more grandchildren of discord

by Nocturnalis Storyhart

Decisions, Decisions

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Identity was so confused. After finding out both DJ and Caramel loved her, she didn’t know who to go with. She loved both of them. She was sitting on the sofa when Screwball came in and noticed Identity was sad. She sat next to her daughter and asked what was wrong.

Identity said "Mom, should I go with DJ or Caramel?”

“Oh honey," Screwball said, "This is a big decision to make, but sometimes the best way to solve these sort of problems is to leave the outcome to fate.”

Identity just looked down at the floor and started to sob. Screwball said

“This is your choice, I know the best will happen in your favor, and you will find that fate’s outcome will be for your best interest.”

Screwball got up and left the room. Identity stopped crying and thought on her mothers advice. She decided her mother was right and she went to bed.

The next morning when she woke up there was a knock on the door. It was Caramel.

"Hi Identity, how are you?" he asked.

"I'm fine, and you?" Identity replied.

"Great" Caramel said, "Although I did want to ask you something."

"Yes?" Identity prodded.

Caramel hesitated, but then said, "Would you go out with me tonight?"

Identity was a little surprised, but said, "Sure. I'll be ready to go at 7 tonight."

Caramel smiled. "See you tonight." He said. And with that he left.
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It was dark,cold, and miserable in a run down shack where something or some pony was brewing a plan. Sombra sat on his bed plotting to somehow get his daughter, Shadow, back. She had left to be with her mother, princess Luna. But unfortunately they got into an argument and Luna no longer wanted Shadow. She had been put in the dungeon.

Sombra loved his daughter but never told her. He deeply regretted it. He thought maybe asking the princesses to let her go free. Or maybe kidnap some important pony and trade them for his daughter. Suddenly he got the perfect idea. To capture the mane 6, discord, discords children, grandchildren,and their friends to ransom them for Shadow. All he needed to do now was figure out a way to capture his victims.
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Identity was getting ready for her date with Caramel when out of the blue the phone rang. She picked it up and found out it was DJ.

"DJ, what a pleasant surprise." Identity said.

"Isn't it?" DJ replied,

Identity giggled. "So whats up" Identity asked.

"Just wanted to see if you were available tomorrow to go get ice cream at Sugar Cube Corner." DJ wondered.

"Okay. I will be ready at 3." Identity replied.

"Awesome. See you tomorrow" DJ hung up. Identity smiled and continued to prepare for her date that night.

When Caramel arrived that night to pick up Identity for their date he was impressed on how she looked. So they went out for dinner and dancing. When they came home around 9:30 that night, Identity thanked Caramel for the date by giving him a kiss on the cheek. He blushed and gave her a hug and then they said goodbye.

Once inside, Mothball asked "So, how did your date go?"

"Groovy" replied Identity.

"Well that's good." said a voice that was coming from behind. Identity turned around and saw it was Chaotic, her twin brother.

"Oh, hi Chaotic, how was your date with RH (rainbow heart)?" Identity asked.

"It was awesome. But sis I need to talk to you privately."
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Sombra had decided to start with either Caramel or Identity for the capturing part of his plan. He knew that he could capture Caramel with apple bait and go from there. He very well knew that Identity would come for him, followed by DJ and Chaotic, then RH etc. Or start with Identity and then get DJ, Caramel, Chaotic, Screwball, and Mothball all at once followed by every pony else. After not so much debating he knew who to start with.
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"Dad do you-"

"Not at all" Mothball interrupted, as he left the room. Left alone Identity and Chaotic sat on the floor.

"Sis, the reason I needed you alone is so I could get some advice" Chaotic said.

Identity didn't say anything and continued to listen.

"Identity, I want to propose to RH but I don't know when to do so," He continued.

"You could propose to her at our birthday party, after all, where and when else would be the perfect time and place?" Identity proposed.

"Hey, that's a great idea Identity. Thanks." Chaotic got up and left.

Left alone Identity thought about her date with Caramel that night and her date tomorrow with DJ. She was still confused on whether she should choose Caramel or DJ, but thought back to her mothers advice.

(This is a big decision to make, but sometimes the best way to solve these sort of problems is to leave the outcome to fate).

Identity was still confused, but she trusted her mother and she went to bed.
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Sombra decided to start with Identity and he figured how to capture her too. He had watched her through a magical crystal to see that DJ had called her. He would call her and say that he had captured DJ, and if she ever wanted to see him again she would have to leave "specifically" her brother a note telling him she went to the tree of harmony and to meet her there. Then she would have to meet Sombra at the tree of harmony in the Everfree forest. Once she was captured, he would call Caramel, DJ, and RH. He would tell them if they ever wanted to see Identity again to leave a note at home telling their family they went to the tree of harmony...and to meet them there. Then for Caramel, DJ, and RH to come and meet up at the tree of harmony to fetch Identity. Sombra grinned at this thought and he rejoiced somehow knowing he would get Shadow back.


Author's Note

I am a first time writer and I want all possible comments to tell me what you liked and what I need to improve on. I hope I can become a better writer so every one out there can enjoy these stories.

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