The Mane Circle

The last of the mares rubbed out the remaining of her ejaculate into the bowl with a satisfied sigh, the clear and milky concoction swirling around in the bowl creating a clear contrast as the room was heavily scented by sex. They all turned towards the bound and gagged light blue pegasus stallion with the dark blue mane shivering in the corner. Twilight walked up to the heap with a devious smirk, levitating out the ball gag with ease. The whimpering male spoke in a hoarse tone: “W-what are you going to do to me?” The purple unicorn just smiled widely and licked her lips, then cracked her neck before advancing upon him.

As the unicorn was right next to the pegasus face she gave a playful lick on his muzzle, then magically untied the restraints. “Why, we aren’t going to do anything to you Soarin. While fans did request for you to be abused, the author thought you would already get ploughed enough in part two of Sore in the Night, you’ll even be forced into foalfiddling! Along with two endings, one ‘bad’, and another ‘slightly good’. She’s working very slow though, and currently working on both this, a personal fic, a short one shot, a long ass bucked up story, one where I just start high school or something, among other things. Don’t you think that will be exciting?” Twilight gleefully exclaimed.

The stallion’s eyes bugged out. “Wait what!? I will be doing WHA-” The kerfaffled buck vanished in a violet flash of magic. As the mare casually walked back with a light magical flicker vanishing from her horn as the teleportation spell wore off.

The cerulean blue pegasus let out a soft grumble. “We could at have least have asked for his autograph or something, or just made him eat me out at least! How come I wasn’t picked for that story by the way?”

Twilight turned to her friend. “Now, now, Rainbow, we both know as we are written by the same author that we did it to not be overly generic in the sense of picking you, a wonderbolt crazed mare, and favorite cannon fodder in the fandom to be yet another victim, and/or overall ‘pony that bad stuff happens to, alternatively: pony that does bad stuff’. Besides, Cloud Kicker is visible in all shots the Wonderbolts are in, and has shown an overall enthusiastic expression at said times... not sure if the name is correct, but the author is too lazy to double check. Besides, in either case, it wouldn’t be overly in character for you. Granted, many fanfics throw character personality out the window to write their fetish without regard to anything, but you know our writer is a bit overly fixated on that type of stuff.”

The rainbow-maned mare tapped a hoof to her chin, then shrugged. “I guess you are right, Twilight. I would just appreciate if she stopped picking me to make premature ejaculation jokes. Especially how she goes on about people to be more creative, not use fandom stereotypes and whatnot, along with being versatile and more varied in their work, not just doing the same transexual/shemale gist (or whatever they now focus on) over and over with different character and/or setting, essentially just making the same story, but with a new wrapper each time. That, and as said, being a tad bit more creative and varied, and at least trying to stick with a character’s personality wouldn’t hurt.”

Rainbow let out an exasperated sigh, continuing her fourth wall breaking ramble, written by the author. “Otherwise they might as well use OC’s. I mean, what is the point of picking like, Applejack if you’re going to make her into a submissive, girly slut? (or whatever) If you make them an entirely new character, don’t use the character in the first place. And yeah, I know some give their whatever reason to alter the personality, or justify this or that. But really, you wouldn’t like it if you had a character people used and altered to fit their need, often half-assed that left character flaws or clashing/contradicting things, instead of simply making a OC or picking a character that already fit.”

The groups fashionista piqued into the conversation. “Well, you do know Rainbow, this author isn’t terribly good at it at all times either, true, she does try, but that’s not always enough. Anyhow, do keep in mind fans are usually very picky, just with characters, not that they actually act like the character. And this is fine, if used in a fantasy, alternate universe style, but then people try and ‘rationalize’ a character OOC behaviour and speaks like it ‘is’ them, that does look stupid. In both art and fiction. Especially combined with the “one person I know does that”, “well, there are people that are like that, thus they can be like that”, “they could like stuff like that, thus, they do. Unless Lauren, or some show person states otherwise.” or whatever else they toss in there. In either case, I believe we have ranted long enough in her stead, lets move on with this story.”

To the side, Pinkie pouted and mumbled to herself, loud enough for everyone to hear: “I can’t believe she didn’t include me in breaking the fourth wall... that’s MY thing.” Adam Lambert and Batman agreed, along with Deadpool whom was busy with promoting his new game. Pinkie Pie did a double facehoof, since a single one wasn’t enough. Though, even the author knows she is trailing off too much right now, she blames writing after two in the morning, along with now also editing at seven in the morning, at the same time as being aware she is writing a non-serious part of a not-overly serious fic. Really, it is not a good mix to give her. Then again, she does trail off in educative, rambling or whatever in all other fics, so it’s not that bad overall I guess. Ah well, moving on:

Applejack rolled her eyes at the whole ordeal. “Well RD, let me just say tha’ when it comes Soarin, ah can just say that; ya know the pie at the gala? Well, that ain’t all things he’s eaten that has come from the farm... if ya know what I mean.” The earth pony waggled her eyebrows teasingly, leaving the pegasus confused, wondering if her friend said that to make her jealous, to tease her, or just to mess with her. The prismatic athlete was unsure if the farmer was serious, joking or just trying to get her to interpret it incorrectly, or if the orange mare actually had scored.

Before much more though could be put into it, a timid voice interrupted Dash’s train of thought: “Um, excuse me, but could we bicker later? I’d like to give it to this bitch that has been ruining and mocking my existence for months now. I mean, if you don’t mind... and not to break the wall after we just built it up, but I can gladly say it wasn’t solely chosen by the authors dislike for it.” Fluttershy gave a small smile as she pointed towards the pony shackled and spread eagle on the floor.

Pinkie Pie gigglesnorted and trotted closer. “Well du’h! She can’t be the only one that dislikes it. I mean, while yeah, it gives people a partial optical illusion from the original erotical optical illusion for straight and bi men. But yeah, people are kinda silly, and stupid in the whole mismatched anatomy, speaking of that. But as said, most comes from them actually thinking female anatomy looks like that. Being falsely taught by the porn industry of how a vulva looks like, then later becoming a standard in porn, mostly since ‘someone started doing it’, then all just followed. Kinda like really bad and unrealistic sex noises in flashes. Yet, none ever draws the opposite, mostly since they know how stupid it’d look. Ah well, it still makes me wonder why they call it ‘common sense’ when it’s so rare it’s a goddess damned superpower. It makes me sad so many people can be hypocritical and narrow minded at the same time, along with mostly being stupid... it sucks those people have to be directly affected by something to be able to care, otherwise they just go their ‘It doesn’t affect me, why should I care?’ and ignores the issue.”

The pink mare sighed and shook her head as Twilight caught up with her, closely followed by the rest of the ponies. “Pinkie, I thought we agreed to stop breaking the fourth wall!”

The earth pony licked the lavender unicorn across the eyelid. “Silly filly, yes we did, but I never got my turn, so I decided now is as good as ever! There won’t be any more after we are finished with this thing anyhow. And yeah, I know it might be seen as rude to not address it by a gender, but to be honest, story and art wise, it doesn’t deserve one. Least not the one it’s given. Oh! Do know we got nothing against trans people, they deserve to be treated right and as they feel is correct. But this thing doesn’t really count... on a side note, people have grossly been mistreating this fic wise. Especially when making (almost only) mares trans, or just simply wanting a penis for fap reasons. And yeah, I know, it’s a porn fic. But if you want to write a OOC mare acting male and being a sole fuck toy with little-to-no interest in herself other than just pleasing ‘you’, at least have the decency to use some OC, or give the character some personality other than being a brain dead slut with no personality of her own. Or at least stop having them do stupid shit that would indicate they would actually be related with their ‘real’ selves. Pinkie out, peace!”

After making a odd gesture, Rarity coughed indignantly and levitated the bowl over, along with a funnel. “Ahem... well, now that that’s dealt with, we can move on with this. And really Pinkie, it’s not really that useful to say. The people against it already know it, the people blindly defending any of the mentioned stuff will for the first, not read this, and secondly, do note the ‘blindly’. Very, VERY few actually question something they are following. The only it really affect is ‘the middle person’, not yet on either side. And a rant will likely just put them off joining our side. Or going into the matter at all... some might join, but as said, it’s not very... optimal to go on about it.” The mare with the luxurious purple mane gave it a toss and batted her eyelashes. “Anyhow girls, you ready for this?” A devious grin spread across her lips as she prepared the funnel.

They all fully gathered around the light yellow form restrained onto the floor, and Applejack unceremoniously tugged out the cloth from the pony’s mouth. “So saltcube, not so... cocky anymore, are we?” The comment resulted in a whimper from the restrained pony, and a facehoof from Rarity.

“Really now Applejack? I might had expected that from Rainbow or Pinkie, but you?” The earth pony gave her a wry smirk, ultimately resulting in the white mare sighing and just telekinetically prying the mouth of her victim open, placing a ring gag in the muzzle before shoving the funnel down with such speed the squirming form could all but briefly attempt to mumble something before it was silenced the the ring and funnel, just making a few more incoherent noises, giving the purple-maned unicorn a slightly sadistic grin. “I do have to agree with the statement though, even if the pun is really bad... ‘she’ doesn’t seem very ‘cocky’ right now.”

The pink earth pony giggled lightly and sneezed some confetti. Fluttershy in the other hand, let out a sigh, then gave the constrained pony a light kick, not enough to hurt, but enough to feel. “You know girls... while I dislike this degrading, alternate universe version of myself, this still feels weird...” They all looked down at the maize-coloured pegasus with the amaranth mane. Almost identical to Fluttershy, far from being lightly bruised and the sheath on it’s abdomen.

The light blue pegasus quirked a brow. “You know Flutters, while I can see your point, it is much harder to believe after seeing you sodomize it with a feeldoe, yelling at ‘her’ about how shi’s got a tiny cunt, (which shi does... actually, most marehoods drawn in this fandom are grossly underrepresented... or well, about all females genitals in porn are. Is fitting or anatomically matching genitals that much to ask? Along with that they actually look proportionate?) and how you don’t need a dick to rape someone.” Dash gingerly tousled her mane before resuming. “Don’t get me wrong, I do agree, and there are several cases of female rape, then I mean as a female are the one doing it... still not sure if that would sound better the other way around... in either case, while that does happen. Though, technically, neither would really happen in Equestria, but this is a fic, so fuck it. Though, both the big FoE fics kinda fuck that up royally, one even almost excessively fanwanking and promoting male rape while female is vacant, barely mentioned, and even not even brought up in the main story..”

The flier caught herself and coughed. “Ops, going off topic again, sorry bout that. Point being, while I support your actions... to a degree, and I know you can’t sodomize with a vag... unless you are into hoofing... it kinda defies the purpose of “we can do stuff without a cock” if you just use a fake one yanno?” The pegasus waved her hoof in comprehensively, accidentally slapping the restrained pony, looking to apologize, then simply just shrugs.

Pinkie Pie frowned a bit and prodded the levitating bowl. “Guys, I know we're supposed to humiliate and whatnot him, her, that, hir, it, but it still feels kinda wrong to take it out on the creation when it is the creator of them that really is causing all the harm... okay well, granted, the character spreads when it gets popular enough, and this one surely has. So I guess it’s just easier in general to hit the character in general. Plus, just because you dislike something a person made, doesn’t mean you have to hate the person overall. I mean, I personally thought she started off good, then kinda deteriorated, going from a kind of ‘spokesperson’ to just mostly making cock jokes and drawing dick, neglecting cunts. In either way, I know the other chapter options are rather long, but no need to pad it, besides, if we didn’t have the heater, our jizz would be cold now... granted, this pony would deserve it... you know what girls? Give it half the concoction, then turn off the heater, making hir drink the rest of the gunk cold.”

The earth pony gave a hoof-bump with Freakazoid, then turned back to the camera, opening her mouth to to resume when a white hoof silenced her. “Sounds good to me dear.” The unicorn grinned and started pouring the cum down the nozzle, shortly after, the tied down pony coughed and struggled, just making the white mare snicker in amusement. “Not that fun being on the receiving end, is it now?” Receiving only a gargle in response, she resumed. “No? Didn’t think so. Not that you seem to care though, if you even have the mental capacity to do that.” The pristine white mare forced the other pony to drink half of the bowl with a smirk. “Well, they do say revenge is a dish best served cold, I’ll make sure you get the second serving of it cold. Granted, we’re not the one tasting it, but I guess that just makes it all the sweeter...” She gave a light chuckle and tilted the light yellow pony’s head up, causing it to swallow the rest of the cum it had been trying to cough up.

Twilight spun her tail, and hindquarters around as she addressed her friends. “So, girls, you up for some bukkake while the cum cools of? Then we’d get a nice coating on that little slut (I mean heck, it works for both genders, and that thing being something in between, it fits even better.) as well, paint her face, among other things.” Giggling in agreement, the rest of the mares spun around and once again started to rub their genitals simultaneously. “Hey! you up for teasing it with orgasm denial later? Then afterwards, just riding it sore?” All of the mares gave a light hearted laugh in unison, smacking their tails together due to their hooves being busy.

After a few more minutes or rubbing, the first mare came, shooting her warm cum over Futashy’s chest, the three other streams following closely behind, only coating the stomach and abdomen mostly, a bit of it hitting the semi-erect penis poking out, and just like Fluttershy’s privates, it had dots of a different colour on it. Right after, a fresh load of spurts shot out, this time, hitting the pony right in the face, straight into its right eye, causing the pegasus to quickly shut its eyelids as the rest of the load got in the mane and across the other eyelid. The third load came shortly after, managing to hit directly into the mouth, making it cough and sputter as the rest of the warm, thick liquid got closer acquainted with the light yellow coat, slowly sinking into the fur. The fourth came on stronger that the other, but also more random, one jet hit into the ear, another the nostril, one the navel another a knee and a last stream, again, going in the mane... and another one in the tail. Whomever ejaculated that much had too way much lubricant in her.

After plenty of giggling and soft moaning, and the occasional grunt, along with all the noises of protest the tired down pegasus made, a fifth load came, mostly focused on the abdomen and hindquarters, managing to hit both the nipples along with the rest around down there. Making way for the final load that made sure to go across the entire body, but most of it came on the chest, and all the girls turned around and admired their work, laughing at the pathetically struggling pony, showered in their unwanted affection. Futashy however, was less than amused, making a mix of a whimper and a growl as the last mare had emptied her load over the pegasus.

With a slightly frazzled mane, the normally reserved and timid mare gave a triumphant grin and shoved the nozzle back down for a second down in the forced open maw. “Time for somepony to take their medicine...” Fluttershy raised the bowl, causing the remaining lubricant to flow down the tube and into the mouth of the pegasus weakly attempting to break free as they flared their nostrils. “If somepony don’t get it, make sure they regret it!” Grinning like a fool, the pink-maned mare watched as her unwanted doppelganger reluctantly was forced to drink her, and all her closest friends ejaculate with a disgusted frown on it’s face as the mares chanted a low ‘Chug, chug, chug’ in a mocking tone. Once done, the pegasus pulled the nozzle out gingerly, immediately followed by gags and retching noise from the other pegasus.

The light yellow mare stuck her nose up in the air and smiled to her friends, all joining her around the resigned pony. “Well, now that we’re done with that, who wants to casually leave Futashy here to feel miserable and think over what its done before we pound and grind it raw, as we go and get some snacks while getting our mojo back? Potentially even being nice to it afterwards? Though, food first, sex makes you hungry and thirsty” There was a collective agreement as they high hoofed and started walking towards their conveniently placed snack pile.

“By the way, wasn’t there something about giving Blueblood a partially bloody payback?” Rainbow Dash asked as they reached the table, reaching for a Cockatrice corn-bar.

“Nah, that story got scrapped sugarcube... or did it? Actually, to be honest, ah think it’s either finished, scrapped, or has an ending to it. Since ah know an ending where he gotta choose between chasing the perpetrator, and getting to the hospital in time has been written... ah well. Will just see how things go. For now, lets just be glad this fic is over after way too many weeks.”

“Well... not to break it to our author, but she got at least 6 more stories she is working on, two of which are done and just need proofreading. And there is one more ending on this to be done. Writing at six in the morning isn’t doing her any favors you know, dear.” Rarity added

Applejack slumped down and pulled her stetson over her head. “Consarnit... and ah though ah could be glad this here whole writing experiment was over...” Unknown to everypony in the room, just outside the window to the right side of the left, a grey, wall eyed pegasus was hovering, furiously clopping with the intensity of a thousand sunflowers.