Chapters Daughter of the Stars (Reboot)
Chapter 2. ......Help......
Author's Note
Hi! Tbh I'm just glad you liked or was interested in the story enough to go to the next chapter XD, but I am glad you did.
If you want to see a certain scene between Luna and Aquila or Luna and Celestia in the next few chapters then feel free to tell me and I will probably fit it in somewhere as long as it fits nicely into the storyline since I love all the good ideas that others can come up with. (Just nothing between Celestia and Aquila, well, I guess you could but it would appear in later chapters so no promises)
Also, constructive criticism is welcomed and taken into consideration!
(-Afterthought- I will try to make all my chapters at least 1,000 words each, but remember there is only so many words I can put in a chapter before it reveals more then I want it to or I'm going over board with something)
Chapter 2. ......Help......
Well, Luna did NOT think this whole 'secrecy' thing through. It had been dumb luck as well as skill that had allowed Lun to sneak back into her room without detection...... Not that it mattered for moments later Celestia damn near broke the door down along with two guards at her side. Luna had set down Aquila on the plush bed, so hiding her as no big problem, but with Celestia's loud scolding, well, Luna was just glad that by some miracle Aquila didn't wake. Celestia had gone on and on about 'sister! Where did you go that you couldn't possibly alert your guard? That was very irresponsible making me worry like that! Do you know how much you scared me by disappearing like that?' and ' Luna, do you not trust me enough to at least inform me that you are leaving somewhere?! Are you still angry at me? I'm so sorry sister, but I'm just glad you are ok now...' and so forth, which caused for one thoroughly scolded younger sister and two very uncomfortable guards.
It took 20 minutes of apologies and thinly veiled hints of exhaustion that finally caused Celestia to leave Luna alone. Once Celestia left, Luna turned back around to see Aquila sleeping peacefully, which was a miracle in itself.
Luna sighed, soooo no more nights/days of full sleep? expected. Wanted? Definitely not. This is going to be more difficult than she thought, for starters, it meant that she would have to spend more time in her room, which would cause alarm with Celestia for certain, and not to mention the long run when Aquila grew older. What would happen when Aquila needed to interact with others her age? or when she wanted to explore outside Luna's room? But that could be put off for now at least, but it was something to consider... Maybe keeping her secret wasn't such a good idea? nope, it was a good idea. All those greedy nobles or individuals that might want to influence Aquila for their own gains? NOT a good thing. Maybe keep Aquila here until she is a bit less easily influenced? but then how would she ever learn? I need to stop thinking down this path before I go insane.
Luna shook her head before looking back to Aquila, she hadn't noticed it before, but Aquila took after her father in other aspects, such as the tufts on top of her more batlike ears, and her wings were certainly unique! Soft feathers lined the upper half of her wings, but the bottom half was membrane like a Thestral. Luna nuzzled her daughter on impulse, she just couldn't seem to stop wanting to cuddle this cutie!
As Aquila ate more slowly now, Luna couldn't help but think about all those wasted years on the moon, how Aquila was forced to be placed into a time capsule.
A quiet, raspy voice in the back of Luna's mind whispered--It wouldn't have been so if Celestia had not banished us to the moon. Our precious one would have not been a secret from the world then... She would have had friends her own age- or well, close enough to her age--
Luna recoiled slightly and hissed quietly "Nightmare. You were defeated. Begone this instant"
-- Defeated, my dear Luna. Not destroyed. I shall forever live on in either your mind or another. You know I'm right, this IS Celestia's fault. SHE was the one who banished us, SHE was the one who tore us away from Noctis, SHE was the one wh-
Luna growled "Be silent Nightmare! I will never again yield to your tricks!"
-- As you wish, dear Luna--
With that, the voice became silent and seemingly disappeared. Luna winced but did not allow fear to grow, Nightmare Moon was not entirely gone, the Elements of Harmony had done quite the number on the parasite, but if anything it said was to be trusted, it could never truly be killed.
Luna had to forcefully dismiss these thoughts as Aquila pushed away from the now empty bottle and cooed sleepily. Luna smiled softly before carefully setting the tiny Alicorn on her shoulder and gently patting her back. After a couple burps, Aquila yawned, showing her tiny teeth, and slowly closed her eyelids.
Waking up was lovely, unlike most mornings. See most mornings included much procrastination and grumbling and copious amounts of coffee. But this morning was strangely peaceful as Luna awoke to the gentle tapping of tiny hooves on her face.
Luna brought up her own hoof and gently booped Aquila on her nose, which caused high pitched giggles from the foal. Luna crossed her eyes and stuck her tongue out which caused even more highly adorable giggles. Luna smiled and cuddled her tiny one for a few moments before a crisp knock at her door caused her to jump slightly.
Luna quickly got out of bed, made sure that Aquila was safe from rolling off the edge, and went over to the door and cracked it open just enough to allow her face to poke through. A young maid stood at the door and said, nervously but clearly "Y-your Highness, Princess Celestia has invited you to b-breakfast"
Luna nodded and spoke in a normal tone of voice, which of course she would, while a maid was a subject, they fell into a slightly different category "We thank you, maid, thou may inform Celestia that we have received her message and will the be their promptly"
The maid nodded quickly and quickly turned and damn near scurried away, clearly intimidated by the lunar princess. Luna snorted, it wasn't as if she was still possessed by Nightmare Moon. Luna closed the large double doors and turned to the stand which held her regalia. She quickly slipped into the more regalia and turned to Aquila who was still wide awake. This was a bit of a predicament... Luna couldn't leave Aquila all alone, not while she was conscious at least, but she couldn't just not attend breakfast either lest she risk Celestia's suspicion.
After thinking for a minute, Luna used her magic to create a mobile that had little bits and bobs from around the room and hung it above the bed for Aquila to look at. She then created a practical fortress out of pillows so Aquila couldn't roll off the edge of the bed before heading out the door to head to a most likely rushed breakfast
well, this is where I'm going to leave off for this chapter. I really can't be bothered to check this over though before I post it, so sorry for any possible grammar mistakes!
Daughter of the Stars (Reboot)
Luna returned to her chambers with a soft sigh, the meeting with Celestia was about what you might expect, a poorly hid interrogation on her health, how she was adjusting, when she planned to take back her throne, how she liked the food, almost any questions Celestia could conjure in her still guilty mind.
Luna appreciated her sister's concern, it was a nice change compared to a thousand years ago when Celestia couldn't care half a wit about Luna. It was unwise to linger on these thoughts, she could still feel the parasite linger in the very depths of her mind, waiting patiently to once more steal a foothold.
She distracted herself by looking over the large, baby-proofed bed where Aquila gurgled happily at the mobile above her head. She smiled, her precious star had been fine in the half-hour Luna had been gone, and oh, was it ever difficult to be away from Aquila for so long, her instincts had been screaming in her ear the entire time she was away to return to her daughter's side.
Luna walked over to the plush bed, kicking off her hoof guards. With care not to disturb the high walls made of pillows, she clambered over to her daughter and curled around her, receiving delighted giggles. Aquila seemed ecstatic to be in the presence of her mother, wiggling around trying to press closer to her.
As Luna watched her daughter fondly, her mind raced to the future, for now was as good of a time as any to harbour these thoughts. She couldn't keep Aquila a secret for long, not without gaining the attention of the nobles which would only further sully her reputation, or even worse, gain the attention of Celestia, who would look at her with that 'I-am-so-disappointed-that-you-don't-trust-me' look. You know, the one the Luna is weak against.
Aquila nuzzled Luna's wings, curious about the stiff and slightly gritty feathers. Perhaps it would be wise to choose a trustworthy Night Guard to introduce to Aquila, so then at least Aquila would not be alone if Luna had to leave for some reason or another. It would take time and energy, but now that Luna could think a bit clearer from rest and fresh food, she had the effort to spare.
Aquila started to gnaw on one of her softer feathers, no doubt liking the velvety texture in her mouth. To be able to properly expose Aquila, Luna would have to establish her reputation amongst the nobles and the ponies of Equestria so when her daughter was unveiled to the world, she would have something to fall back on.
Luna's head started to ache, such planning was taking its toll on her still delicate mind. Taking a deep breath before she fell too far into her in own mind, she solidified her first move. Locate a Night Guard that she can trust with her secret and introduce them to Aquila, and preferably a Bat Pony, they usually have an ingrained loyalty to her and Aquila having some of their traits would endear her.
Making sure Aquila was ok on her own for a few moments, Luna gingerly got up and moved away from the bed. The best way to start building her reputation was to present a clean image. Approaching the yet unused washroom, she raised an eyebrow at the luxury and elegant interior. The floors were white marble, with a very large, cream-white bathtub which could be better described as a small swimming pool with a shallow end that reached her hooves and deep end that would reach up to her neck. The steps leading to the bathtub are lined with a slightly rough material to keep her hooves from slipping, there were even taps for hot and cold water, which was completely new to Luna as before, water had to be heated manually. The washrooms in her time were much less exuberant and more about getting clean in the shortest amount of time.
After fiddling with the odd taps for a little, Luna set the water temperature to a pleasant lukewarm. As she waited for it to fill, she looked through the soaps and shampoo's set out alongside the edges. Once the bath was nearly full, she turned off the water, she turned around and stepped back into the bedroom, where Aquila was nibbling on the edge of a pillow.
Using her magic to pick up her daughter, Luna levitated Aquila onto her back before eagerly approaching the awaiting bath. Relieving herself of her remaining regalia, she stepped into the bathtub. The water was warm and soothing on her matted fur, and she took no time washing the dust and grime from her mane. She let Aquila splash around in the shallowest end, watching her like a hawk in case she should fall.
After washing out a pine-scented shampoo from her mane and tail, she brought Aquila into her hooves and started washing her down as well. No need for just Luna to smell fresh and clean, and Aquila seems to enjoy it thoroughly if her energetic splashing was anything to go by. It was making a complete mess of the bathroom as the water went flying, but Luna could do nothing but smile as she was finally able to watch Aquila play as a young filly should.
We could have had this time with Aquila much earlier if it wasn't for Celestia
Luna started slightly at the sharp tones of the parasite, but quietly spat out as she watched her precious star play "Silence parasite. You have no right to converse with me or to even utter my star's name. And if you should ever even think of harming Aquila, I swear to the moon I will do everything in my power to end you. Permanently"
A faint chuckle Of course. Not that I ever would, we will require an heiress after all. We would never injure the precious one, not like Celestia tried to
Luna shook her head, her wet mane flopping around "Celestia didn't know, you cannot blame her! Cease your attempts to poison my mind immediately!"
Luna could almost feel the smug smirk of the parasite Didn't she? the oh so grand Celestia had no hesitations banishing her baby sister to a desolate wasteland for a thousand years
It took her far too much effort to chain the Nightmare back into the recesses of her mind and gag her. She gazed back down to Aquila, who had been looking up at her mother curiously. Luna cuddled her soaked filly as she murmured "Don't fret my precious star, I will keep you safe" Aquila babbled and hugged her mother's snout.
Luna would keep her daughter protected, that was for certain, and she would sooner raze Canterlot to ash before she let danger visit her foal.
Daughter of the Stars (Reboot)
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Animals scrambled wildly and rushed through the thick underbrush in attempts to escape the rampaging, wild looking mare who was doing a swell job of destroying the Everfree forest in her desperate search.
Blue aura violently shredded the underbrush and demolished the roots and bark of the surrounding trees and the wielder of the blue aura looked just as wild and haggard as her magic. Her coat was matted with sweat and lingering moondust that refused to budge as it was the remnant of her banishment that had just ended yesterday, the feathers on her wings were clumped together and desperately needed a good preening, her horn was dull and fuzzy from centuries of neglect, her normally serene turquoise eyes were red and bloodshot from pure exhaustion and stress, her mane and tail was short and a light blue that looked very similar to her younger self.
Princess Luna of Equestria was a wreck, mentally and physically, and really? who wouldn't? Centuries of solitary confinement , being agonizingly, but thankfully separated with a life-sucking parasite called Nightmare Moon that had latched onto her, and then immediately searching for the one thing she cared about most that was currently lost in the most dangerous forest in the world? Oh no, you'd be a hot mess too.
But where in Tartarus could that pod be? Yea, it's small, about as large as her wing, but for Faust's sake, it GLOWS. So, in the middle of the night, it should not be this hard to spot! Luna ignored the tears of frustration slipping from her eyes as her wild searching grew slower and slower until it eventually stopped altogether. Was this it? was the pod destroyed on impact from the rainbow blast? It was never designed to withstand such brute force, only to keep and preserve the most precious cargo it held safely in its hold.
Luna lethargically sank down to her rump, tears streaming down her face in a constant flow now. It can't be gone? but...it was the only thing that had kept her somewhat sane during her imprisonment... no... not this... anything but this... not her.. anything but her... take anything from Luna but her... surely the elements would not destroy the purest thing that held dear to her heart? Luna's head sank towards the ground as she fought to retain control of her emotions
Luna breathed in raggedly before raising her head once more to look around, nothing.....nothing..... nothing... no- wait, is that? It is! out of the corner of her eye, Luna spotted a pale blue glow in the distance that would have easily been outshone by her blue aura, so that's why she didn't spot it earlier! Her magic must have had a brighter glow then the pod, so only when she stopped was she able to see the telltale glow of old, old magic!
She raced over to the glow, her eyes locking onto the center of glow. After a few near misses with a couple trees that had stupidly been planted in her way, she made it over to the pod. She skidded to a stop a couple inches in front of it. her breath caught in her throat as she stared t it, remembering every detail. How it glowed a pale blue, how white dots and lines scattered across it like constellations on a map, how thick it was except for a large slot in the middle. But she cared little for the pod, for she was incredibly more interested in its cargo.
Using what little of depleted magic remained, she carefully peeled away layer after layer of the pod until the last layer disappeared to reveal what it held. A filly. A newborn filly with a mane as white as moonlight with black speckles as if a reverse night sky, and a coat as pitch black as shadow. Luna hesitated briefly before picking up the tiny filly in her hooves.
Luna memorized every part of her daughter, the way her mane fell around her tiny ears, how her tiny wings were still clamped to her sides, how a tiny nub of a horn just poked out her white mane, the way tiny tufts of fur stuck out around her miniscule hooves. Every part of her was perfect, from the way she yawned sleepily, to the way her dark purple eyes that seemed to be speckled with golden fleck cracked open for the first time.
Luna immediately fell in love. She remembered how after a short time on the moon she had given birth but had no time to rest seeing as the filly could not breathe, so with her magic, she had created a time capsule of sorts. It would freeze the little one in time until Luna, and Luna alone lifted the spell. But none of that mattered now, seeing as the little filly would soon grow cold in the soft breeze of the night.
While Luna never took her eyes off of her daughter, she spread her wings and with a few flaps, rose into the air. Soaring high above the Everfree, Luna the little alicorn close to her chest while beelining for Canterlot Castle. She didn't wonder how Celestia would react, or even if she should tell Celestia, nor did she ponder just how exactly she was going to take care of the young one. Luna only thought about how no matter, through thick and thin, she would love and protect her baby. Her Aquila.
Of course, her late father would have been the most doting creature on the planet... But that was another thing time had stolen from Luna. She tried hard to push down any resentment pointed at Celestia, but it was so hard . Yes, Luna had gotten out of control, but it stemmed from Celestia neglect! It was all her fau- no. NO. These thoughts would not be allowed, not now, not tonight, not when she had just recovered Aquila. Later Luna would seeth but take no actions against Celestia, but not tonight. Not tonight.
Author's Note
The reboot of Daughter of the Stars! I'll be honest, I abandoned the previous because I am not at all happy with my previous writing and I couldn't bring myself to continue with such an awful piece. But this is an idea I really like, so I really don't want to leave it altogether, so I decided a reboot was the best option! So comment down below please and give me suggestions on how to improve or thing you would like to see in this story! (No really, tell me, I'm making this up as I go)
