My Little Entities: New World

by Shazam 27

Visit to Canterlot

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It was a nice day at the Crystal Empire. The Crystal Ponies went on their days enjoying what they love doing best. Then a loud roar fill the sky scare some of the birds that found their way to the empire. At first the crystal ponies stop what they're doing and look around, before hearing that roar was coming from the castle. They guess that roar came from their new protector and student of Princess Cadance, Predator. Predator had a reason to be angry. Cadance got a note from Twilight telling her about Parallax. Predator couldn't believe he found his way to this peaceful world.

"Predator? Is something wrong?" Cadance asked hoping Predator doesn't change back to her other form.

"I afraid there is. I know who Parallax is. He somepony you can not trust! He uses your worst fears against you. It what he lives for. How in the Great Life Entity he he find his way here?!" Predator shouted after explaining.

"The Great Life Entity?" Shining Armor asked.

"Someone important in my life." Predator said.

"It strange. Hearing about a Changeling feeding on fear." Cadance said.

"What is a Changeling?" Predator asked.

Before Cadance could explain another letter appear in front of her with Celestia's cutie mark on it. Cadance open the letter and read it.

"It appear that Aunt Tia and Luna wants to meet me and Predator." Cadance spoke up.

"Celestia and Luna huh? I haven't seen them since they set me in this direction." Predator said thinking.

"Wait, you know the Princesses?" Shining asked.

"Err...Yeah, I might them during my travels. I didn't know they were sisters. Their love was strong. It fact like it was repair." Predator said.

"It a long story. But we must go." Cadance said thinking maybe she can tell Predator about Luna's past and how she felt sibling love.


Deep in the catacombs of the mountains, far from the prying eyes of the Royal Guards and Elements of Harmony Bearers was a land know as the Changeling Kingdom. Queen Chrysalis was still about about the day her plans was foiled by Twilight Sparkle and Princess Cadance. In fact her spies reported that Twilight Sparkle was now a princess herself. Chrysalis just growl as she thought about the two ponies that stop her. She was trying to come up with a way she could defeated the two of them as well as stop all the ponies that could get in her way. As she thought about a plan, a Changeling spy flew, shivering.

"What is your report?" Chrysalis asked.

"I have found that Princess Cadance has been recall to Canterlot to met with the Princesses." It said with a hiss.

"I see. Anything else?" Chrysalis thinking he was going to say that's all.

"There is one report I think you should know." It said.

Chrysalis hid her surprise.

"I have discover that Cadance has a student of her own. It a unicorn mare of sixteen, with a dark pink coat. Her long mane and tail were pink, with red highlights. Her eyes were a brilliant violet color; it was as if beauty and ferocity were mixed together within those eyes. Her cutie mark was that of an eight pointed star. She appear to have the same magic as Princess Cadance." It said.

Now that was a shock to Chrysalis. She knew it was rare to hear about ponies with the same talent but, not uncommon. A unicorn mare with the same power as Candace? This sound like something she needs to see for herself.

"Very well. Go and harm yourself and rest. I'll take it from here." She order.

The Changeling bow and left. Chrysalis thought some more on what she heard. Could this unicorn save her kind? She had to find out and that means going back to the one place she had fail.


Predator was quiet for the rest of the trip. Cadance had explain why Celestia and Luna's love was repair. She thought they could be lovers, but learn that they were siblings. Predator did feeling sorry for what happen to Luna. Feeling no love for her starry night 1,000 years ago. Celestia had lost the love of a sibling. When Twilight Sparkle, Cadance's sister-in-law, and her friends free Luna from the evil in her heart the two Princesses had reunite and rule together since.

"Predator? Are you okay?" Cadance asked.

"Yes, I'm fine. I heard of lost love ones before, but I didn't know about that with Princess Luna." She said.

"It was a sad day when Aunt Tia has banish Aunt Luna to moon. But they are together again." Cadance smile.

"Yeah, by the way. We need a new name for me. While the Crystal Ponies doesn't mind my name, I got the feeling Predator doesn't roll off the tongue in Canterlot." Predator spoke up.

"Agree. But what can we call you outside of the Crystal Empire?" Cadance asked.

"How about Star Sapphire? It name I heard long ago." Predator said, not telling Cadance the real reason for the name.

"Sounds...lovely." Cadance said, blushing a little.

Predator smile and before long the train had stop at Canterlot station. The two love talent mares stop out and was greeted by Celestia and Luna who was waiting for them.

"Aunt Tia, Aunt Luna." Cadance said and hug them.

"It good to see you too Cadance." Luna said.

"And who is this?" Celestia said smiling at Predator.

"My name is Star Sapphire. I'm Princess Cadance's student." She answer.

"It nice to see that you have a student of you own Cadance. I'm glad you chose her." Celestia smile.

"Star Sapphire huh? I see." Luna said thinking on the name.

Hearing Luna talk remind Predator what had happen to her 1,000 years ago. She walk up and bow to her.

"Princess Luna, I had heard about your past. I can't said how sorry it is to hear that no one had love for your night and like the darkness turn you into a mare that you didn't need to be." She said before turning to Celestia and bow as well.

"And Princess Celestia, I had learn about the love of a sibling and I'm sorry you lost something like that. I hope you never feel something that again." She added.

Both Celestia and Luna was shock to heard that. They both knew Predator was the entity of love, but hearing it give it apologizes to them surprise them.

"Thanks Star. Hearing something like that from you is very nice to heard." Celestia said smiling once more.

Predator smile back and then nuzzle Cadance lovely. Luna rise an eyebrow as Cadance blush a little.

"It her way of greeting." She said.

"I see. So Star how is your studies coming along?" Celestia asked as she turn to walk to the chariot.

"She has learn much, but I don't know what I'm going to do with her." Cadance spoke up.

"What do you mean?" Luna asked.

"I'm not that bad." Predator counter.

"You barged in on me and Shining Armor!" Cadance yelled.

"Sorry if I sensed an overabundance of love energy coming from your bedroom, I'm drawn to it, to you!" Predator stared out the window. "Plus it seemed as if the two of you were having fun…"

That made all three princesses turn red by blushing. Predator smile, she love to tease Cadance from time to time and making Celestia and Luna blush was a plus too.


Chrysalis had made to Canterlot without noticing thanks to use the idea to mix her form. She had Applejack's mane and tail shape, with Twilight's hair color. Her body was shape like Pinkie's with Rainbow's color. To complete the form she gave herself a horn in case she need use her magic to get out of there. She was also able to give herself a cutie mark that look like Twilight's but the stars were color of a rainbow. She had color her eyes with Fluttershy's color

Chrysalis then began her jaunt about the city. Not knowing where to start looking or even if there was something worth looking for in this forsaken city. She had made it all the way to the even more ritzy part of Canterlot, but was stopped from going any further. Apparently so was everypony.

"What's going on, is there a parade or something?" She asked.

"No, everypony has heard that Princess Cadance had took up a student of her own." A mare told her.

"A student? Do you know who it is?" She asked.

"No, but this is going the first time anypony is going to met her." The mare said.

Chrysalis was curious to who the new student was, maybe it was that unicorn she was told about. Soon the royal chariot had pull up and Chrysalis saw Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Cadance and the unicorn she was told about step out. The four mares step on the stage and Celestia spoke.

"My little ponies, today I have learn that my niece Princess Cadance had took a student of her own. And I would like to all to met her and welcome her to Canterlot with open hooves." Celestia said before letting Cadance step up.

"When I first my student she had fund her way to the Crystal Empire. I saw her looking that the Crystal Heart. She had told me that she specialties in love like me. But she didn't know how there was different kinds of loves, so I decide to help her and took in as my student. I want you all to met, Star Sapphire." Cadance said and Predator step up.

"Hello every one. I'm glad to meet you." Predator smile.

Many stallions was shock at the beauty the mare had. Many others mare had the same look at the stallions while some were jealous at her. Chrysalis on the other hand could feel the love coming from the mare she saw. She could see it, love energy was pouring out of this unknown mare's body like an endless wellspring of power. She knew it wasn't from Cadance, she never emitted love energy, at least not in the volumes that the mare next to her did. It was almost too much; Chrysalis could feel herself sway as if drunk.

She quickly snap out of it. She knew she could let herself get carry away. If she could only get that mare away from the others princesses, she would take her to the hive where they will drain her to become much stronger and then she can get her revenge on the two that stop her. In fact she could take over Equestria with that power.


Celestia, Luna, Cadance, and Predator reach the castle and Celestia turn to Predator.

"So why the new name Predator?" She asked.

Cadance was shock to hear that Celestia had knew of Predator's name.

"I had a feeling that the name Predator was not a idea name for ponies." Predator said.

"A wise choice. Have you told anyone about your true self?" Luna asked.

"Err...I might have turn into my real form at the Crystal Empire." Predator said nervously.

Celestia and Luna with rise eyebrow.

"I might have told Predator how some ponies might see how she greeted the way she does as some ponies see as wrong." Cadance clear up.

"I see. You been learning about different loves right?" Celestia asked Predator.

"Yes, I know there is many loves out there." Predator said.

"But you still have much to learn my student." Cadance said taking a page out of Celestia's book.

Predator just pouted as Cadance laugh. Celestia smile seeing had the two got along well.

"Princesses I'm afraid I have been news." Predator spoke up.

"What is it?" Luna asked.

"It appear my brother Parallax had found his way into your world." Predator said frowning.

"Parallax? How is that possible?" Luna asked in shock.

"I don't know. I have heard that he took on a form of a creature know as a Changeling." She said.

"A Changeling?" Celestia asked.

"Yes, as you know there are seven lights of the Emotional Spectrum. I'm one of the seven, the violet light of love. Parallax is another, the yellow light of fear." Predator explain.

"The Emotional Spectrum? Seven lights?" Cadance asked confuse.

Predator sigh and told Cadance her true origins, how she was created by the first being that learn to love others and how she was born into an entity, who was the reason all love exist. She also told her about the chosen warriors who wield her light know as Star Sapphires and her oath was just a reword of theirs. She also explain that the Great Life Entity was the rest she was now an pony and living here in Equestria. Cadance was shock, a being that was from other world was her student, a being much older then her or her aunts.

"I understand this is a shock my niece. I would have call you and Twilight here if the Great Life Entity hadn't made a surprise visit." Celestia told her.

"I see. Who is the Great Life Entity?" Cadance asked.

"The reason that all life exist and my teacher." Celestia smile.

"TEACHER?!" Cadance and Predator shouted.

"Did you think I became this way by myself?" Celestia smile again.

"The Great Life Entity taught you? I heard of him letting the ones he choose to use his light, but I didn't know he took in a student of his own." Predator said.

"Celestia was a fine student my daughter." A voice said feeling the air.

"Great Life Entity?!" Predator asked in shock.

Yes Predator it is I. I can't come to this world yet, but I can let you all hear me. Princess Cadance, thanks you for taking in Predator. I trust her with you." It said.

"Um...thank you?" Cadance said shock.

"I have also heard that Ion, Adara and Proselyte have found places to stay." Celestia inform the Life Entity.

"I know. I can tell they are doing well. But how did my son Parallax get into your world? I have send him and his brothers into worlds where they can live." He asked.

"I do not know." Celestia said.

"Then if Parallax is here, who can say that Ophidian and Butcher is here too." Predator spoke up growl at the name she say.

"Ophidian and Butcher?" Luna asked.

"The other lights. Ophidian is the orange light of Avarice and Butcher is the red light of rage." Predator said.

"Seven lights...This is a little too much." Cadance said.

"It will get easy in time. However, Predator..." The Life Entity said turning to her.

"You must listen to Cadance, I trust her with you very much." He said.

"Of course, father." Predator said with a nod.

"Good, I must take my leave. Celestia it was good seeing you and Luna again." The Life Entity said.

"It good to see you too, even if it just your voice." Celestia said as the Life Entity voice faded.


Chrysalis had shuck in the castle and started to looking around for the mare she wanted. She stood found her with the Princesses, she need a way to get the mare away from them. She notice that the four was in deep thought.

"If it alright with the rest of you. I like to explore Canterlot a bit." Star spoke up.

"Very well, Cadance would you go with her? Wee need to let Twilight know about this." Celestia said.

"I guess so." Cadance said a little unsure.

"We'll met you later." Luna said and the two sisters walk away.

Chrysalis watch as the mare and Cadance look at each other before Cadance rub her fore left leg with her hoof.

"So what do you want to see?" She asked.

"Everything!" Star said happily.

"How about a trip to my empire?" Chrysalis asked as she step out of the shadows and turn back into her true self.

"Chrysalis?!" Cadance yell.

"You know that thing?" Star asked.

"THING?!" Chrysalis shouted.

"I am the Queen of the Changelings! I came to take you to my hive Star Sapphire. My Changelings wouldloveto met you." Chrysalis said.

"Not a chance Chrysalis! You would be taking my student anywhere!" Cadance yell and ready herself to fight.

"Too bad, because you're both coming with me!" Chrysalis shouted and shot a green beam that caught Cadance off guard.

Cadance was fling to the wall and hit it so hard she was knock out.

"Cadance!" Star yell before turning and growling at Chrysalis.

"Worry about yourself." Chrysalis said before she cover in a green glow.

"What...?" Star asked before feeling her eyelids get heavy.

"A sleep spell. Something even a changeling can cast." Chrysalis smile.

"A Changeling..." Star try to say but fell asleep.

Chrysalis step up and smile.

"Two ponies with the power of love. Twice the amount of food. Today is a good day." Chrysalis laugh and teleport them to her hive.


Author's Note

Oh no! Chrysalis had taking both Cadance and Predator to her hive. How are they going to get out of this one? I hope you like the little surprise I made in this chapter. Princess Celestia was once the student of the Life Entity, I will make a chapter taking about the time Celestia was the Life Entity student. I will return to this idea after I put up the host that Parallax is going for. He not going to over take the host yet. It will take a few try's.

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