A deadly secret

by silvercrystal432

Rating: mature
Tags: Horror, Violence, Death, Alternate Universe, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Other, Romance, Fluttershy
Length: 1587

Fluttershy wants to confess to Twilight but discovers shes not the only one. Now she must take out the others before they confess.

Fluttershy is in love with Twilight and was about to confess to her, until other ponies had the same idea. So she took it upon herself to eliminate the competition.

This story was commissioned to me by a friend. Jordan. This story might be posted here for you to read, but I wrote this story for my friend. So read this story with an open mind.

https://derpibooru.org/6444

Published 2018-08-27 01:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-08-27 01:30:01 UTC

Timber

Fluttershy was in her cottage feeding her animals.

"There we go." Fluttershy said as she finished placing everyone's meals down. "All finished."

Once finished, Fluttershy walked into the kitchen and prepared her lunch for the day. Sitting down she began eating. As she was eating her thoughts went to Twilight. As she thought of her a small blush appeared on her face. Twilight's smile, her laugh and adorkable nature ran through Fluttershy's mind.

"Oh Twilight, I love you so much, but I don't know how to tell you." Fluttershy's voice fell into a whisper as she spoke.

Fluttershy finished her lunch and got up, placing the plate into the sink.

Fluttershy walked into her living room and sat down on her couch thinking aloud of a way to confess her feelings to Twilight.

"I could bring her chocolates and flowers. No that's to cheesy. What about a letter? No not that either. How about a song. No, i'm no good at singing. I could always just tell her right in front of her that I love her."

After giving it some thought, Fluttershy decided to tell Twilight her feelings face to face.

Fluttershy got up from the couch and walked to her closet to get a jacket. Once she put on the jacket, Fluttershy walked to her door and went outside, closing the door carefully behind her.

Fluttershy breathed in and let out a sigh. "Here we go Fluttershy, it's time to tell Twilight you love her."

Fluttershy began to walk down the pathway that led to Twilight's castle in Ponyville.

Walking into Ponyville, Fluttershy walked past ponies doing their jobs. Suddenly a sweet smell hits Fluttershy's nose and she turns her head to the source of the smell. "Flowers. Maybe I should buy some for Twilight."

Fluttershy checked her pockets for her wallet but couldn't find it. "Oh, looks like I forgot my m-money." She said sadly.

Sighing in defeat, she decided to continue her walk to Twilight's castle. Once there, Fluttershy walked inside and down the long halls of the castle in search of Twilight.

As she was looking, Fluttershy saw a figure pass by the door right next to her. Looking inside she saw the person that she fell in love with. Twilight.

Fluttershy began walking to Twilight, as she got closer she heard Twilight mumbling something but she couldn't quite hear what she was saying.

"Um, Twilight." She asked shyly.

Turning her head to source of the voice, Twilight saw Fluttershy and began to smile. "Fluttershy, do you mind lending me a hand?"

"Oh, um, sure."

Twilight's smile widened. "I need you to go the market and pick some things up for me."

Fluttershy decided to tell Twilight her feelings later. "Sure Twilight, what do you need from there."

"Just some food because I ran out and I planed to do it my self, but then I needed to do some research so I can't go shopping now." Twilight finished and took a breath.

Fluttershy giggled at Twilights rambling. "Don't worry Twilight, i'll take care of it."

Twilight pulled Fluttershy into a big a hug. "Oh thank you thank you thank you."

While in the hug Fluttershy began to blush. 'Shes hugging me, oh i'm so happy. I hope after I confess my feelings to her we'll do something more than hug.'

Twilight put Fluttershy down and began to blush. "Hehe, sorry." Turning around, Twilight began to do her research again, "The money is on the table in the kitchen as well as the list of things that I need. Thanks again Fluttershy." She said as she levitated more books from the shelves.

"Thanks Twilight, and it's no problem really."

With that Fluttershy walked out of the room and towards the kitchen. Once there she began to look for the money. "She said it was on the table."

Walking to the table, Fluttershy saw the cash and picked it up as well as the list. With both things in her hands, Fluttershy walked to the castle doors and walked outside.

Once outside, Fluttershy began to walk towards the market to get what Twilight needed. When she got there she decided to look at the list.

Apples
Hay
veggie burgers
Hay fries
Pancake mix

Seeing what was needed, Fluttershy nodded to herself.

Fluttershy walked through the market place gathering everything Twilight needed. Fluttershy had everything after awhile and was on her way back to castle, when she overheard a stallion talking to himself.

"Ok Shooting Star, i'm gonna buy these flowers and then ask princess Twilight on a date tomorrow where I will also confess my feelings to her." Star said to himself.

Fluttershy's eyes widened and she stopped where she was. 'He wants to ask Twilight on a date. But I want Twilight. I can't have him confess his feelings to her. I just can't allow it.'

Fluttershy hurriedly went back to Twilight's castle and placed the groceries on the kitchen table and was about to leave but decided to write a note for Twilight. Finding some paper and a pen, Fluttershy wrote the note.

Sorry Twilight that I couldn't tell you I returned but I need to do something right now. I will see you again tomorrow. Again I am sorry.

From, Fluttershy.

Placing the note on the table, Fluttershy left the castle and went back to the market place so she could follow the stallion.

When she got back to the market place, she began to look around to find the stallion. She went from stall to stall in hope of finding him but couldn't find him anywhere. When she was about to give up she saw him walking out of the market place.

'Oh thank Celestia.' She sighed in relief.

Fluttershy ran up close to him and followed him home. When Fluttershy saw him enter his home she stopped and began to think.

How am I going to get in... Oh I know something that will always work.'

Fluttershy went up to his door and knocked. As she was waiting she punched herself in the face as hard she could and began to cry.

Shooting Star opened the door and saw Fluttershy crying with a bruise on her face. "Hey, what happened?" He asked worried.

Fluttershy played that part of someone who got abused. "My *sniff* father came into town and *sniff* got drunk and he *sniff* he started beating me. I'm so sorry for bothering you but may I come in, I don't feel safe with him around town." Fluttershy bawled to make it look as believable as possible.

"Oh my Celestia. Come in come in." Star guided Fluttershy to his couch and asked her sit down. "I'll get you something to drink, ok."

Fluttershy looked at him with teary eyes and nodded. "Alright."

When Shooting Star left the room and was out of site, Fluttershy smiled evilly. She got up and looked around the room to find something to knock him out with. Her eyes landed on a bat. 'Perfect.'

Fluttershy went over to the bat and picked it up and went over to the side of the door that Star left from and waited for him to return.

After about five minutes the door opened again and Shooting Star walked through it with some tea. "Fluttershy, I brought you so-"

CRACK

The tea fell to the floor and the glass shattered. Star fell to the floor knocked out shortly after with a thud.

The bat fell to the floor while Fluttershy just looked at him. "I think I hit him a little to hard. Oh well."

She bent down and grabbed him by the legs and dragged him out the back door of his house all the way back to the Everfree Forest.

Once they got to the Everfree forest, Fluttershy dropped Stars body on the ground and went to get some rope. After going to her cottage and grabbing the rope, she returned and tied Stars body up on a tree.

After about ten minutes Shooting Star begins to stir awake. He looks up and sees Fluttershy standing in front of him with an evil smirk.

"Fluttershy!? What are you doing!" He yells in confusion.

"I can't let you confess to Twilight. I need to get rid of you because Twilight is mine." Fluttershy's voice was void of emotion as she spoke.

"What!?"

"You heard what I said."

Shooting Star tried to argue, but Fluttershy didn't care what he had to say. Fluttershy took some meat she brought with her and threw it to the ground in front of him and left.

"Hey! Get back here!" Star yelled. But Fluttershy was already gone.

Looking down at the rope, he began to thrash and wiggle to get free. In the forest the howl of the Timber wolves and their footsteps could be heard behind him. "They must have smelled the meat."

Star struggled against the restraints more and more until he fell to the ground. "I'm free!" He exclaimed in triumph.

But that victory was short lived as he heard a branch directly behind him snap. Slowly he turned his head to look behind him. When he turned around, he was face to face with the open mouthed Timber wolf.

His screams ringed through out the forest but as soon as they started they died out.

Fluttershy grinned when Shooting Stars screams died out as she was walking back home.

Author's Note

I hope you like this chapter, and expect more to come