A Christmas tale

by Charli13

The Adoption

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Author's Note

Hey, this is a chapter based on how Sunset got adopted its a side chapter there will be one of these every 2 or 3 chapters i just wanted to give you a taste of it if people don't like it I will see what you do want to see. so if you do like it then cool if you don't tell me in the comments but at least give it a try you may like it have fun reading it.


The Adoption

Sunset shimmer the female badass that had the entire Canterlot High school in her iron grip for 6 years was now reduced to a scared and Injured young women. After Being forced to watch every mean, rude, and straight up cruel thing she had done at CHS ever. It to sunset felt like days although it was only a few minutes. Sunset was now laying in a 20ft deep crater.

“Tonight you have shown the world what is truly in your heart.” Princess twilight sparkle’s voice boomed into her ears.

“Any power you have in this world is gone.” Twilight said as sunset began to regain full control of all her body.

“You will never rule here again. Twilight said as she turned around as to not have to face sunset.

“I’m sorry I-I’m s-so sorry I didn’t know there was another way.” Sunset said weakly.

“The magic of friendship doesn’t only exist in Equestria it’s everywhere you can seek it out or you can forever be alone the choice is yours” twilight said as sunset reacher the lip of the creator. Turning and offering sunset her hand.

“But all I’ve ever done since I came to CHS is tear everyone apart I don’t know the first thing about friendship.” Sunset said taking her hand.

“I bet they can teach you” twilight said jestering towards the 5 girls she had become friends with.


After recrowning twilight and flash asking twilight to dance everyone headed into the gym only to have sunset taken from the gym by vice principle Luna. As Luna and Sunset headed towards the entrance Luna placed a hand on sunsets back causing sunset to let out an involuntary Yelp of pain.

“Are you ok sunset shimmer?” Luna asked

“Yes miss” sunset said In Response” why did you need me?”

“As your punishment for destroying the front of the school you will start by picking up the rubble and bringing it to the dumpster when the construction crew come you will help by bring any garbage to the dumpster in the back of the school then you will face detention for the rest of the school year. Do you understand?” Luna said.

“Yes miss” sunset said starting to feel dizzy.

As Luna went to get snips and snails sunset began picking up the pieces of large debris.

Soon sunset felt as though she could pass out but continued to work.

Soon after she found out that snips and snails would be fixing the wall for the night and then would have 3 months of detention as they where forced to transform but also willingly helped sunset during her rain.

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1 hour later
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As Sunset shimmer worked she heard the Twilight come out with her friends. As they left they exchanged a few words

"You'll take care of her wont you?" Twilight said.

"Of course darling but i do expect some sort of apology for last yours spring fling." Rarity said

"I'm sure she will be handing out a lot of apologises" The princess said to Rarity

"we better get going the portals gonna be closing soon" spike said from Twilight side

As they leave through the portal Sunset was finishing her work for the night when snips and snails got permission from Celestia to leave. at this point her back was killing her and she felt extremely dizzy.

"Sunset Shimmer I would like to see you in my office please I need to talk to you." Celestia said.

Finishing putting the garbage in the dumpster she followed Celestia into her office sitting down but being careful not to put her back on the back of the chair as of the immense pain coming from her back from becoming that thing.

"Yes Principle Celestia?" sunset asked

Leaning in closer and propping her head on her hands she said "Sunset I want to talk to you about your file you being from a different dimension and all."

"okay what did you need to know?" Sunset asked.

"i need to know where your staying I've been looking into it and the address it says is an abandoned factory at the edge of town. I would like to know where your really staying?" Celestia questioned.

"I do live there i can take you there after school for proof. was there anything else you needed me for?" Sunset stated.

"Yes, It says here that your parents died in a fire when you where 6 how is that possible?" Celestia asked.

"Well my parents did die when i was six and they die in the fire i mentioned but i was in Equestria then. I was placed in the foster system until i was taken in by princess Celestia." Sunset replied.

"Well sunset that leaves all my questions answered and i would like to tell you now that you will be coming home with me for a while we can get your things from your home and then you will be staying with me. One last thing I have to confirm that it will be fine to adopt you as my daughter." Celestia said making Sunset choke on her saliva.

"Wait what" sunset coughed out trying to regain her composer.

"I said i will be adopting you" Celestia repeated.

After regaining some of her composer Sunset said "Why are you doing this i'm not worth it i should just live alone it's what I deserve so no one gets hurt"

chuckling lightly Celestia said "Your not gonna hurt anyone if I'm around"

After a short conversation Sunset and Celestia stand back up leading Sunset towards the door Celestia looked back only to see Sunset collapse to the floor.

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