The Finding Of Order
Chapter 2
Previous ChapterNext ChapterThese chapters are extremely short. This is one thing I hope to improve on, but until then feel free to hate. I love criticism. Many people say it is strange how i take criticism but I feel it prevents me from getting angry at others. Throwing my feelings at books also helps. I am also looking to find a good description for my original pony character.
Celestia and Luna walked out to the courtyard to the statue that housed Discord. Celestia placed a hoof atop the pedestal and sent a portion of her will into it. Immediately she felt the presence of the dis-harmonic being reacting to her.
"Ah, hello again dear Celestia. Might I just say what an honor it is to be graced by your presence. You would not believe how lonely it gets being trapped in stone." without warning, his voice took on a more sinister tone. "I assume this visit is due to something I did but what about what you did to me? Being trapped in stone is ever so boring. Even I would never turn some pony to stone as it takes all the fun out of everything. I'm sure you wouldn't mind letting me out for a little bit of fun at some point, right?"
"You know I can not do that. I've seen what you do to any normal ponies you come across in your outings. I have come to ask you to take back your little creation." Celestia replied with a huff.
"If you are talking about little old Screwball, I am sorry to say she is busy elsewhere bothering one pony too much to listen to me." Discord said with a laugh "Other than that, there's no pony else."
Celestia frowned. "I am talking about your opposite you made. The one you made specifically to clean up after the messes you cause. The one who fixes your chaos allowing you to inflict more!" at this point Celestia was getting tired of Discord's antics and was about to simply sever her connection.
Discord went silent for a few moments. Celestia was about to simply leave when he replied. "I am not apologizing for him. Order is my only creation that has a complete will of its own. I have no control over him. Goodbye."
With that his presence retreated leaving Celestia standing with one hoof on Discord's pedestal.
"Well? Did he get rid of him?" asked Luna with an imploring look on her face.
Celestia shook her head "Looks like we will have to deal with him on our own. I do not expect Twilight to know what to do with him even if she does catch him."
"Pinkie! That's the fourth wall you've destroyed!" yelled out Twilight Sparkle staring at the pink party pony's latest escapade.
"Oh relax Twilight. I will pay for it later. Its not even like it was in good condition anyway." responded Pinkie giggling merrily while swinging the hammer.
Pinkie Pie had swung at yet another building in her search for the mysterious fixer and had destroyed another wall of a different building. The occupants inside were terrified at first but after seeing that it was only the resident party pony they quickly went back to their monotonous lives of waiting for something new to happen.
Twilight stared in wonder at how well ponies would take the things that happened in Ponyville. She would have expected some screaming but most residents took it like yet another day. Some even seemed to have expected it like it had simply been an event happening over and over again in a well known story.
"Anyway Twilight." began Pinkie snapping her out of her wonderment, "It is obvious we need to go to Carousel Boutique!"
Twilight didn't even shrug as she followed Pinkie Pie. She had decided to go with what Pinkie said without any argument after Pinkies last round had sent them to Fluttershy's Cottage where they had seen all the food and animals sorted in order from size with the animals to price of the food at basic exchange rates. Twilight had asked her then how she knew to go there and Pinkie's response had been something about a script and cues.
As Twilight was lost in these thoughts Pinkie was thinking about other things entirely. "I wonder just who this pony is? Is he friendly? Would he like a party? Is he allergic to anything? Would he prefer pecans or macadamias? Why was Twilight not watching where she was going? Is she thinking about the party too? The word too is funny! Too, two, to, tutu! Why is the author writing this? Ooh, Derpy will be angry she isn't getting a cameo! Who is that entering Carousel Boutique?" the last of these thoughts she spoke aloud, snapping Twilight out of her daze.
Looking ahead they both saw a pony entering the Boutique just ahead of them. unfortunately they were not able to get a clear view of him due to the author's ipod failing to tell him if the photo he found was actually turned negative and therefore easily able to be used.
"Oh no! we have to help Rarity!" yelled out Twilight Sparkle, bursting ahead of Pinkie and plunging into the boutique.
Behind her, Pinkie was shaking her head "Really get creative! Make your own!" then she too plunged inside.
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