FCA Extended parts

by Alicorn21

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Human, Original Character, Comedy, Equestria Girls, Main 7 (EqG)
Length: 1702

Parts I really want to put in the fan fiction but I can't

There are parts I wanted to put in The Fastest Colt Alive but I can't since it's too late to make changes so I just write parts that I wanted to have in the story. So these are deleted parts and extended parts that could be a part of the story. They are a little bit part of the canon story

Published 2018-05-18 20:00:07 UTC
Last updated 2018-05-21 18:23:58 UTC

Deleted Parts 1

"Actually," said Sunset, "I was wondering if Jay could join us today".

"Why sure," said Applejack.

"Fine by me" added Rainbow Dash.

"Why of course," said Rarity, "It would be nice to have a new member joining us today".

"That's okay with me too," said Fluttershy.

"That would be great!" Pinkie said.

"Well I am not a fan of school lunch from the cafeteria, but I like to join you guys," Jay says. "Then it's settled," Sunset said, and everyone began to walk to the cafeteria. "Because I need friends and I don't have a lot of friends recently and it seems like you are those kinds of friends I would love to hang out with," Jay said.

"Well thank you, Jay," Rarity said.

"No problem, also the people I used to hang out with are difficult, they require a lot of focus, they uh... have like a rhythm that I haven't quite been able to catch up on like Brunch. What is Brunch, like what is brunch You wait in line for an hour for essential lunch? I mean... I don't know some people are quite slow" Jay said.

"We'll try to keep up," Rainbow said

"Oh yeah well..." Trixie couldn't come up with something else to say.

"Just take the time you need, I am right open," Jay said, "oh wait you don't have any comeback".

Trixie couldn't come up with a better comeback, "goddammit, you're better than me" she yelled and threw a smoke bomb on the floor and ran away from the cafeteria.

"If that was a magic trick then you suck at it, no offense," Jay yelled out.

The school was already over and the main 6 were waiting at the statue for Jay, "when is Jay coming?" Rainbow Dash asked, "he properly needed to do something first," Applejack said.
Rarity was sitting on the ground policing her nails, "I gotta say, Jay looks a kinda cute don't you think?".

Rainbow Dash began to blush a little bit because she began to have a crush on him."Yeah, I don't think Rarity Allen would work out Rarity," Rainbow said joking around.

Jay walked out of the doors of the school and meet up with the girls at the statue. "Are you guys ready?" he asks, "I sure am, partner" Applejack replied. Everyone began to walk to together to the city.

"Jay Allen nice to meet you," he said and reached out his hand to give him a handshake. Jay held out his hand and both of them shook hands, "nice to meet you too" Jay said.

"it will be an honor to work with you Jay," He said, "yeah, you too," Jay told him. The man walked out of the lab.

"My, my who is that?" Rarity asked because he caught Rarity's eyes and thought he was really handsome.

"He's a transfer from Keystone, he started a few days ago" Jay replied, "his name is Edward Thawne".

"Well that's detective pretty boy," Rarity said.

"Yeah I think Rarity Thawne would have worked out," Jay said.

"Oh snap, Jay you're a freaking savage," Rainbow Dash said, because of that reminded her of the joke she pulled on Rarity.

Jay walked away from the window, he walked and grabbed a chain which was under the roof window. Lighting began to strike, a bolt of lighting begun to strike through the window hitting Jay and throwing him to a shelf with chemicals.

Jay was totally knocked out and covered in chemicals, the girls ran to his unconscious body standing on their knees and holding Jay in their arms.

Rainbow Dash walked into the hallway screaming for someone to help. There was one detective that arrived there, "what happened he asked?" The detective asked.

"He got hit by lightning," one of the girls replied.

The detective took out his phone from his pocket and called for help "this is detective August Hart we need an ambulance right here at the CCPD forensic lab right now, one of our scientist got hit by lightning," he yelled in his phone.

At Canterlot city hospital the doctors had Jay in a medical bed storming down the corridors and to a room where they could try to revive him. The girls were pretty scared,

"What if Jay dies?" Fluttershy asked in a low pitch voice

"He will not die, he will be okay, I hope so," Rainbow says.

"He is a strong man, he will make it," Sunset told Fluttershy.

Rainbow held back tears trying not to cry, but her head was full of the idea if Jay died. He was an awesome friend to hang out with and want it to last longer. She felt this bond around her and Jay like Jay is the one that she wouldn't call an egghead but an adorable nerd.

Part 2
"It was a little destroyed but the main cortex and the laboratories were okay" Jay replied "I even got to meet Harrison Wells"

"Really," Rainbow said

"Yeah, I even kept a STAR labs sweatshirt," Jay said.

"Cool, well don't wear it around the school," Dashie said, "students are angry about what happened a month ago when the particle accelerator exploded".

"Why," Jay asked since we were in a come for one month he needed to know what has been going on.

"Well, many people got injured when the accelerator exploded and blamed Harrison Wells for the explosion, now they want him to suffer more then the people did," Rainbow told Jay.

"I believe anything is possible and in a few minutes, I will too," Wells said.

Jay walked off the truck with a tight suit with a helmet and glasses.

"How does is it fit?" Cisco asked

"It's a little bit snug" Jay replied

"Properly you run so fast no one can see it," Rarity said

"Thank you Rarity," Jay said, "by the way, did you and Thawne work out?".

"Damn Rarity, Jay he got you again," Rainbow said.

Jay and Cisco walked together. When they walked to the front of the airfield the other girls began talking with each other. "Can't believe that being hit by lightning and wake up a month later meant that he would have superpowers?" Applejack said. "Well that just makes him more awesome than ever," Rainbow said.

"Just remember that he is a human like the rest of us," Sunset said.

Rainbow looked over to Jay where he was talking with Cisco. "He kinda looks hot in that red suit don't you think," Rainbow said.

"Wait, what?" one of the girls said.

"What? nothing," Rainbow said and felt a little embarrassed about what she said. "Wait, do you have a crush on Jay?" Sunset asked knowing that Rainbow does have a crush on Jay. Rainbow didn't answer and walked away.

Deleted Parts 2

"Well I am not a fan of school lunch from the cafeteria, but I like to join you guys," Jay says. "Then it's settled," Sunset said, and everyone began to walk to the cafeteria.
As they were walking Sunset asked Jay "So what is kind of a band to you love listening to, Jay?"

Jay began to breathe out air and looked up thinking and replied while looking at the girls "the Beatles, Lady Gaga and ... BlackPink,"

"Wait you listen to BlackPink?" Rainbow asked.

"Yep, love BlackPink," Jay said

The girls had already got their lunch, and Jay was waiting at the table for them to sit down. They sat down and begun to eat.
Jay a had a little cup of water and little drops of water on his finger and let it drop in his hand. Pinkie asked, "What are you doing?".

"Well in the movie Jurassic Park professor Ian Malcolm talked about the chaos theory that drops of water will not hit the same place as the last drop of water, just like lightning not hitting the same place twice,"

Pinkie Pie just looked at Jay with no words. "you have no idea what I am talking about, don't you?" Jay asked.

"Oh no, I know what you're are talking about I love Jurassic Park and dinosaurs," Pinkie said.

"Cool, what your favorite dinosaur?" Jay asked.

"The triceratops, you?" Pinkie replied and asked Jay what his favorite dinosaur was.

"The Maiasaur, you know when I was little I had this book about a dinosaur named..." Before Jay could finish a blue-skinned girl with white hair walked at the table.

"hello rain-goons," Trixie said.

Everyone at the table turned their head to look at Trixie

"Go away Trixie" Rainbow Dash said.

"Oh no, I am not here for you six," Trixie said and looked at Jay "I am here for the new kid".

"Who me?" Jay said.

"Yeah, a little word of advice, I wouldn't hang out with these girls," Trixie told Jay "you won't be so much safe with them".

Jay looked at the girls and looked back at Trixie.

"They look fine to me," Jay said.

"Not really, there is a lot that you don't know about these girls," Trixie said.

"There Is a lot that I don't know that I would love to know because my whole life I have been chasing the impossible" Jay told Trixie.

"Chasing the Impossible sounds like you don't do any good by doing that," Trixie said.

"Well I do work for the CCPD as a forensic assistant and go around the city helping the police catch murderers and criminals, what have you done?" Jay said in a squeaky voice and pointed his finger at her.

The girls looked at Trixie.

"Yeah, what have you done?" Rarity said.

"Seems like he has done more better things for society then you have," Rainbow said.

Trixie couldn't come up with something else to say and threw a smoke bomb on the floor. The people around the table caught by the smoke when the smoke disappeared Jay could see Trixie hiding behind the pillar in the cafeteria.

"You magic trick suck I can see you!" Jay yelled out.

Author's Note

Tell me the references you got in this one and the last one