The Red devil

by Connorcooper

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Star Wars, Profanity, My Little Pony: The Movie, Gore, Violence, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Death, Human, Anthro, Main 6, Romance, Storm King, Science Fiction, Adventure, Tempest Shadow, Grubber, Crossover
Length: 1402

I made a deal with the devil for revenge (spoilers for the movie)

I was rejected by all ponies because I wasn't one of them, they insulted me, hurt me, beat me, and...broke me. When I was thrown into the river after a public beating I washed up on shore of a island where I was found by the storm king soldiers and brought before him. A first he though I was a spy but I told him who was trying to trick him so the ponies would get a step forward of his plans. But I told him the hell I went though and I would do anything to get pay back for what they did to me. He offered me a deal work for him and be one of commanders and he will allow me to have my revenge.

WARNING: SPOILERS FOR THE FOLLOWING

MLP MOVIE AND SOLO

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Published 2018-10-02 18:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-10-02 18:20:01 UTC

Revenge is the way to the Sith...so what!?

(Spoilers this is your final warning)

(if you watched the movie you would understand what is going on)

"Put you hands tougher COMMANDER TEMPEST AND HER FIRST LIEUTENANT MAUL!"

With grubber speech two beings came from the dark ship one what looked like a dark purple unicorn with a broken horn with a spiked war hawk styled mane donned in black and neon light blue armor with the stormking's marking on her breastplate. The other donned in blood red armor and with jet black markings that covered his whole with a different style of his commander, the whole armor gave a devilish style with horns on the helmet and a fire colored visor.

"Is this that a unicorn?" Twilight asked.

"Looks like it what happened to her horn," Her dragon assist responded.

The two walked side by side as they could hear the mechanial breathing of the red armored one with a dark hiss with every exhale.

As they reached half way down the ramp the three princess flew down to the two beings.

"Tempest was it? How may we help you?" Asked the princess of the sun.

"Uh I'm so glad you asked how about we start with your complete and total surrender,"

That cause the whole group to mummer to themselves, but like she always does twilight walked forward to the side of the princess with a smile on her face.

"Hi their princess of friendship I don't know exactly whats going on but I'm pretty sure we can talk it out," This caused the one called maul to lightly scoff under his breathing.

"Oh goody all four princess, here's the deal ladies I need your magic give up please or we make it difficult...for everyone!" Tempest told them.

"And why should we cower before you theirs two of you and hundreds of us!" the princess of the moon shot at the two.

Tempest laughed.

"I was hoping you would choice difficult," She turned to maul as she nodded as he spoke for the first time.

"TROOPERS ON ME!"

With that more airships came from the sky as large diamond dogs came forth, tempest and maul ran forward as tempest pulled something from her belt bag as kicked it up like a soccer ball. Maul jumped in the air as his backpack looking thing gave him a boost upwards and kicked the ball at the princess, cadence ran forward and created a shield to stop the ball thing as it came to them but the balls magic was too much and pierce the shield and hit her. This caused black rock growth to grow over her body as she tried to fight back.

"I can't-"

"Cadence! Luna go west of the badlands seek help from the queen of the hippo-" Before the sun princess could say a word tempest kicked another ball to celestia was turned to stone luna saw this and tried to fly away, maul saw this and looked at tempest.

"Tempest!"

"I know," She did jumpped on the ground as she judged the ball before kicking it at luna hitting.

"Bullseye," Maul said as he held out a fist bump which tempest took with a smile.

Twilight stopped the moon princess from the fall but was courned by the large diamond dogs, as maul walked over to her with tempest. Maul held one of the magic orb balls in his hand as smiled behind his helmet with a grin, twilight could barely see it but she saw mauls eye and part of his face it looked so familiar but where had she seen it.

Then Maul tossed the ball up and kicked it at her as a rainbow pony grabbed her just in time.

The two walked over to maul sides.

"You totaly got her,"

As the smoke settled the statue wasn't twilight more of a random pony.

"DAMMIT IT ISN'T HER FIND HER NOW GRUBBER!"

It took a Grubber a second but he turned around to the other diamond dogs shouting.

"Guys we got to find the princess!" He shouted.

Maul looked down at the crown at his feet.

"Such a waste,"

Tempest and Maul watched some balloons flowing away.

"I agree so much energy wasted on...parties-"

Maul pulled out a strange weapon from one of his holsters and shot the balloons out the sky.

Maul followed her inside to the throne room where they pasted the statues of the princesses.

"When it could be used for something more important,"

"Amen to that sister," Maul told her as he walked next to her.

With that two diamond dogs came in with a ringing calling spell.

"God I need to change that ring tone," Maul said under his breathing.

Tempest looked at Maul then at the guards.

"What are you waiting for answer it,"

With that the guard holing the spell poured it in causing the storm king to appear in the smoke.

"Which way am I suppose to look?"

"Over here sir," Maul said waving his hand.

"Here?"

"A little to the right,"

"Your right?"

With that the storm king lined up with the spell.

"We got you sir,"

With that tempest and the storm king talked about the power of the 'twig' that the king held as he asked were all the princesses were.

"Sir in 72 hours we will have everything ready for you, you have my word," Maul told the king.

"Good thats what I like to hear maul now if everything isn't ready you both will both be worse state before you came to me got that,"

Tempest and maul blowed their heads at the storm king.

"We understand,"

"GreAt csoh-"

The spell disbanded as grubber appeard behind it.

"Sorry bad spell service want me to call him back?" He did the phone finger gester to his ear

"Do you have the princess?" Tempest asked.

Grubber placed a hand on his head.

"Well you see she-"

"She got away didn't she?" Maul asked.

"Er yeah a tiny bit but I have one word for you guys...spongecake!"

Tempest gave him a shock as the two growled at the diamond runt.

"It take all FOUR princesses for it to work grup! I should have handled it my self! Tempest allow me to go after them my hunters are itching for a fight!" Maul shouted.

Tempest looked at the red hunter.

"No we will all go find them,"

Maul nodded at her as he turned around and walked out

Their I was chocking on my own good my own cells that kept me alive were now killing me slowly like a rusty dull knife in my lungs. I was scared afraid I've died once before but this time it was for real I was going to go back into the darkness of death realm alone. I've die once before before mistress death told me I had a second shot at life but now I finale her now I will drift until I bleed out or some lake dragon decides to have me for a snack. Honestly with blood lost time has become less to me I have no idea how long I have been floating on this river after a public bleeding.

When I first arrived in this world I was rejected and chased away into the ever free forest were I met Zecora who treated me fairly as a equal. After a month or two working with her for helping the sick and hurt, I went with her to buy supplies she knew what happened so she gave me her cloak but if it wasn't for Rarity wanting to give me a new cloak because of how dirty mine was. Even though I told her it was fine she ripped if off my body and then their is when it happened, I was beated, stoned, and burned till I was pulled off a bridge with a knife in my gut and now I'm here drifting in this water. I kept trying to keep my eyes open as much as I could but its hard why is it so hard.

With that everything went black as my eyes slowly shut.

But I heard his voice.

"Apprentice,"

Maul looked at his belt before pulling out a strange looking red crystal.

"Soon my master,"

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