Eyes to the heart

by Azvameth Rose
Arden was just heading to his university before things got out of hand and he disappeared. And now he finds himself in a different reality.

Arden is your regular run of the mill student. Until some weird guy tossed a package to him and ran away. Now he is another world and has to learn how to survive there...in a new body and a weird ability that allows him to see the hearts into inhabitants of the said world. Now...how does one fight again?

Say hello to my editor: Kobolum. We just started this, so we still need to go over the previous chapters and figure out how to edit stuff together. Also, check out his stories.

Thanks to this person this story gained a huge expansion, so I consider this story a collab with:Metordragon. This person has great ideas if you want help in a story, contact him. This person is AWESOME!!

Actually, I consider this story to be the result of the comments, my ideas, Kobolum, Metordragon, and the people who actually read this. THANK YOU ALL!

Dropping by as a new editor is mustangdrew4 thank you all for the support!

Incomplete
Violence
Death
Alternate Universe
Anthro
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
Romance
Adventure
Sex
 
PMPO

180614 words: Estimated about 15 hours to read
Download:textHTMLePUB

41 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Package and arrival. (Edited) 2018-05-01 21:49:34 UTC
    1645
  2. Chapter 1: Solar princess. (Edited) 2018-05-03 18:15:43 UTC
    1791
  3. Chapter 2: Judgement. (Edited) 2018-05-05 00:40:22 UTC
    3068
  4. Chapter 3: Explanations. (edited). 2018-05-06 02:16:22 UTC
  5. Chapter 4: An odd one (edited) 2018-05-06 21:54:59 UTC
    2227
  6. Chapter 5: Warp (edited) 2018-05-10 22:10:26 UTC
    3061
  7. Chapter 6: Eyes, hut, village and dream (edited) 2018-05-12 02:12:39 UTC
    2102
  8. Chapter 7: I am king (edited) 2018-05-13 19:16:39 UTC
    2224
  9. Chapter 8: WELCOME! (edited) 2018-05-16 14:24:15 UTC
    2316
  10. Chapter 9: A concerned friend (edited) 2018-05-17 21:00:08 UTC
    2137
  11. Chapter 10: Be my guest! (edited) 2018-05-19 01:48:33 UTC
    1663
  12. Chapter 11: Schedule. 2018-05-21 20:13:38 UTC
    3127
  13. Chapter 12: A worker and a stalker. 2018-05-27 20:43:28 UTC
    2556
  14. Chapter 13: Apples and uneasyness. 2018-05-30 00:50:18 UTC
    3490
  15. Chapter 14: Just who is he?! 2018-05-31 01:50:40 UTC
    4024
  16. Chapter 15: Huntress. 2018-06-01 01:57:51 UTC
    4689
  17. Chapter 16: Session and thoughts of a princess. 2018-06-02 00:49:04 UTC
    4427
  18. Chapter 17: Seamstress writting and Discord. 2018-06-07 22:30:38 UTC
    5969
  19. Chapter 18: The queen, brainstorming with a specialist, I can. 2018-06-10 22:17:07 UTC
    4679
  20. Chapter 19: Retry and pegasus talk. (edited yet again). 2018-06-16 18:04:13 UTC
    3900
  21. Chapter 20: Hunt, apples, delay and other stuff. 2018-06-23 01:24:11 UTC
    7713
  22. Chpater 21: Changeling queen, training time! 2018-06-29 02:10:41 UTC
  23. Chapter 22: Feeding spots, rebuilding history, time tells our tales. 2018-07-07 13:03:09 UTC
    8370
  24. Chapter 23: Piece by piece, one step forward and two steps back. 2018-07-13 11:06:36 UTC
    8416
  25. Chapter 24: Purple and a giant in the sand. (one small change) 2018-07-18 13:18:01 UTC
    9403
  26. Chapter 25: Repercussions of an outsider (WARNING! READ THE AUTHOR'S NOTES) 2018-07-25 14:31:09 UTC
    8445
  27. Chapter 26: Moonlit walk of a shadow 2018-07-30 00:43:14 UTC
    4560
  28. Chapter 27: Life moves, regardless of the participants 2018-08-02 23:12:05 UTC
    4088
  29. Chapter 28: Strong suit 2018-08-06 01:06:16 UTC
    4311
  30. Chapter 29: Special gift, in a special day 2018-08-24 22:26:25 UTC
    8117
  31. Chapter 30: Gauntlet 2018-09-14 12:32:10 UTC
    9374
  32. Chapter 31: The stories around us 2018-09-24 00:09:30 UTC
  33. Chapter 32: From fire and flesh 2018-10-07 23:46:41 UTC
    5865
  34. Chapter 33: Another step (WARNING! CLOP!) - Edited 2018-10-19 22:20:21 UTC
    4400
  35. Chapter 34: Mad? Sure 2018-11-08 22:50:30 UTC
  36. Chapter 35: Troubles are part of life 2018-11-26 23:06:16 UTC
    4313
  37. Chapter 36: I'm done with half measures (PLEASE READ THE AUTHOR'S NOTES) 2019-01-01 12:26:07 UTC
    12042
  38. Chapter 37: Reminescence and the will 2019-01-20 23:33:48 UTC
  39. Chapter 38: Breaking the habits 2019-05-25 19:40:13 UTC
    16465
  40. Chapter 39: Take a spin, gossips fly 2019-12-16 13:38:30 UTC
  41. Chapter 40: Hesitation and curious things 2022-09-29 11:58:36 UTC
    5637