The greatest sport

by Connorcooper

Concrete jungle

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(Manehatten)
(Time: 12:23pm)
(party horse bar)

The party horse bar its has everything that you can think of for a bar food, beer, wine, whiskey, vodka, girls or guys if your into that kind of thing, and everything in between. Well thats what it looks on the outside but on the VIP area, larger bar room, theater stage, drugs, weapons, and slave tracking all. All owned by big Tommy a big shot in the criminal underworld and who is expecting a purple dragon so he could use that dragon to blackmail the princess of friendship to expand his criminal empire. But what he wasn't expecting was a pair of glowing eyes watching him from the skylight.


The girl where finally done sing as big Tommy inhaled his cigar and exhaling smoke as he slowly clapped for the performers as the bowed and walked off stage.

"Man that was a great show right lad," Tommy said as he knocked off the ash of his smoke.

In front of him was his body guard Lad a tall unicorn with a missing eye with his arms crossed standing next to him.

"Yeah great show boss,"

Tommy laughed but stopped when two of his guys brought in a pony that looked like he seen hell as he was dragged in by the thugs. It was Wax covered in cuts that were bleeding prolifically as big Tommy got up and ran over to Wax.

"Kid what happened? Where's my dragon?" Tommy asked.

Wax slowly raised his head to Tommy as he saw the dying eyes of wax.

"...I...i...it...f...o....o..ll...fo...follo...followed...m...e...y..ou...sh...ou...should...run," Tommy looked at him confused as he got up and took a breath of his cigar before blowing it into Wax face.

"You don't have my dragon do you?"

Wax looked at him and shook his head 'no'.

"Well too bad...ice him," Tommy said as Wax began to shack his head.

"w...wait...listen...to...m...e...it...its...co...me...ing...yo...u...ne..ed...to...run," Wax said weakly as he was dragged away.

Tommy watched Wax be dragged away as he took his set and took another drag of his cigar.

"Hey boss do you know what 'it' is?" Lad asked his boss.

Tommy opened one eye to look at lad.

"Don't know don't care," Tommy told him.

Lad looked at the doors that Wax was dragged through as he felt fear go down his spine.

As Tommy finished his cigar he was about to pull another one as he looked up at the skylight to see the yellow eyes looking at him.

"What the-"

Before he could finished a creature jumped though the skylight and onto the table in front of Big Tommy. The creature was complete invisible as it grabbed tommy by the throat and picked him up almost 9ft off the ground.

"Kill...it...damn...it!" Tommy tried to say.

Lad looked at his boss being held by a invisible force, he then snapped out of it and pulled out his knife and went for the force but the creature threw Tommy at him as the thugs pulled out their revolvers and fired over the table to hit something. But no sound of a dead body hit the ground, before any of them could do anything something was fired at one of the thugs a bright blue blast of energy hit the thug in the chest leaving him with a large hole where his heart was.

"What the fuck!" One of the thugs shouted.

Just then a three read dots appeared over the thug that shouted as it ran along his leg, which the thug tried to swat away but it went over his chest to his head as another beam was shot removing his head. The remaining thugs jumped behind the bar as cover as two of the.

"What the hell is that thing I've never seen magic like that!" One of the thugs told his ally.

"I don't know but-" Before he could finished something invisible object stab him though his chest as the invisible object began to appear with white energy coming off it.

The object was a spear the thug dropped his gun as he reached for the spear but something pulled out the spear as blood roared though his mouth. Before the second thug could say another word something large landed on the counter of the bar, the thug looked up to see nothing but a warped image of something, he didn't have the chance to scream for the creature to kill him.

Just then a door was shut behind the creature as it turned around to the door to see the Tommy and lad running away, the creatures eyes flashed yellow.


"We need to get to the train station before that thing catches up," Lad told his boss.

When they ran some kind of net was fired from behind and snagged Tommy against the floor as the metal net began to burn though his clothing and skin.

"GET IT OFF GET IT OFF!!!"

Lad was about to help out his boss when something heavy landed behind them landing in a puddle of water with a humanoid shape of wrapped light slowly walking over to them.

As it advanced the warp light started to fade into a large being with strange tribal armor that was alien in desigh, lad pulled out his knife as the creature raised both hand as four harpoon looking claws shot forward. With that Lad ran at the monster this time when the creature dodge him he expected this and stabbed the creature in his leg causing the wound to bleed neon green blood. The monster gave a muffle groan as lad pulled out the knife and came at the monster yet again but this time the creature didn't dodge but punched his blade forward hitting lad across the chest causing his blood to spill. Lad glared at the monster and wiping the blood off his mouth, as he switched his blade in a reverse hand grip as went at the monster giving a war cry hitting his upper arm cutting though the netting and flesh but not deep enough to be serious.

The creature turned its head to lad in mid attack before grabbing his shoulder and throwing him back into a wall causing him to drop to the grown. Lad looked up to see his knife in front of him as he reached it a large metal boot crushed his hand as he screamed. Looking up he saw the hunter tilting his head at him as lad looked into its mask's blank black eyes before the hunter reached down and ripped out his spine and skull before letting out a fierce roar.

The hunter turned to Big Tommy who was trying to escape the burning net, the hunter placed the trophy on it's back as it turned to the boss and began to walk over to him blades at the ready.


As the cops arrived at the party house to see skinned bodies of the entire club's thugs and even big Tommy's hanging from the ceiling.

Unaware to them the hunter began to climb the tallest building in manehatten with it's trophy on back as it got to the top the creature removed its spear and trophy from its back and raised both in the air and roared.


(counterlot)
(7:44 am)
(Throne room)

Twilight and her friends got to the main throne room as the princess wishes.

"Princess you wanted to see us?"

The sun princess turned around to her and her friends.

"Twilight I need your help,"


Author's Note

Fwi this is what the dark predator looks like

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