The Killer Blank Flank

by TheDevilDogLeader1987

Rating: mature
Tags: Horror, Profanity, Scootaloo, Violence, Sweetie Belle, Diamond Tiara, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Death, Silver Spoon, Apple Bloom
Length: 3854

A purple mare with a pink mane couldn't get her cutie mark as a filly so she decides to kill those who did.

A purple mare named Whaehonah turns evil when everypony except her get their cutie mark.
She leaves her one and only friend and her family then starts living in the everfree forest, anger driven and still a blank flank. She mutilates fillies and colts who recently get their mark. It's up to five fillies who team up with former enemies to find and defeat this heartless wretch.

Published 2018-08-23 03:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-08-23 03:00:01 UTC

The Killer Blank Flank

Before the dark change

A long time ago in the magic lands of Equestria there was purple mare who used to go by the name grape sweets. It wasn’t a great time but good enough for her and her family. When grape sweets got old enough to speak her parents enrolled her in the local school. At school grape sweets was considered a bad influence by many students due to the fact she didn’t have her cutie mark, she was kept from the lunch table, pushed out from playing with others on the playground, and ignored by all but one student who also didn’t have a cutie mark. Grape sweets had become close friends with this student whose name was simple and easy to remember.

“Grape Sweets”
(What’s your name)

The pony replied

(My name is Trixie)

“Grape Sweets”
(Trixie, That’s a nice name. Do you ever get picked on at this school?)

Trixie looked at Grape Sweets with a face that spoke for her.

“Grape Sweets”
(I can tell from your face that the answer is yes. At least I’m not alone.

The two ponies easily became friends and spent every school day together, eventually started hanging out after school and on weekends.
But after a month that was changed, and not in a good way either.
Trixie ended up getting her cutie mark and grape sweets was still a blank flank. Grape sweets was really mad. Fortunately her anger didn’t last long this time around and she moved on and tried to find her special talent that would make her unique. But everything she tried for the entire month was a no go. Grape sweets wasn’t ready to give up yet but that didn’t stop the other fillies from teasing her about her being a blank flank, every insult they threw at her only fueled her anger and it just kept making her face hotter, her facial expression was getting an evil appearance, her eyes went from a beautiful silver color to a bright red glow, eventually her anger had become too much for her to contain and she let out a blood freezing scream.
She ended up repeatedly hitting and stomping the fillies until blood was pouring out of their heads and bones were sticking out of their shoulders and backs. When she was done she fled into the everfree forest and was seen again. Grape sweets changed her name to a very unusual name, (Whaehonah). Whaehonah started off sad about what she had done to her bullies.

“Whaehonah” (Why did I do that, I know they were bullies but they didn’t really deserve that.)

After The Dark Change

Whaehonah didn’t stay sad when she became an adult. She still didn’t have her cutie mark even as an adult pony. This being the case she was nothing but a mare of anger and her heart had become even darker than King Sombra’s. This made Whaehonah nothing but a heartless wretch. Her eyes were no longer white with red iris but all red with black pupils and her mind was set on one thing alone, to kill all fillies who just recently got their cutie marks.

Since it was at the school where her friend had gotten her cutie mark and left her to get her’s all by herself she figured that was place to start watching for new cutie marks to appear.
It didn’t take long either. One student had just discovered his special talent. When all the students who surrounded this young pony left him alone Whaehonah lured him to the bushes, the little pony had no idea what he would be face to face with and continued to walk towards the trap. When he got to the bushes Whaehonah asked this young pony if he wanted some candy, the pony said the fate sealing word.

“Young pony”
(Yes!)

That was the word that ended the young stallion’s life. The young pony jumped into the bushes only to see the evil mare staring at him with her mean red eyes. Whaehonah bit his vocal cords right out of his throat before he could cry for help, she stomped his head flat on a rock causing his death but she wanted to make sure he was dead, Whaehona beat his back eventually shoving her front right hoof through his spine and out through his stomach. Whaehonah silently said,

“Whaehonah”
(You look so beautiful now.)

Whaehonah give the boy a kiss and ran off, back into the everfree forest.

It wasn’t long before the students and their teacher came out and smelled the odor of blood coming from behind the bushes. The teacher went over to the bushes telling her class to stay where they were. When the teacher got closer it wreaked of blood smell and flesh, but what disturbed her even more was what the smell was coming from. She had just walked up to a horrible and devastating sight. Her student who she hadn’t even knew was absent from class was dead right outside the school yard boundary. She called for royal guards and ponyville officer and sent the rest of the students home with their parents and family but one mother was kept at the school only to hear about the horror that had occured.

The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 2

The royal guardsmen questioned the student’s parents asking them questions that pointed to them being suspects. The parents were shocked, they asked why they were being asked such a question.

“Parents”
(Why would we do such a mean and horrid thing such as killing our son?)

“Guards”
(It’s nothing personal, just something we can use to progress through this.)

The parents just answered the questions as calmly as they could.

“Guards”
(Where were you the time of the murder?)

“Parents”
(Home waiting to come take our son home.)

“Guards”
(Alright, did you have an argument with your son before you left him at school or started to bring him to school?)

“Parents”
(No, we just got him up, made him breakfast, helped him gather his supplies and walked with him to school.)

“Guards”
(Did you see anypony who could possibly be watching you two and/or him?)

“Parents”
(Well we did see somepony walking behind the bushes across from the school.)

“Guards”
(Did you notice the colors and cutie mark?)

“Parents”
(Well she had a lite pink mane and tail and purple body, we couldn’t see a cutie mark.)

The guards looked at the parents of the young pony, they knew who the parents were talking about but didn’t say anything about it. They just said to stay in their homes.
The parents looked at the guards with very frustrated faces, but they had no choice but to obey the guards.

Years passed with more murders but no answers, Whaehonah had been getting away with ruthless filly murders and no answers or justice. The only thing that was getting done was attempted pony protection no arrests, ponies of interest were never collected or even hunted. Whaehonah had claimed yet another victim. A group of five fillies had been plotting against Whaehonah in hopes of finding her. They didn’t know her name but had seen her appearance, purple body, lite pink mane and no cutie mark. These five ponies knew what this pony was capable of but they had no idea what they wanted face. The evil pony had been appearing around the school the most so the five ponies decided to perform an investigation starting at the school as a start.
These five fillies started the first investigation. They began investigating the school files in hopes that the teacher had files on this pony and hopefully some friends she had. So they checked the files and so far only found their own.

“Apple Bloom”
(Apple Bloom, Sweetie Bell, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon? These are our files.

“Diamond Tiara”
(Whata you say we look through them and see how we’ve doing in school?)

“Scootaloo”
(No way we came here to investigate this purple pony and that’s it)

“Diamond Tiara”
(Aw you’re no fun.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(We’re not here to have fun. We’re not even supposed to be doing this, but since the officers of the royal guard won’t do anything it’s up to us.)

“Silver Spoon”
(I think I found our purple pony!)

“Apple Bloom”
(Finally.)

Silver Spoon seemed to be the only one taking things seriously. She actually found the file on
the pony they had been looking for.

“Silver Spoon”
(Look at this, not only did I find her name I also found a school photo of her and another pony together.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(That’s Trixie!)

“Diamond Tiara”
(So we could talk to this Trixie pony and possibly get some much needed information.)

The five ponies went to Trixie’s cart just outside of Princess Twilight’s castle.
Scootaloo knocked on the door. They heard the hoofsteps coming to the door slowly. When Trixie opened the door she was impaled with questions, questions about the pony in the file and old yearbook.

“Trixie”
(ENOUGH!)

Trixie screamed. She asked the fillies why they were asking so many questions about an old file from the school.

“Trixie”
(I don’t know what you’re trying to pull out of me but I can assure you that I have nothing to hide.)

“Apple Bloom”
(Then can you tell us about this pony? We really need some information about her.)

“Trixie”
(Yes. Me and Grape sweets go a long way back, but our story doesn’t end pleasant nore
does it last long. It all started when Grape Sweets first came to the school, all she wanted was a friend or two, unfortunately everypony at the time avoided her except for one, that one pony was me, she knew she could come to me when nopony else would allow her to come to them. We had so much fun together, but one day when I was performing a spell i got my cutie mark, her face turned from purple to red and moments later she blew her top, the she killed the bullies who were still teasing her over me getting my cutie mark. The pegasus I once knew as a friend was no longer herself, after she got done with the bullies she took a quick look at me and fled into the woods.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Wow that ending was unpleasant.)

So with this new found information, the cmc, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon believed they had a motive, but they didn’t have enough and with the murders getting more gruesome as each occur in addition to the royal guards not seeming to be doing anything about it they were at a lost cause.

The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 3

The cutie mark crusaders continued their search for answers, mostly dead ends but Diamond Tiara had an idea that just might give the five of them a lead.

“Diamond Tiara”
(Hey Sweetie Bell, does that file have Grape Sweets’s parents names on it?)

“Sweetie Bell”
(I don’t know but I can look. Why do you ask?)

“Diamond Tiara”
(I have an idea that might give us a lead.)

Sweetie Bell looked back into the file in hopes of finding the names of Grape Sweets’s parents.
Fortunately she was successful.

“Sweetie Bell”s
(I found them. Now what?)

“Diamond Tiara”
(We go to town hall. What are the names?)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Grapefruit Gary and Pawpaw Tart.)

“Diamond Tiara”
(Perfect. Now let’s go to the town hall.)

The five fillies went to the town hall in hopes of getting further information using the new information they got from the thin school file.
These five fillies were still unaware of the danger that they slowly paced towards.
When they got to the town hall they asked the mayor mare about Grapefruit Gary and Pawpaw Tart.

“Mayor Mare”
(I’ll see what I can find but why?)

Apple Bloom lied right through her two front teeth to make sure the information didn’t get to the royal guardsmen.

“Apple Bloom”
(We’re assisting our friend Trixie in finding her friend and we would like some information on the parents to see where her friend might have moved to.)

The mayor could tell Apple Bloom was lying but wondered what kind of truth her lie was hiding.

“Mayor Mare”
(May I see what’s in that file?)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Uh. Well)

Sweetie Bell was cut off when her sentence was just being started.

“Mayor Mare”
(I always see through lies Sweetie Bell. Now give me the truth. What are you fillies trying to do?)

“Apple Bloom”
(Mayor Mare can you please keep this between us?)

“Mayor Mare”
(If you give me the truth I will.)

“Apple Bloom”
(Okay we’re doing a true investigation on a pony that has been killing small fillies, and we want to stop her. Her name is Grape Sweets and we have a good amount of knowledge on her but we need more and you’re the next one we need to go to.)

Mayor Mare was shocked at what she had just heard but felt she should at least try to help.

“Mayor Mare”
(Alright I’ll see what I can do but I would like to see that file so that I know what I’m looking for.)

Sweetie Bell handed the mayor the school file and the Mayor quickly noticed something about the pony in the picture she looked at.

“Mayor Mare”
(Oh my. I know who this is.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Really?)

“Mayor Mare”
(Yes we went to school together. I was one of the ponies who teased her about her blank flank, unfortunately when I went to apologize she was gone.)

The five fillies had even more questions to ask but many were unable to be answered. Luckily they had a hit, the pony’s mother and father were located. The cmc, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon went out and looked for the residence of Grapefruit Gary and Pawpaw Tart.
They were successful and went straight to the door and gave it knock. The fillies heard hoofsteps and a pony answered the door. They pony who answered the door was a very shy pony and she was a pony with the shivers. Apple Bloom still proceeded to ask if they could come in.

“Apple Bloom”
(Excuse me but can we come in?)

Silence was waved over the mare at the door.

“Sweetie Bell”
(We only want to ask you a few questions and then we’ll leave you alone.)

More silence was blown the five filly’s way.

“Scootaloo”
(Can we get your name mam?)

The pony actually uttered something that time.

“The pony”
(My name i-is Pawpaw Tart.)

The pony was Whaehonah’s mother.

“Apple Bloom”
(You’re one of the ponies we needed to speak to.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(What do you need to talk about?)

“Scootaloo”
(We need to ask you about your daughter.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(I figured somepony was gonna come here to ask about her.)

“Diamond Tiara”
(What do you mean?)

The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 4

The fillies had went into a state of confusion. Why was Pawpaw Tart expecting somepony to come and ask her about her daughter especially in a remote area of Ponyville such as this.
It didn’t matter though, they came for further answers about Whaehonah and they didn’t want to change their reasons.

“Pawpaw Tart”
(Every since Grape Sweets left school we’ve been hoping for some answers why she left to never return.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Well if you want a heartless pegasus to come home to you then you might want to get some royal guards on your side.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(Grape Sweets couldn’t hurt a fly. Why do you call her heartless.)

“Apple Bloom”
(She has been doing more than hurting ponies, mostly fillies and colts.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(What? I wonder why. She never had a single homicidal thought in her mind.)

“Silver Spoon”
(Well if you want the full story you can come to town with us and hear words from a witness.)

Pawpaw Tart then followed the fillies to the more populated part of ponyville to meet up with the one pony witness that had most of the story and Pawpaw Tart was shocked at the information that she had just gotten. She was also unaware of her daughter being bullied over her blank flank. Why did Whaehonah keep this from her own mother? That information was causing the investigation to take an unknown turn.

“Pawpaw Tart”
(I just don’t understand why she would keep from telling me about this.)

But before Trixie could respond a group of royal guards and Ponyville police came running and flying through.
The fillies, Trixie and Pawpaw Tart went over to the sight and they saw the unrecognizable filly dead just outside of carousel boutique. The fillies then realised they had been wasting time.
Action needed to be taken. Pawpaw Tart asked the guard if the knew who commited the murder.

“Guard”
(Who are you?)

Pawpaw Tart had confirmed her name and wanted to know if they were looking for her daughter.
She held up the picture of her daughter and the guard of course said they were.

“Guard”
(Oh her, yeah but she keeps escaping us.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(What do you know about her.)

“Guard”
(Little to nothing.)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(How is that possible?)

“Guard”
(Well she killed her bullies and just ran off into the everfree forest.)

Pawpaw Tart was devastated. Her daughter was a heartless killer and she had no idea of the whereabouts of her.

“Pawpaw Tart”
(Sweet Celestia. Why did this have to happen? I want my daughter back.)

Pawpaw Tart and the five fillies decided to search for Whaehonah in the everfree forest in hopes of her mother being able to talk some sense into her.
So Pawpaw Tart went with the cmc, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Trixie to find
Whaehonah and hopefully not end up having to go into battle with her. After seeing what this pony can do, they wanted no part of that.
The fillies, Trixie and Pawpaw Tart came across a giant nest, a nest the size of a full grown mare. They felt like they were standing right next to Whaehonah’s bed. The nest had been slept in recently so they had no doubts. They continued to search the area when they heard a voice.
They looked over to the way they came into the clearing and saw it. They they had glanced right into the face of the pony they were looking for. There was not thinking about it, this was Whaehonah. The pegasus before them didn’t look like she was gonna show any mercy for the seven ponies before her. She looked at them with pure hatred and anger.
The fillies had no idea she would look like this. Whaehonah spoke with a blood freezing voice.

“Whaehonah”
(Hello everypony.)

The Killer Blank Flank Chapter 5 The Final Showdown

The Final Showdown

The five fillies then realised what they had been wanting to face, but knowing the royal guards weren’t doing anything they had no choice. So first they tried conversation in hopes that Whaehonah would listen to reason.

“Diamond Tiara”
(Grape Sweets we want to know why you’re doing these things.)

“Whaehonah”
(Grape Sweets? I haven’t heard that one in a long while. That’s no longer my name, my name is Whaehonah and I will kill all seven of you.)

Whaehonah flew straight at the fillies and their accomplices, knocking them right into the counter she made. Trixie blasted Whaehonah with unexplored amounts of power from her horn and sent her flying into a tree. Diamond Tiara tied vines around Whaehonah’s legs in hopes of restraining her. Unfortunately that didn’t last but five seconds. Whaehonah broke free of the restraint and kicked Diamond Tiara and Trixie into the bushes.

“Whaehonah”
(You pathetic ponies will not defeat me.)

“Apple Bloom”
(Yes we will. You’ll see.)

Apple Bloom threw the counter top at Whaehonah knocking blood from her nose.

“Apple Bloom”
(How do you like that you filly killing bastard?)

That only made Whaehonah mad. Whaehonah ripped the dining table she had constructed out of a large stump and threw it at right at Apple Bloom. Luckily Apple Bloom was able to dodge the attack. Sweetie Bell came out from hiding and asked Trixie if she could combine magic with her.

“Sweetie Bell”
(Hey Trixie, get up.)

Trixie raised up to listen to Sweetie Bell.

“Trixie”
(Is it over?)

“Sweetie Bell”
(No but I need to ask you a favor.)

“Trixie”
(What’s your favor?)

“Sweetie Bell”
(I want us to combine our magic into a super attack and aim it at Whaehonah.)

“Trixie”
(I don’t know if you’re aware but combining magic like that is extremely dangerous.)

“Sweetie Bell”
(Whaehonah is extremely dangerous.)

“Trixie”
(Good point, lets do it.)

The two unicorns combined their magic into a super attack that got Whaehonah’s attention, but before Whaehonah could counter attack or defend herself Sweetie Bell and Trixie unleashed enormous amounts of magic, amounts that could not be measured by even the best wizard in Equestria. The attack had Whaehonah on the ground in agony. Whaehonah started to get up but Apple Bloom wrapped her up in vines, then Scootaloo tied her back legs up and Silver Spoon tied her front legs up then Diamond Tiara tied the four together.

“Whaehonah”
(No, No no no no no. I won’t be defeated!)

“Scootaloo”
(Well I’m afraid you already have.)

That’s when Pawpaw Tart stepped in.

“Pawpaw Tart”
(What happened to you?)

Whaehonah looked at Pawpaw Tart with confusion. She was trying to remember who this pony was to her.

“Pawpaw Tart”
(I don’t know why you do these things but it’s not who you are.)

Whaehonah gave Pawpaw Tart another confused look and started to question who she was to Pawpaw Tart.

“Whaehonah”
(Who am I to you?)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(Many things you were Grape Sweets, but never a heartless killer. You have let your anger corrupt your true self, your heart has lost the gold sparkle inside it, you have left behind those who you loved.)

Whaehonah actually started to shed tears for the first time in years. She realised who Pawpaw Tart was to her. She was being spoken to by her mother.

“Whaehonah”
(Mama?)

“Pawpaw Tart”
(Please Grape Sweets, stop this madness.)

Whaehonah broke down and started crying.

“Whaehonah”
(I’m sorry Mama. Please forgive me.)

Whaehonah had started to show signs of change once more. Her eyes went back to the beautiful silver color and her heart had gotten the gold sparkle back.
She went back to her old name and apologized to the ponies before her.
The five fillies untied her, then her mother and Trixie brought her home.

The fillies returned the school file back to it’s drawer in the file cabinet
then went home where they were grounded for the rest of the month for interfering with
a crime investigation. Grape Sweets was given a pardon due to her apology speech and given a room in Princess Twilight’s castle.

The end.