Causing Drama

by Evictus

Rating: mature
Tags: Suri Polomare, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Self Insert, Profanity, Violence, Twilight Sparkle, Lyra, Coco Pommel, Drama
Length: 1468

Suri comes to bother Coco Pommel but Twilight steps in

While Twilight is at a diner Suri confronts Coco which causes Twilight to get involved. What happens next is completely violent and dramatic

Set after the events of Rarity Takes Manehattan (2014)

Published 2018-08-27 14:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2018-08-27 14:30:01 UTC

Attacked By The Princess

Twilight was drinking tea in a cafe in Manehattan. She had already eaten two sandwiches as she had been hungry. She was hoping to finish up her tea soon though as she wanted to go shopping before she returned home.

As she drank her tea a familiar Pony entered the shop. At first Twilight didn't recognize her so she went back to eating her sandwich but as the pony got closer Twilight could see who it was. She couldn't remember her name however. Soon the Pony went over to a table where another Pony was and Twilight immediately recognized the two ponies as Coco Pommel and Suri Polomare.

Twilight felt rage go through her as she knew at Suri had once copied Rarity's designs for Prim Hemline's rehearsal. She wondered why Suri would show up just to cause trouble. She figured that Suri had some sort of vendetta. She was glad Rarity had told her all about the incident or she wouldn't know who this Pony was.

She saw that Suri started to confront Coco which led to her deciding to intervene.

"Hey you. I see you've decided to show up in public after all the trouble you caused for Rarity. Leave Coco alone." Twilight demanded. Suri replaced her mean expression with a smirk.

"And why should I do that? I bully Coco anyway I want in public. Besides what the hell does that situation have to do with you? Go back to Canterlot with the rest of the royal family!" Suri snarled.

"No I won't. Your just here to cause trouble for Coco. You tried to sabotage my friend so I don't want to see in ten hoof radius of me. Now fuck off before I have you removed from the premises!" Twilight exclaimed.

"Make me leave Princess!! Use your magical horn to bring down your oh so worthy judgment on me! Oh that's right you don't have the guts to do it!" Suri said bitterly. Twilight lit up her horn.

"You do know I can get you in trouble for attacking me right? I would think carefully about is decision Twilight. Besides how would your precious friends think of you attacking me? I could get you to face consequences!" Suri threatened.

"Leave us Suri! Coco said as bravely as she could. Suri slapped Coco across the face and that shocked Twilight. Coco's eyes filled with tears and that made Twilight loose it. She pointed her horn at Suri blasted her out of the window of the diner.

All of the ponies stood there in shock including Coco although Coco was also relieved that Twilight had stood up for her however she thought that Twilight went to far.

Suri groaned in pain as tiny droplets of blood pooled out from her arm and head as glass surrounded her. Twilight stepped outside where the other ponies followed her including Coco and the ponies were all shocked at what they were seeing. They wanted to intervene but Twilight was having none of that.

"This bitch here manipulated Coco Pommel and tried to sabotage Rarity's chances for a rehearsal several years ago. She doesn't deserve mercy. She doesn't deserve friendship!" Twilight yelled.

"But Twilight doesn't that go against your beliefs?!" Lyra shouted as she had been passing through the city that day and went to stop at the cafe.

"Shut it Lyra! I don't care right now! She's not a villain in need of reforming. She doesn't deserve anything good in her life after what she did to my friend! She probably manipulates ponies! I'm going to teach her never to mess with my friends or another helpless Pony again!" Twilight yelled.

"Twilight please give me another chance!" Suri begged. Twilight picked her up with her magic and threw her down onto the pavement causing Suri to bleed even more. Suri yelled out in pain. Twilight unhooked a metal bar from the side of the diner and brought it down onto Suri She threw it to the side.

"Twilight! Stop! Your not being yourself!" Suri begged. Twilight didn't listen however she turned around and bucked Suri in the face making hwr mouth bleed. Suri's head fell back onto the pavement causing her head to bleed while her face bled as well. Twilight stared down at her as she seethed with anger.

"Now get the fuck out of here!" Twilight screamed. Suri sobbed but Twilight wasn't having any of it as she kicked Suri in the stomach causing her to hold her stomach in pain.

"Go away!!" Twilight yelled. Suri groaned in pain and tried to stand up but couldn't. As she crawled away slowly Twilight went back inside the diner and tried to calm herself down. Coco and all the other ponies looked at Suri and Twilight in disbelief.

As Suri crawled away all of the ponies started to gossip about what happened. Twilight finished up and check on Coco but Coco just stared in fright at her.

"Coco are you okay?" Twilight asked

"Twilight you went way to far." Coco remarked.

"But Coco she treated you badly and tried to cheat." Twilight said.

"That still didn't give you a right to use physical violence." Coco said. Twilight shook her head and went home as more and more ponies heard about the incident. When Twilight got back home she became really nervous about the prospect of her getting in trouble over what she did.

A few hours passed and soon enough there was a few knocks on her door. Twilight became immediately concerned. She had no idea if she should open it as it might be what she is fearing. She decided to open it and saw that it was few detectives from the criminal decision in Ponyville.

"Hello Princess Twilight. My name is Detective Evictus. May we have a word with you?" Evictus asked.

"Oh sweet Celestia it's you. Fucking hell! What is it?" Twilight asked.

"Did you attack Suri today?" Evictus asked. Twilight mentally cursed herself. She should have known that she was going to be reported for her crime.

"Yes I did. She was bothering Coco Pommel. Who the hell told you!?" Twilight yelled.

"Celestia told us after Suri went directly to her in order to report your crime. We need to ask you a few questions." The other investigator said.

"Go ahead. You won't need to many answers." Twilight said.

"Why did you attack Suri?" Evictus asked.

"Because during Prim Hemline's rehearsal she copied Rarity's designs she was at the cafe to bully Coco so I put that bitch in her place!" Twilight ranted. Evictus's partner jotted it down.

"You committed a crime Twilight. We are going to have to bring you down to the station. You have the right to-" the other officer started to say but Twilight interrupted them.

"No I'm not going you can't make me. I'm a princess. So why don't you guys take your crime report and shove it up your ass and go back to the station. Goodbye!" Twilight said. She took the handle with her magic and slammed the door shut on the officers.

Twilight smirked and went to go sit down. As she went to sit down the officers started to bang on her door.

"Twilight your in serious trouble!" Evictus shouted.

"Fuck off!" Twilight responded. Twilight went up to her room. A day later Twilight was arrested for her assault on Suri but due to Twilight's immense power hold over the courts she was able to get Suri's assault case thrown out. Suri moved far away due to increasing scrutiny directed at her due to Twilight filing reports on all of her mistreatment towards Coco.

Coco thanked Twilight for getting Suri in trouble. She would always be grateful for Rarity and Twilight. At the same time however Coco criticized Twilight for using violence but that didn't really bother Twilight as she knew that Coco would come to realize how good it was to have Twilight as somepony who was on her side.

When Rarity heard about it she was shocked by what Suri had done and shocked by how Twilight had dealt with the situation. The news spread to the rest of her friends. All of her friends called Twilight's handling of the situation into question as it hadn't been right for Twilight to commit assault. A few days after the incident Twilight's friends decided to get over it as it just wasn't worth arguing over.

Twilight talked to her friends and they all talked about the incident and settled on forgiving Twilight. They then expressed their happiness for Twilight standing up for Coco. Coco hanged out with Twilight and her friends for a bit and then went back to Manehattan. Twilight was glad that everything had worked out in the end.