The Lamia Queen

by Summer Waves

Rating: teen
Tags: Death, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Adventure, Violence
Length: 3823

When a new Lamia queen is born she will be set on an adventure to Equestria

When Beauty Eyes the new Lamia queen is born her subjects are overjoyed. Soon after she turns ten she goes on an adventure to take back what should have belonged to her and her subject long ago... Equestria

Published 2018-08-11 16:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-10-11 13:11:54 UTC

Chapter 1

Author's Note

Hi the author here hope you enjoy my story there will be a lot more to come thanks for reading bye

Chapter 1

In the deepest part of the Eveefree Forest deeper than the Tree of Harmony and deeper than the Castle of the two Sisters there laid an empire (though more akin to a kingdom) full of splendor and riches. Houses farms, shops, theaters, camps, and could be seen schools were seen. Each building with its own beauty to behold and love, each made with the utmost care with a material unknown to pony kind it looked of scales each building with its own design but none clashed with each other. But the part that any creature or pony not accustomed to could not help but gawk and stare at in pure bliss, delight, and wonderment for in the center of anything was a castle of pure spenders to old to know 5 built but it was kept clean, so it sparkled through time, for those assigned to clean it was held in one the highest accord for the castle was waiting for the next queen to walk in its halls to claim their birthright. For witch who was about to be born, for this is where the story starts. In a small hut in the smallest of farms in the empire there laid an exhausted mother saw her most beautiful creation for the first time her daughter.

She gasped she could not believe her eyes she looked down at her daughter right into her eyes she found that this was a mistake however as her mind suddenly became foggy as her mind was full of overwhelming bliss and obedience. She gasped by the powerful but welcoming intrusion of her mind, she had a stronger will than most as she quickly looked away. As soon as she did the feeling ceased. Her suspicion has been confirmed she called for her husband eager to tell him the news.

"Hey Wrap," she beckoned "our daughter is here and had a surprise for us." The door opened slowly for he was scared of what he might see.

Slowly a pony's head looked in the small room. The pony's head looked normal for the most part he did have dark oak brown fur with leaf green eyes and mane, except that be had long thin slits instead of pupils, and had 2 slits around his muzzle complete with 2 sharp glistening fangs coming from his upper jaw. For he like everyone else in this empire, he was a Lamia, half pony half snake. The cautious Lamia slithered in after seeing everything was all right his big muscular tale having the same coloration as his fur with a zig-zag pattern on top with the same color of his mane sharing also the color with his undescales followed short staring a few inches below his forefeet his tail got thicker the longer it got till eventually the tail became to become thinner, and thinner till it came to the end of the tail being only a few inches thick for he had an eight-foot tail showing his might and strength. He came over to his wife who they called "Who's scales beautifully sparkle and is as shiny as the moon" for she was a beauty to behold a cyan pony half with beautiful gold eyes, and mane, but which shined the most her tale,the tale of beauty although she only had a tale of five feet her beauty made up for the short length she had specks of gold randomly around her tale and like all lamias her undescales shared the color of her mane and eyes, yes there was no other that could compare to her beauty except for the small creature in her hooves.

Chapter 2

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Chapter 4

Consumed by her thoughts Shiny looked at her husband. His wide eyes grin starting only at his daughter's eyes. She suddenly gasped she felt her husbands tail around her neck pushing her gaze toward their daughter's. She tried to resist against his coils but his coils were too strong and her neck was too weak, and the fact that she was still tired and weak from birthing her daughter. She closed her eyes hoping to not meet her daughter's eyes so she will not fall victim like her husband.

"Why will she not look at my eyes I want her to" the little queen thought but again on cue her father started to open his wife's eyes so she will also feel the beautiful bliss that he felt. "No no," Shiny thought she could feel her husbands strong coils forcing her eyes to open. After about a minute her eyes finally got pulled open meeting her daughter's eyes.

"O-o-oh" she stammered daughter's presence invading her mind. "W-w-wow s-such b-b-beautiful eyes," she thought her mind was overwhelmed by the beautiful deep eyes of her daughter. It was getting hard to think all she wanted to do was stare at her daughter's eyes forever, she felt at peace, in bliss. Two minutes passed and only a little of her mind was still her's "N-no… m-must l-look a-a-a-awa…" PING the noise consumed her brain her mind now her daughter's. As soon as she heard the noise consume her brain she was overwhelmed by a wave of pure bliss, and peace. She had a Need to do as anything her daughter said. Her mouth went up in a large goofy grin just like her husbands.

Her daughter heard all of her Mother's thoughts and the ping consume her mind. She was happy. Snuggling into her mother's fur making sure to keep eye contact, but she slowly but surely fell into a peaceful sleep. After a while of losing her daughter's eyes falling asleep, she slowly came to. First, the bliss and peace started to fade then, her thoughts slowly came back, when she finally fully woke up from her trace she helped to wake up her husband who had a slower time waking up for he was in the trance for far longer than she.

After they both fully woke from their trance they looked at each other in understanding. They had to get her to the castle, but first they had to name her for they had the immense responsibly , and power to name the Queen for although their little daughter ruled over them they had the power to give her a name for the queen was their daughter and the parents named their child especially if their child was the Queen for if a queen was not named by her parents it was of up most of a disgrace for only a parent can to name their child and without a name a Lamia would not know who they were it would slowly take a toll on a Lamia for a slowly wondering why no one care for them to give them a name it would drive them to the peak of insanity and for a Lamia Queen that was especially dangerous for no one can put down the queen even if she so demanded it for the Eternal Coil would make sure for the Eternal Coil severely punishes the Lamia who wants to hurt the Queen if she has not already for the Eternal Coil watches over all Lamias making sure that the race survives. After a few moments of staring at each other deep in thought. Finally, a name came to the mother one fit for her daughter.

"We shall name her Who's eyes sparkle with beauty through all time," Shinny said.

"Hmmm yes that would do wonderfully the name fits her well," said Wraps. Though the name may be long it was a tradition for all lamias to have long names a lamias name may also display their power. For Shiny's full name is who's scales beautifully sparkle and is as shiny as the moon. Her name displays her power to sway almost any creature with her beauty. Wraps full name was who's tail wraps and tightens around. His displaying his powerful muscles of his tale to trap almost any opponent or prey.

Though a lamia's name is long they prefer to shorten it to save their breath.

"We shall call her Beauty eyes for short" Wraps spoke.

"Yes that sounds wonderful" replied Shiny. With the name decided on they lowered both of their muzzles to the sleeping queen's ears and they both said "Hear that young one we name you Who's eyes sparkle with beauty through all time, or Beauty Eyes for short" the little queen then shifted on her sleep sighing in content while her brain soaked in her name for she was know named and felt with immense love from her parents for she was named and knew she was loved. After starting at their beautiful daughter sleeping peacefully, they finally decided to bring her to the palace to their new home and so that her people can see their new queen and ruler. So they headed out of their little four-room house into the little farm, looking back at their daughter wrapped into a warm bundle of her Mother's coils held high for all to see for she was the queen and needed to be seen.

Chapter 5

Shiny and Wraps finally head to the castle holding their daughter up high. Onlookers look first in confusion for Shiny and Wraps were farmers they were at the lowest social standing in the empire why did they hold their child up high for all to see. Then their eyes fell upon her horn and all instantly knew why they were holding their baby up high for they were the lucky souls who birthed the queen and named her (the birthing only applying to the mother of course who was holding her up high) all who saw could not believe their eyes for the lamias of lowest social standing were parents to the new queen although every Lamia had the chance to birth a queen (except the queen herself for she did not want to bring her empire to shambles by having males fight over her love for all lonely lamias with no special someone could not resist a queen's beauty especially the promise of love so a queen would not mate) it was normally lamias of high social standing but not ones of the lowest. They all knew this queen was special and they all followed suit behind the parent and those queen for they were loyal to the queen and wished to see her officially crowed. Then something happened the little queen awoke from her slumber she was nervous at first for being in a new place so far from the ground but then she felt her mother's coils around her in a loving embrace which called her down.

Then she saw it the castle the moment she saw it she felt like it was calling her that her destiny was to be in there. She then looked down and saw the other lamias following her and her parents. Then she realized how much she missed someone looking at her eyes. She then built that field of her feelings around her again making it more more powerful then when it was full of her wish and desire she sent it toward the lamias following her they immediately soaked in the field all meeting her gaze one by one their eyes all widened for they were suddenly filled with the queens presence theirs minds became foggy and getting lost in her eyes. She heard all their thoughts some were more resistant to her power and some almost immediately heard the ping in their head their minds now full bliss and obedience and finally having a large grin spread across their face especially the young ones who had not a lot of will to resist the queen each ping she heard made her happier and happier making her gaze even harder to break out of and resist eventually every follower fell under the queen's control the more who saw the new queen and followed mindlessly for all they wanted was to continue to look in their queen's eyes.

The more that saw the new queen the more that joined the group and looked and became entranced by her eyes. The grin on their faces were the ever most amusing to the little queen and also hearing all their thoughts of pure bliss. Although she had ever one in a trance she wanted to go further she increased the intensity of her gaze which was not hard but took all who looked by surprise with all their eyes widening again. Their mouths fell agape being pounded with her eye but nothing more happened for her true power has not be discovered although she did not yet know. She giggled the funny grins on the other's faces finally making her laugh all other giggled to because their queen was happy the Lamia who was blessing them with her beautiful deep gold eyes.

Her parents finally looked back seeing what their daughter has done. Her mother immediately did what her mother did to soothe her. She started to move her coils around in a rhythmic pattern which massaged her daughter's body relaxing her, eyes. The little queen looked at her mother's coils unknowingly realising the lamias from her grasp the little queen watched how her mother's coils moved and shined the light moving of it, relaxing her further, she decided to sleep in the relaxing coils of her mother. Slowly each Lamia started to wake up others helping those who woke up quicker helped other who have not woken up soon everyone was woken again they all started the talk about her power that she might just be the one. Shiny and Wrap beamed at that news. After about a hour of walking they finally reached the palace. The guards noticed immediately and let the parents through a page was then informed so her crowing day can happen.

Chapter 7

Author's Note

Hi it's me again and I'm making a few changes to help you understand the story better as of now "thoughts will be in this format" hope you enjoy this chapter bye

Chapter 7

Crowning Day had finally arrived. The queen has been fed and groomed. Although the Beauty Eyes was confused about this whole affair she knew in her being that today, in particular, was very important. The moment finally arrived her Mother and Father slithered into the throne room holding their daughter up high together heading toward the throne a clear path in their way every lamia moving to make way for their queen ever eye was on her but knowingly not making eye contact. Book Knowledge slithered in after following closely behind.

The couple stopped right in front of the throne turning to face their daughter's subjects while also making her turn around to face then also.

"Today we are all gathered here to see our new queen touch her throne for the first time," Book Knowledge boomed. The crowd cheered.

"This is a time for celebration, yet let us have a moment of silence for the queens that came before her and joined the Eternal Coil" continued Book Knowledge. The room went silent wanting to give respect for the queens.

After a few seconds, Book Knowledge spoke again "The queen before you has very powerful magic even without her full power, though I believe that some of you have already experienced her power" the room was then full of murmurs of agreement.

"From what I have heard I do she will be the one who will claim what is rightfully ours Equestria" continued Book Knowledge. The crowd cheered again.

"With the right guidance her power will grow, but that is for the future, it is now the moment you are all waiting for," and one cue Shiny, and Wrap carefully put their daughter on her throne, careful to not touch it themselves as soon as she touches the throne a magical ripple went through Equestria though it could only be felt, and seen by lamias, the castle being affected immediately changing the tint to a more cyan, gold, brown, and green tint. The ripple spread finally reaching Cantalot if someone was nearby and paying very close attention they could hear the cracking of a certain statue accompanied by a small little chuckle, one that was called Draconaqous. Meanwhile, three little fillies where being born soon to be named Sweety Bell, Apple Bloom, and Scootaloo.

Chapter 8

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Chapter 9 (Preview)

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Chapter 3

All through the little queen was a baby she was intelligent for she was queen and it was her birthright to be so. She woke up in her Mother's hooves. The little queen knew the creature holding her was her Mother and there was her Father outside the room she felt him shifting through the vibrations going through her coils. She felt good her hooves but she knew in her being that the Mother was not in control she was. The little queen felt dominant over her mother.

She looked up noticing her Mother was examining her. They then met eyes. She liked the feeling of someone staring deep into her eyes it made her happy and it made her want to giggle. But the moment came to an end. She felt a bit sadder now but her Mother's warmth soothed that feeling. An understanding suddenly pooped into the young ones head for she now understood she had power, power with her eyes to entrance other "l-lamias that us what we are" she thought, although she is yet to understand the power that was waiting for her to discover.

Her Father slithered in then going by her mother's side and looking her over. A wanting feeling went through her mind just then a want for the feeling of someone to look at her eyes. She then felt something around her, a field of sorts of her desire for someone to look on her eyes. Her Father than slowly met her gaze. She knew her father that her feeling soaked into his brain, though she did not know he did not feel it.

Her Father then met her gaze. With her new understanding, she put her will into her gaze compelling her father to continue looking. She then felt something in her head, her father's thoughts. She knew what he was thinking but understood the meaning. He was falling for her eyes his mind-bending to her will this made her happy. She continued her gaze putting the promise of happy thoughts into it, the happiness he would feel if he would just give in.

She felt his mind he caved while hearing a small ping that consumed his mind, signaling he would stare at her forever. She noticed the goofy grin on his face, which made her even happier. She felt that her father was so happy full of pure bliss. She thought that her mother will like her gaze to and wanted her to experience like her father was, almost on cue she saw her Father's tail slowly but surely wrapping around her Mother's neck pulling her mother's gaze to her's. This only made her even happier making her giggle and smile realizing that her Father heard what she wanted through her gaze and did what she wanted to please her. Her Father giggled too she knew cause she was happy her Father was happy, and that made her the ever so happier.

Chapter 6

The Page got the Queen's advisor (known as Who's knowledge of books surpasses or Book Knowledge for short his name shows his extensive knowledge in all subjects) to inform him about the news. Book Knowledge had white fur and yellow eyes and mane, with a simple swirly pattern on his tale and yellow underbelly scales. Of course, Book Knowledge was ecstatic when he heard and headed down to the throne room to met the little queen and her parents. He went to the hall outside of the throne room.

He bowed to the still sleeping queen for he had the utmost respect for her. He then acknowledged her parents.

"How proud you must be, for being her parents, thank you for being her to the world. Please let me tell her name" Book Knowledge said.

"Her name is Who's eyes sparkle with beauty through all time or Beauty Eyes for short" Shiny said.

"Ah what a beautiful name" Book Knowledge replied.

"Thank you she does have powerful eyes we have experienced it ourselves," said Wraps.

"Oh, she is powerful how far did she pull you in" Book Knowledge asked.

"To the Ping," said Shiny,

"With no colors and she managed to do also with the others who were following us to the castle."

"Oh, my" Book Knowledge replied.

"Hmmm most queens cannot get that far with no colors and as a newborn, I believe that no queen before ever had such entrancing eyes without her colors except… her... Queen Power Range… I think your little daughter is the one we have been waiting for." Shiny and Wraps looked each other in shock but Book Knowledge's words did have truth about the past queen in them.

They both looked at each and nodded.

"Well, then we shall let her subjects know if this news, and then train her, so she will be ready when she comes of age," they said.

"Yes let's me show you to the nursery and we can talk about her crowning day there, but she has to stay off the throne till her crowing day so all can see her be in her place, for it shows that the queen has respect for her subjects to let her it down on her throne for the first time," informed Book Knowledge "got it we won't let her on the throne said Shiny.

"Good now let me show you to the nursery," said Book Knowledge. They slithered to the nursery and having some small talk on the way. When they finally got to the nursery they opened the big green doors, and saw a huge room, with couches, and tables for the parents an adults, and a brilliantly huge crib in the middle of the room, a pile of toys, and stacks of bottles, and blankets in a corner of the room. Both parents gasped the room was brilliant full of splendor.

"So shall we get started," Book Knowledge said sitting down on a couch and waving his hoof pointing at two chairs in front of him.

"Oh yes of course," said Shiny. So Shiny slithered over to the crib and carefully put her daughter down not wanting to wake her then she sat down in a chair next to her husband and so they began making preparations for the Crowning Day.