THIS SHIT’S CANCELED GO READ SOMETHING GOOD

After the horrific experience, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Twilight Sparkle , and Fluttershy find themselves in a strange void with two fat mustached men.
Meanwhile Celestia and Luna are on the hunt to track down and terminate the traitor Starlight Glimmer. Discord however wants to torture her for all eternity.
Criticism is welcome, you can tell me how I can improve it.