeww, that was to close for comfort.

But at least she’s happy.

Twilight took a short trod to keep up with Trixie who still was skipping just lightly.

Every time Trixie came in a down ward motion, she saw the stifle tens up and strain when she launching herself back up.

Her flank followed it the other way around in a perfect cycle.

‘’like what you see?’’  (Name stallion/mare) whispered loud enough for twilight to snap out of the well observing trance ones again.

Twilight turned crimson red.

‘’what…no! I was- I just…uhm… a…admire her mane!’’

‘’hhhmm?’’ (Name stallion/mare*) gave her a devilish grin. ’’Tell me about it ’’

‘’well… it’s always nice combed, and well maintained.’’

‘’uhhu, keep going.’’

‘’And uhm… it’s giving a nice silver shimmer in the moon’’… giving it a… magical glow…and… sways softly around in the wind… the mane combed flat in her crest… letting you glimpse… at het slender, soft, nec-

‘’pfffhehe, yeah rite! You’ll totally tap that!’’

‘’took you long enou-WOOAAAHH!!

(Name stallion/mare*) landed trough a tent, being tossed by a certain purple glow.

‘’WHATS THAT GOOD FOR!’’

‘’SHEES what is it with every pony!’’

‘’talking that way about a mare…MY MARERIEND!!’’

‘’So Trixie has a slender soft looking neck…’’

Eyes trailing down wards, where her mane lays over her withers, a sturdy back with a good set of mussels beside her flowing spine.

A nice full hip that slowly jiggled by every step she took, the dock of her tail swayed soft to the left and right making the tail sway as a silver river flowing down to the tip of her tail… and every time the tail swayed a side twilight got a glimpse of her...

‘’WOAH!’’

‘’Bad thought, bad thought’’

‘’We just kissed I can’t push it that fast!’’

‘’nor do I think am quite ready for that’’

‘’sure I had me fair share at My Fun Time’’ never got half way the scroll though…

‘’and me likening a mare in that way did not occur just the moment in the tavern’’

With a small trod and she walked beside Trixie, who was now leaning in on twilight, with twilight answering it by leaning in to Trixie.

The lavender and azure blue fur bristle to getter and sharing the heat in the chilling wind of the night, a nuzzle was given, feeling the fur bristle against their noses and getting a sent from there lovers, answered by a peck on the cheek, tasting the warmth of the faces, as a kiss in return, their lips toughing another tenderly waiting for an invitation for entry. A taunting whistle was heard behind them, a brief flash of two stallions diving in a bush could be seen out off the corner of their eyes.

‘’Yeah you better hide, little colts, its none of your business!’’ Trixie yelled, giving a short grunt and threw a physical wall of magic in to the bush knocking the two stallions off their hooves and seeing them running of in trough the camp tents.

‘’I tell yah Angledust, no way twilight going to let Trixie have her way with her, she is courting Trixie!’’

‘’Ow come on Blaze! You saw is yourself, Trixie totally got the upper hoof’’

‘’Well only one way to find out! Want to make a bed? ’’

‘’Sure! How about you eat the new muffin I and pinkie have made, I assure you, it’s to die for.’’

*gulp* ‘’Oke but what if I win?’’

‘’HA! I let you live how’s that sounds Blaze’’

‘’…’’

Up on reaching the camp where Twilight and her friends had their tents set up, seeing Dane had entering his tent and only Aqua remained by the camp fire.

Trixie who opened the flap of her tent, to let twilight in.

A train of thoughts rushed true Twilight’s head, up seeing the invitation in her tent

‘’Ow no! is she- no no no nonono… she just want to talk in privet probably, but why didn’t she do it when we were walking… maybe she knew those stallion’s where eavesdropping on us and just wanted to be sure, Yeah! That must be it! Just talking heh hehe he- right? RIGHT?!

Slowly twilight entered the tent and saw a sleeping bag some saddle bags and a very small desk.

Twilight took a place sitting on the sleeping back, which lay on the ground.

Trixie slowly walked over toward her with a sly smile on her face.

She took a place in front of twilight and started to lean in and closing her eyes…

’’oke twilight she just wants to kiss, no talking just kissing.’’

As she closed her eyes and leaning forward to meet the lips of Trixie.

Feeling the soft breathing on her lips and the soft lips tenderly pressing against that of hers, Trixie who saw it as signal leaned in on twilight to apply the pressure on their lips, a few minutes passes when the azure pony let her tongue slip between her lips and met the lavender lips.

Eyes shot open but complained by letting her tongue explorer that of hers, a soft moan came from the azure pony who was now swirling around that of the lavender one.

Twilight who now felt the teasing way of how Trixie was playing with her tongue started to fight back, by sliding her tongue across that of the azure one, she was to let out gasp but turned into a soft moan, enjoying the moment for what fled for hours ended when the azure pulled of off her lavender partner, both gasping for the long needed air a string of saliva connected between the mares who were looking deeply in eat others lavenders eyes.

The azure pony brought her hoof behind the lavenders head and places the other hoof on her cheek.

Bringing the lavender pony back to her lips and leaned over her some more, who was tilting over into her back, the lavender pony swung her frond legs over the shoulders of her lover to prevent falling down, yet pulling the azure one down with her.

*STUD*

The lavender eyes where shot open and let out a high pitched cry and where now looking in that of the azure one, folding all four of her legs up and was berating in a unregularly beat

‘’ow no! Is she really going to- *gulp* do that!’’

Tears where starting to well in the corner of the lavender one yes, and unwilling let out a soft sob.

The azure pony saw the watery eyes; a shocked look exposed her face if she thought that she had hurt her lover.

Leaning in to give her a kiss, but soon stopped when she saw a whimpering mare, shaking underneath her.

Tears now flowed out of the lavender’s eyes and shooting looks between the two eyes of the azure one, a pained expression was clearly readable on her face.

‘’I’m sorry twilight! I didn’t mean to hurt you. Never!’’

As she took a few passes back now crying on herself.

‘’I tough you wanted this when I asked you early on?’’

The eyes of the lavender one shot open as big as saucers.

*gasp* ‘’ she probable did ask, and I said sure’’

Feeling a pang of guild, seeing Trixie cry.

Trixie was about to run away again but a hoof kept her from going, confused she looked up to the lavender pony who were pulling the azure pony in for a hug.

‘’No- she said, am sorry, I should just have told you this, but I think not ready or at least afraid of it.’’

‘’I never been in a relation and it’s all new for me, and this feeling I’m getting it’s… its very confusing.’’

Trixie pulled herself away, looking deep in her eyes, ‘’twilight you should never do something if you’re not sure about it, I can wait for you if you’re not ready bu—‘’

The azure pony was cut off by a lavender hoof pressing into her lips.

A soft watery smile looks in her eyes, ‘’I tough it went to fast and that I weren’t ready for it.

‘’But when you said that you would never hurt me… well not purposely anyhow.’’ A soft giggle came from her lips with the azure pony joined in on.

‘’I knew that I needed this… what I mean is: I love you, I need you, I need you to share this moment with me..I...I just...if you...wou—‘’

The lavender pony was cut off by the lips of the azure pony that had launched herself in to the lavender mare, falling back to the ground with a stud…

‘’OW FOR THE LOVE OF--- COULD YOU STOP EATING EATOTHERS FACES!!’’

‘’not even diamond dogs are that savage!’’ yelled Dane

The kiss was broken by Trixie who yelled back; ‘’screw you Dane!! Go lick you self, flea bag!! ‘’

Dane not missing a beat, ‘’a three some huh! I’m in!

Both mares eyes deflated to little pin pricks when the flap of the tent where lifted up, but before he had the change to take a peak, a purple and azure aura clobber him mutable times in the head before falling unconscious, with a goofy grin plaster on his face.

Aqua who had heard it all happening, looks over her book and give a long sigh, pulled Dane from the ground with a blue aura and tossed him in to his tent, who on impact collapsed, shrugged ‘’nah good enough’’ she said.

A/N: >.> first time doing a clop… I mean… nothing happened so far but I needed ed2481, to let me know if the characters out of the story of spiral where correct… been 3 weeks now if been waiting tough…sssoooooo…

I’m letting you guy's decide who got sent in to a tent by twilight… and to let me know if any character fall out of uhm, character?

I’m writing more, and I know that there are some typos, still fixing that…

Its about chapter 11

Check the reactions for my suggestions and instead of ponies shouting and laughing  to hard I made Dane make the first interruption… 9 left and already more than 1700 words!!