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Twilight, Revised

by An Unimpressive
Twilight Sparkle gets brainwashed. Mind controlled, sort-of Twilight x Celestia. Nightmare Moon too.

In a world where she sees from a distorted perspective, all Twilight Sparkle can do is cling to the one pony she knows will never let her down: her teacher, the princess... no matter which princess her addled brain tells her that is. Twilight's used to rewriting letters, but when she's the one being rewritten, she finds the sensation to be altogether different.

Many thanks must go to my awesome editors, Varanus, Ebon Mane, shortskirtsandexplosions, Seattle_Lite, and Nick Nack.

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Teen
Complete
Tragedy
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Romance
 
TN

32921 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read

4 Chapters:

  1. Gethsemane 2012-11-21 00:44:47 UTC
    7643
  2. The Last Remaining Light 2012-11-21 18:41:22 UTC
    9029
  3. Fight 2012-11-26 14:19:45 UTC
    8483
  4. The Last Enemy That Shall Be Destroyed 2012-11-26 14:22:00 UTC
    7766