First (Heat) Responder

by Red_Beard

Applebloom 2

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Harsh sunlight meets Anon's face as he begins to rouse from sleep. Before Anon even opens his eyes, he can already tell something is off. He thinks as hard as his sleep addled brain can manage and the only clue he can gather is that he should be able to feel something. Reaching around all over the bed, Anon tries hopelessly to find the thing he's looking for, but can't find anything.

Applebloom.

Anon throws off the covers and sits up quickly, looking around his room to try and find the yellow filly, eyes wide and awake with worry. Anon remembers suddenly that he had gotten rather rough with her late last night. Had he hurt her? Had he scared her off? The thought of having done either makes his stomach churn with worry. Slipping on the nearest pair of boxers her can find, Anon rushes out the door of his bedroom in search of Applebloom. After searching every room he finally comes to the kitchen, where he finds Applebloom placing a bowl into his sink.

"Good mornin', Anon!" she greets him, the filly absolutely radiating her usual cheerful aura.

"Jesus, you scared me, AB." Anon tells her.

She giggles. "Sorry 'bout that. Ahm pretty used to wakin' up early on the farm. Ah've already taken a shower and eaten breakfast. Sorry if ah woke you up."

Appleboom trots over to Anon and nuzzles his leg. Anon picks her up and gives her a peck on the lips before setting her back down.

"Sorry 'bout last night. I kinda jumped ya' without askin'."

"Don't be. If anything I should be sorry. It was your first time and I shouldn't have been so rough with you." Anon tells her.

Applebloom blushes. "Well... it was kinda surprisin', but I um... Ah really liked it."

Anon chuckles, "I had a good feeling you were enjoying yourself, but that should be something you discover after experimenting for a while, not your first time."

"Well, about that. Ah know ah shouldn't really have expectations for these kind of things, but ah just wasn't expectin' everythin' to be so... fast. Ah know ah gotta go home at some point today, but ah was kinda hopin' you and ah could... do it again?"

Anon gave a disappointed sigh. "I take it your heat hasn't gone down."

"Oh, no! No no no, that's not it all all. Ah feel much better now and it's all thanks ta you. Ah just wanted to... to... uugh."

Applebloom becomes visibly flustered, something obviously bothering her. Anon reaches down to pick up the frustrated filly and gives her a peck on the lips while he holds her.

"You can tell me anything 'Bloom," he says to her with a reassuring smile.

Her blush noticeably deepens before she responds.

"Ah know it's girly and kinda' dumb... but ah was hoping my first time would be a lot more sweet. More like a fairy-tale come true sorta thing. Ah know yer not mah coltfriend or nothin', but ah kinda' always hoped it would be a lot more romantic then it was."

Anon chuckles. "Well little missy, I assure you that you're not the first little filly who's wanted that, and your little wish is my command."

Anon gives her a deep, sensual kiss while he gently holds the filly's cheek with one hand and holds her up with his other arm.

"I can tell you already washed, so why don't you wait for me back in the room while I do a quick clean-up?"

Giving a bashful giggle, Applebloom looks at Anon with half-lidded eyes. "Okay.."


Applebloom lays her back against the pillows on the bed, staring intently at the door to the bedroom. Despite the debauchery that occurred the night before, she finds her heart racing in anticipation of the events ahead. Without the haze of her heat clouding her thoughts, the intensity of the situation making itself known to her. Her mind feels back to last night. The memory of being slammed into moves to the forefront of her mind, heating up her body. She might not have seen much last night, but she sure as hell felt a lot. Her hoof subconsciously glides down to her nethers and she begins playing with her labia. Her mind replays the events of last night over and over, making her feel almost as hot as she felt during her heat.

Applebloom barely notices the door opening as he continues hoofing her fully pussy. The door swings open revealing her human love, a towel rapped around his waist and and droplets of water still clinging to his well groomed body. Applebloom wouldn't consider her knowledge of the human physique extensive, but growing up with her big brother around means she knows muscle when she sees it, and Anon is cut. Applebloom can see each muscle clearly defined, surprised that observing her lover further aroused her rather than embarrassing her.

"Want some help with that?" Anon asks, fully aware of how corny a dumb the question is.

Applebloom couldn't care less, though, as she slowly nods her head in response. With a smirk, Anon drops his towel, revealing the rest of his nude body in all its glory. His member is already standing at attention, ready to perform its duty like the well trained tool of a professional it is. Bloom only gets a fleeting glance at the limb before Anon slowly crawls onto the bed.

While Anon crawls ever so slowly to her, Applebloom takes notice of the canines through his smirk, sending a shockwave of arousal through her body. The way Anon approaches so low with a hungry look in his eyes sends the filly's fight or flight instincts into a tizzy. Adrenaline begins to pump through her body, raising her heart rate and heightening her senses.

When Anon is close enough, he kisses the filly's outstretched hoof. Although not a particularly pleasant action, just the sheer contact with Anon makes a tingle run up Applebloom's spine. Anon continues to kiss her leg, running up it slowly and planting kisses every inch. Anon slowly lies down as he gets closer and closer to the filly's honeypot and brings his hands up to grab her thighs, which have instinctively opened up to allow him better access.

Despite no longer being in estrus, the actual heat from the filly's swollen nethers nearly makes Anon begin to sweat. The sweet and musky smell of the aroused angel permeates his sinuses. Anin's tongue finally reaches the base of her honeypot, and he slowly drags it up along her slit and onto her winking clit. Applebloom's pussy winks wildly as she sprays her nectar onto Anon's jaw, the human angling his mouth in reaction to catch the delicious juice.

Inexperienced fillies have the most delicious hair triggers when you tease them.

Applebloom's body relaxes as she comes down from her orgasm. She blushes madly from having come so suddenly and all over her lover's face.

Before she can squeak out an apology, Anon asks, "Would you like me to keep going?"

AB hesitates. Was she being selfish? Shouldn't she be getting him off as well?

As if reading her mind, Anon says "Don't worry about me. Trust me. I'm having as much fun as you are. I love how tasty your little pussy is."

Bloom's blush deepens at hearing such a lewd sentence, but if Anon isn't objecting, then neither is she.

Anon once again dives into the heated nethers, giving hard kisses all the way around her lips. Bloom gasps from every contact. Her gasps crescendo into a silent squeal as Anon dives his tongue deep into her folds. Her lips easily part for his tongue due to her arousal.

Applebloom throws her head back in pleasure and lets out a soft moan. Anon's expert tongue continues to caress and massage her inner and outer folds, occasionally slipping along her love button cause her whole body to shutter. It doesn't take long for the filly's hair trigger to to be pulled. She squeezes her eyes shut as she lets out a throaty moan. Filly cum drips from her slick mound straight into Anon's mouth.

Tastes like apples, of course. Anon thinks. A bit more sour than her sister. Heh, almost as if she's not quite ripe yet.

As AB cums, Anon continues to gently glide his tongue along her now over-sensative folds, trying to create as many waves of pleasure in her as he can. When she start to come down, Anon sits up onto his knees and pulls the filly's body close to his, lining his cock up with her entrance.

"Anon... *pant* it's.. *pant* way too soon... *pant* Gimme a *pant* minute."

Anon cupped the little filly's cheek with his hand, stroking it lovingly with his thumb.

"Do you trust me?"

Applebloom looks into her lovers eyes and smiled at him. "Of course ah do."

With those words, Anon dives his cock into Applebloom's filly snatch. All the cum and juice Applebloom had produced ensures that even though Anon is dry, he is able to slide in all the way to the base with no resistance. In response, Bloom lets out a silent scream. Having just cum, her marehood was extremely sensitive, and the sudden insertion teetered on the edge of pleasurable and painful.

Anon grabbed the filly by her hips and used his arms to pull the filly close while he thrust his own hips forward. The small filly was basically a toy to him now. She put up no resistance while Anon continued to fuck her hard and deep, while man handling her body which was paralyzed in pleasure.

What Applebloom was experiencing she could only describe as a euphoric roller-coaster. During the first few thrusts, her freshly orgasmed pussy was much too sensitive. She started at the peak of pleasure, thinking that something was going to break and be painful. But it never came. In fact, after a few second had passed, she had come down and began experiencing her lover's wonderful cock as she had the night before. As her lover continues to plunge his beautiful cock into her, that familiar sensation begins to build up again. There is something off about this time, however. It's happening way too fast. Applebloom is reaching her second peak within hardly 30 seconds of cumming previously.

Applebloom forms the goofiest grin on her face. Her mind is consumed completely by pleasure and all the little filly can do is moan and lay there, cumming hard. Her entire body trembles and her moans are loud.

Anon, for his part, would've been able to keep things together if not for one thing. The sight of a fucked silly mare destroys any notion he has on lasting longer than his partner. This whole time, Bloom's slick and tight fillyhood has been trying its hardest to milk her mate's sweet white gold out of his cock and into her cervix. Her walls are velvety and squeeze in the best ways. But Applebloom isnt Anon's first filly. No, these sensations aren't new, and frankly he could ignore them just enough to ensure he's able to bring his partner to completion before himself. But the one thing he can't ignore, the thing that sends him over the edge almost immediately, is the look of a filly so lost in pleasure she probably doesn't even remember her own name.

Anon unleashes another large load into Applebloom's cunny. Her pussy is trying its best to milk him dry and succeeding. The potion he took last night is still in effect, and glob after glob of spunk pours into her pussy to the point of overflowing.

As anon withdraws his cock from Applebloom's well filled cunt, he flops down beside her. She turns to him, her eyes are heavy and she's panting. Anon pulls the filly to his chest and gives her a peck on the lips.

"How was that, my queen?" Anon asks, teasingly. He runs his fingers through her mane.

"*pant* It was... *pant* perfect." Applbloom smiles

Anon chuckles and returns her smile. "You've got 20 minutes for a nap. After that we'll get cleaned up and ready for your sister to pick you up, ok?"

Applebloom responds with a nod and curls herself further into Anon's chest, a giant grin plastered on her face. If her afterglow was actually a light, there's no doubt you could see it from space.


"Ah take it everything went well?" Applejack stood in the doorway of Anon's home, watching her little sister hop around with the pep of someone who, well... just got laid.

"Everything went spectacularly." Anon replied. "She's a Pear, alright. She even does that thing you do when I-"

Applejack's hoof shoots up to Anon's mouth.

"Ah! Bup bup!" Applejack silences Anon. "No details, thank ya kindly. We may be a buncha bumpkins, but we ain't THAT kinda fam'ly."

"Oh? So you don't wanna hear about the sound she makes when I put my-"

"LA LA LA LA LA LA AIN'T GONNA HEAR IT LA LA LA LA" Applejack interrupts with her hooves over her ears.

Anon chuckles. Applebloom makes her way over to the door.

"So, is it gonna be like this every month?" The little filly inquires.

Anon gives her head a light pat. "Nah," he assures her. "The first time is probably one of the worst, especially since it can be scary. Most mares don't even have them during the winter."

"Oh yeah! Ms. Cheerilee said that it's so we can have the foal during the summer the next year so it's nice and warm."

"Very good, AB!" Anon praises.

Applebloom looks up at the man with a proud grin on her face.

"Alright, sis. Go on and git back to the farm. Scoots and Sweetie are waitin' for ya at the treehouse."

Applebloom nuzzles Anon's leg affectionately. "Thanks again! Yet a real lifesaver, Anon."

As she starts trotting back to Sweet Apple Acres she notices her sister staying behind.

"Ain't ya comin' with, sis?" Applebloom asks.

"You go on ahead. There's something I gotta discuss with Anon." Came Applejack's reply.

Applebloom gave an affirmative nod and started galloping away, excited to share with her friends the wonderful new experience she just had.

"So when did it start?" Anon asks.

Applejack blushes. "'Bout an hour after I dropped off 'Bloom. Is it that obvious?"

Anon gives a reassuring smile. "I'm an expert. What's obvious to me isn't as obvious to anyone else."

"Ya got time before your next appointment?" Applejack stares hopefully at Anon.

"You're in luck. That Flim Flam fiasco from last year means I'm underbooked this year. C'mon in."

Applejack smiles at Anon and follows him inside, relieved that her fire will soon be put out.


Author's Note

Well, I pushed it out like a mother giving birth to twins. It's very rough. Please comment or pm me any glaring grammatical issues you see.

Next chapter will NOT be Applejack. That was just how I wanted to end the chapter. Next update in 2 more years, Kappa.