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MLP: The Count of Monte Cristo - The Man I used to Be (One-Shot)

by kahnac
Shining Dantes is close to claiming his revenge against those who wronged him. But what happens when the mare who was once the source of his hope, then pain, appears to rekindle the fires of hope, and love in his heart? Perhaps be himself once again.

(Prelude/practice run for the ACTUAL series: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415905/my-little-ponys-the-count-of-monte-cristo)

13 years ago, Shining Dantes was betrayed by those whom he considered friends. 3 villains, though reformed, became jealous of what he had, and sought to destroy his life. Their plan succeeded, and Shining was framed for treason, and imprisoned for 13 years in the Chateau D'if.

Noone ever imagine he would escape, and find a mighty treasure to aid in his plot for revenge.

But he did, and with the new name "The Count of Monte Cristo", he set forth to expose the traitors, and tear their worlds down as they did to him. By now, he has long since succeeded, with only his closest friend, Sombra Mondego, being the last one on the loose. But just before he can plan out what to do to him, she appears. Cadenza Mercedes, who was once his hope, and light, only to marry the very stallion who betrayed him, has now become an object of resentment - until she reveals how their bond remains strong, even after such a horrible ordeal was forced upon them.

Now, with all that has occurred, Shining finds the anger, hate, and pain slipping away, and feelings he had forgotten ages ago return. For the first time in his life, he feels Love, Hope, and Forgiveness again.

Perhaps these are the signs that he can let go of the pains of the past, and be the man he once used to be again.

Everyone
Complete
Sad
Tragedy
Crossover
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Alternate Universe
 
SP

2951 words: Estimated 15 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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