The Eterpony

by Ponystrider

Rating: teen
Tags: Spike, Romance, Adventure, Tragedy, Twilight Sparkle, Gore, Sad, Main 6, Original Character, Apple Bloom, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1016

Twilight looked out of her window, as snow fell over ponyville, but this was no regular snow fall

A Snow fall engulps ponyville in mid summer, a snow fall that almost instantly kills everething it touches.
Twilight is the first one to notice this and is determined to warn her friends and everypony she can.

Strangely a misterious pony has alredy prepared his/herself fot his tradegy

(This story is based on the Argentinian comic: The eternaut)

Published 2012-07-26 16:24:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-26 16:24:01 UTC

Dont go out!

Twilight woke up on midnight, it was colder than usual. Wondering why it was so cold she went downstairs silently so that she wouldnt wake Spike up. Everytime She went down a step it got colder and colder.
She was confused. Why is it so cold? she turned to glance at the window.

It was snowing!! But, Snow on summer?

She was more confused than ever. She wanted to go out to see if Rainbow dash has moved a Snowing Cloud over her house just play a joke on her.

She took a closer look outside the window, there was snow all over ponyville.

This is imposible! Shouted Twilight. How can this happen on summer?

She really wanted to go outside but something stoppped her, she knew it wasnt right, she knew something was wrong.

The puple pony kept looking outside, She saw a very weak pony, barely alive falling to the ground. The earth pony died instanly, he wasnt the only one many more fell dead aside him, they all had the same fate.

Twilight was horrified, she realizaed the snow was the one who killed all those ponies.

But she was safe in the comfort of her home and she knew the risks of going out. But after the feeling of safety came the worries, Her friends!
What if they didnt know the Snow could kill?What if they where alredy dead?How many days will she and spike survive with a limited amount of food?
She was scared, horrified, worried.

*Uhh.. Twilight *Gasp* why are you awake at this hour?

*Spike something horrible is happenin-

*Whoa cool its snowing

*Spike dont go out!

Spike was dashed to the door ignoring Twilight, but was stopped by a frezing spell.

*Hey i want to go outside!

*If you go outside you will die Spike dont you see this snow kills everything it touches!!

Twilight moved spike close to the window, and they both screamed in horror as they saw a dead Pegasus laying on the window.

*Twilight whats happening?!

*I dont know spike, but we must warn other ponies before its to late.

*Rarity we mst go and-.

*No spike you cant go out now. the snow will kill you!

Both of them stared in expresionless at the gloomy weather and death that sorrounded them.
But then a sudden sign of life arose from a dead environment.A pony whearing a hermetic suit seached from house to house looking for suplies and was armed with a long Katana.

*Hey look Somepony survived!

*shhhh Twiligth, dont you see that pony is searching every house to find supplies and he is armed for one reason. whe cant atract any attention.

The pony in the hermetic suit was seacrching every house and his/her backpack wass getting bigger and bigger doe to the collection of supplies.

*Twilight and Spike closed the courtains as they saw the misterious pony aproach their home.

They both turned off all lamps and closed all windows, althought Twiligth learned some basic combat spells they could only stun or weaken a pony, they were practically deffenceless. Twiligth and spike only hoped that the pony outside would notice them.

A loud bang came from the door, followed by several bucks.
Pony broke the lock and opened the door

Snow entered the house as the pony stepped in looking firmly at the scared unicorn.

Twilight got in contact with the snow tha moment the pony rushed in her home, her vission was blurry and she was getting weaker and weaker.
She fell on the floor about to collapse when she caught a last glance at the misterious pony.

*Dont worry im here to help.

Twilight fainted.

Hunt or be hunted

Twilight woke up, feeling a bit disorientated and dizzy as she began to regain full consience she noticed she was wearing something.

A black hermetic suit made of a very dense material and a gas mask.
*Who- how did i get this?

She looked around her home al covered in snow and no sing of Spike or the misterious pony.
She was alone but finally she could resist the deadly snowfall, she walked outside of her house witnessing the a post apocaliptic like environment.Courpses lay eveywhere, plants where diying and not even ligth escaped this snowfall.

She saw a pony aproaching really fast at her, it also ahad a improvised suit to keep away the snow.
Twilight slowly moved torwards the pony whe she noticed it had a knife.He charged against her triying to stab her but he missed, twilight was to quick for him.
Why was that pony attacking her?
He tried to stab her again but he barely missed.
twilight didnt want to figth, she never liked violence and barely knows how to defend herself.
but this time she had to.
she tried to buck him but fell down the ground.
He saw his chance of killing twiligth while she was on the floor.
But before he could do anything a huge blade pierced his back and went trough his chest.
A Splatter of blood fell over Twiligths mask.
the dead pony fell to the ground to reveal the misterious pony behind him.

*Thanks for saving me, but why did he attack me?

*Many ponys found a way to survive the deadly snow, many of them look for suplies and food, he must have thought you had
suplies.

The misterious pony helped Twiligth get up from the floor.

*Who are you?

*nobody my name dosent concern you nor does your name concern me.

The misterious pony turned and started walking away.

Twillight thought of following the misterious pony but she had other other things to worry about, it was still very early and she had to warn her friends before they go out and en up bieng another piece of dead decoration inthis this snowing tree of death.

Suddenly she realised spike was missing, Where was he? Why didnt she ask that misterious pony where spike has gone to?
All of theses thoughts ran over twillights head.
She had to find spike first.