What Makes a monster?
Who titles a monster as such?
Why is it always their judgement that hurts us?
When does a monster stop being one to the world that fears it?
Where do they send the monsters when they are done with them?
How is any of this fair?

Here's a song to go with my story.

Reborn in a world of ponies, this man turned beast, is lost and wherever he goes ponies fear him. Even when he save some ponies and tries to make friends, all that happens is fear.
will he give them something to fear or will he continue doing good deeds and seek out help?

This is my first story and it will be a rough start. Sense i'm new at this suggestions would be appreciated, whether they be grammar, punctuation, inconsistencies, or what you think should be added to the story. If you have a suggestion feel free to say them.