A Christmas tale

Hey everyone reading this story. I've been reading comments and have noticed A LOT of comments saying I need an editor and i now that I've been looking for one and haven't had any luck and that is part my fault. You see when i grew up asking for help got people annoyed. So as I get older I find it harder to ask for help. So please give me a chance to work up the confidence to find one until then hang in there and now there should be one soon. Thanks, have a great day.