Shiny vs Sunny

by Foal Star

chapter twelve: Storytime

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The two colts who were now in big thick diapers, were plopped in highchairs and wearing big pink bibs wrapped around their necks. The two foals were growling as they were getting big balls of mush shoved into their mouths. Shining Armor groaned, holding his stomach. “Oh, wha did you put in that, Twiwy?”

Twilight paused as she explained. “Oh, there’s spinach, brussel sprouts, eggplant, lima beans, and some curds and wheat.”

Sunburst rolled his eyes and groaned. “That’s a recipe for a big mess later, I hope we make it to the potty after this.”

Twilight turned around with a big smile. “Well, I was hoping to watch that happen at least once before I leave today. You’re in potty training now, after all. And doing a pretty good job from what I hear.”

The white coated coat whined. “Yeah, we are, and doing a good job. What I don’t understand is why you’re feeding us that! We’re going to be big ponies by tomorrow anyways. We don’t need yucky veggies!” He made a face and stuck out his tongue.

Twilight smirked. “Well, I wanted to test my new food with you two. So how is it?”

Both colts shouted at once. “It’s horrible!”

Twilight turned to the other foals, both of whom were groaning as they pushed huge messes into their diapers. Princess Cadence came over and cooed. “Oh...um...your new foal food may have too much fiber, Twilight.”

The young princess blushed and whispered. “Right, maybe too much…I’ll definitely recheck the formula.”

“It’s alright, at least they don’t have a sensitive stomach like you did as a foal.” Cadence replied to Twilight.

Twilight blushed. “Yeah. I remember the time I got a really bad tummy ache, and it made you faint from the smell.”

Cadence giggled. “But you were smart enough to change yourself, thankfully. And after that you got really good at using the potty in my care, though there was one time I had to fish you out when you tried to go down the drain.” She then took the two fillies into the embrace of her magic and drifted them off to have their diapers changed.

Twilight turned her attention to the colts, who were also groaning, and cooed. “Oh, looks like you two are going to need to use the potty after all! We’d better hurry!” She picked up both foals with her magic, carrying them to the bathroom. “Oh, what’s this?” She cheerfully commented as she pulled their diapers down.

Seated besides the training potties, was the toilet. The very same toilet that Flurry Heart and Fizzlepop had made disappear with their spell. “Looks like Cadence went ahead and restored the big potty,” She smiled at the little colts.”Would either of you big boys like to try it?”

Shining and Sunburst looked at each other, and both ultimately shook their heads. Shining in particular didn’t feel like risking another bowl ride. “I already got flushed once, and nearly got flushed twice. I don’t need a third trip. Besides, I don’t wanna give Flurry Heart or Fizzlepop any ideas, I’ve give them too many already.” He thought as he and Sunburst were both seated on their plastic potties. “There you go, sweethearts,” Twilight cooed. “Now remember, no getting up until you go,” Then she smiled. “And look, it seems you’ve got some visitors.

The two colts gulped as they sat there, while Cadence finishing changing the two fillies diapers and placed them down. “Flurry Heart, Fizzlepop, you two can watch Shining and Sunburst. They’re going to demonstrate how to use the potty.” The princess of love told them.

The foals watched with interest, largely because they found it amusing to see two grown-ups on their level.

Shining and Sunburst both gulped as now the colts were being watched by all these ponies and they both whimpered. Sunburst was a little bit more used to it, largely since he’d potty trained alongside Starlight and had remembered both their families collaborating on the entire experience (though he had been trained just a day faster than Starlight). But for Shining, it brought back memories of when he would be seated on his potty as a little colt, while one or sometimes even both his parents watched over him. And this time he didn’t have Brutus Force by his side for company.

Cadence noticed the two colts in her care didn’t seem to be doing much of anything or even trying. Fortunately, as an experienced foalsitter she had an idea. Lighting up her horn she turned the faucet on the sink, letting water start to pour out. “Just a little something I picked up while helping potty train Twilight. It worked wonders.” She encouraged.

Sure enough, the little colts started to grunt and with a great deal of effort they pushed out giant messes into their plastic potties. Twilight clapped her hooves as Cadence gagged a little. “I think I’ve had enough cleaning for one day,” She playfully teased, fanning a hoof across her nose. “My goodness, I need to watch what my little ones eat.”

Both Fizzlepop and Flurry Heart burst into laughter and the colts whimpered as they kicked about, completely embarrassed. Twilight came over and began wiping them down for Cadence. Then she picked up the potties, plopping the mess into the big toilet. “Here,” She offered to Shining and Sunburst as she levitated them towards the handle. “You two can flush it all away. Don’t worry, I won’t let you fall in.”

The colts did so, and Flurry Heart watched with interest as she fluttered her tiny wings up to the bowl, just in time to see the messes swirl down the drain. Fizzlepop just stood there and whimpered, remembering her own bad experience from a while back. “I don’t think I’m quite ready for the big potty just yet.” She thought.

Meanwhile, after the messes had been flushed down, Twilight took the two colts and pulled their diapers up. “Very well done, you two, that’s the way do it! You learn even faster than the Cake Twins, and by the time I foalsat them they were in pull-ups!” She declared, deciding to leave out the detail of her accidentally being turned into a kangaroo and having to use a park outhouse. “Now, I’m going to read you two a bedtime story before night nights. I’ll leave you in diapers, just in case. Cadence told me you two will still have a little bit of bedtime trouble, but it should go away once you’re back to normal.” She encouraged The eccentric alicorn took the two to their nursery as she took out a giant story book.

Shining groaned. “This is why our bedtime is so early. Twily always goes overboard with storytelling.”

Sunburst giggled as he kicked about in his pull-up. “This is going to be fun! Reminds me of when Starlight’s dad would read to me and Starlight as foals, he had the best silly voices.”

Shining just sighed. “Mom always liked to read her own stories to me, she was especially fond of one involving her and these other ponies on a journey with some creature called a Meghan. I think it had something to do with a castle and a rainbow of darkness too.”

Twilight then opened the book and started to read a story about a brave knight fighting a big scary dragon to save a princess. The colts were both looking at the pictures with their eyes drooping and then they slowly closed their eyes and drifted off to sleep as Twilight continued reading.


Shining Armor suddenly woke up and found himself wearing a strange, padded armor. It almost resembled his royal guard attire, except more poofy and foalish. He poked at the padded fabric feeling it make crinkling sounds as he squeaked in surprise. “Is this armor made of diapers? What a strange design choice,” He gulped. “Am I gonna have to fight a potty monster? Wait, what am I saying?! There’s no such thing as a potty monster, right?”

The armor wearing colt looked around, seeing he was in the middle of a volcano of some sort. But instead of lava, down below was milk. The colt shrugged as he wobbled towards a tower made of blocks. He looked up through the stairs, and then he slowly waddled up them. When he got to the top, he turned to see Princess Cadence, who was now wearing a little filly princess costume adorned with a pink, frilly dress, with white frills decorating the outlines, and a cute, pink hat with a big, white flag twirling overhead.

Inside a cage the little filly cried. “Help me, Shiny! That meanie pants dragon won’t let me leave my tower! He’s not my daddy, he can’t tell me what to do!”

Shining turned to see a big, padded Spike wearing a thick diaper adorned with cute, little blue books printed over the seat of padding. The big, purple scaled dragon wobbled over and roared, “You will never be able to save the princess, little prince! Certainly not when you’re dressed like that.”

Shining Armor took a foam sword and held it in his mouth as he growled. “Nah uh, you’re going down, Spikey! You’re not a hero of the Crystal Empire, I am!”

The big Spike whined as he stomped about. “Nah uh I got the Crystal Heart to Cady, you just threw her.”

Shining whined. “So? I did more than ya, I fought off Sombra all by myself!”

Spike whined back. “Nah uh! He defeated you and cut off your magic!”

Shining Armor shouted in defiance. “So, the most you did was deliver the Crystal Heart after Twily found it! She did all the work!”

Cadence growled as she stomped a hoof on the ground of her cage and whined. “Will you two stop fighting and get me out of this thing?! I wanna get out!”

Shining paused as he scratched his head. “Don’t I have to slay the dragon first?”

Spike turned around and shrugged. “I guess. I forgot what I was doing here in the first place.”

Cadence rolled her eyes. “Just release me, then! You don’t have to watch over me!”

Shining trotted over and opened the small door of the cage. But to his surprise, Cadence pushed him back into the cage, locking it behind him! “What did you do that for, Cadence?!” He shouted in surprise.

The little filly giggled as she produced an evil smirk. “Because I’m not Cadence, silly.” A magical circle surrounded the pink coated filly, as she transformed into a black coated colt with emerald green eyes, and with a little crown on top of his head, with a red blanket tied around his neck.

Shining growled under his breath as he came towards the colt. “You again, Sombra?! I swear, you... look quite cute in that little diaper.” He teased.

Sombra scoffed. “I’m just trapped like this, I not really a baby!”

Shining snickered. “Ya peed your little diaper, Sombra. Ya sure you don’t need Luna to change you?”

Sombra looked down and squeaked upon seeing that his diaper was slightly yellowed. “W-whatever, it’s only cause I’m trapped in this stupid baby form. When I’m a big pony again I won’t have accidents! You’re gonna pay, along with your dumb wife and daughter and I will control the Crystal Empire forever!”

Shining rolled his eyes. “Right, well good luck with that. My sister and her friends will stop you.”

Sombra stuck his tongue out as he lit his horn, turning his attention to the Spike plushie. “Guard this prison and don’t let Shining escape.”

Spike crossed his plush claws. “Why? I don’t need you to tell me what to do, Sombra!”

Sombra just grinned as he produced a big pink diamond. “If ya do what I say, you can have this!”

The big, plush, purple scaled dragon drooled as he reached out, and Sombra gave him the diamond. He gave a few big chomps and gobbled up the rest of the diamond. After he’d finished and gave his belly a few pats,he parked outside the cell. Sombra then lit his horn and a big, thick diaper was trapped around Spike’s rump. It had big, pink eggs printed on it, and Spike squeaked as he now wore a cute apron. Then he giggled. “Yes, I’ll protect the silly little Shining.”

Sombra sighed. “Alright. Well now, bye bye.” He skipped off in his cute little diaper, as Shining plopped down on his diaper armor and waited. Somepony would be along to rescue him soon enough, he hoped.


Shining waited as patiently as he could, until the familiar form of Princess Luna came out of the ceiling, and plopped down in front of Shining. “Luna, is that you!?”

Luna giggled and booped Shining’s nose. “No, I not Wuwu, I Tinkwe Spawk and I came to hewp ya out.” With a faint glow of magic, Spike was pushed aside.

Shining Armor wrinkled his nose as he was freed from his cage. “Okay... Well, why do you look like Luna, then?” He asked, then he and Tinkle Spark turned to hear what sounded like arguing. They both walked over to see Sunburst wearing a baby blue colored diaper, with a similarly colored baby blanket tied around his neck, and a felt baby blue wizard’s hat tied around his head, along with a rattle for a wand. He was currently locking eyes on Spike.

Shining came over to Sunburst and gave a big sigh of relief. “Thank goodness you’re okay! I came to save ya.”

Sunburst growled. “Step back, dragon, or I’ll turn ya into a diaper.”

Spike giggled. “Nopony messes with the big diaper maid dragon!” Spike then took out a feather duster, and sprinkled foal powder over Sunburst, making him sneeze as he was poofed into a big, thick diaper around his rump with a tuxedo onesie. Spike giggled as he taunted. “Now, little butler, go and fetch Shining a big bottle of formula, and have it heated.”

Sunburst performed a cute little bow before waddling off to grab the bottle.

Tinkle Spark rolled his eyes. “Ugh, tat was bad, and now we weawwy stuck.”

Shining looked over at Tinkle Spark and asked. “Wha, ya can’t hewp us?”

Tinkle sighed. “Not weawwy. It seems that Sombwa hijacked his cage and has tuwned it into his wittwe pwaygwound. The onwy reason I wook wike Pwincess Wuwu is because I can use hew to beat him.”

Shining growled. “So where’s the real Princess Luna? Why can’t she stop him? The dream realm is her domain after all.”

Tinkle Spark sighed. “Dun know. I twied finding hew and she was nowhere in sight Maybe she hasn’t come into the dweam weawm yet. Is kind of eawwy, but I have eawwy bedtime.”

Shining groaned and rubbed a hoof down his face. “Seriously?! So what are going to do?!”

Tinkle Spark paused and tapped a hoof to his chin. “I dun know, but we may be abwe to wowk within the ruwes of the dweam. Just pway awong.” He then turned to Shining, and with a flick of his horn, he turned Shining into what looked like a baby Flurry. But it actually was Twilight with a big, thick diaper with her cutie mark printed on it.

The transformed Twilight looked up and asked. “Um, Spikey, wha awe you doing?”

The big, plushie Spike turned around with a smile. “Oh, I’m not sure, little Twily. And Princess Luna, what a surprise. I didn’t see you there.”

Spike then opened the door and Twilight (Shining Armor in disguise) waddled out with Tinkle Spark as they both turned to see Sunburst waddling over in his butler onesie. He caught sight of the two princess and squeaked. “Pwincess Twiwy and Wuwu, I didn’t expect to see ya hewe.”

Twilight turned and smirked. “Hewwo Sunnybuwst, I gwad ya hewe. Why are you weawing tat siwwy onesie? You shouwd be weawing a pwopew uniform wike Spike hewe.”

Sunburst looked down at his onesie and whispered and replied. “Bu…but tis is for cowts, I not a fiwwy.”

Spike smirked. “Well I’m a boy, and I like wearing my frilly maid costume.” He then shook the feather duster and sprinkled foal powder over the colt. His onesie turned into a pink, frilly maid’s outfit with white frills decorating the outlines. He blushed as both Shining and Tinkle Spark burst into fits of laughter.

Sunburst whined. “S-stop it! Tuwn my cwothes back to nowmaw.”

Twilight (Shining in disguise) smirked. “Sowwy, but I need ya to be my wittwe cweanew fow a whiwe.”

Spike pouted and explained. “I thought I was.”

Shining turned around and explained. “Oh, sowwy, but I need ya to stay hewe and cwean tings up, okay Spikey?”

Spike shrugged. “Okay, Twilight. For you, anything. Just don’t ask me to change your diapers, either find somepony else or use the potty. This dragon doesn’t do diapers.”

Spike then began to clean and sprinkle things with foal powder as Shining asked. “Um, Tinkwe Spawk, you suwe tis is just a dweam, wight? I’ww tuwn back to nomaw when I wake up, wight?”

Tinkle Spark nodded. “Yeah. Dun wowwy about it now, come on! We’s gotta stop Sombwa!” He led the two with Sunburst growling under his breath. “Can’t you at wast get tis ting off me fiwst?” Tinkle Spark turned around and his horn glowed as the maid outfit turned back to the wizards costume, and Shining was turned back into his diapered armor as they all popped out of the dream.


The three all appeared outside briefly, and then they entered into the next dream through a bubble. Here, they were trapped in eggs as they looked up at a big, violet colored goose wearing a frilly blue bonnet around her head, and having a pair of eyeglasses as she looked down. “Oh, hello. I was told you two would be stopping by.”

Shining sighed, he knew who the goose was. It was a projection of his sister, apparently she had fallen asleep too. “Sis, we need to go and stop Somby! He’s trying to escape.”

Twilight smirked. “Sorry, but you’re not getting out of reading time with that excuse, little brother. If Sombra had actually escaped, Princess Luna would’ve come to get me.” She then took up a huge book and started reading about some filly named Alice, who chasing a white rabbit.

Shining groaned as he turned to Sunburst and Tinkle Spark. “Hey, what do we do now?”

Sunburst pondered as he grunted, closing his eyes as he slowly transformed into a giant swan with a white bonnet with yellow trim. The swan looked down at Twilight (as she now towered over her) and asked. “Twilight, what are you doing?”

The purple goose looked up and squawked. “W-who are you?”

The big white goose looked down and smiled. “I’m Princess Celestia, your teacher. Your story telling is remarkable, but you still have a lot to learn.”

Twilight bowed as she whispered. “Of course, Princess Celestia. I apologize and I hope that I can continue being your faithful student.”

Celestia nuzzled Twilight before leading her to a nest. Twilight yawned. “But I’m not sleepy, princess.”

The swan nuzzled her student and cooed. “Oh, I think you are. Now go to sleep, sweet heart. I’ll see you in the morning.”

Twilight yawned and went to sleep as Sunburst turned back to a normal colt and snickered. “So, what did you think? Pretty cool, right?”

Shining shrugged. “Alright, ya did good, Sunburst. But you’re still a poopy head.”

Sunburst stuck his tongue out. “Whateva! You just mad that I got to turn into a grown-up princess, and you had to turn yourself into a little foal.”


They then popped out of the dream and entered another one. The foals all looked up to see that they were in a big ball room. Flurry Heart was wearing a frilly light blue dress with a cute, little golden tiara on her mane. She was dancing with Pound Cake, who wearing a nice prince suit that looked a lot like the suit Shining had worn at his wedding.

Shining Armor blushed seeing his daughter dancing with Pound Cake. “She can’t have a crush on a foal, she’s only one and a half years old and he’s about to start preschool. Not to mention the fact that they live so far apart from each other.”

Sunburst giggled. “Oh, that’s cute. Your daughter thinks she’s Cinderella, and Pound Cake’s her handsome prince,” Then he wondered. “But…why would Sombra come here?”

All of a sudden, Sombra came over with a powdered wig and a nice costume. “It’s getting late you two, we need to get you to bed before bedtime.” He informed the dancing foals.

Every foal whined as Flurry pouted, crossed her hooves, and whined. “Tat no fair! I can stay up as wong as I want.”

Sombra shook his head as he took out a pocket watch with symbols printed on it like diapers, bottles, a sun and a crescent moon, and a big smiling sun. Flurry groaned. “Fine, but I needs a baby cawwiage to wide in.”

Sombra snickered as his horn lit up and turned Shining Armor into a big, white baby carriage with his cutie mark printed on it. Sombra then placed the two previously dancing foals inside.

Sunburst turned around and glared at Sombra! “Hey, you can’t do that! What are you, Discord?!”

Sombra scoffed. “I’m nothing like that crazy drac, I’m just trying to stop you guys from bringing me back to my prison! I’ll never go back to that nursery of a prison!” He then transformed Sunburst into a big, padded nanny. “Now, you go take care of the princess and prince like a good nanny should.”

Tinkle Spark came out with his hooves crossed over his front and he growled. “Ya going to be stopped. When Pwincess Wuwu finds out about tis, ya gonna be in a big time out! Ya wump wiww be wed aww ovew!”

Sombra smirked. “As if! I already captured Luna, she can’t help you. Now, you go help the prince and princess sleep like a good plushie.” He then turned Tinkle Spark into a plushie, plopping him into Flurry’s Hooves.

“Oh, Auntie Wuwu pwushie! So coow!” Flurry squealed.

Tinkle Spark cried. “I not a pwushie!” But his plea was in vain.

Sunburst then pushed them off as Sombra burst into laughter, disappearing from the dream.

After Sombra left, Sunburst was pushing the foals through the gardens and towards a little house as Tinkle Spark shouted. “Sunbuwst, snap out of it! Ya need to tuwn us back to nowmaw sos we can stop Sombwa and fwee Pwincess Wuwu.”

Sunburst whimpered as he waddled along. “I can’t, the magic is making me push you guys! I have to make sure Flurry Heart and Prince Pound Cake get good night nights.”

The two foals were both rifting to sleep as Tinkle Spark sighed, getting hugged. “Wooks wike we dun have a choice. We need to end tis, now… Shining, I dun know if ya can heaw me but tuwn into a cwib.”

Shining replied back. “I can’t! How is that even possible?!”

Tinkle Spark instructed. “Wemembew, tis is a dweam. Ya can contwow it as wong as it fits the dweam.”

The group continued towards the house, inside it looked like a nursery as the baby carriage turned into a crib with the two foals inside. Tinkle Spark then transformed into a mobile filled with moons and stars. Sunburst looked down at the two foals in the crib under the covers, who were both still quivering and giddy with excitement. Tinkle Spark instructed. “Ya needs to be someting the two wecognize wight now. Ya a nice nanny bu ya need to be someting that can get tese two to sweep.”

Sunburst paused as he transformed into Celestia in the nanny uniform, as they foals gasped while she bent down and kissed both on the forehead. “It’s time go to sleep, you two.” They both cooed as she nuzzled them and watched as they went to sleep.

Then Shining managed to transform into a foal (as did Tinkle Spark) and Sunburst took the two foals and placed them into a crib nearby as Shining Armor gulped and grumbled. “We wiww nevew discuss what happened hewe.” Tinkle Spark nodded in agreement.


They both jumped out along with Sunburst, and entered a new dream where Fizzlepop was wearing a cute dress while eating candy inside a gingerbread house. She turned and cooed. “Hewwo you guys, come to eat candy with me?”

Shining sighed. “No we came to find Somby, was he here?”

Fizzlepop shook her head. “No, I no see him.” She started to lick a big lollipop as Shining gasped in realization! “This is the gingerbread house from Hansel and Gretel!”

Sunburst squeaked in surprise and horror! “Oh no! A big scary witch is going to come and eat us!”

Fizzlepop turned around and explained. “Oh, that witch? She weft a wong time ago, no big meanie witch hewe!”

Sunburst and Shining scratched their heads in confusion and then they turned around to see Tinkle Spark in his Luna disguise, laughing hysterically. “Oh wow! She must of just wanted to dweam about a big house made of candy!”

Shining got up and asked. “I gots a question, Fizzlepop, did Somby came by here?”

Fizzlepop giggled. “Actuawwy, yeah! I think he twied to teww me tat I had to stop you guys and ten he would make me his queen or someting when he escaped. Bu I just said ‘Suwe’ but I didn’t mean it, he was annoying me and I wanted him to go away.”

Sunburst rolled his eyes. “Okay, we get it. Now where did he go?”

The filly tapped a hoof to her chin, then she rose it with a big smile on her face. “Oh, I wemembew! He said someting about taking ovew Pwincess Wuna’s dweam or someting.”

She pointed to a big blue hole in the back of the gingerbread house, making all the foals slam a hoof to their face. How could they have overlooked something so obvious?

Shining Armor growled. “Let’s just get that naughty tyrant! He’s gonna pay!” They all rushed through the portal!

The foals appeared on the other side in a giant field. They looked up to see a big moon made of cheddar cheese, and there in front of them was a big, dark blue cow, with Sombra shouting at her. “Now tat you’we just a stupid cow, jump ovew ta moon, now!” The big cow just shook her head and Sombra stomped a bout. “Sewiouswy?! Come on! Just jump over ta moon! You need to!” The cow gave a loud moo and moved its head as Sombra plopped onto his diaper. “Ugh! Even when I’m in control, Pwincess Wuna is being so stubbown.”

Tinkle Spark smirked as he waddled over. “Sewiouswy, Sombwa? You tink you can contwow Wuwu here in the dweam weawm?” He came over to the cow, who mooed with glee and rubbed her head against the little colt.

Sombra groaned as the moon transformed back to normal, and the cow transformed back into the full grown Luna, who was laughing. “Oh, it was fun to watch you four dream hopping. You’re quite good at it.”

Sombra whimpered. “No faiw! You were just toying with me ta whowe time!”

Luna picked Sombra up and cooed. “Well of course, sweetheart. It was a test to see if my little apprentice can go through dreams without destroying them, and I’m quite pleased to see that he can.”

Tinkle Sparks lifted his head in pride as the fields turned into a nursery, and the princess placed Sombra into a crib as he threw a tantrum. “Is not faiw, I dun wana be a baby fowevew!”

Luna looked him over, changing his wet diaper. “Oh, but you were doing so well before tonight. I’m willing to bet that if you keep being a good baby, maybe we’ll find a way to bring you back in the real world, someday. Perhaps you’ll even be potty trained.”

Sombra scoffed. “Yeah, whatevew. Guess I was getting tiwed of my wet diapee anyway.” He then fell asleep.

Luna turned around to face the other foals and cooed. “Well, it looks like you three had a fun adventure tonight. But I’m afraid you also did a number on your diapers.”

They all blinked and looked down to see their diapers were yellowed as Shining gulped. “We wet the bed, huh?”

Luna smirked as she gave the colts a pat on the head. “Looks like you still have some potty training to do. Good thing Twilight had you diapered. Not to worry, though. Even grown ponies wet the bed sometimes.”

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