Chapters Author's Note
So hear is the first chapter to Faded Moon. It's not the best but I tried and this is my first MLP published chapter. Please leave feedback on what I could do to improve my writing. This was inspired by others stories where Luna is bullied and pushed to this but I've added my own little twist for the future. I haven't read any stories with the same twist I'm doing. Hopefully you liked it. I will try to update when I'm able to.
Pushed to far
"False princess" "Whore" "You couldn't pay some pony to marry her" "She doesn't belong with us ponies. She is a Nightmare."
Luna held her composure until she got to the confines of her room. The moment her door closed she lost it. Tears streamed down her face as she had another breakdown. Her eyes were dilated and bloodshot from her apparent lack of sleep and her coat had lost its beautiful shine. Now her coat was straggly and unbrushed while her mane no longer flowed, it simply lay limp. Nopony cared. Not even Tia. Her heart clenched as she thought of her sister. Everypony loved Celestia since she was so perfect while Luna was worthless. The last straw had been a letter at her throne.
Dear Nightmare Moon,
Nopony loves you. Nopony ever will love you. Please if you're in public cover your face, nopony wants to see it. I along with countless others wished your sister had given you a proper punishment when you returned. Your parents probably left because of you. Please do us all a favor and kill yourself.
Signed,
Everypony in Equestria
The part that bothered Luna was her parents. She had strayed far from the path they wanted causing many fights along with many harmful words. The last thing she had ever said to them was I hate you and then the next day they were gone. Luna put her hoof over her mouth trying to quiet the sobs. Whoever had written the letter was right. She was the reason her parents had left. Her whole family really. Luna had constantly battled depression since the age of 14, now she was 1,564. For so long she had battled but only now came to the realization that she shouldn't live any longer. She had thought about it but never thought it would come down to her actually doing it. Luna stood up her legs shaking like jelly as she made her way to her desk. She sat down for the last time as she took a quill and paper out. Luna wrote the letter as tears fell down her face and splashed the paper smearing the ink.
Dear whoever,
If you're reading this I'm dead. I've tried for so long to prove myself but it doesn't work. Now it no longer matters for the sheer fact that I'm gone. Tia if you find this just know that I love you and anything that happened was never your fault. It was all mine. It's not your fault that you're perfect and I'm not. I guess mom and dad were right when they said I would only make mistakes by pushing ponies away, maybe you could have helped but I never gave you the chance. Tia if mom and dad ever come back tell them I'm sorry and that they were right. I never should have disobeyed them , If I hadn't maybe we could be a happy family right now. Maybe me, you and Skye could be playing games while mom and dad watched. Like it used to be, like it never will be again.
With all my love,
Luna (Lulu)
Luna lowered the quill, her magic making it shake wildly. She stood up using the desk as a support. She made her way to her moon designed bed. She crouched down using her hooves to pull out a blood wood treasure box, she opened it staring a silver dagger. The dagger was narrow and sharp designed to make killing quick and easy, but that was not the most interesting part of it. The handle was carved into a swirl with Latin engraved on the side. The words were Mors celerrima or in Equestrian 'The quickest death'. The blade was especially designed to kill alicorns as when it was made it was dipped into basilisk venom. Basilisk venom was one of the few things that killed alicorns. Luna picked it up tracing the dagger with her hoof. She took a deep breath and before she had a chance to change her mind she slipped off her regalia. It laid on her bed.
Luna closed her eyes taking in her last and final breaths. She shoved the dagger into her heart taking a sharp breath at the pain. She opened her eyes looking down at the dagger. She was surprised to see how much blood was flowing out. Her vision slowly darkened until she could no longer keep her eyes open, her body hit the ground with a dull thud. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as her conscious faded. Her breathing stopped as the venom spread through her body. The last thing going through her mind was her fondest memory.
Memory
Four year old Luna giggled as her mother pushed the ball back.
"Gin Mommy gin" she squealed in happiness as Galaxia caught the ball.
"Can't daddy do it now," whined Galaxia playfully to her daughter"Mommy's been playing with you forever." Sol laughed as he watched his youngest daughter and his wife.
"No I bored" Luna stated as she dashed back inside to find her older sisters.
"Can't keep her attention for long love can you" said Sol nipping his wife's ears. Luna found them hanging out inside Skye's room.
"Tia, Skye why no play" Luna asked confused because her sisters had rejected her idea to play this morning.
"Luna we have to study for a test" said Celestia annoyed.
"What Tia means to say is we had to study for a test but we can take a break" said Skye stretching out making her pure white coat catch the light. Her coat was very well complimented by her blizzard blue mane and her dark violet eyes. Skye was older than both Celestia and Luna at the age of 3,798 while Celestia was 2,426 years old.
"Yay!" squealed Luna her eyes lighting up in excitement.
"Fine" groaned Celestia standing up stretching out as well. Skye scooped up Luna her eyes holding a mischievous look in her eyes.
"The perfect game is tickle monster" she said pinning Luna down and tickling her sides with her wings. Celestia joined in while unbeknownst to them their parents watched silently laughing at their daughters actions.
(Celestia's P.O.V)She's going to love this surprise ' Celestia thought smiling at the thought of making Luna happy. She arrived at her younger sisters doors giddy with excitement.
"Luna open up" she called softly. She waited a few moments for her sister to open the door. That was not what happened.
"Luna it's Celestia open the door" she said louder with a worried tone. Her guards had seen Luna enter her bedroom so it made no sense why she wasn't answering. If... IF Luna was asleep she would have woken up now. Celestia sighed deciding to go on in. She turned the door knob and walked in with a frown. She flicked on the lights lightening up the bedroom considerably. She noticed her sisters body on the ground and instantly assumed her younger sister had passed out from exhaustion but the truth was much worse. Celestia trotted over to her sister and what she saw would scar her for life. Her baby sister had a dagger buried into her heart and was bleeding out quickly. That wasn't the worst thing though as she could smell basilisk venom in the air. "GUARDS FETCH THE HEALERS NOW " she shouted in her Canterlot voice picking Luna up and applying pressure to the wound as she cradled Luna.
Hours later
Celestia sat by her sister holding her hoof. She stroked her mane with her other available hoof. Luna's dark blue coat was pale, and her mane had reverted back to it's light blue appearance from when she was a filly. She also had an Iv in hoof. Celestia while concerned was also believably angry. Not at her sister of course ,but at those monsters who pushed Luna to this. Luna never should have been pushed to this and Celestia would make the ponies who were responsible suffer. Her normal purple eyes had changed into the look of fire. Before Celestia did anything else she would see how long Luna had suffered. While Celestia was as practiced as her sister she could access memories. Her horn glowed with the golden aura before she touched Luna's head.
Memories
Celestia stood stock still and focused more magic to bring in one of the first times her sister had been bullied. She was shocked to find this was when Luna was close to being a teen at the age of 12.
"Oops" snarked a green pegasus colt with dark grey eyes that bordered on black. He had tripped Luna making her drop her books.
"You tripped me" Luna accused angrily as she got up making the colt snort as he got in her face.
"So..." he said trailing off.
"So that's mean" Luna said huffing making the colt laugh.
"No this is mean" he said shoving her back. His accomplices, a grey earth filly with blue eyes and a red earth colt with green eyes, laughing at Luna.
"I'm telling my mommy and daddy" she said trying to intimidate him and his cronies.
"Awww... the false princess is trying to scare us" said the filly smirking.
"Run home to mommy and daddy faker" said the red colt making Luna tear up as she ran off sobbing. A thestral colt, unicorn filly and a pegasus filly and colt followed her with concern in their eyes.
Celestia watched in anger as those three foals had the audacity to bully her sister and to call her a false princess ,no less. Celestia sighed as she realized they had put her off telling anypony. They were young but also old enough to know better. With a sigh she moved onto the next memory.
"YOU IDIOT" shouted a angry teenage colt as he smacked a 14 year old Luna sending her sprawling.
"I'm sorry" she sobbed making Celestia bristle as she tried to blast the colt only to be reminded this was a memory when it passed through him. Celestia sighed knowing she would be angry as she sat down to watch this memory to understand Luna better through this.
"Ya can't do anything right. You were flirting with him" he snapped.
"No. I swear I wasn't Kill ,I swear" Luna sobbed as he stomped on side making her scream in pain only to be muffled when he pressed her muzzle to the floor. Bruises littered her side as his beating continued for several minutes before the colt stormed off.
"Let's get back to the pack before I kill him with my bare hooves" said a grizzled older voice as a black stallion with a vivid crimson mane stepped out from the shadows. Luna nodded her head as she stood up a very prominent limp in her movement. They stuck to the shadows until they got to the line of trees. "You first pup" he said softly making Luna nod and stand still til the sound of cracking bones could be heard. Celestia watched the memory in shock as her sister turned into a white and purple wolf with a blue star on her head that was only just shorter than Celestia right now. The stallion followed her shifting into a crimson wolf who was about a foot and a half taller than her. He nodded towards the trees as he jogged off with Luna following with a limp. Celestia decided she would continue her investigation once she had a chance to process the information. She lit her horn and left the memory realm
Current world
Celestia tucked her sister in before kissing her head softly. She left the room trying to make hardly any noise, and succeeded. It was unusually quite on the way to her room. She assumed the word had been spread and nopony wanted to upset her. Celestia walked into the main foyer of her quarters to get another shock.
"Skye!"
Author's Note
So Luna's secrets have been revealed and the eldest sister is back. Honestly I've wanted to write a werepony story for so long. That's obviously not the main purpose here but I thought I would include it anyway. So there are probably a few questions on Luna's coltfriend Killer. You probably wonder if Luna was in an abusive relationship why wouldn't she leave it. Well the reason is very simple: Killer is her mate. She loves him unconditionally even he does beat her. His crimes were punished by one of my personal favorite ponies who will be in the story in the future. If you're wondering why Luna's family never questioned the bruises is because they were never seen by them. She hid them with makeup and she heals quickly since she is a werepony. They never knew she was a werepony, had a boyfirend, or that she was bullied. There will be chapter in the next week I promise. Maybe even sooner if I have inspiration. With that said:
"Indeed" the mare known as Skye or Princess Skye said with a small chuckle at her younger sister's surprise. She made a brisk walk over to Celestia, and wrapped Celestia in a hug.
"What are you doing here" stuttered Celestia as she hugged back the smell of cherries filling her nose as it was buried in Skye's coat.
"Philomena" was all that Skye said gesturing with a wing to the phoenix as she broke the hug. Said phoenix let out a caw at her name staring at the princesses, though it was mainly Celestia who was in her gaze. "Tia, Philomena is trained to get me, mother,father or one of the high ranks if there is serious trouble. What happened?" said Skye staring into Celestia's eyes with a stern gaze.
"You're going to want to sit down Skye" Celestia said leading Skye to her bed. Skye simply raised her eyebrow but settled down on the bed. "What happened was..."
As Celestia spoke to Skye on the other side of the castle the moon princess was awaking.
Luna's eyes opened slowly as a bright light blinded making her slam her eyes close. She slowly opened her eyes again as they adjusted to the blinding light. Her head turned as she took in her surroundings. Her eyes shot open as she realized she wasn't dead. If she was dead she would have met Deathbringer at the split. She noticed her hoof had an IV in it pumping some clear fluid into her. If there was an IV then there was a needle to. She ripped it out by biting down on the line. What many ponies didn't know was that she was deathly afraid of them. She remembered her ~~mom~~ mother having to literally carry her to get shots at the doctors. She had to get away if she wanted to not have to face Celestia's questions if she didn't escape. She spread her wings getting the blood pumping through them, then opened the window with her magic. Her sharp ears caught the sound of hooves approaching her room at a fast pace, and quickly started flapping her wings to get in the air. She hadn't gotten a few feet off the balcony and in the air before magic wrapped itself around her pulling her back into the room. She tumbled into a larger body so that meant one thing. "Tia" she mumbled weakly trying to get out the pony's hooves.
"Wrong" said an all to familiar voice.
"Skye" she squealed doubling her efforts to get away only to feel herself set on the bed and a wing pinning her down.
"Don't even try" said Skye sternly nipping Luna's ear.
"Oww" Luna whimpered rubbing her ear trying to alleviate the pain. "Did you have to nip so hard" she questioned settling down.
"You tried to kill yourself and then when that didn't work you planned on running away. Trust me that wasn't hard" said Skye her gaze firm before softening tremendously as she kept Luna's gaze. "I don't think you realize how much that would have hurt me, Tia, mother, father and so many others. We love you so much, yet you don't realize that." she said honestly as she kissed Luna's head.
"But...but everypony said that... that nopony would miss me" stuttered Luna trying to justify her reasons.
"It doesn't matter what anypony else says, it only matters that you know how much we all love you," Skye said before turning to Celestia "watch her while I tell mother and father."
Luna blanched at that but couldn't really escape the hold she was in. Celestia switched places with Skye nuzzling Luna's neck before saying to Skye, "be back soon."
Skye nodded before teleporting out of the room. She appeared in the parlor room where her parents and grandparents spent most of their time. When it became apparent they weren't there she decided they were probably in the throne room with the council. She walked briskly to the throne room only to be blocked by the guards.
"I'm sorry but the king and queen are very busy right now, Princess Skye" said the mare on the right.
"My parents need to be informed immediately about an issue" said Skye opening the door before slipping inside. She cleared her throat attracting the attention of all the gathered ponies.
"Skye" greeted Queen Galaxia
"As much as your mother and I would love to talk we are busy dear" said King Sol.
"You'll want to hear this" said Skye before explaining all she had learned. The gathered ponies consisted of her parents, grandparents, and their council which consisted of 27 noble ponies who were like the alicorns immortal. By the end of her explanation the nobles were horrified, her grandmothers and mother in shock while her father and grandfathers looked angry.
"I'll kill him. I'll rip him limb from limb" snarled King Sol his eyes taking a dangerous glint in them. Galaxia was quick to nuzzling him and trying to calm him down.
"I'm sure he is mortal but just in case we should check with Princess Luna" said a pure white pegasus mare with a black mane name Sharp Wit. Skye nodded and teleported her two younger sisters to them. Luna immediately tried to hide herself into Celestia making all of the gathered mares coo. Luna was fondly remembered when she was younger for not only being a prankster but also being extremely shy around ponies.
"This Kill, is he dead?" asked King Sol seething.
"Yes" Luna whispered.
"How do you know?" asked her grandmother Queen Dawn.
"I um saw it" squeaked Luna.
"May we...?" questioned her grandfather King Dark gesturing to her head. Luna nodded dipping her head allowing the spell to take affect.
Memory
They were in alleyway where shadows loomed over the buildings. Killer sat on the ground a sword clutched close to him as a battered Luna lay unconscious against the building wall.
"You shouldn't treat a mare like that" said a young stallions voice.
"I'll treat a mare however I want" snapped Killer.
"Why would you treat Luna like that" asked the voice again.
"She deserves it. All mares are good for is creating heirs and she won't do that for me"snarled Killer.
"Tsk. That's not all their good for" said the voice. "they make good companionship and are beautiful,smart and most times smarter than us stallions. Now if I let you live you will never bother Luna or anyother mare again, got it."
"No. Luna rejected me as her mate she deserves this. Besides, you could never kill me" said Killer gloatingly. Little did he know those would be the last words he ever spoke. A pony fell from the sky and decapitated him in seconds.
"Such a shame. Luna is such a beautiful mare it's so sad she got you as her mate" said the stallion. He picked Luna up in his magic and turned to walk off only to stumble on his cloak. He sighed lowering the hood to reveal none other than... Prince Blueblood.
Author's Note
If this chapter sucks its because of two reason. 1. I'm a terrible writer anyways and 2. I had a headache on the first half so... yeah. Did you like my hero at the end? Bet you weren't expecting that.
Luna glared at the guards blocking her path. She had just been trying to go to the library to read a book but the guards wouldn't even let her out of her room.
"Princess Luna," the guard to her right, "Queen Galaxia order that we not allow you out of bed much less your room."
"And I say you must let me out," ordered Luna. Being on bed rest for the last five days made her antsy. Luna's ears involuntarily twitched as she heard her mothers light hoof steps. Just as Luna thought, her mother appeared around the corner.
"Guards you are dismissed," Queen Galaxia said as she entered Luna's room. Galaxia shut Luna's door staring down at her youngest foal. "Luna you should be resting," Galaxia said gently.
"No thanks! I've been on bed rest for the last five days mother," Luna objected stomping her hoof softly.
"What's made you such a fussy filly today?" Galaxia cooed making Luna blush.
"I'm not a filly mother, I'm a grown mare and I'm certainly not fussy," Luna protested as her mother picked her up with telekinesis. "Put me down," Luna demanded.
"Okay," Galaxia said plopping Luna down onto the bed. Luna glared up at her mother and tried to squirm off the bed. "Luna, I think it be best if you had a nap," Galaxia said gently running her wing down Luna's back.
"No way," Luna complained, "naps are for foals mother."
"If you take your nap like a good filly I'm sure there can be some rewards for it," Galaxia offered.
"Like what?" Luna asked ignoring the 'good filly' part. She was a bit tired now that she thought about it ,and the thought of rewards made her more willing to agree.
"How does dessert sound?" Galaxia asked seeing the tiredness in Luna's eyes, "If you stop fussing about a nap I'll even make sure they have some sopapillas." Luna's head bobbed up and down at the mention of sopapillas. Galaxia pulled the blanket back and motioned Luna to lay down. Luna followed her instructions laying down on her side. Galaxia smiled softly kissing Luna's forehead as she tucked her in.
"Night little moon," Galaxia said nuzzling Luna.
"Night night," Luna said her eyes closing only to open again as something pressed against her chest. She looked down squealing at what she saw. It was her old stuffed animal from when she was a filly. Luna pulled it tight against her looking up to thank her mother only to see she was gone. Luna sighed contently, feeling cozy and snug in the blankets.
Author's Note
Yes, I know it's a short chapter. I have no idea what I want to do for the next chapter or even the rest of this book. Please suggest things. I'll take anything.
Author's Note
Ideas given to me from Knight of Crows. Here's the link to their profile: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/330036/Knight+of+Crows/stories
Sick day
Luna had grown violently sick from an infection that had gotten into her bloodstream. It was called Septicemia or Sepsis. What happened was that when the chemicals in her bloodstream were triggered to release it triggered inflammation throughout her body. She was at risk to damage to her organ systems which meant that they fail meaning that she would...
Luna shook her head trying to clear her head immediately regretting her decision. She tried breath in deeply but it was so difficult. That was one her many symptoms including fever, low blood pressure, fast heart rate and mental confusion. The last one really bothered her because she acted so strange when ponies visited. She either didn't know who they were or called them by things she had only called them when she was a small filly. She even called her parents Mommy and Daddy for goddesses sake!
Luna turned her head to look at the window when she heard a soft creak coming from her door. She turned to the door only to hear the window creak open making her turn quickly. "Buck," she groaned from turning to quickly making her dizzy. She felt the bed dip down making her turn squealing at the sight.
A dappled black and grey thestral stallion with a cropped red mane stared down at her, his slitted green eyes staring into her teal ones. "That's a coarse word for the Princess of the Night to use" the stallion scolded with a small fanged grin.
"Rising Shadow!" Luna whispered throwing herself against him. Rising Shadow barely needed to move to hold her against him. Luna could feel the scars under his thick coat making her look up at him. "I.. I thought I failed!! I thought I lost you!" she wailed into his coat hugging him.
Rising Shadow rocked her gently stroking her back with a loving look in his eyes. "You never failed love," he whispered softly his accent coming through as he nuzzled her neck. He gently pushed Luna away ignoring her hurt look. "Turn around my dear," he encouraged. Luna did as told throwing herself at the other pony on her bed once she saw him.
"Blueblood," Luna sobbed against his chest. Blueblood was a white stallion with a pure blonde mane and tail. The blue eyed unicorn stallion held her against him.
"That's not how my little night savior should act," Blueblood teased kissing her forehead making Luna chuckled.
"Stop calling me that," Luna whined covering her face blushing beet red.
"You made our little night sky blush," Rising Shadow chuckled softly.
What many ponies didn't know was that Luna craved having more than one partner what was normally called a polygamous relationship. She loved having two partners to love and who loved her back. She knew she sounded needy but she constantly needed the support that they willingly gave her.
"I thought you died in.. in the collapse of the ruins," Luna stuttered out confusion shining in her teal eyes as she looked into Rising Shadow's eyes.
"He nearly did but at the last minute I got a shield up," Blueblood explained kissing the tip of Luna's muzzle making her crinkle her muzzle with a small pout.
"We went into hiding after that. We wanted to come back to you but it was impossible. You were constantly guarded and then Nightmare Moon happened," Rising Shadow said noticing Luna's flinch at the name.
"So it's my fault we couldn't be together," Luna whispered tears gathering in her eyes.
"Don't you dare speak like that!!" Rising Shadow and Blueblood scolded.
"But it was my fault," Luna muttered making the two stallions share a look.
"I think our little night sky needs to be taught what happens when we're disobeyed. Don't you Rising?" Blueblood asked with a dark grin making Luna shrink back nervously.
"I do Blue," Rising Shadow smirked with a predatory smirk.
"No I don't," Luna said shuffling backwards.
"Oh but you do," Blueblood smirked pinning Luna down with one quick move. Rising Shadow was quick to attack kissing Luna's neck with soft kisses as he trailed down. He moved his hooves underneath her wings making Luna squeal as he started to tickle her.
"No don't," Luna squealed as his hooves dug into her side making her squirm as she giggled, suddenly whimpering in pain from her chest constricting. She was immediately released.
"We're sorry. We forgot how sick you were," Blueblood apologized kissing her cheek.
"It's fine," Luna said as she rubbed her chest gently.
"No it's not," Rising Shadow said leaping out of bed. "Keep her busy. I'll be back soon," he promised leaving the room quickly.
"Any clue what he's doing?"Luna asked her ears perked up.
"Not a clue," Blueblood chuckled. 30 minutes later Rising Shadow returned with a bundle of things.
"Close your eyes Luna," Rising Shadow said. Luna pouted but closed her eyes listening to Blueblood and Rising Shadow rustle around. "Okay you can open them," Rising Shadow said a few minutes later. Luna opened her eyes gasping at what they had done. They had strung light blue fairy lights around her room as well as making a fort out of blankets over her bed. They had a her favorite movie playing which was The Mild Berrythorns. They had a bowl of mint chocolate ice cream in front of her that was covered in chocolate syrup. Rising Shadow pushed her hoof away when she reached out for a spoon. Throughout the movie they took turns feeding her the ice cream. When the ice cream was gone they took turns kissing Luna's lips. They were all asleep by the time the credits rolled onto the screen. Luna was in between the stallions and they had themselves pressed tightly against her.
Hey guys, I'm sorry to inform you that I'm completely stopping with this story. The pacing is bothering me, and overall so is my writing style so I've decided to stop. That doesn't mean I'm not going to restart it. I've decided to post a new one that will be at a much better pace and quality then I could have ever hoped for when I started writing this one. The first chapter of the new one should be up hopefully later today. The new one will not focus mainly on Luna killing herself but rather her battling with darker thoughts that I know people go through when they are depressed. The reason I'm posting a new one and not just deleting this one is simply because I want to keep this story so that one day I can look back at it and see if I'm happier with how my writing style has changed with time. It's also a reminder of how I jumped into writing on this website.
Edit: It's now up. It's called Moon's Change
Age:17)Blueblood lay on the ground blood dripping from his muzzle. He glared up at the stallion who was smirking down at him.
"Well it seems I win" the stallion said.
"I think you mean I win" said Blueblood his eyes turning red startling the stallion making him back up a few steps. Blueblood took that to his advantage and jumped up. He lunged forward sinking his fangs into the stallions neck and ripping his throat out. The stallion's eyes' rolled back in his head as he bled out. "Never challenge a vampony to a fight and expect to win" Blueblood hissed into the stallions ear before walking away.
( Age 20) Blueblood stared at the mare before him in shock. "R..Rare" he whispered tears falling from his eyes as he stared at her still body. "Why" he whimpered laying down beside her. He put his head on the light blue mares back. She was cold. A sure sign she had passed away hours ago. He buried his head into her coat sobbing.
"I'm so sorry Blueblood" a black stallion said.
"Why did she have to die Steal" he whispered.
"I don't know" Steal said rubbing his hoof down Bluebloods back. An hour later Blueblood rose to unsteady hooves. His eyes bloodshot and puffy from crying.
"I'm going to miss you" Blueblood murmured gently running his hoof through her light yellow mane. "They can take her now" he whispered hoarsely allowing the ponies to take her body to a morgue.
(Age 32) Blueblood smiled softly at the dark blue mare in front of him. "I love you Luna" he said kissing her cheek.
"I love you too" Luna mumbled into his neck. Blueblood chuckled gently pulling her closer. He placed a kiss onto her light blue mane. Blueblood grinned staring down at her.
"Luna I have a question" he said softly.
"What is it" she asked curiously. He stared into her teal eyes. The same eyes that captivated him every time he looked into them.
"I'm not good with fancy speeches so here it goes. Luna you are the light of my life. The very reason I wake up every morning. You accept me. You accept my princely side and my gang leader side. Luna you the very air that I breathe. Will you marry me?" Blueblood said pulling a diamond necklace that had both their birthstones in it.
"Yes!" she screamed tackling him and covering his face in kisses.
Author's Note
Hello everyone! Rare is not Rarity okay. She is a completely different mare. The reason Blueblood doesn't like Rarity is because despite her coat colors she reminds him of his best friend Rare Diamond which is a really sore subject to him. The random mare that talked in the last chapter named Sharp Wit is actually his mother if you didn't know. The ages in parentheses is Blueblood's age at that time. The chapter after this will be after a few days passed in Equestria. Now onto the story.
