First Steps Free

by AbruptDescent

First published

2rd person. Potentially overlong backstories due to my own preference of having a story for a character, even in 2rd person ones. I'm working on theory for the Portal Incursion and some ideas of it, but how he got there will now remain as the staple 'just appeared on the world'. I'll add it later at my leisure when I'm satisfied with the result. I'm including the tags for future use. Mostly background ponies, some Mane 6 and Luna later if I think I can work those directions. I'm a bit behind on things.

Creative criticism is most welcome.