Bored today. Decided to do this. Enjoy. P.S. This story sucks.
Love Lust
Chapter I: ...Love Lust...
Twilight's house
4:30 p.m.
As Twilight finished placing the main ingredients into the pot, the liquid inside began to glow. Finally, it stopped.
"Alright, the love potion is done," Twilight said as she placed the liquid into a bottle. She then put a seal on the top and placed it onto a table.
Twilight then wiped the sweat of her forehead and sighed. "That's the last potion for the day...Spike, can you clean this up for me? I'm gonna go take a bath," she yelled to Spike.
"Alright," he responded back. Twilight then headed to the bathroom to get ready for her bath, while Spike began to clean off the mess Twilight made.
He picked up crumpled up papers, broken bottles, and not even noticing the liquid inside it, the love potion.
"Aah!" Spike yelled as a piece of glass pricked his arm.
"How can Twilight even manage to break these things?" He exclaimed to himself as he placed the "garbage" into the trash can outside the house.
Spike then closed the door, went back to his bed, and started to nap once more.
After her bath, Twilight began to dry herself off with a towel, then placed the towel on her head.
"Alright, time to put the potion-" She then gasped when she saw the potion was no longer where she put it.
"...Away?!" She finished as she desperately tried to search for it around the table and around the room.
"Spike!" She yelled to Spike.
"Ugh, what is it now?" Spike said a little annoyed.
"Where is my love potion?" Twilight's eyes were wide with fear.
"Your what now?"
"My love potion! It was here a se-....Oh, Spike! You didn't throw it in the garbage, did you?"
"You mean the garbage I just threw out?" He then pointed out the window as the garbage was picked up by garbage crew.
"Oh, nonononono!" Twilight hurried outside to stop the ponies, but they had already flown off.
Twilight glared at Spike.
"What?" Spike asked innocently.
Twilight then sighed in frustration, and headed back to the counter to start making another potion.
After the crew had dumped the next set of trash into the huge pile of garbage, they headed back out to Ponyville to collect more of what the citizens have thrown out.
Suddenly, in the huge pile of trash pops out a derp eyed pegasus, with bubbles for a cutie mark.
She giggled as she exited the pile, but suddenly, something caught her eyes. Or...at least ONE of them.
A round bottle with pink liquid, lying in the mounds of garbage.
"Ooh!" The Pegasus flew slowly towards the bottle, and grabbed it with her hooves.
"What...is it?" She asked. She opened the bottle and received an amazing smell.
"Ooh! Lemonade!" The pony was just about to take a drink of the lemonade smelling liquid, when she heard a voice yell at her.
"Ditzy Doo!" Ditzy looked to see her boss of the Ponyville mail company standing there.
"Oh! Hi boss!" Ditzy yelled in happiness.
"Where were you, you were supposed to be at work-" Ditzy's boss then spotted the bottle in her hooves.
"What is that?" Her boss asked as he took the bottle from Ditzy. He examined the liquid, and took a sniff of it.
"Lemonade? Well, don't mind if I do." He then hovered the bottle above him, and tilted the bottle so that the liquid went into his mouth.
He only drank 1/4 of the bottle when he started to feel something funny inside of him. His vision blurred, his hearing ceased. Suddenly, he could hear, and see once more. But something about him was different...
"Uhh...Boss?" Ditzy spoke up.
Her boss's eyes were closed. Suddenly, they opened up. They showed love, compassion...and lust.
"Oh, Diiitzyyyy..." He sang to her.
"Y-Yes...?" Ditzy asked confused, but afraid.
"I wanna show you something..." He started creepily walking towards her. He then threw the bottle so far into the air to end up in the path of a certain, cyan colored, rainbow maned pegasus. Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow flinched a bit as the bottle nearly hit her in the face, but luckily, she managed to grab it. She stopped in mid-air, causing the liquid inside it to swoosh around.
"What...is this stuff?" Rainbow asked confused.
She opened the bottle and took a sniff of it.
"Lemonade?" She inspected it for a few more seconds.
"Weelll, I am pretty thirsty." Just then she began to drink the substance. Once the bottle was completely empty, Rainbow threw the bottle to where the Ponyville Dump was.
Suddenly, just like Ditzy's boss, Rainbow began to feel the effects of the potion. Only, it was more effective. Her vision completely blurred, she became extremely dizzy, then quickly, everything went black. She began to fall towards the ground.
Meanwhile, down below, Thunder Ice was walking towards Ponyville, humming a cheerful tune, enjoying the sunshine.
Then, suddenly, something crashed right in front of him. Lots of dust from the impact covered Thunder. He coughed and brushed himself off.
He then gasped at what he saw in front of him.
Rainbow Dash was lying on the ground, unconscious, or worse.
"Rainbow?" Thunder slowly picked her up in his forelegs like a foal. He looked around in the sky, when finally, he spotted Rainbow's cloud home. He opened his wings, and began to fly towards it.
Once he reached the house, he slowly opened the door to reveal Rainbow's living room. The walls, floors, and ceiling were all made of clouds.
Thunder, still holding Rainbow, closed the door and brought Rainbow up to her room. Once he entered her bedroom, he was greeted with pictures of the Wonderbolts. Slowly, he headed over to her bed and gently put her down onto her bed. She sighed and moaned as she laid on the bed.
Thunder then spotted a nearby chair. He sat down on it and waited for Rainbow to wake up.
An hour passes, and the sun began to go down. Thunder checked his watch on his left foreleg. 5:34 p.m. Apparently, Late in the year, Celestia lowers the sun very early.
Suddenly, Rainbow begins to stir. Her eyes begin to slowly open. Thunder trots to the side of the bed and hovers over Rainbow.
"Rainbow?" Thunder asked. Her eyes fluttered as she saw Thunder over her.
"Th...Thunder?" Rainbow asked weakly.
"Are you alright?"
Slowly, Rainbow began to smile. She gently placed a hoof onto Thunder's cheek.
"...I am now." Slowly, Rainbow rose up towards Thunder, and suddenly, their lips connected. Thunder was quite surprised by this, but slowly...he gave in.
While he kissed Rainbow, her lips had a fruity flavor to them. Mangos.
About 10 seconds into the kiss, Rainbow started to moan loudly. She started to breathe harder into the kiss. Finally, about a half a minute later, they broke from the kiss, trying to catch their breath.
After they both caught their breath, Rainbow, by surprise, grabbed Thunder and threw him onto the bed. She then got on top of him and started to kiss him once more.
After they stopped kissing, Rainbow started to kiss Thunder's neck. She then went lower and kissed his chest, then lower and lower until finally, she reached was she was going for. Forcefully, Rainbow grabbed Thunder's stallionhood with her hoof, causing him to gasp loudly and moan.
"You like that?" Rainbow asked seductively. Thunder slowly nodded as Rainbow started stroking him.
Thunder began to moan loudly as Rainbow stroked faster. Her hoof moved up and down quickly on Thunder's member.
After about a minute, Thunder spoke up. "R-Rainbow...I-I'm gonna..." Thunder couldn't finish. His cum squirted out all over Rainbow's face and most of the bed.
Rainbow giggled at the action. She took her hoof off of Thunder's member and began to collect the cum from her face onto her hoof. She then began to slurp it down like a drink.
Thunder felt so tired. He just wanted to sleep right there, but he wasn't finished just yet.
"L-Lay down," Thunder managed to say to Rainbow. She got up on the bed and laid down.
"Now...open your legs."
Rainbow blushed at this, but listened and spread her legs.
Thunder licked his lips at the sight, earning a giggle from Rainbow. He then slowly moved his face down to her already wet marehood. He teased her by gently rubbing his hoof in circles on it. Rainbow gasped and moan.
After about a minute of teasing her, Thunder slowly began to lick her slit, earning another moan.
Then, he finally dug his tongue inside. Rainbow gasped in pleasure as Thunder began to penetrate her with his tongue.
"Th...hhnngg...Thunder..." Rainbow moaned. The pleasure was too great for her. She gently placed her hooves onto Thunder's head and dug him in deeper.
Thunder didn't mind one bit, as he dug his tongue deeper into Dashie, enjoying her moans and cries of pleasure. But, the whole time, he had wondered why she had suddenly loved him. He had been in love with her ever since he came to Ponyville 2 years back, but she never had the same feelings for him. He never even told her about his feelings. Why suddenly now does she feel the same way?
"Thunder...A-Ah!...I....Hah! I...!" Rainbow didn't finish. She let out a scream of pleasure as she reached her climax. She ended up squirting onto Thunder's face. He happily cleaned it off and slurped it like she did with him.
Rainbow was left panting on the bed, trying to catch her breath.
Carefully, Thunder slowly climbed on top of her, his forelegs and hind legs around her.
"You ready for the main course?" He asked. Slowly, Rainbow began to nod.
Thunder's stallionhood was already hard again. He lined it up with her marehood and waited.
"Are you sure you're ready?" He asked again. Rainbow then lifted her head up to his and their lips connected once more.
He knew she was ready.
Slowly, he began to insert his member into Rainbow's marehood, earning a squeak and moan from her. He then finally reached her hymen. Slowly and gently, he began to tear through it, causing her to scream quietly. Once he was fully through, he stopped for a moment when he saw blood coming out of Rainbow's marehood.
He didn't want to continue until she was comfortable. When she finally nodded for him to continue, he slowly started to thrust in and out of her. Rainbow moaned in pain. Soon, the pain was replaced with pleasure as Thunder continued to penetrate her.
"Hah! Hnnng....Mmmmmm...." Rainbow moaned and squirmed as Thunder continued to thrust into her. Thunder made sure not to hurt her.
Finally, after a few minutes, Rainbow felt her climax approaching once more, as well as Thunder.
"T-Thunder...I'm c-cumming..."
"M-Me too, Dashie..."
Thunder then began to thrust faster into her. Finally, when Thunder reached his orgasm, he gently began to kiss Rainbow once more. Finally, with one final thrust, he exploded into Rainbow. Squirt after squirt, Thunder's cum coated Rainbow's walls. At the same moment, Rainbow came too. Her juices exited past Thunder's member and onto the bed.
After their orgasms died down, Thunder and Rainbow were left panting. Slowly, Thunder began to pull out of Rainbow, causing the rest of her juices and a little bit of his cum to drip out of her.
Thunder then laid down next to her. He then gently wrapped his forelegs around her waist and kissed her cheek. She smiled happily.
Soon, she fell asleep. After she fell asleep, Thunder fell into a slumber as well, finally sleeping with the mare of his dreams.
By 7:30 p.m., Thunder was the first to wake up. He woke up to find Rainbow still sleeping, a smile on her face. This caused him to smile. He kissed her cheek once more and got up to look out the window of Rainbow's bedroom. Ponyville was so quiet, but bright at night.
After looking outside for a few minutes, he finally heard sounds. He looked back to the bed to see Rainbow waking up.
"Hey," he said to her. Rainbow rubbed her eyes for a moment before she spotted him.
"Oh. Hey." It was silent for a few moments before she spoke up again.
"L-Listen...about before..."
"It was great, wasn't it?"
"Y-Yeah, but...It didn't really mean anything, right?"
Thunder's smile faded for a moment. "What...What do you mean?"
"Well...like...you didn't really...y'know...develop feelings for me or anything...right?"
On the outside, Thunder started to smile again. On the inside, he was completely heartbroken. The mare he had a crush on for 2 years, that finally had the chance to mate with, didn't even have feelings for him? Not even after what happened?
Thunder tried not to cry, and instead, tried to put on a smile.
"N-No. Of course not," He replied to her. His voice began to crack, although Rainbow didn't seem to notice it.
"Cool." Rainbow smiled back at him.
Thunder then looked at his watch. 7:35 p.m.
"I guess...I guess I better head home then."
"Alright. Seeya tomorrow," Rainbow said to him as he headed for the door. He opened the door and waved to her one final time before exiting her home. Once he reached the front door, he opened his wings and flew off towards his house.
Once he reached his home, he sat down on his living room couch. For hours, he just sat there...and cried.
The Next Morning
8:30 a.m.
Rainbow had slept in her bed with new sheets after the little event from last night. She was enjoying her peaceful slumber when there was a knock at her front door.
He opened her eyes slowly.
"Coming," she mumbled in a quiet voice.
She slowly got up, and stumbled downstairs. The knocker knocked once more at the door.
"I'm coming, I'm coming, don't get your mane in a knot!"
Finally, after stumbling downstairs and through the hallway, she finally reached her front door and opened it. She was surprised to see Thunder standing there.
"Thunder? Why did you wake me up soooo early?" Rainbow complained.
For a moment, there was silence. Thunder looked at the floor for a moment. Suddenly, he leaned quickly towards Rainbow. Their lips then connected.
Normally, Rainbow would've pushed him off, but for some reason, she gave in.
After a few seconds of kissing, Thunder pulled away. His eyes widened. He then blushed and looked away.
"Sorry, Dash."
It was silent again for another few seconds. Then suddenly, Rainbow placed a hoof under Thunder's chin, and made him look up. Then, she leaned in towards him, and once again, their lips connected.
Thunder was a little surprised. Did she finally feel the same way about him? He had to ask.
Their lips pulled apart again.
"Rainbow..." Thunder said before Rainbow placed a hoof on his mouth.
"Thunder...I made a huge mistake last night...I didn't mean to say that...but when I did, I knew you tried your best not to cry."
A tear fell down Rainbow's face.
"I'm sorry."
Slowly, Thunder began to smile.
Once more, their lips connected. They embraced each other as they kissed passionately, their tongues dancing around in each other's mouths.
Eventually, Rainbow slowly pulled Thunder into the house and shut the door.
This was THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING. And by that, I mean this story. It was so badly plotted that it made me puke.
Well, not really, but I didn't really like it, even though I wrote it. I mean, the plot is okay. Rainbow accidentally gets the potion, she has sex with Thunder, heartbreak, redemption (whatever the hell that is), etc.
Either way, I didn't really like it. But, if somepony will like it, that's okay with me.
So, if you liked it, okay then. If you enjoyed it, alright. If you loved it so much that you ended up masturbating furiously to it....well...I got nothing for that, but that's about it, I guess.
I'm off to continue my Titanic story. It's more hated than liked, but I don't care. Weird though, all Titanic stories I've read seem to have been disliked the most... *shrug* watevs.
Oh, and wonder what happened to Derpy? Well...lets just say she won't be sitting on her plot for at least a week. >:3
