The Rise (edited some details)
It was raining, a mare was walking home, her hair soaking wet, she notice a dark figure was following her, she increase her pace, but also did the figure, she panicked a little and ran, but was caught by the figure. "Ah! let me go yo-you..." That's all she could said before the figure injected sleeping potion into her, the figure had stolen her possessions and ran away.
Rare, Dash, and AJ was in sugarcube corner, three of the mares were hanging out together having lunch.
"A mare was found unconscious last night and it was proven that 'Equestria's figure' had done it again" Said Dash loudly, reading the newspaper.
"Again?" Asked Rarity in shock.
"Yeah, this 'figure' guy is in the news again, it is getting in my nerves." Replied Dash shivering a little.
"What's the matter sugarcube yer scared?" Asked Apple Jack teasing a little.
"Me? Scared? Ofcourse not" Replied Dash sounded annoyed.
Pinkie came out from nowhere and bounce all over the place "What are you guys talking about? *gasps* is it a party for me? Itwillbesomuchfunand..mmph"
Rainbow shuts Pinkie's damn mouth and said, "No Pinkie, it's about the 'figure' in the news lately." Dash mentioned.
"oh you mean the mysterious figure that had done dozens of crime such as stealing, robbing, and murder that nopony knows it's identity?" the pink pony ask still bouncing and...smiling.
"Yes, darling, but can you not mention it's crime record? It's quite frightening." said Rarity shaking a little.
"Oh, sorry my bad I didn't meant to scare you Rarity, oh yeah, would you guys try my new cupcake recipe?" Pinkie said gleely. Pinkie then pulled out her new cupcake from her mane that had green-blue-ish frosting. Honestly, it looked disgusting, it had almost coloured like snot.
"What cupcake is that? Asked Rare and Dash in a disgusted tone.
AJ finally had something to say, "Well, Pinkie it looks di...licious!" Rare and Dash just look at her with a odd look.
"Well...it's a chocolate lemon blueberry cupcake, I know the colour is a little wierd, but it actually taste great!" Pinkie responded.
AJ grab the cupcake from Pinkie's hooves in a flash, both disgusted mares stare at her, "What? I can't help it."
Pinkie, giggled "Oh yeah, where is Fluttershy and Twilight? I need to tell them about my new cupcake recipe."
"no idea." AJ Said.
"how about we visit Fluttershy's place? You know she is the type of mare that like to stay at her home more." Rarity suggested.
"Well then let's go!" said Dash as she zoomed into the sky.
"Fluttershy~" sang Rarity "Are you there?" added Dash.
There are no sound the door seems to be locked.
"I don't think she's in here." said AJ surely.
"Well then where is she? I am so excited to show her my new cupcake recipe!"
Fluttershy was at the market, Angel that little devil, wants Fluttershy to bought him fancy food, while Fluttershy was bussy looking for the ingredients, the figure was stalking, waiting for the right moment.
Dash, Rare, AJ, and Pinkie had split up to find either Fluttershy or Twilight.
Dash searched around sugarcube corner.
Rare searched the town hall.
AJ searched the market.
Pinkie searched the fields.
AJ was roaming around the food section.
"Gee, where are those mares? It doesn't seems like they are here anywhere." She said to herself. When she was about to leave the market, she passed down a dark alleyway, and she can hear crying in there, but it sounded familiar...too familiar.
"FLUTTERSHY! What happened? who did this to you?!"
Fluttershy just cried, wounds and scratch everywhere, unable to speak just cry, poor mare.
"I...it...I-I" She cried.
"Sh...don't worry, come on let's get you out of here"
The other three mares gathered back at sugarcube corners.
"Uh...does anypony saw Applejack?" Dash ask as the other mares shrugged.
"Here." Everypony look over to see AJ with injured, crying Fluttershy.
"FLUTTERSHY!" All three mares exclaimed with shocked faces, even Pinkie.
"Darling! What happened" Rarity asked in disbelief.
"Who did this to you? I will make him pay!"
Said Dash with a scary look, well...kinda.
"Guys, give her space we gotta get her some threatment, questions can wait!" AJ said worried.
"She's right bring her to my boutique I have first aid."
"Can't we just bring her to the hospital? She is bleeding BAD!" AJ panicked.
"Yes, quick everypony help us carry Fluttershy!" Rarity panicked even more.
"Your friend is fine she just need some rest, she lost a bit amount of blood, but it's a good thing she was send here soon enough to be just fine." Said the doctor.
Everypony sighed in relief.
"How many days must she stay in bed?" Asked Rarity.
"About a week."
"Can we see her?"
"sorry, but no , you can visit her tomorrow"
"Oh...ok then." Pinkie frowned.
They all went back to town frown all in their faces.
"Oh, I hope Fluttershy is okay." frown the pink mare.
"Don't worry Pinkie, she will be fine." Said AJ Comforting her friend.
They went past Twilight's castle without even noticing.
"AAAAAAAA!!!" It was Twilight's voice.
"Twilight!" they all screamed and ran into the castle.
Her friends went up the stairs and saw that Twilight was still screaming and terrified.
"Twilight! What is it?" Twilight pointed at a cockroach "That!"
"That is all the fuss until you scream like that? huh, I thought you were attack ur something."
"Hehe...sorry." She blushed a little.
The cockroach ran towards and around Twilight. "AAAAA!"
"I got this, I got this." Spike came with his trusty broom, and got rid of it.
"Hehe...thanks Spike."
"Your welcome."
"By the way, what were you guys doing? Passing by perhaps?" ask Twilight curiously.
"Well...actually yes" answered AJ.
"Fluttershy was attacked and now she is in the hospital..."Added Dash.
"WHAT?!" When did this happened?"
"Before we passed by here when we heard your bloody scream."
"Is it really that bad until she is hospitalized?" Asked Spike.
"Yeah, she got wounds all over her body, sah was bleeding BAD." Answered Dash.
"Aw, poor Fluttershy."
Twilight then suggested her friends to go out for a walk.
Author's Note
This is my first time writing a story, like...ANYstory, so if there is something wrong or anything that can be improved, let me know.
