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Looking for Love (Part 2): Turmoil

by fluttershy<3_66
After the events that took place in "Discovery" Rainbowdash and Rarity must tell their fri

Immediately following LuMe's "Discovery" (A link to Discovery) Rainbow Dash and Rarity now have to figure out who and if they're going to tell about their new relationship. Rarity having only discovered how she feels towards Mares doesn't want to say anything, but Rainbow Dash feels excited and can't wait to tell somepony. Rainbow knows that their friends will accept them no matter what but Rarity refuses to believe it.

This is my first story so please be gentle with the comments everypony.

I wanted to do a sequel to LuMe's story because I loved how accurately he got someone's feelings when they start to discover their sexuality it can be hard and confusing and most of us have trouble telling anyone the way we feel. But no matter what there's someone that will accept you for who you are and I'm talking from experience.

Any feedback positive or negative is welcome as this is my first fic and I'll need as much of it as possible.

Teen
On Hiatus
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
PMORR

9069 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

8 Chapters:

  1. Beginnings 2012-08-23 15:48:20 UTC
    1116
  2. First is the Hardest 2012-08-19 23:25:33 UTC
    1327
  3. Doubts 2012-08-19 23:27:14 UTC
    1158
  4. Rejection 2012-08-19 23:27:32 UTC
    1252
  5. Healing 2012-08-19 23:31:19 UTC
    996
  6. Memories 2012-08-20 18:03:04 UTC
    1005
  7. Child 2012-08-28 17:31:53 UTC
    1092
  8. Names 2012-09-08 19:20:56 UTC
    1123